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Such a response !!!
As I already mentioned that my ff is very much similar to TPK
So here we go
The story starts with the thahaan marriage(when bihaan replaces dhruv in mandap n everyone blames bihaan for ruining thapki’s life)
Their awkward moments where thapki was forced to live with bihaan, in his room.Their nok jhokes were on peak.
On diwali day –
Everyone in pandey family was busy in lighting diyas. Vasu was lighting yam diya( diya which any mother is not allowed to show their son according to rituals). And as she was going to keep yam diya she suddenly saw dhruv.
Vasu – o god how he came here!! Now he will see the diya.
(Bihaan was passing from there n asked vasu
Bihaan – what happened maa? Why r u worried??
Vasu- Bihaan ….come here fast
Vasu rapidly covers yam diya through bihaan n says
Vasu- this is yam diya which a mother lights for her son…and son his not allowed to see this diya.
(N she goes) ….
Bihaan on the other hand get tears by her words but pretends to be alright n goes….
Thapki saw all this n was confused….as this was the first time she was noticing bihaan with his mother and with yam diya….
The family started Pooja n suddenly…. a voice came…..
Voice – will u start Pooja without me?? My dear thapki!!
Everyone was stunned…. N turned to see the voice. He was non other than Diwakar.
Bihaan(in mind-how can he call thapki like that!! )
Bihaan was angry.
He yeild at Diwakar – how dare u came here??
Diwakar – I’m here for my beautiful princess thapki. Afterall she was going to be my wife!
Bihaan – but she is my wife now…n u r no one to call her like that….
Thapki looks at bihaan
Bihaan continues – she is bihaan pandey’s wife now!! Anyone has no right to talk to her like that….
Diwakar – well….nice to see this concern for her but is this real or fake? Like ur marriage ?? What do u think Mr.Bihaan Pandey ….!! U r a lier a big cheater who cheated thapki worstly…n now…..u r pretending to be her caring husband!!!
Thapki – mind ur tongue Diwakar. U may have forgotten what u did with me…but I can’t…so u don’t need to count my husband’s mistake…. first look at yourself….
Bihaan looks at her….his thapki was first time standing for him…..he gets tears but smiles…
Diwakar – Ooo so that’s the matter now!! Wow Mr. Bihaan Pandey…. I must say….u r very lucky….as u got everything in pity….everything was free free free for u….u raised on pity…..u married by cheat but then also u got a wife who is taking ur side……ur family showed pity on u n…..
Bihaan was shattered…. Unable to speak anything… or he may don’t wanted to speak anything…..as his heart knows whatever diwakar is saying is not wrong….
But Thapki shouts…..
Thapki – Enough means enough diwakar now u should leave from here otherwise……
Sanjay n ashwin drags diwakar outside the Pandey nivas.
Everything was flashing in front of bihaan….every word of diwakar ….he was walking towards his room while thinking all these…
On the other hand…. Thapki was crying n thinking about diwakar whatever he said for her whatever he did with her…..n she was also going to her(bihaan’s) room.
They both collides…
Thapki falls but bihaan holds her…..they have an eyelock…..n then
Thapki – I’m sorry I didn’t saw u….
Bihaan replies – oo chuk chuk gadi….can’t u be in ur senses while walking!!
N he leaves….
Thapki feels sad by his behavior but was not in mood to reply him….she was just thinking of whatever happened with her, with her family …..n was weeping …
She came to room n saw bihaan hiding something hurrily….he saw her n reacted as he was doing nothing ….
He was also hiding his face…as he don’t like to weep in front of anyone….
Thapki – what happened?? R u fine??
Bihaan – yes I’m going to sleep…good night …
(He sounded sad but thapki can’t do anything as he will not listen to her n will shout at her)
Bihaan sleeps on couch n thapki on bed…
Both cries…but didn’t showed each other….
Thapki (mindvoice) – what my life wants from me? Don’t I deserve any happiness…. Can’t I expect to live peacefully!! I don’t know what destiny has decided…
Bihaan(mindvoice) – am I so bad?? Do everyone hates me this much!!!??? What destiny has decided for me….???
They both sleep…
Bihaan murmurs – No ma I know u love me….u can’t live without me….I know u love me very much maa ….I will be ur best son one day maa….
Thapki wakes up….
Thapki – who is……!!!…… N she saw bihaan murmuring……(what happened to him now? Is he alright!! )
She goes to him
Thapki – bihaan ….. R u OK? What happened bihaan??
He still murmurs….
Thapki listens his murmuring carefully n says…..
Thapki- I’m here bihaan…..u don’t worry….we both know mom loves u….
(Bihaan holds thapki’s hand in sleep n murmurs… I knew it !!….plzz don’t leave me….I’m alone plzz…..)
Thapki sees him lovingly…but removes her eyes from him… N says….
Thapki – I will try bihaan …. The cheating u did with me….I don’t know…. even I would be able to help u….but I don’t know why….my heart feels u r innocent… But my eyes have seen everything…..I don’t know whom to trust my eyes or my heart….but I wish my heart could win!!…
Precap- not yet decided..
I hope u liked it. Plzz do comments where I was wrong…or anything u liked or disliked….ur comments r really valuable….
N plzz tell should I really continue??