My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 21 by Jerry

The Drami Beach looked wonderful with all the lights that contributed to make it look efficient. The beach was crowded and felt more beautiful as if it was feeling content in the presence of the cheerful youngsters enjoying their quality time. His steps were slow and steady making every second special for her but here Anika was casually moving not having aΒ  thought about something, that’s gonna be very special.

She was meddling with her new cell every now and then, smiling to herself. Shivaay loved seeing those cute reactions from her, it teaches him how to be happy with small little things. His all tiredness and nervousness went to rest at once seeing her glowing face in the sunset.

“So excited about Prinku’s engagement ?” She asked. “Yeah !” He replied. “By the way, how come you were so late ? Usually your job gets over by 5, as per you told.” He questioned thou knowing that’s much early from Mumbai. “Ohh, actually Billu ji, the work was more.” She said and then sighed, “Now no more questions, am I not allowed even to eat my favorite delicacies in peace !!” She said once again keeping her hands on the waist making an exceptionally cutest pout our Shivaay would have ever seen.

Sometimes he wonder that God has literally made him fall for each and every thing related to her. Her cute nose, when she flinch in anger, her irresistible pout, her way of fluttering her eyelashes, whenever she is confused, like seriously every damn thing about her. He is just going to propose her and the nervousness that was there inside him a few seconds ago till now, has gone to rest. He felt bliss when he saw her cute gestures with those twinkling eyes always making him the target, as now also, She applied a little bit of ice cream on his face. He was bewildered, would be an understatement but the very next moment he diminished the thought to scold her. He would have missed the sweetness overloaded laughter that he heard. He ruffled his hair and sheepishly smiled nudging himself mentally to stop those stupid thoughts to intersect within him. “Kya hoga tera Shivaay..?” He once again asked to himself.

Only one thing he didn’t liked about her. Her extra carefree nature, like she is so sweet even with the ice cream vendor. She told him about the Ice cream vendor, Utkarsh. “You know Billu ji, Utkarsh is the best ice cream vendor I have ever met. He prepares so yummy ice creams that I just want to take him home……..so that he can prepare ice cream for me everyday.” She had said and he still boils at the name of Utkarsh. “I mean she has said the word cute to him, how can she. She is mine na…I love her. But I can’t say this to her that time but now I have to.” He thought determinedly.

Anika love Ice cream vendors. For some strange reason she like them, maybe because for her love of ice creams.

Anika was again thinking about the events that took place in the morning and then she couldn’t stop herself from smiling. She turned the other side to find Shivaay missing. “Billu ji !” She called amid the crowd. “Maybe he has gone to pee !!” She thought giggling and kept walking.

Five minutes later the crowd started dispersing and there was now a duvet of silence surrounded by the beach. She was now a little worried when she heard.

“To make your heart roar
And to make you love it from the core
Ice cream vendor is here
Just smile, say good bye to fear”

She turned around to see an ice cream vendor. Listening to the poem her fears subsided a bit and she went towards him, squealing with happiness. The hat made an unclear view about him but she was interested in the ice cream. “Double sundae !” She said mentally thanking the god to at least making something good in this day. She closed her eyes to make a quick wish.

When she opened her eyes, she saw the most unexpected view and the most beautiful too. It could not be described in words. She was speechless.

Her cute Billu ji was on his knees with an ice cream in her hand. On seeing him open her eyes he quickly forwarded his hand pushing the ice cream towards her.

“Anika I love you. Everything about you. You know when I was first saw you in the Cafe, I couldn’t take my eyes from you. You were Khidkitod khoobsoorat (beautiful). But I did not fall for you. Love at first sight is only in movies, in real life we have to spend some time together with the person whom you want to be in your life and in my life that person you. You know whenever I see you I fall for you harder. I have already imagined myself proposing you umpteenth time in my dreams but couldn’t gather the courage but now as I have, I know longer am shy to say that I love you. I will respect your decision. But there’s a request too, don’t say no…okay if you want you can say but still….and I know this one is the craziest proposal but couldn’t come with anything better. I have practiced a lot by writing this about in my cell and mugging it but now all the words I have learnt are forgotten. This all is coming from my heart. I love you Anika, I love you so much. Will you take this cute sa ice cream vendor home..?”

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Heya cuties !! Okay so do anyone one of you remember me, this Shaitaan Chuhiya, okay I know I am posting after a long time but you all know why, Studies !! Madhu, please bear the short updates as if I have posted any longer I would not have completed it and it would be delayed. Sorry sweetie..
Gayathri di, I am glad that you remember me..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Readers please do tell me your views about this chapter, did you liked the proposal ?? I wanted something different so tried this and I would really love if all of you, along with my silent readers would tell me about it and give reviews. Your comment will just energize me a little. Thank you for reading ❀

83 comments

  1. Preetha

    Wonderfull proposal yaar…hats off to author jerry…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍loved it…

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Preetha ! Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked the proposal, your words really moved me. Glad to discover a new reader. Stay tuned😘

  2. Zainab

    Zainab

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    Awww!❀❀❀ This is the most sweetest proposal I have read🍦, thank ypu for writing this buddy❀🍦. This is what we say a natural proposal, not like (note: read in full tadiπŸ˜‰) :” hey girl😎! I like you, will you be my girlfriend?😎” and than a HUGE flower bouquet comes to you πŸ’. Proposal is something that expresses your feelings to your beloved. This is something that you call madness in love, your craziness😍❀… Like Shivaay is having for Annika❀❀❀.

    Shivaay being jealous from UtkarshπŸ˜‚πŸ¦πŸ˜‚ . Next time mention ‘Uttu’ in place of ‘Utkarsh’, Shivvay will burn to ashesπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰. Lovely update… Post the next soonπŸ¦πŸ¦πŸ¦πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚β€β€β€

    Bye!πŸ¦β›„β„

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Zainab !
      Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you found it sweet. Your welcome😘 Yeah, I wanted to try something different so I shuffled between a lot of ideas and finally stopped my pen on it. And I am happy that you liked the idea sista !! A crazy proposal for a crazy girl, Our AnikaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Yeah, Utkarsh !! I will surely, then let’s see where will the jealousy takes place. Thanks again. Will post soon.
      Love ya❀

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey dear, thank you so much. I am so delighted that you loved the update as well as the proposal scene. Will try posting soonish😘😘

  3. VHM

    VHM

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    Such a cute proposal……now i am eagerly waiting for the answer that Anika gives…such a fantastic episode…how i wish i could just continue reading this….you are fabulous Vedika and so is your ff…love you so so so so so much and more…keep smiling and take care

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Harika Di !
      Thank you so much. I am very happy that you found this proposal cute😍
      Yes, you wait a little more till then I will try updating soonish. Awww, thanks again for such a sweet sa compliment di !
      Me too, love you loads like anything, thanks for the sweet feedback❀

  4. Annika51

    Annika51

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    This is the cutest proposal Jerry I have ever read!!!
    Mind blowing…..
    Just loved it!!!!
    You rock sweetheart…
    Shivaay jealous of ice cream vendor….
    He is like this that’s why he is so loving!!!
    Love cute wala Billuji!!!
    Have no words for you dear…
    It was awesome….

    P.S. I visit Telly Updates less that’s why I am not there in your story updates..
    I am really sorry Jerry…
    Will catch up all updates now:)

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Chhaya Di !
      So happy to find your feedback, thank you tons😘, I am glad that you liked this proposal, 😍😍😍
      Thanks for all the sweet words, yeah Shivaay is jealous of an ice cream vendor !! Cutie pie :Billu jiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ˜—πŸ˜‰
      Its very much fine by me di, I know many are busy but I am overjoyed that you will now look for ward to it. Love you very much.
      P.S. Update your ff, waiting for it❀

  5. Shivika

    Awesome…..Loved it…..
    Shivaay jealous of an ice-cream vendor…..
    I’m just loving this Sweet Singh Oberoi i.e. the cute wala billuji…..
    Such a cute proposal & unique too….
    Eagerly waiting for Anika’s reply….
    Post d nxt ASAP….. πŸ™‚

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey dearie !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. Yeah, it seems bad days has come for himπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Happy that you liked the proposal and found it unique. Will try posting soonish.
      Love ya❀

  6. Anagha

    Anagha

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    Hey Jerry !!
    His proposal was soooo damn cute !. Any girl will fall for it , specially his kanji eyes. Hope Anika will give an answer before the ice cream melts !.hehe.. jokes apart , ,, I loved each and every line. The reason she cooked out when shivaay went missing was funny. That proposal was generous, specially when he said ” love at first sight happens in movies etc etc” .. that was soo truthfull of billuji. But but… This version of billuji is your creativity. Sooo hats off vedu.. my chotu sis ! These lines , expressions , feeling , words Everything is your talent and I envy that ! Love ya ❀

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Anagha !
      Thank you so much for the feedback. I am happy that you found the proposal cute. Yeah, like all of us have fallenπŸ˜‰
      Yes, I hope so !! Ohh, that reason, well many of us assume like this in our daily life and as most of my ideas are from my experience, I thought to add this element, glad that you noticed the minute details too.
      Thanks again sista ! Awww, such sweet words are always a treat to read.
      Love you❀

  7. Pooja26

    Pooja26

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    i i i wanna take that cute sa vendor home plzzz πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    jerry ki bacch kahan thi hn !!!
    chl koi na maaf kiya itna cute sa sweet sa update krne k liye πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    amazing yr…. loved it !!!!!!!
    awww proposal πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    post asap……
    tc….. dear

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Pooja di !
      Thank you so much. You wanna take, well just wish that it may cone true !! He is sachhi me very cute😘😘😘😍😍😍
      Sorry Tom, Actuay studies, can’t help that.
      Maaf kiya, thankuuuuu. Really happy that you liked it.
      Will try posting soon. Thanks again for the feedback di. Love you, take care❀

  8. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Soooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee……it was super duper cute … waiting for her reaction 😍😍😍😍😍 plzz do post the next update ASAP 😍😘 loved it to the coreeeeeeeeeee

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Dhar !
      Thank you so much dear. I am happy that you loved the update. Yes, you wait a little more, I will try posting soonish. Love ya❀

  9. Navz

    Navz

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    Donno abt Anika..but if was there at that moment i will surely take him to my home…such a cute and sweet proposal….awwww loved it.

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Navz !
      Thank you so much. Yes, me too if I would have been the receiver of this golden chanceπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Really happy that you love it. Take care❀

  10. Sumitha

    Sumitha

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    What a proposal yaar and that too with ice cream …….in ur mind there is super ideas waiting for next part with curiosity what will be anika reaction eagerly waitinggggg……..

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Sumitha di !
      Thank you so much. Yes, I am overjoyed that you liked it. Thanks again for such a sweet compliment didi. It means a lot. Will try posting soonish. Love ya❀

  11. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome fabulous lovely part proposal was so cuteeee😍😍😍loved it to the core ❀❀❀eagerly waiting for next part update soon

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Thank you so much Niriha !
      I am really happy that you liked this proposal. Will try posting the next part soonish. Take Care❀

  12. Nila

    Nila

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    Hii my cute sis veduπŸ™‹
    Late update😩but ok I am leaving u bcoz of this khidkithod proposal scene😍description of beach was so lovely πŸ˜πŸ’•πŸ’•
    Annika’s character :😘😘😘so cute
    Shivaay’s jealousy ha ha I love itπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
    😊😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍awwww
    semmaπŸ‘Œ(superb),lovely,cute proposal πŸ’•πŸŽΌπŸŽΌπŸŽΌ Music is Missing but while reading automatically I heard Oh jaana in BG🎼🎼🎼
    If I am in the place of Annika definetly I will accept Shivaay without a second
    thought 😊😊😊No One have guts to say no for SSO’s proposalπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Waiting for to read the annika’s replying styleπŸ’•
    Post the next one Asap😍
    Thank u for giving a such a cute proposalπŸ’•πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Nila Di !
      Yes, this time its an late update, sorry for that. Thank you so much, I am really happy that you liked it. Really happy that you loved each and every element that I included.
      Next time, I will try to add the lyrics too so it will be easier for you to visualize the scenes. Yes, the next chappy is uploaded, you welcome.
      Thank you loads for such a sweet comment❀

  13. Zaveesha

    Zaveesha

    |Registered Member

    Our cute writer is back with a super cute proposal of our extra cute Billuji….soo much cuteness nd it was cuteness overloaded…
    Loved Anika’s love for the ice creams as well as our ice cream vendor our Shivaay…
    Waiting to know Anika’s reaction…
    Take care…
    Study well
    Best wishes…

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Heyoo Zaveesha !
      Thank you for the super cute words that sugar coated with extra cuteness😍😍
      Thank you so much, I am really happy that you liked it and I hope you will continue to show your love.
      Yes, the ice cream vendor Shivaay.
      The next chapter is updated, thanks again.
      You too take care.
      Love yaa❀

  14. Samm

    Samm

    |Registered Member

    Yes!! I’ll take you home with me Shivaay! 😍
    This was such a cute proposal Jerry! I don’t have words for this! Post next soon 😊

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Samm Di !
      Thank you so much. I am on cloud nine after reading your comment, it really boosted me up. You can take Shivaay with youπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Happy that you loved the proposal. Thanks again, the next one is updated, will love to hear you feedback❀

  15. Tanz

    Tanz

    |Registered Member

    ❀❣❀ How do you do this Jerry….everytime…..everytime you manage to make us all go from Wow to Awww and to Wow and to Awww and it goes on…….Like Shivaay falls for Annika ….the same way even I fall for your ff everytime I read it…..It’s just amazing….you are amazing…..
    This part was awesome as always…..You know I really want to visit a beach area but that doesn’t seem possible in the near future….nonetheless my wish(some part of it) is fulfilled by reading such great descriptions…..ice-creams—Who doesn’t like Ice-creams….I love it….but Ice-cream vendors—πŸ˜‚ only Annika can do such strange things….and that’s the main reason we love her character…. bechara Shivaay he’s so jealous🀣….
    The proposal was just uniquely amazing😍 just like you…..now I’m waiting for Annika’s response which we all know(unless…..)πŸ˜‰ and as I always say all the best for your studies…btw in which class are you studying?(if you don’t mind me asking, otherwise it’s ok)
    Till the next part, take care
    and Love you loads😘

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Tanz !
      Thank you so much for commenting. Overwhelmed by this much amount of appreciation and still searching for words, thankuuuuu.
      I am really happy that you love my ff so much, I also love you dearie, you always make me smile through your wordsπŸ™ˆ
      Aare, why not possible, may be someone close to you in future will fulfill your wish to go to beachπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
      But nonetheless I am happy that you love this beach. True that, Anika only has the capacity to do strange things, much to Shivaay’s beleif. Yes, Jealous Singh Oberoi😍😍
      Okay, well I think you have already read that answer, but I am happy that you liked it. Thanks again for the wishes.
      I am in class 9th and why would I mind sista ! Its your right, we are friends na😘😘
      Love you more❀

  16. Sofiya. S.

    πŸ’™ Awwwwwwww!!!!!!!!β€β€β€πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œβ€β€β€…

    Jerry, how should I describe this lovely chapter… Now you only tell me☺☺😍😘….

    Awesome, fabulous, amazing, lovely and sweetest gesture of Shivaay towards Annika…

    And no doubt it would be.
    Because it is ofcourse The Shivaay Singh Oberoi ‘s lovely confession….

    Superb update dear πŸ‘

    Love ya ❀

  17. Ashwinee

    Ashwinee

    |Registered Member

    i remembered you just yesterday jerry, but do you remember me??????
    forget it.. leaving you just because of your studies and this amazzzzziiiinnng ff.
    tu toh pehele se choti hai aur sar toh chuhiya jaisa phir bhi le jaati to hame ek aisa jahaan mein jo hota hai fairy tale jaisa!!!!!! god bless meri extra shaitaan chuhiya . love you loads!!!

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      And you are asking me, that if I remembered you !! Of course di, how can I ever forget you, I was too think I about you😘😘
      Thank you so much for the feedback. I am overjoyed that through my writings you are able to transport yourself in an imaginary world. Thankuuuuu and a big hug to you. Love you too dher Sara❀❀❀

  18. Sofiya. S.

    πŸ’™Awwwwwwww!!! β€β€β€πŸ’™…

    Jerry, how should I describe this lovely chapter…. Now you only tell me β˜ΊπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‡..

    Awesome, fabulous, amazing, lovely, khidkitod, darwazatod bang on update! πŸ‘…

    And Ofcourse it would be, afterall its The Shivaay Singh Oberoi’s confession…

    Annika and her Ice-cream 🍦 craziness!!!
    Oh My poor Shivay, getting so much jealous of the ice cream vendorπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…

    Loved this chapter and ofcourse our Billuji’s confession πŸ˜‰πŸ˜…

    You always write such amazing chapters that I can only say one thing….

    Always keep writing Dil seπŸ’™….

    Post soon 😊
    Love ya😘❀….

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Sophia !
      Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked it. Well, you are speechless and so I am with your comment.
      Thank you for all the amazing words. Yes, The great Shivaay Singh Oberoi’s confession would need to be grand😍😍😍
      Yes, how can he not ! Utkarsh is a thing to worry, the jealous one😘
      Okay dear, I will always keep writing from dil se. Posted the next chapter !! Review it soonish.
      Love ya❀

  19. Madhuani

    Madhuani

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    It’s okay dear,can understand you as I’m also in same condition.
    So my comments are also shrinking day by day you know.
    But this one was stupendous out of the box.
    Shivaay became ice cream vendor to propose her πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œ
    But it was cute proposal😘😘
    Hope anika takes the ice cream from him thus accepting the proposal.
    Waiting for her answer now
    If possible post soon.
    Take care.

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Madhu !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you understood my situation well, 😘😘
      It’s okay, I will always remember that you wanted to post a long one but couldn’t due to studies πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰
      Yes, propose le liye kuch bhi karega.
      Well, let’s see, I hope you have read the other one too.
      Take care, love ya❀

  20. Sairish

    Sairish

    |Registered Member

    heyyy Jerry di…
    first of all “yippieeeeee” that you posted your ff……
    you won’t believe how happy i was on eyeing your article on telly updates page…
    I was literally on cloud nine….
    such an awful chappy it was…
    just cuteness and only cuteness……
    khidkitod darwazatod aur pata nahi Kya Kya tod …i just just love you and your story not to forget………
    awwww billuji ….ice cream vendor 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘……
    this was the best proposal i have ever..ever read in my life …..
    something which I’ll always remember …..
    plzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz post the next one ASAP plzz…can’t wait to read the next one….HOW CAN YOU MANAGE TO WRITE SO VERY WELLL…MY GODDD 😍😍😭😭….
    and ya I’ll be surely posting the next shot of my TS today only i.e 16th of July plzz read it if you are comfortable with it ..I’ll also try to post my ff on Tuesday hopefully plzz di read that one too….
    my all the hearty blessings to you..
    lots of love
    Sairish
    β€β€β€πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸ˜¦πŸ™ˆπŸŒ·πŸŒ·βš˜βš˜

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Heyoo Sairish !
      Thank you for such a beautiful comment, I loved it. I am so happy that it made you feel good when you saw my update, really glad about that.
      Awful chappy….???πŸ€”πŸ€”
      By the way still a ton of thanks for such sweet words, really appreciate that.
      I am happy that you liked the proposal and my aim to make it the best is accomplished.
      The next one is already posted and I know you have read that too..
      Thanks sweetie again for such a cute compliment.
      I will surely read your update Sairish, how can I miss your writings😘😘
      Love ya❀

  21. Naymaz

    Naymaz

    |Registered Member

    OOh Jerry Kitna tadpaya tune
    But finally this ff is updated
    As usual I lovvvvvvvvvved it
    Love u dear …….love u a lot

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Naymaz !
      Thank you so much. I hope that tadap was worth waiting πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      I am happy that you loved it. Love you too !
      Take care❀

  22. Fenil

    Fenil

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    Lovely update Jelly.
    In jealously he himself turned into Ice-cream vendor.:)
    nahi like karne ke liye koi sawal nahi hain.
    Mane ghanu pasand avyu.

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Fenil Bhaiya !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked the update. Yes, jealousy logo se kya kya Karwa deti hai..!!😁
      Woah !! Got your words, thanks a ton❀

  23. Adia23

    Adia23

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    No exact words been reading the cafe coffee day from the beginning and you have inspired me Jerry and I started making my own Fan Fictions all thanks to you!

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Adia !
      Thank you so much. You don’t know how you just made me Energize. I am so glad that you love my updates and I have inspired you. It’s been a great journey with all of you. Overjoyed to read your comment. Well, have posted my next chapter, will love to read your reviews there too❀

  24. Abbi

    Abbi

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    Heya Jerry!
    I wanna take this ice cream vendor home, can you do this to me please?
    Now what do I say, a perfect proposal indeed.
    You’ve made it the cutest, I love you for this. ❀
    I was imaging all the scenes on my mind, seriously I was. You wrote unexceptionally wonderful!
    Can’t wait for her answer.
    Do post soon.
    Loveyou sweetheart. ❀

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Abeera !
      Well, sure you have my full permission to take the ice cream vendor home, be specific who..?? Utkarsh or our Billuji.
      Thank you so much. I am so happy that you liked the proposal, fingers crossed for the next chapter too.
      The next chapter is been uploaded. Thanks for the feedback !
      Love you more❀

  25. Diyaa

    Diyaa

    |Registered Member

    That was a beautiful proposal Jerry! I just loved it. Sorry I have been so out if touch. I also liked the description of Anika’s over free nature, laughing and talking to anyone and everyone. It’s endearing 😊

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Diyaa Di !
      So happy to see your feedback, was missing it thoroughly. I am glad that you liked the proposal scene. It’s okay, I understand. Delighted that you noticed the minute details too.
      Love you, the next one is updated too if you have time, please spare a look😘

  26. Sanskriti120

    Sanskriti120

    |Registered Member

    I loved it Jerry!
    Array;; who doesn’t like ice cream yaar! You know I love them! Let me tell you something! In love ice cream to such extent that during this rainy season I ate them 4 times a week. And the result is a severe ear painπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… My mom had scolded my umpteenth times same like shivaay who tried to propose anika umpteen times!
    Such a sweet and cute proposal!
    Shivaay knows anika very well that is the reason he proposed by giving a ice cream!..
    If even by mistake anika rejects him(which is impossible becuz of his cute proposal), then also she had a chance to take that ice cream off his hand and walk off!
    HahahπŸ˜‚πŸ˜›.
    And utkarsh baba yeh Kaha se toot pada yaar!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… Unique name by the way..
    Jealous billu is always treat to watch…
    And the thing which is troubling me is you and tanz both has left your recent epi’s at same position!
    Uh!!πŸ˜‘. I mean both stopped at nick of the proposal! And cliff hanger dediya yaar😑.
    Curiosity will burst my head for sure!πŸ˜….
    Study well!😘

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Sanskrit !!
      Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. Well that’s great, your love for ice creams is super awesome. Hey take care of yourself, itni bhi naa khayega…
      Wow, aunty was telling you but you ignored, take care of yourself Didi😘😘
      Thank you very much, I am really happy that you liked the proposal. Yes, bahut aache se jaanta hai APNI Shaitaan Chuhiya ko !!!
      Mere classmate ka naam hai Utkarsh ! Glad that you liked it. The next chapter is updated, do review it too !
      Thanks again. Love ya❀

  27. Pui

    Pui

    |Registered Member

    Oh Jerry! Excitement mein jaan chali jayegi! What a different and lovely proposal. I wanted to being the ice cream vendor home! πŸ’–πŸ’–

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Pui !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked this update. Well, now everybody want, but I bet only Anika canπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

  28. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

    |Registered Member

    Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! Vedi……such a craziest yet very beautiful proposal! Sooooooooooooooo cute…… I m bet Shivaay is the most handsome, cute n sweet ice vendor!!
    And sorry Vedi dear, for late n short comment!

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Thank you so much Gayathri Di !
      It’s okay, I am not angry. I am happy that you liked this proposal. Yes, we can bet, he is the most Sona Munda !!😘😘
      Love you ❀

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Thank you Arya. I shave updated the next chapter and an one shot too, if you have time then please review it 😁😁

  29. Arthi

    Arthi

    |Registered Member

    Again am late sorry dear…….zillions of sorry pl……..and just now read ur ff and as always it was fab…..

    Shivay’s proposal the best part and craziest proposal ever….and cliffhanger what is this dr not fair and now have to wait for ur next update and that too ll be short!!!!!

    Oh god u write so good and this was fab and Anika what answer is she gonna give??? Just post next part and yeah that shd be a long part!!!

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Arthi !!
      It’s okay yaar, as long as you comment, I am happy with thatπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked the proposal vala scene.
      Thanks for all the appreciation, feeling on cloud nine, can’t give long updates, as I have my exams. I have updated an OS, if you have the then reveiw it !!😘😘

  30. Kanfi

    Kanfi

    |Registered Member

    Jerrrryyyyyyy….
    What a proposal mtlb ekdm khidkitod….
    Loved the innocence of shivaay…
    N that vendor cute uttkarshπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚good concept…now shivaay is being jealous with him…hadd hπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Loved the epi…
    Waiting for ani’s rkn…

    Take care

    • Jerry_36

      Jerry_36

      |Author

      Hey Kanfi !
      Thank you so much. I am overwhelmed that you liked the proposal this much ! Innocent Shivaay πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Haan, Anika ki bhi koi aur nahi Mila, so Shivaay ko usi se jealous Hona padega na..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Take care, love you😘❀

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