Destiny- Its All About Life (SS on SWASAN/Rag-San) By Goldie Part 1

Hello Guyz..Its Me Goldie Here agn wid A Short Story on SwaSan..Hope U will Like it..Its something New n Different..Hopefully it will Impress U all..So Here is da Intro n a Character Sketch of the People Appearing in this Short Story..Hope u will Like it..Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw hw u Liked the Intro :)..


Destiny – Its All About Life !!!

Part 01 ( Intro )

Character Sketch :

Sanskaar Maheshwari : An Honest n A Loyal Police Commissioner of Kolkata..A Loyal Husband n a Father too..Matured n Understanding…Love His Wife the Most..

Ragini Sanskaar Maheshwari : 1st Wife of Sanskaar…Has A 6 Yrs Son frm Sanskaar..

Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari : 2nd Wife of Sanskaar.. Lovable n A Matured Lady ..Love Her Husband n Son ( Ragini’s Son ) da Most..Cn do anything fr their Happiness..A Bubbly n A Nature Free Lady..

Aryaan Sanskaar Maheshwari : A Cute n A Naughty 6 Yrs Old Son of Sanskaar n Ragini..Consider Swara as His Own Mother..Aware of the Fact dat Ragini is His Real Mother bt Love Swara da Most since Childhood..

Other Characters :

Annapurna n Durga Prasad Maheshwari : Parents of Sanskaar n Laksh..

Shekhar n Sharmishta Gadodia : Parents of Ragini..

Laksh Maheshwari : Younger Brother of Sanskaar

Sujata n Ram Bose : Guardian of Swara since Childhood..Consider Swara as their Own Daughter..


Maheshwari Mansion

A Big Mansion n a Magnificent Mansion is Shown n its been getting Decorated like A New Bride as if its Some Imp Occasion going to take Place..A Lady is Shown Shouting n Ordering da Servants fr Further Preparations while the Servants r Bzy in Obeying Her Orders…

Lady : Arrey Ramu Kaka..Hurry Up..I dnt want any Mistake in My Son’s n My Daughter In Law’s 6th Wedding Anniversary..It shud be da Memorable One..So Hurry Up n Complete the Decorations asap..

Ramu Kaka : Ji Malkin..Dnt Worry..Sanskaar Baba n Swara Betiya ki Anniversary will be One of the Best..U dnt take Tension.. ( Smiles )

Lady : ( Smiles ) Good..

As Lady was Instructing da Servants a Late 50s Man comes n Calms da Lady making da Lady Smile n Admire da Man n His Care towards Her..

Man : Offo Annapurna ( Yes da Lady is AP ) ..Relax ..Fikar mat karo..Sab hojayega..U take Rest..U knw na if Both Swara n Sanskaar sees U taking Tension fr them n their Function..they will Cancel the Whole Function..for them U r Imp nt their Happiness..

Annapurna : Haa Ji ( The Man is DP ).I kya karu ?? Mere Pyaare Bete aur Bahu ki Shaadi ki Saalgira ( Wedding Anniversary ) hai..n main Preparations nhi dekhugi toh kaun dekhega ??

DP: Hmm..Woh toh Hai.. ( Laughs )

While AP n DP were Talking A Cute Little 6 Yr Old Kid comes n Hugs AP n DP Cutely making both Adore da Little Heir of their Maheshwari Family..

Kid : Alley ( Runs n Hugs AP n DP ) Dadu..Dadi..Main Aagaya.M Bak frm School..Whr r My Chocolates ?? ( Innocently )

DP : ( Smiles n Takes in His Lap ) Aww..My Grandson has Come ( Kisses da Kid’s Cheeks ) Welcome Bak My Son..

AP : ( Smiles n Kisses too ) n Here r Ur Chocolates..Hw cn We Forget wat Our Son has Demanded..After all U r The Most Lovable Member of Maheshwari Family..ARYAAN SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI..Hai na ?? ( Laughs )

Aryaan : ( Laughs Innocently ) Yes Dadi..( Kisses AP n DP n Runs ) Thnk U Dadu ..Thnk U Dadi..Love U

AP/DP : ( Laughs ) Love U Too Beta..

Soon Aryaan Leaves da Hall while DP n AP Admires da Cute Kid n
Reminisces da Past wid Teary Eyes Thnking God fr Such A Wonderful Family..

AP : ( Teary Eyes ) Thnk God Ji..Finally My Family is Out of those Dreadfull Past..n r Happily Living..SWARA has Come in OUR Lives as An Angel n has Managed Everything Perfectly..Sanskaar n Aryaan r nw Happy n r Enjoying their Life Agn..All Thnks to Our Swara..Agr woh nhi hoti toh Pata nhi kya hota Humare Sanskaar aur Aryaan ka ..Hai na ??

DP : ( Agrees wid Teary Eyes ) Haa Annapurna..Swara is indeed An Angel fr all of Us..God Bless Her..

AP : ( Smiles ) Haa..I Wish da Same Ji..

While AP n DP were Blessing Swara In Heart,The Scn Shifts to a Beautiful Room whr A Boy n A Girl wid 7 Months Baby Bump whr Enjoying their Spcl Moments while getting Ready..

Girl : ( Pout Face n Makes da Boy Boy Wear His Upper Uniform Blazer ) Kya SANSKAAR ( Hehe..Yes the Boy is None Other dan Our Hero Sanskaar )..its Our Wedding Anniversary n U r going to ur So Called Second House ?? U Promised Me U will be wid Me n Our ( Touches Her Baby Bump ) Kids Today da Whole Day..Ok Leave Abt Me bt think abt Aryaan n Our Unborm Baby na..They will be Angry wid U ( Pout Face )

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Turns n Hugs da Girl Carefully ) Aww..My Princess ( No Need to Guess..Who is Sanskaar’s Princess πŸ˜…πŸ˜…..Its Obiviously SWARA πŸ˜€ ) is soo Cute in Her Pout..Sorry Princess..Kya Karu..U knw na My Wrk is like this only..Pata nhi kab aur kaise Ek Imp Case aajaye.. ( Holds His Ears wid Apologies Face ) Plzz Maaf kardo..This Case is Teally Imp..Plzz..

Swara : ( Smiles n Release da Hug ) Its Ok..U cn Ok..I Understand..Go n Do ur Duty First Commissioner Sanskaar Maheshwari..I will make Ur Kids Understand.. ( Smiles n Hugs agn ) bt Do come Soon b4 the Party Strts.i will be waiting fr U..Ok ?

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Hugs Bak ) Ok Princess.. ( Kisses Her Head ) Take Care of Urself n ( Touches Swara’s Baby Bump ) Our Baby Ok ??

Swara : ( Smiles ) Hmm..Nw ( Release da Hug ) Go Fast.u r getting Late warna My Mood fr Sending U will get Chngd ( Giggles )

Sanskaar : ( Laughs ) Ok Baba..Going.. ( Kisses Swara’s Forehead ) Take Care Princess..

Swara : ( Smiles ) Haa Ok..

Soon Sanskaar Leaves fr Police Station Happily Waving Bye to His Princess while Swara too Waves Bye n goes to a Near By Room Carefully Holding Her Baby Bump n Sits Beside a Lifeless Girl n Reminisces da Past wid Teary Eyes..

Screen Freezes on Swara n da Lifeless Girl …Who is da Lifeless Girl n was Past is Swara Thinking Off ??

Stay Tune to knw da Answers of All ur Questions :)..


So Guyz Here was da Intro n The First Part of the Short Story “Destiny – Its All About Life”..Drop Down ur Valuable Comments n Let Me knw ur Views..Ur Comments/Response will Decide to Continue or Not :)..



  1. Mica

    |Registered Member

    ragini in coma ?
    frankly, i can’t bear ragsan, but dunno why i come here and read this awesome ff..
    since it’s your FF goldie… luv it xoxo

  2. Arunika

    |Registered Member

    Since its Goldie I’m here!!!!
    I’m a hugee fan of ur ffs…..
    Now coming back of the ff….as always the starting is mind blowing & as per my guess the lifeless body is of Ragini!!!

  3. Jj

    Hi,I can’t like ragsan only like swasan, but her ragini is already married with sanskar. I think the lifeless girl is ragini. What would happen when ragini come out of the coma. I think that time ragini consider swara as laksh wife I think so . that to see very nice how swasan reaction on that time,I want last swasan only the pair.please continue soon I am waiting.

    • I tii cnt Bear Rag San..dnt worry m.also a SwaSan Fan n Trust nthing will go Wrong bt Haa Some Unexpected Twists n Turns r Surely Thr πŸ˜…πŸ˜…..Keep Loving n will Update da Nxt Part Soon 😊

  4. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    I cant bear rag–san… bt started reading it since its goldiezz ff who is big swasan fan lyk me πŸ˜‰…
    I love all ur stories…continue soon

  5. Maryam

    Hey goldie u are back again… every time ur story is fab….totally loved it….I guess u are the same writer of swasan humsafar n my destiny his love….if u are so can u plz send me link of ur ff my destiny his love plz…I left it in between…plz plz..update soon

  6. Mahjabeen

    Yeah angel its ws rlly words to describe ur ff on swasan..all ur ff are spellbounded….nd its a nice concept..loved swasan scene..pls post nxt part soon..

  7. anu

    goldie.. do u know who is the writer of swasan ff ‘pain trust love’ , from 3 to 4 days she is not updating her ff.. do u know why? when she will update.. please if u know then ask and tell us please.. please…

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  9. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Awesome…i know u won’t do injustice to our swasan. Thats d reason y will read this ff even if it has rag….san. But i have a request, plz don’t write more of der scenes

  10. Pramudi

    Frankly speaking dear,I can’t bear rag san.. but still came here because of you. Cause I know you are a die hard swasan fan.
    Story is really interesting.. love to read furthermore.. update soon dear…

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