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The Destiny Express (Prologue) : By Anisha

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Character Sketch:

Sanskar Maheshwari: A business man by profession. He is a good natured and kind man with all the qualities of being gentle.

Swara Sanskar Maheshwari: Sanskar’s wife and a psychiatrist by profession. She loves Sanskar truly.

Ragini Laksh Gadodia: Sanskar’s only sister and he loves her very much. She is married to Laksh about a year ago.

Laksh Gadodia: Husband of Ragini and a business man by profession. He loves Ragini a lot.

Prologue:

Scene 1:
“Why is it so strange?” Sanskar murmurs looking around the deserted compartment “Rare” sighing, he gets up and leaves for washroom as the train enters a tunnel. The train looks terrible with the wind blowing every time, making it harsh for him to move.

“From where did this wind come from?” he tries moving but it’s getting harder to move ahead and he stops suddenly hearing some commotion. He takes slow and steady steps towards the sound he is hearing and stops abruptly seeing some shadow.

“Who’s there?” he utters, fear building up in his heart “Who’s there?” he utters again, gulping. He hears little sobs coming from the sleeper above. There’s a girl crying and sitting hugging her knees.

“Who…who are you?” he utters terrified but the girl doesn’t stop her sobs. He notices the girl from top to bottom and the fear arouses more. The clothes she is wearing are entirely shabby with blood coated in each and every part of her body. Her arms show nail marks as if someone has forced her. Sanskar goes terrified, when she lifts her face up, having only the eye sockets and no balls. Her face covered with messy hair falling on her face. A lump forms in his throat as he gulps.

“You will meet your destiny in this route” the spirit whispers and disappears abruptly, leaving a shocked and terrified Sanskar.

Scene 2:
“Sanskarr..” Swara gets up from sleep, sweating profusely.

“Swara” Sanskar gets up shocked, watching her terrified “Swara, what happened?” he strokes her hairs and hugs her gently.

“Rag..Rag…Ragini” she trembles in fear.

“What Ragini, Swara? She is no more” Sanskar hugs her tighter.

“Sanskar, Ragini is in pain she needs us. She .. she needs me” Swara cries.

“Swara, how many times do I need to tell you that Ragini is no more? She is no more, Swara” Sanskar comforts her.

“I know Sanskar but.. but I can hear her. She comes to me. She wants to tell me something” Swara speaks and sobs.

“It’s just a dream, Swara. Lets sleep!” he makes her lay down.

“But Sanskar, Ragini” Swara retorts.

“I said na..we will talk later. Now sleep it’s quite late” Sanskar says and lies down holding her close to him. He strokes her hairs and kisses her temples, making her fall into deep sleep.

“What is it that you want to tell us, Gini?” he wonders.

Plot:

The story is mainly on our beloved couple SwaSan. Swara and Sanskar are married for nearly two years now and are very happy. What will happen when the pages of life turns around? What happens to Ragini? Is the spirit Ragini or someone else? So many questions and no answer….
Turn on to ‘THE DESTINY EXPRESS’ to know more about the story.

The story is offered to me by #Ishanita_Gupta_Di.. I’m just penning it down. Thank you Di for keeping the belief on me that I can write this story. I hope the cover pic is up-to the mark.. 😂

I’ll post the other ff’s after I complete this. This is a short story of almost 20 episodes. I’ll post this on alternate days only. I’ll be regular if I don’t have anymore accidents to face.

54 Comments
  1. Interesting

    1. Anisha

      Thank you

  2. Welcome back
    Awesome

    1. Anisha

      Thank you

  3. SRSL

    No pleez don’t kill ragini… Pleeeeeeez…usse much nahi hona chahiye…Awsm story…unique concept…

  4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    ‘Love express’suna hain..’Chennai express’suna hain..’sathabdhi express’bhi suna hain..Abb’destiny express’bhi sunli,waa,waa…Plot is interesting..But scaring😳😳..Plz continue dear..
    Take care
    Keep smiling😀

    1. Anisha

      Thanks! 😂😂
      Missed you 😘

      1. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        Missed you too😚😚

  5. SNY

    Awesome dr…..

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  6. Ishanita Gupta

    Anni ,
    My dearest sister …u know naa I love u sooooo much
    I always knew that u will pull off this story …better than me …better than anyone else….that’s why I asked u!
    I will always be supporting u whether others do or not
    And I sincerely hope that people love this story and a new shade if anishas writing
    Readers plz don’t worry about anything….she will not disappoint u n will reach to ur expectations and even more!
    Kindly support her in this new genre .

    With lots of love

    1. Anisha

      Thank You Di😊
      Love you too 😘😘

    1. Anisha

      Thank You

  7. Very nice …plz do continue

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  8. Excellent

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  9. Looking forward to read more

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  10. Loved the prologue…I so wanted to read something on horror….n I think the concept is on horror?

    Craving for more

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊
      Yeah it’s horror!! 😉

  11. Janviii

    Oyee shergil kitne ff likhegi

    1. Anisha

      Jitna man karega 😏
      Kamini parhti na… Upar se kuch vi bolti😏😏

      1. Janviii

        Heheheh….tu mere ff padhti

    2. Anisha

      Tu vi ff likhti? 😳😳😳😱😱😱

  12. Maryum

    Wow horror story very excited

  13. Pooja26

    interesting…..
    post soon……..

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  14. Wow what a concept dear… Loved it… 😘😘😘😘❤❤❤continue

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  15. Simi

    Interesting 😊

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  16. Niku

    Interesting..
    Update soon….

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  17. Interesting..tc..😊😊

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  18. Awesome dear

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  19. Wow loved it I also read it on fb but I can’t list there cause I don’t have a fb account I’m sorry and I also live in Switzerland so it’s difficult for me to comment on every part but I will try cause abho meri vacation start hoe gai hain

    1. Anisha

      Thank You 😊

  20. Arshaanya

    Anisha wid horror story 😱😱😱😱
    Intrstng… wud love to read

    1. Anisha

      😂😂😂
      Thought of something new.. 😜😝😜😝

  21. Shalvi kukreti

    amazing dear plz next part jldi post krna mjse wait nhi ho rha h

    1. Anisha

      Posted now.. You will receive asap

  22. Nice

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