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Home»Fan Fiction»My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 14 by Jerry
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My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 14 by Jerry

Jerry_36By Jerry_36June 6, 201791 Comments8 Mins Read
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Shivaay’s pov

As I greeted her in the phone, I bolted my room’s door from inside. I was really excited to hear her voice, after so long. The voice that I was expecting came as “Billu ji “. I kept the phone down, rubbed my ears and put the phone back on my craving ear. She once again spoke ” Billu ji, are you there ?” Now I was really annoyed, how come she knew my name, pet name ? I spoke “Anika, what is this, you are calling me bi..ll….u..ji ?” He managed to speak. He was having a hard time resisting his sneeze, he didn’t wanted her to know about it. “Well, you hided such a big secret from me, but all thanks to Dadi. Now I know and I will call you Billu ji.” She giggled hysterically over the phone, thou I didn’t like her calling me that, I couldn’t resist myself from smiling, she must be looking cute !

“Anika don’t call me that na, I don’t like it. I want to strike a conversation and here you are making fun of me.” I made my voice a little strict. And gosh, she laughed like hell over the phone. I kept the phone a little far from my ear, it was very loud still sweet. “Okay, I will not call you Billu ji, but when your name is Billu ji, what can I do, it so cute. You know my next dream will be..” She asked already building up the curiosity. “Hmm, what ?” I spoke. “To tell Media about your name Billu ji and then print it in the newspaper.

Imagine what will be the news : The great Business man Shivaay Singh Oberoi has a pet name Billu ji.” And then she again laughed. “But see I give you so much of respect, I put ji for you..I am the best na..” I decided not to fight over the phone, it has been so much of time since I heard her voice, I will deal with that matter later. “Yes, you are the bestest of all.” I spoke in flow. “What ?” She asked, I think she was as shocked as I was. “I mean you are not the best..” Oh my god, what have I said, this cold will make me mad and then I suddenly remembered that I was getting sneezes and that very moment I was getting one, I didn’t wanted to make a pappu of myself, gosh her language and then….I inhaled deeply to avoid the sneeze, I was successful. A khidkitod idea Billu ji and them the realization took place what was I saying myself, am gonna die now. Why the hell I called myself Billu ji.

All my thoughts were dispersed when she said “What, I am not best” I bet she pouted at that moment. Yess, right there I wanted to kiss her but then I spoke something which I regretted, very much “No no, I mean you are beech (middle) ki.” And then I heard a roar over my phone. “What the hell, what did you call me. You called me that, hawww, you are so bad !!” And I am damn sure if I would have been in front of her, she would have killed me and ate me alive. I didn’t meant it deliberately. How could I call her that..”No no no, seriously I didn’t mean that oh…” And then my sneeze smirked at me. And I couldn’t say anything further and what all I said was “Achuu….achuu…..achuuh…achuu…achuu….achuu…and a lot of achuu..”

I think all the sneezes that I managed to hide took revenge from me. And there for 3 minutes I was only sneezing and sneezing and thank god, she didn’t put down the phone. After my sneezes took a little rest she spoke “Billu ji, what have you done to yourself, I mean what have you drank or eaten. Cold water or ice creams ?” “Ice creams” I spoke innocently which was followed by another sneeze. I still didn’t argued about that Billu ji thing. “How many ?” she sounded angry, very angry. “15” I told smiling, it was a big achievement for me. “Billu Ji, you should have taken care of yourself. Why did you ate so many ice creams. Whole family must be worried for you, have you thought of it ?” It was for the first time I was being scolded bit I loved that caring nature of hers. “And you ?” I spoke smiling. “What me, of course, I am also angry. Now do as I say.” I nodded over the phone and said “yes”

I had no other option na. “Walk over to your medicine box and take out a tablet for cold.” She said. I took out 8 tablets and spoke “yeah, I have taken out the tablets.” “Tablets ? How many you have taken ?” She asked. “8 of them” I replied. “What, billu ji, have you gone mad, 8 tablets ?” She said rather shouted. “Yes, one for cough, one for sneezing, one for headache, one for fever, maybe I will have you never know, I can’t take the risk and one for…” I was interrupted. “Stopppp….you have to take only one medicine for sneezing and no its and buts.” She ordered. “Haan meri maa.” I said Frustated. “Now pull the duvet over and go to sleep and dont stir ftom your place till morning, okay ?” She again said. “But I have achuu… one problem ?” I said cutely. “If I want to go to washroom, at night achuu….what will I do ?” “Billu ji….what will happen to you. Have you rented your brain to dhobiwala ?” She said . “Dhobiwala ?” I asked confused. “Washerman, basic hindi, toh you should know. Now billu ji please go to sleep and of course you can go to the washroom.” And with that I kept the phone down and went to sleep not before setting the alarm, I have to wake up early tomorrow.

In our bond there is one thing that attracts me most, if one acts like a kid the other is there and becomes mature. I wish our bond stays like this forever.

End of Shivaay’s pov

The sun was rising indicating a beautiful rise to yet another day, which gonna be full of fun for the Oberoi’s. Today they are gonna go to Goa for their beloved daughter’s wedding.

Pinky woke up from her sweet slumber and looked at the watch. It showed 4, she freshened up and rushed to the kitchen.

Shivaay was sleeping so cutely that anyone who would have watched him like that would have fallen head over heels in love with him. His neatly rimmed beard, messy hair, million dollar smile and kanji aankhein, who could have said no to him. They were just….adorable. He was wearing a white kurta which was giving a little access to his skin, the pores were to be grateful of. He was caressing the frilles of his pillow and saying “Anika your hair are so soft. But why they have become small ?” He suddenly opened his eyes and smacked his head lightly. Yet once again he had drowned in her thoughts.

There was a knock on the door while he was checking the schedule of his meetings in his cell, still in bed. He said a “Hmm” and then immediately made a way for his mom who has come with a tray. She sat down and said “Shivaay beta, are you fine now. I have made this soup myself, taste it and tell me, how is it. It will also cure your cold.” All Shivaay could do was smile over her, she loved him so much that she woke up this early just to make soup for him. He hugged her mom lightly and murmured a “thank you”. She too smiled and was going to take the spoon to her mouth when she pulled it back. Shivaay was confused. “Mom..” Before he could say anything she blowed over the spoon and then fed him. She raised her eyebrows asking how is it..? “Khidkitod” came his reply. “I mean the soup is really delicious.” She caressed his hair and then made him drink the whole.

Shivaay came out of the bathroom with a towel at his waist. He was feeling really happy today, he must have thought about her while showering too. He was ruffling his wet hair here and there murmuring a song and being excited. Pinky saw this from outside and was happy that his son was happy. She knew the reason must be Anika. She didn’t felt any emotion, like jealousy except tremendous love for anika, because of her his son was looking like a normal happy human. She prayed mentally to her Maata rani (goddess) to be consistent to their happiness.

As the jet took over everyone in the family was smiling, laughing and were full of enthusiasm they gonna create in the chopper. Only one person looked little stressed. He was not speaking anything. Omru whispered among themselves what happened to him, when shivaay spoke suddenly….”got it !”

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Heya cuties !! I am back again with a new chapter. I want to thank everyone who are are liking this story and also the silent readers who gave their opinions in the last chaapy, thank you very much. It means a lot. Do comment everyone along with the silent readers. I would love to listen to your views. Thank you for reading❤

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    91 Comments

    1. CrazygirlS.P on June 6, 2017 6:52 pm

      Superb you rock it Jerry

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear. It means a lot?

    2. sumitha on June 6, 2017 6:58 pm

      I wish this to be the real ib………
      The way u describing the scenario was amazing ………
      What is the idea of shivaay????? Waiting for it …….
      This time also achu make me funny
      Throughout the story give me excitement……hats of u drrr
      Love u drrrrrrr
      As usual post next asap…….?????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:02 pm

        Hey Sumitha di.
        Thank you so much for commenting. Yeah, you will have to wait for the next chapter. I am glad that you liked the achuu scenes. Thanks again??
        Love you too di.
        Will try to post the next one soon❤

    3. Tanz on June 6, 2017 7:00 pm

      Amazing phone conversation , loved it…the way Ani was scolding Shivay-just amazing…God!!!-8 tablets – seriously Shivay is a mini medical store?? and I loved this Pinky yr…true love for her son, specially the soup scene,just adorable. Oh Shivay is night and day-dreaming about Anika, can’t say what her thoughts are…..What did Shivay “get”???I am waiting to know about it…

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:09 pm

        Tanz, thank you so much for commenting. I am glad that you liked the telephonic conversation. Yeah, Anika ko toh scold karna hi thanks na..??
        Yeah, shivaay is seriously !!
        Ohh, thanks again, am happy you loved the soup scene. Yeah, he is ??
        Hmm, you be a little patient ❤

    4. pooja26 on June 6, 2017 7:15 pm

      whole chappy was a awwwwwwwww ……… 😉 😉
      really sooooo chweett………
      amazing…….
      way u describe billu’s sleing na…… that tho………
      😉 😉 loved it !!!!!!!
      post asap,……
      tc……

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:12 pm

        Pooja di, thank you so much. I am happy that you liked it and also that you will not eat me, you know I was scared??
        Billu ji’s sleeping, awww than- Ku ( Gauri style, she rocks)
        Will try yo post soon. Take care.
        Well I have did a naamkaran for you. Tomm !! How’s it ? ❤❤

      • pooja26 on June 7, 2017 7:50 pm

        haha i will not eat u dear 😉 😉
        name like ?????
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        loved i t !!!!!!!!! 😉 😉

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 11:20 am

        Tomm, am glad that you loved your new name and I think you will be used to it????

    5. Anagha on June 6, 2017 7:25 pm

      Awsum episode… You explained every minute details tremendously… Keep going. Actually gul khan should have ropped you in.. This pinky was really good. And talking about shivaay, by reading your decsrpition of him every girl will go nut’s for him….. Love yaa..

      • anagha on June 7, 2017 7:18 am

        That’s me!!.. forgot to login.

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:17 pm

        Oh, I guessed it before math only?

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:16 pm

        Anagha, thank you shoo much..I am happy that you loved the little details too??. Yeah I will, you keep giving me support?
        No, yaar gul ma’am has to continue the show and this ff is not gonna last for long na…it will end in a few chappy’s. Pinky ji, yeah I wanted her to be in the show too, but alas..
        Shivaay, I have already gone for him, you also join me? Love you too❤

    6. VHM on June 6, 2017 7:27 pm

      Achu..achu..achu…achu….i am also sneezing along with the super handsome Shivaay ”well my husband might be jealous of Shivaay now” …………awesome superb fabulous episode Vedika aka jerry…..what more to say i am just smiling…excited to read the next shot …but ya will wait too….love you loads dear ………..

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 6:36 pm

        Harika di, thank you so much. Hmm, you both ?? You know jealously is a good quality in husbands, you are lucky? 3 magical words ke liye, a big vala thankuuu?? Will try to post soon. Love yaa and let me tell you I am missing you❤

      • VHM on June 7, 2017 10:34 pm

        awee…even i am missing everyone..you all have become a habit to me and it’s getting difficult to pass time now a days..though my classes and house work is going on in it’s own pace

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 11:22 am

        Then you should come with something new na…we are waiting?
        And classes, you’re a teacher ??

    7. Shivika on June 6, 2017 7:43 pm

      Awesome….
      Anika scolding Shivaay was too cute….?
      This Sweet Singh Oberoi is adorable….?
      I’m so happy dat Pinky is positive here….
      Waiting fr d nxt… ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:07 pm

        Shivika, thank you so much. Anika’s scolding, am glad that you liked it. Yeah, Sweet Singh Oberoi ?? Am also happy that you liked The Positive Pinky here. Will try to post soon. Lots of love❤

    8. Lilly on June 6, 2017 8:31 pm

      Awesome…superb…just loved it….

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:08 pm

        Thank you so much Lilly, am happy that you loved it?

    9. Arthi on June 6, 2017 8:41 pm

      Superb dr….just loved all the portions….. especially when Anika scolded Shivay and he obliged her and the description about sleeping Shivay…..and pinky thank God she is positive……and overall superb just post next part soon pl…..

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:10 pm

        Arthi, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. Anika’s scolding was just to make Shivaay drool over her more?
        Sleeping Shivaay??awww…
        Thanks again. Yeah will post the next part soon???

    10. Dhar on June 6, 2017 8:47 pm

      Superbly fantastic Jerry , plzz post the next update ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:11 pm

        Thank you so much Dhar. I will try to post the next episode soonish❤

    11. alekhika20 on June 6, 2017 9:03 pm

      Superb update

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:12 pm

        Alekhika thank you so much for commenting?

    12. navz on June 6, 2017 9:22 pm

      Running out of time…soo take these small words..i loved it.

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:13 pm

        Okay di, thank you so much for commenting and am delighted that you loved it?

    13. shivika4eva on June 6, 2017 9:36 pm

      Achu this achu was achu awesome achu????

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:14 pm

        Achuu….thank…achuu….you….shivika??
        Am happy that you liked it?

    14. Aashi on June 6, 2017 9:38 pm

      Jerry do u hav any supr power that u understand what we actually want to read.Super awesome update
      loved Shivaay’s innocence & Anika’s care.Cherry on cake:Pinky’s love
      thanx & update soon

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:17 pm

        Aashi, thank you so much. Ohh, no i don’t have any thou wish to have?
        I am really happy that you liked it. Shivaay innocent hai, let’s see kab tak he will remain like this?? Yeah I will try to update soon, by the way I love your name?

    15. Ashwinee on June 6, 2017 10:15 pm

      Hey Jerry, SSO ko thoda baksh toh do . Bechara achu achukar karke khudka gangaram karvaadiya . Upar se anika ke daant. Today’s update was “Aww so cute “. Loved it

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:19 pm

        Ashwinee di, thank you so much. Di, okay I will try but the fault is only his na…he ate 15 ice creams , don’t know how much he is in love?? Anika ki daant, he enjoyed it than being scared !! She cared for him na..am happy you loved it. Love yaa❤

      • Ashwinee on June 8, 2017 8:01 am

        Chalo maanliya galti SSO ki hi hai.
        Arre meri behen se Koi jeet sakta hai kya bhala . Love you too???

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 11:23 am

        No di, its not like that??, and I will spare him in the next one. Okay na..love you three?

    16. aryaraju on June 6, 2017 11:25 pm

      Superb ??

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:20 pm

        Thank you very much Arya??

    17. kanfi on June 6, 2017 11:35 pm

      Jerry….
      Frst let me tell u,,i m really blessed that idea of reading ur ff struck on my mind otherwise i would have miss such an amazing story…

      Its ammmszingggg
      U r a fabulous writer…..
      That whole billiji convo was hilarious-..
      Then comes achu achu achu achu achu,,now i m also feeling like this…
      Hope pinki is positivr here…!!!
      Khidkitod epi….
      I think anika will also be in goa….

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 4:04 pm

        Hey Kanfi.
        Thank you shoo much for commenting. Am also glad that the idea came to your mind?
        Awww, thankuuu for the compliment. I am delighted that you liked the conversation. Gosh, take care of yourself?
        Yeah you don’t need to worry, pinky is positive. Thanks again, and yaa keep guessing❤

    18. Anu16 on June 6, 2017 11:46 pm

      Hey an awesome update…shivaay n anika’s convo was great… post soon…

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thank you so much Anu. I am happy that you loved their conversation. Will try to post soon?

    19. Nita D on June 6, 2017 11:54 pm

      Awesome episode Jerry….I was going hysterical during shivika convo, so much so tha my sister sleeping next to me woke up…..N thankfully Pinky isn’t jealous of Anika here….that what I love the most about your ff….there’s no negativity….Only love, fun n happiness….

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:15 pm

        Hey Nita. Thank you so much for commenting. Ohh ! Your sister, poor her?, sometimes it happen with me too?
        Yeah, pinky is positive here. Thanks again. Really happy that you like this quality?
        Love yaa very much❤❤

    20. fffan1234 on June 7, 2017 12:30 am

      Super cute update. Loved it

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear. I am happy that you loved it?

    21. Sofiya. S. on June 7, 2017 12:53 am

      Hey jerry ?…
      That was such a khidkitod awesome episode!!!!
      Really Loved it ??….

      Really loved shivika’s conversation….
      Sho cuuuteee ?…
      The “Achuu!!..”.scene was super duper cute. ??…
      Good to know that Pinky isn’t negative.. ?
      Our Sweet Singh Oberoi is still in his La La land… Dreaming about Annika ??☺?…

      I must say dear your writing is just amazing….
      You always strike us with awe and amazement with your writing…
      Really Siss, I have no words to describe your writing skills….

      I got to know your real name is Vedika.. A beautiful name indeed ?..

      I m eagerly waiting for the next update…
      Post soon dear ??❤….

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:23 pm

        Heyoo Sophia.
        Thank you so much sweetie. I am really happy that you loved it as your opinion matters a lot to me?
        I am glad that you loved their conversation. Ohh achuu scene, thanks again?
        You don’t need to worry about that, she isn’t negative here?
        Awww, a very big vala thankuuu.
        My name, ohh thankuuu twice??
        Yeah will try to post soon. Love yaa❤

    22. Banita on June 7, 2017 3:30 am

      Amazingggg….. Ek dum a khidkitode epi….

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:25 pm

        Thank you so much Banita…love you gal?

    23. Lisaaa on June 7, 2017 6:07 am

      Awesome

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:26 pm

        Thank you Lisaaa for commenting?

    24. Abbi on June 7, 2017 6:53 am

      Hey jerry! I really loved the whole conversation between Shivika, shivaay baby the cutest. Update the next asap.

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:33 pm

        Hello Abbi. Thank you so much for commenting. I am happy that you loved their conversation. Shivaay, thanks again. Will try to post soon❤

      • Abbi on June 9, 2017 5:43 am

        Well you don’t have to thank me this much, it’s your right to be appreciated and every author has. Keep doing great, it makes us happy especially me. ❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 12, 2017 1:09 pm

        Awww, still its needed na..?

    25. gayathri.visu on June 7, 2017 9:35 am

      OMG! OMG! Jerry ur really amazing writer dear.
      EXCELLENT PART… Awwww! So cute phone convo n ‘aachu…aachu’ scene is hilarious! Shivaay calls himself as billuji…lol! Thanks dear for making Pinky as a positive character! Finally why Shivaay shouts ‘got it!’. What he got it?? Waiting for next part dear…..

      • Jerry_36 on June 7, 2017 7:23 pm

        Birthday girl, let me first wish you a very happy birthday, thank you for always supporting me❤❤
        Now coming to the chappy thank you so much for the compliment *am really happy* Overjoyed that you liked their conversation. Yeah, bhavnaoo me beh gaya, beachara? Your welcome. Yeah you wish for the next part. Love yaa❤

      • gayathri.visu on June 8, 2017 12:22 am

        Thank u so so so so soooo much for ur wishes dear. I saw ur msg. Sorry dear, I can’t able to reply u. Once I get free from my studies, then I will reply u. Once again thanks dear. Love u too my dear Vedika sister!!

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:34 pm

        It’s okay. Your welcome?

    26. dwet on June 7, 2017 10:18 am

      Awesome as usual. ? please post next ASAP. ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 8:35 pm

        Thank you so much Dwet. Will try to post soon?

    27. jane on June 7, 2017 10:31 am

      very very interesting……. loved every bit of it…waiting eagerly for the next part

      • Jerry_36 on June 9, 2017 9:26 pm

        Thank you so much Jane. I am really happy that you loved it. Will try to post soon. Love youuu, thanks again for commenting❤

    28. Pui on June 7, 2017 12:51 pm

      Just amazing Jerry! Ur writing skills are super fab

      • Jerry_36 on June 9, 2017 11:30 pm

        Thank you so much Pui. I am really happy that you like my skills❤❤

      • Pui on June 10, 2017 12:25 am

        ?

    29. Sanskriti120 on June 7, 2017 2:30 pm

      No words… I said no… Words…
      Acha teek hain now say how can you write this nice…… Actually not nice… Great…. Flawless,sooperb…. And that’s it my dictonery ends here…..????.
      The things which caught my sight were….
      1.] Shivaay saying the rule in their relation… If one become kid then the other automatically behaves as mature… Woahh!!!!! Watta line yaar…
      2.] Pinky’s thoughts… You very well described shivaay-pinky relationship and bond… You know there bond is being missed in ib these days… Now a days in ib pinky behaves as ponky rather than shivaay’s mother?… The way you described that pinky is not jealous of anika is juz great….
      And I think after anika’s ears now shivaay need a treatment for his ears… Because after anika’s BILLUJI’S talks, anika’s laughter,anika scolding he must have lost his hearing…..
      Now they went to Goa yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!…
      The epi was justtttt great…
      Please post soon??.
      Love?

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:03 am

        Yess, seriously they are no words, they are great words which have impressed Miss Jerry??, thank you so much sista for these appreciating words. Your dictionary ended, still I loved those words??
        Hovering over your comment every now and then. Ohh that line it cane to my mind instantaneously. Yeah, pinky is really being a ponky. Hope CVS wl do something soonish. And am glad that you loved it, thankuuu.
        See, both of them now will need a pair of extra ears??
        Hmm, goa will be fun. Hope you will like it too. Thanks again dearie????
        Will try to post soon. Big thanku for a long comment.
        Love yaa. ❤❤❤❤

    30. nikita_jai29 on June 7, 2017 2:39 pm

      It is nice one dear.. And also lovely…. Eagerly waiting for the next update please post ASAP dear

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:05 am

        Thank you so much Nikita di. Really appreciate that. Am happy that you found it lovely. Will try to post soon???

    31. Zaveesha on June 7, 2017 5:24 pm

      Hi dear Jerry or should I say Vedika as i love ur name…
      I have read all the previous parts which I have Missed…nd all of them were just amazing….i just loved Shivika bonding..nd I’m loving the Shivaay of ur ff…
      Nd this episode was also very nice…their convo…??
      I love the way u describe the emotions…
      Nd yeah me too waiting for the next part…

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:11 am

        Heyoo Zaveesha.
        You know I am so happy to see your comment as I thought I lost a reader as well as a friend, but overjoyed that I hadn’t?, thankuuu so much for commenting.
        Ohh, I am really glad that you are loving their bond. And Shivaay, thanks again???
        I am delighted that you like dtheir conversation. Awww, thanks again and again for the compliment sweetie. Will try to post soon.
        Love yaa❤❤

      • Zaveesha on June 10, 2017 12:55 pm

        Ohh..so sorry that I couldn’t comment..but I read all the episodes but due to lack of time didn’t able to comment…I’ll try to comment now…
        Ur most welcome…
        Love u too…

      • Jerry_36 on June 12, 2017 1:08 pm

        ??its okay??

    32. Neha-17 on June 8, 2017 5:21 am

      #The great Business man Shivaay Singh Oberoi has a pet name Billu ji- I rreally thought this inreal IB that what if media comes to know
      #your brain to dhobiwala -reallly hahahaha
      #Anika your hair are so soft. But why they have become small ?- OH! Sweet dreams Billuji
      You will never stop to surprise me…YOu just develop interest in readers
      Always there is a freshness in ittt..!
      This update is wonderfulll
      LOved itt
      Love ya!
      #Choti Writer

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:17 am

        Heyoo Neha di.
        Well, thank you so much for commenting, I am on cloud nine after reading your comment. Loved it, thankkuuuuuu????????
        I also wish that if the media will come to know about it then Shivaay’s pappu is to be sure off???
        And the line where you said that Oh sweet dreams billu ji was really very cute to read. Now am having less thankuu’s to give still a big vala THANKS??
        Choti writer, is that my nickname well I loved it. You can call me that???
        Love you too very much❤❤❤❤

      • Neha-17 on June 10, 2017 12:31 am

        Yes your nice name….????…keep updating like this jerry…??
        Welcome!(big wala) . It’s your efforts which are appreciated!!❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • Jerry_36 on June 12, 2017 1:08 pm

        Ohh welcome, I will try to bear with your expectations?

    33. Nila on June 8, 2017 5:13 pm

      Hi vedu my cute lil sis???achu..
      ????khidkitod part and pinky lovely mom????not like IB???explanation of shivaay while sleeping wah????? and ya thank u??? for giving a long phone convo BTW shivika????

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:20 am

        Nila di, my favorite valid sweet sista, thank you shoo much. Achuu…am glad that you liked this chappy??, yeah pinky is positive here. Shivaay, ohh thanks again. Your welcome?, love yaa❤

      • Nila on June 10, 2017 12:52 am

        Love u too vedu ??Post next one jaldi

      • Jerry_36 on June 12, 2017 1:06 pm

        I will try di?

    34. thedreamsoul on June 9, 2017 8:49 pm

      Girl you are rocking ! Awesome chapter and the whole chapter was perfect . Loved it and the conversation between Anika and Shivaye was cute ! What will haooen when world comes to know that he had a pet name billu , omg !
      Pinky is great mother and I hate IB for ruining her character , thank you for making her positive one .
      Really excited for the wedding and for the reunion of Shivaye and Anika !
      Anika concerned about Shivaye health and 8 tablets was really hilarious !

      Sorry dear for being late , keep sending me the links okay else I would miss it .

      Jerry dear I love you and keep writing like this which makes our jaw drop , you are truly amazing and I hope you are doing great . Take care ❤

      Sana ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 10, 2017 12:27 am

        Ohh, thankuu you so much Sana di for commenting as well compliment?, I am happy that you liked the chapter.
        If the world will come to know that Shivaay’s name is Billu ji then anika would be laughing hysterically and Shivaay would be hiding in her palllu??
        Your welcome, sweetheart??
        And I hope that I will be able to keep this excitement updated?
        I am happy that you liked the tablets part too, shivaay is a mini medical store??
        Its Okay, happy that you commented?
        I will keep sending you, fine na..?
        Thankuuuuuu so very much yaar, praising someone is a very good deed you know, saint Relaswami said?
        I am doing fine, and hope you too. Take care. Love yaa❤

    35. Ahaana on June 11, 2017 1:55 am

      ek dum khidkitod.. and chooo cuteee??

      • Jerry_36 on June 12, 2017 1:05 pm

        Thank you so much Ahaana di. me am really happy that you found it cutee?

    36. fati on June 13, 2017 9:27 pm

      And I am thinking why the hell I didn’t see the update *facepalms myself* ✋
      Coming to the chapter, it’s fantabulous?
      The part ” achu..achu..achu and alot or achu” was so cute ?? *giggles*
      And then Anika’s scolding??? and Billuji eating 8 tablets and that “acha meri maa”? OMG jerry how do you write such cute dialouges?? I was going Awww there? Thank u for fulfilling my wish of Anika scolding Billuji and thank you for telling me bcz I don’t know why I didn’t read the chappy???
      Love yaa????

      • Jerry_36 on June 14, 2017 11:17 pm

        Ohh its totally fine sweetie. I am glad that you liked the update, thank you shoo much. Happy that you liked the achuu, achuu part.
        Yeah 8 tablets, mini medical store? meri maa, ohh thanks again.
        Ohh its okay yaar, you wish my command. Its totally fine dear.
        And I enjoyed reading your comment, thankuuu?

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