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Home»Fan Fiction»My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 13 by Jerry
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My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 13 by Jerry

Jerry_36By Jerry_36June 3, 201794 Comments8 Mins Read
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“Di, di, di…I am very happy today.” Omkara swirled Tia around the room. Tia started balancing herself. She was prone to giddy sensations and also she was pregnant. “Om, stop. Tell me what happened !” She replied huffing and puffing. Om instantly realised what he has done and made Tia lie down comfortably. “Voh, di I am sorry I forgot. You okay ?” “Hmm, now tell me what happened, why are you so happy.” Tia spoke. Om started shying. “Oh my God, let me look at you, you are shying, what happened” tia asked well aware of his state of mind. He took a deep breath, relaxed his overthinking mind and said “I proposed Gauri and she accepted !!” “Wow, a great news, so tell me how it happened ?” She spoke hugging him tightly. “Yesterday I went to tell her about Prinku’s marriage. When I went to the park, there was a red rose lying over there. I picked it up and suddenly Gauri appeared from nowhere. She took the rose from me and said Om you brought it for me, you are so sweet. You know she also pulled my cheeks.” He once again blushed. “And then…” Tia said eager to know the story. “Then what, I was flattened by her gesture, she is the best, na. So without thinking anything, I proposed her and she accepted.” Om spoke beaming and smiling. She kept a hand on his shoulder and spoke “Om I know all the three of you and I know you three are very secretive personalities. You don’t express yourself freely. I know something must have triggered you. So tell me.” “You know me very well, na ?” Om spoke giving a hint of curve on his lips. “Any doubt ?” She spoke self praising. “Voh, actually day before yesterday, I saw her talking to Kushagra, laughing and smiling. You know he also kept his hand on My Gauri.” Now Om was a little bit angry. “So this is the work of highly possessive and jealous Om, well done. But still really happy for you. When you’re gonna tell your family about it ?” Tia spoke. “I will tell them today itself.” Om spoke lost in her thoughts.

Shivaay’s pov
Its been a week since she has left. Everything is going fine in my life. Om is happy with his relationship, to be truthful very happy. I am also delighted that they both decided to take their bonding to the next level. My family is busy in preparations of Prinku’s wedding. But I am not feeling complete. Something inside me is missing. And now I am accepting the fact that I am missing her terribly. Everything about her. I have so many emotions inside me, gosh I am not able to decipher this feeling myself. What is this. Her eyes which always portray innocence, those beautiful ones with mascara for which I can die for but her heart, so pure and clean for which I want to live for. I still remember that kiss on her forehead that I marked her, the feeling which I got at that time was not anything less than awesomeness, pure bliss. Her smile, which can play mayhem with my senses, so cute. Whenever she smiles, it feels that, that no one has the best smile, only she has. Her hair, which always smell of something good, like lavender, in them I am always lost. Someday I want to play with her hair. And the way she tucks the strand of her hair behind her ear, shyly. Super duper cute. The way she keeps her hand on her waist and pout being angry, hayee…and wait a minute what I am seeing, her shadow, I wish I could hug her, but I know she has gone, gone away from me. Am I in love with her..?

“Mr Oberoi, Mr Oberoi” someone was shaking me. “Can you tell me if I like the shadow of someone, am I in truly in love with her ?” I spoke absent mindedly. “What ? Mr Oberoi, we all are waiting for the presentation !” The voice again spoke and I turned around to witness that I was in a meeting with Saraswati Steels with many other members. Some were gaping at me, with a perfect o shape and some were smiling. I stood there flushed, embarrassed, what not. I was day dreaming about her in the office too. I tried to speak something but my throat also ditched me. “Mr Oberoi its okay, we can continue the presentation tomorrow, I think you need rest. It was nice meeting you.” Mr Malhotra spoke and I mentally thanked him for saving me from this situation. Also I made a note to finalize the deal with them.

Everyone left the room one by one, not before congratulating me. I didn’t know what to do. I stood there. After all left, Mr Malhotra came towards me and spoke “Yes.You are in love Mr Oberoi.” “What ?” I spoke. “You asked me na if you like someone’s shadow too, are you in love. So the answer is yes. Truly, absolutely and whole heartedly, you love that someone. And I am happy for you.” He handshaked me and left. I stood there numb for sometime remembering every damn thing about her. There must be a confusion. I then thought about the things that I don’t like her and then, I fell in love with her imperfections.And I spoke to myself, I love her, yes, I love her a lot. And then I shouted in the empty room, aloud I love you Anika, I love you immensely. Now I didn’t care about anyone listening to me. The echo of my voice came back to me, I suddenly felt my heart at peace, maybe from the time I met her there was a deep void going inside me, my mind and my heart and now both of them have agreed. I am feeling so, so happy that I don’t know what to do. God, I love her. I once gain shouted.
End of Shivaay’s pov

He reached home, looking happy, glowing from inside and then repeating the thing which he was saying from the time he realised it- I love you. He was deeply and madly in love with her, her everything.

“Bhaiya let’s eat dinner. Its quite late now.” Rudra spoke. “Voh, actually my tummy is full.” Shivaay stuttered. “Shivaay beta what have you eaten, you toh never eat anything from outside.” He was going to speak when he sneezed. “I ate..achuu… a lot of….achuu.. ice creams today…achuu from the stall…achuu” he managed to speak. Everyone saw him as they have seen a ghost.

“Bhaiya ate..”
“Ice cream..”
“From a stall..”
“That too which he considers unhygienic.”

Spoke all the youngsters gaping him while the elders still in shock. Shivaay ran to his room blushing. They didn’t know why he ate. He was missing her so much that he ate ice creams, not that he ate 1, 2, 4, 6…he ate 15 ice creams. He too couldn’t believe how could he eat so much. They were the symptoms of love, I believe.

Rudra was going to sleep when his phone rang “Hello who is this ?” “Hello Rudy, I am Anika.” The line spoke. “Anika di….” Rudra almost shouted and everyone gathered in the hall listening to the commotion. And then what, everyone was busy talking to her. The youngsters were snatching the phone from each other and running and shouting, while the elders were trying to stop them. At last everyone was satisfied and the phone went to Dadi. A quick scolding from Janhvi was enough to make them cling to their beds and sleep. Nobody noticed that there was another person who was desperately waiting for a chance to communicate with Anika except Dadi. He was roming everywhere the phone was. Dadi spoke “Anika puttar, its very nice of you that you called us. I am sorry on the behalf of children. How are you doing then, everything fine..?” “Namaste Dadi. And you don’t need to be sorry I loved to talk to them, all of you are so sweet and I am happy for Om. I have met Gauri, they both will make a nice pair. And I am sorry I couldn’t call to you as I was very busy with the work. Today only I got time so I called Sahil and then you. My work is going ekdum khidkitod.” Anika spoke from the other side. Their conversation lasted only a few minutes when Dadi called “Billu..” Shivaay who was hiding behind the pillar instantly came out and said “I was going to fetch water.” Innocently. “Hmm, I know now take this phone. Anika is on the line.” She spoke. “Oh ! Anika. Okay you sleep, good night. I will give the phone to Rudra.” He waved at the old figure as she descended to her room. “Hello” he spoke. “Billu ji…..”

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Heya cuties !! I am back again with the next chapter. I hope you enjoyed. I will be waiting for your reviews. Do comment everyone, along with silent readers.
Happy birthday Sumitha di. This is on the special requests of yours. I hope you liked the chapter.
And Zainab, I have included Rikara’s confession and I hope you like it too. Their love will soon blossom.
And Anya now the moment has came- Billu ji. That You were asking for, the next chapter will be having the teasing session.
Thank you for reading❤

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    94 Comments

    1. Nita D on June 3, 2017 8:22 pm

      Both the brothers realized their love….one has confessed any other has yet to confess…..
      It’s awesome Jerry…..I love your style of writing….I am tongue tied after reading it….
      Post next part soon….love ya…

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 1:36 pm

        Thank you so much Nita. Yeah, both the brothers got a lottery for lifetime. Thanks again, I am glad that you love my writing style. Feeling super happy??
        Will try to post soon. Love you too❤

    2. thedreamsoul on June 3, 2017 8:23 pm

      This is awesome jerry ! Loved it .
      You are something girl and the whole chapter was amazing , mindblowing and fantastic ! Om-Tia’s bond was lovely and yay they are together now .
      Shivaye daydreaming about Anika , mahn I cupped my mouth when I read it was in the meeting hall , totally embarrassed .
      15 ice creams , Aww our billuji is in love !
      Over all the chapter was beyond perfection ! Love you Jerry ??

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 1:49 pm

        Sana, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. This much praise, thanks again sweetie? I am happy that you loved Om and Tia’s bond and yeah Rikara are together?? Yeah, very much in love, like a lovesick teenager.
        Hmm, 15 ice creams, I too thought these are many?? Thanks again. Love you❤

    3. Shivika4ever on June 3, 2017 8:30 pm

      Awwwwwwwwwweeee

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thank you so much dear for commenting☺

    4. Niriha on June 3, 2017 8:33 pm

      Awesome…shivay realised his feelings ???fabulous part waiting for next

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 1:51 pm

        Niriha, thank you tons. Yup, he realised, at last? Will try to post the next one soon?

    5. alekhika20 on June 3, 2017 8:38 pm

      Superb update

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 1:53 pm

        Alekhika, thank you for commenting?

    6. Sofiya. S. on June 3, 2017 9:00 pm

      Hi jerry! ?…
      Fantabulous, khidkitod, darwazatod update!
      Finally our Billuji accepted that he is is love!??….
      I really loved Shivaay’s POV.

      And…
      A big big SORRY to u dear …
      I couldn’t comment on your previous posts..
      And I don’t even know that I would be able to but whenever I will get time I will surely try to read your ff and post a comment…

      Till then do remember you have a fan-cum friend always waiting for your ff… ? ?…
      See ya soon ?❤….

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:03 pm

        Heyoo Sophia.
        Thank you so much for such a sweet comment. Yeah, tadibaaz hai, but still he accepted and you know what I am really happy that you loved his POV as I was nervous about it.
        Its okay dear, as now you have said, I will surely remember by best friend will be there for me??
        Love you a lot. Thanks again for taking out time and giving a motivational comment❤

    7. sumitha on June 3, 2017 9:05 pm

      Ohhhh Jerry u accepted my request thank u love so muchhhhhh…….I ate ….achu…a lot offf …achu …..icecream achu that is so funny …….Jerry is amazing ur a great writer …..om-Tia bond was nyccc……the way all the younger’s waiting for anika’s phone and our billuji is waiting these all make the update awesome……..I’m eagerly waiting for their conversation. ……..once again thank u and love u drrr??????❤❤❤????????

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:10 pm

        Sumitha di, thank you so much. I hope your birthday went well. Love you too? Ohh, that ice cream vala part, thanks again. Your compliment means a lot to me. Om and Tia’s mind, I am glad that you liked it. I am happy that these elements made you super overjoyed. Will try to post soon. And yes, your welcome❤

    8. VHM on June 3, 2017 9:13 pm

      awee so cute episode…cuteness overloaded…i am in love with the way you sketched Shivaay’s character……..how i wish to see Shivaay so for Anika in IB……..love you dear…thank you for this fabulous episode

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:23 pm

        Hey Harika di. Thank you so much for commenting and I am glad that you loved the way I sketched Shivaay’s pov, I was nervous for that. Me too, want to see him mad in love with anika. Love you too. Your welcome di❤

    9. fati on June 3, 2017 9:14 pm

      Vedika (that’s ur name na) di I completely going Aww especially on that part where billu ji wants to talk with Anika? and hebate 15 ice-creams….?
      Gosh I want Anika to scold him for eating this many icecreams??

      • fati on June 3, 2017 9:15 pm

        *I was completely going
        *he ate

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:31 pm

        Its okay?

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:30 pm

        Hey Fati.
        Thank you so much and yes, my name is Vedika. I am glad that you liked Shivaay’s desperation and the part where he ate thses many ice creams. Your wish will be fulfilled. And don’t call me di, as I think I am younger than you, am just 14. Okay ? Love yaa❤

      • fati on June 5, 2017 1:52 am

        Thaaank u? Okay you are younger than me… U are Vedika for me… and I love you too❤❤?

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:04 pm

        ??

    10. pooja26 on June 3, 2017 9:15 pm

      hey u jerry ki bacchii 😉
      cliffhanger…… ahhh m gonna fall 😉
      post asap….. to save me…….
      aur else i will become tom & ate u ….. 😉 😉
      billu jiiiiii……… ahh then……
      post asap na……
      tc….
      love u 😉 …….

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:35 pm

        Pooja di, heyoo. Thank you for commenting.
        Yes, I gave you cliffhanger?No worries we all will save you??we will not let you fall. Haan, I will surely try to post the next one soon.
        Di, now I am running? I don’t want to die at a young age.
        Take care. Love you too❤

    11. dwet on June 3, 2017 9:32 pm

      Awesome update ? please post next ASAP.

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 2:41 pm

        Thank you so much Dwet. I will try to post soon?

    12. Anonymous on June 3, 2017 9:33 pm

      Hi Jerry!
      I am a huge fan your fan fiction and silent reader also. I think I am in love with you and your writings. I want to tell you that I am a huge fan of Armaan Malik and one thing more that your writings lift my mood. Whenever I am upset, I set myself out to read your posts. You won’t believe all your chapters are atleast read by atleast 20 times. I can even do PhD in your this fan fiction. I only want to dedicate one song to you, its like:

      Main padhu (your fan fiction) ya na padhu,
      tum isko likhti rehna….
      Mujhe raat mein jab aaye na neend,
      main isko padhna chahunga,
      tumhari tarah yeh hai bahot pyaara,
      isko likhna mat chhodna…

      Bas itna hai tumse kehna, bas itna hai tumse kehna
      Bas itna hai tumse kehna, bas itna hai tumse kehna…

      Heaps of love,
      Anonymous

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 6:28 pm

        Heyoo Anonymous.
        I am really happy that you decided to comment, thank you so much. It means a lot. I am glad that you love my writing style. Armaan Malik, yeah, he is an awesome singer. Delighted that my works as a stress buster for you. Oh my god, you have read my chapters 20 times, wow, I never thought you’ll love this fan fiction so much, thanks again.
        And about the song, thank you so much. It really made me feel better. And I promise I will never stop writing. Thank you once again for sparing your time to write this awesome comment?

    13. shivika4eva on June 3, 2017 9:47 pm

      Wow jerry, this was so cute… Update soon dear

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thank you so much dude. I am happy that you found it cute. Will try to update soon?

      • shivika4eva on June 5, 2017 10:23 pm

        Cmon jerry ab bta bhi do kya baate hui anika or billuji ki phone pr??
        Update sooooooooon

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 12:20 am

        Sweetie?, have a little patience. I will try to post soon?

    14. Surbhi Sharma on June 3, 2017 9:54 pm

      Hey jerry !!
      Such a cute chapter .
      I loved it .
      But a cliff hanger . Huhh .
      Post soon. I really can’t wait for next. ❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 6:35 pm

        Hello Surbhi.
        Thank you so much dear.
        I am glad that you loved it.
        Sorry, but my motivation for cliffhangers is Sanskriti??
        Will try to post soon. Be patient babe❤

    15. Tanz on June 3, 2017 10:08 pm

      Oh ! I loved this part so much…Starting from Om’s proposing, to Shivaay’s POV ,to his daydreaming in between a presentation(somewhat similar to Jab we met but still perfectly original)and to Shivaay’s achu-achu and finally till “Billuji” everything was just amazing. I must say you are a really talented writer and you must try writing other type of things(you are already good at this).
      Waiting eagerly for the next part.

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 6:42 pm

        Thank you so much Tanz. I am happy you loved this part. Let me tell yaa that I haven’t watched Jab we met still I am happy that you relived the moment?? Yeah, Shivaay’s POV, am glad you liked it and for the billu hi part, you have to wait more. Thank you so much but I didn’t understand, other type..means ? Still, thanku. Will try to post soon❤

      • Tanz on June 4, 2017 7:57 pm

        Other type means other than romance or comedy, maybe philosophy or something like that…If you have not watched Jab we met I recommend​ that you should..

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:05 pm

        Okay Tanz, I will surely try☺
        And yes, I will watch it☺

    16. Lisaaa on June 3, 2017 10:16 pm

      Awesome….. Plz update soon

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 6:50 pm

        Thank you Lisaaa, will try to update soon ?

    17. mehakchalag on June 3, 2017 10:54 pm

      Aww.I always loved it.Finally shivaay realized that he love anika.Hope IB main bhi yeh jaldi ho.When i open tu page and seen that u posted your next chapter i always feel very happy.Wonderful writing skills u have.Talented writer.Love u.Keep writing.

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:20 pm

        Mehak, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. Hmm, I am also waiting for it. That’s so sweet of you. Thanks again, for the compliment. Love you too. I will always write when you all are with me??

    18. Ahaana on June 3, 2017 10:55 pm

      …………..

      Wordless ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:23 pm

        Ahaana di, thank you so much??

    19. Zainab on June 3, 2017 11:10 pm

      Hey Jaani❄
      This was such a cute update… Thanks alot for fufilling my wish.. Love you ??. Shivaay confessing his feelings for Annika. Loved Mr. Malhotra. And please more updates of OmRi (if possible). Sorry for being so greedy and making so many wishes but I can’t help it. Love you⛄
      Bye!

      • Zainab on June 3, 2017 11:14 pm

        Bond b/w Annika and Family members was sooo sweet???. “Billuji” was the only word Shivaay wanted to hear from Annika. Please post the next chap asap!
        Bye

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:32 pm

        I am glad that you liked Anika’s bonding with the family members. Now you will witness the teasing scene too. Will try to post the next one soon?

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:30 pm

        Hello Zainab.
        Thank you so much yaar. Readers wish is my command?? I am glad that you liked the update. Yess, I will try to bring more of their updates. Its all fine dear, I will surely try. Love you too. Good night❤

    20. kanfi on June 3, 2017 11:57 pm

      Hey jerry….
      Ammmazing epi…
      I loved rikara confession,…n whole narration to tia….!!
      Shivaay ate 15 ice cream,,,he’s definately in love;-)
      I also liked shivaay’s confession to himself….the whole scene was fabulous….!!!
      Anika’s bonding with oberois is just khidkitod.-…
      Waiting for anika’s confession…
      Gd night

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:34 pm

        Hello Kanfi.
        Thank you so much for commenting. I am happy that you loved the Rikara’s confession. Yess, shivaay has now become Sweet Singh Oberoi. I am happy that you are loving her bonding. Hmm, you wait.
        Good night❤

    21. Diyaa on June 4, 2017 1:09 am

      That was a lovely update Jerry. Shivaay’s realization of his love for Anika and what followed with the family was so well written. Really nice!

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:37 pm

        Diyaa di, heyoo.
        Long time, how’s you. Thank you so much for commenting. I am really happy that you loved the update. Thanks again❤❤

    22. ruksy on June 4, 2017 3:39 am

      Totally amazing loved the update. Where did annika go and what for.

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:39 pm

        Ruksy, thank you so much. Anika has gone for somewhere outside as her dream is coming true. She is working with a higher branch of CCD, for two weeks so she is not in Mumbai right now. Hope your confusion is cleared?

      • ruksy on June 5, 2017 12:03 pm

        Thanks for clearing the confusion

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:06 pm

        Your welcome?

    23. gayathri.visu on June 4, 2017 6:33 am

      FANTASTIC DEAR!! Om-Tia’s bonding is really something new! Rikara’s confession is soooo sweet. Now Anika’s billuji becomes day dreamer! His dream in presentation room n hisself confession….wonderful dear. O bete ki! 15 ICE CREAMS!! Billuji terribly missed Anika! Oberois n anika bonding is awesome. But why did u stopped at this point Jerry dear?? Eagerly waiting for next part.

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:46 pm

        Gayathri di, thank you so much. I am really overjoyed that you enjoyed the update. I am glad that you liked Om Tia’s friendship. Awww, thanks again?
        Yess, day dreamer about her only. Hmm, 15 ice creams, he has eaten, I think he is completely in love with her, bahut zada?
        Because I love cliffhangers di??, sorry I will try to post soon. Love yaa❤

    24. Shivika on June 4, 2017 8:05 am

      Awesome Update…..Loved it…..
      Shivaay’s realization of love was written beautifully….
      Shivaay ate 15 ice-creams that was too cute….
      Anika’s bonding with the Oberois is amazing….
      waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:49 pm

        Shivika, thank you so much. I am glad that you loved it. Babe, I am happy that you liked the part, I sketched for Shivaay. Cute, thanks again. Will try to post soon. You know you have always been supporting me, and I really appreciate that. Love you friend❤

    25. Dhar on June 4, 2017 10:39 am

      Awesome episode ??????, the 15 ice creams, and that too from a stall , where do you get such ideas from , plzzzz do post the next update ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:50 pm

        Dhar, thank you so much. I am happy that you liked it. 15 ice creams, well I was just thinking and it suddenly popped in my mind. Yeah, I will try to post the next one soon?

    26. Ashwinee on June 4, 2017 11:14 am

      This is awwwsome fantabulous update, Jerry. You know what, from the first update I am very keen on reading this ff. So please don’t break my habit of reading this and post the next one ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 4, 2017 11:52 pm

        Ashwinee Di, thank you so much. I am happy that you found it awesome. That is so sweet of you. Yesss, di I will surely try to post the next one soon. Love yaa❤

      • Ashwinee on June 5, 2017 12:11 am

        Love you once for the update and twice for calling me DI !!!. LOVE U LOADS??

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:07 pm

        Awww, love you more di?

    27. Rutuja on June 4, 2017 11:50 am

      Hey..it was just mind-blowing shivaay was thinking abt her in conference room too..nd Mr.Malhotra made him realise his feelings..jus awsome..loved it alott..
      ?whatt..?? he ate 15 ice-creams..nahi yeh nahi ho sakta???..wht if he gets ill?..?? he shold take care of himself naa..!! Ok I was jus kidding..??It was fantastic..
      please post the nxt part soon eagerly watin for their convo..love u loads..???

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 12:18 am

        Somya, thank you so much for commenting. I am glad that you liked that Mr Malhotra vala scene??
        Ab Shivaay he has eaten, but I know he should take care of himself. I will scold him, okay ? Thanks again.
        And somya remember I will never forget you, the reply to your message. You are one of my best friends na?
        Yess, I will try to post the next one soon. Love you too very much❤

      • Rutuja on June 7, 2017 2:00 pm

        Tysm Jerry my ff.. luv u loads????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 8, 2017 11:13 am

        ???

    28. Sanskriti120 on June 4, 2017 3:38 pm

      Billuji????……
      Ummm cliff hanger dediya..?.
      Ek episode main tumne omkara ke bht shades dikhadiye….
      1. Shy-kara
      2. Possessive- kara
      3-nervous-kara
      4-loving- kara…… Haye Haye… Gauri ne accept bhi karliya iss multi-shaded omkara ka proposal.?????.
      Shivaay day dreaming………????
      Bechare ne presentation ke beech main apne hee izzat la khilwad kardiya?????.
      I most lovable thing I’m this episode was shivaay POV part…
      The way the POV started from him missing her and ended at him concluding his love for her is appreciable…. You have portrayed the POV part very clearly and cleanly.. And the youngsters hahaah I think anika should consult a doctor for her ear,
      Because listening to there talks she would have lost her hearing till now…
      And shivaay chupke chupke in logon ke baatein sunna was just cute…… Let’s see now how will he react of her calling him.. The great
      ….”BILLUJI” ?????.
      waiting for next episode.?.
      loved the episode and you too?????

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:12 pm

        Hey Sanskriti Di.
        You know I am very much happy to see your awesomeness overloaded comment, thank you so much for commenting??
        I am happy that you loved all the shades of Omkara and yeah, gauri is also very much in love with him.
        Yeah, shivaay ki badi vali oh my Maata ho gayi, true that??
        I am happy you loved Shivaay’s pov. And yeah, anika will surely try to recommend a Doctor, thou she loved them, they have made her ears gone?
        Cute Singh Oberoi??, thanks again.
        For that you have to Bear a little patience di. Yess I will try to post soon.
        Love you very much. Thanks again for such a sweet comment❤

    29. fan on June 4, 2017 11:02 pm

      Super duper cute … will u post next asap plz

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thank you so much Fan. I am happy that you liked it and also that I found a new reader??

    30. fffan1234 on June 4, 2017 11:47 pm

      Superb update. Looking for next part

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:14 pm

        Dear, thank you so much. I am happy that you liked it. Will try to post the next part soon❤

    31. anagha on June 5, 2017 9:35 am

      Kidkithod episode sisoo!!!!…..loved it !!.. your ff gives relief from the saas bahu drama of ishqbaaz!!..fantabulous.!!…post the next one sooooooooooooon!!!!!!…love ya.

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:16 pm

        Anagha, thank you so much. Your comment always boost me up. I am glad that you liked it. Thanks again, will try to post the next one soon. Love yaa❤
        P.S When will you post your ff. I am waiting?

      • anagha on June 5, 2017 5:02 pm

        My ff?..right now iam depressed with ishqbaaz..that show is losing it charm ..now separation track going to happen n ol.!!…I’ll try to post it soon.

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:48 am

        Well, I have seen your post, thank you?

    32. nikita_jai29 on June 5, 2017 1:56 pm

      It is awesome dear lovely update dear…

      • Jerry_36 on June 5, 2017 3:17 pm

        Thank you so much Nikita di. I am really happy that you liked it. Love yaa❤

    33. Nila on June 5, 2017 3:01 pm

      Wooooooooooow lil sis vedi? super duper part Om’s confession so simple but cute??and I love shivaay POV yaar?????omm 15 ice creams???? Now I am eagerly waiting to read shivika ‘s phone conversation?????

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:50 am

        Nila di, thank you so much. I am happy that you liked the confession of Rikara. Shivaay’s pov, thanks again. Yeah, 15 ice creams??
        I will try to post soon❤

    34. CrazygirlS.P on June 5, 2017 3:08 pm

      Superb dear

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:50 am

        Thank you dear for commenting?

    35. Arthi on June 5, 2017 6:47 pm

      Just just just loved it…..superb dr……..love u….

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:51 am

        Arthi, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it?

    36. Pui on June 5, 2017 11:42 pm

      Super awsm Jerry!!

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:52 am

        Thanks a lot Pui and congratulations you became a registered member?

      • Pui on June 6, 2017 11:54 am

        Tysm Jerry

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 12:17 pm

        ??

    37. Neha-17 on June 6, 2017 5:46 am

      Jerry you never cease to surprise me!
      Such a wonderful update. Well, Shivaay’s this stage in a meeting….Haha..kahnna should take a video
      Waiting for the upcoming telephonic conversation
      Glad, that Omkara has proposed Gauri..
      Tia is so kind and helping

      Sorry for late comment

      • Jerry_36 on June 6, 2017 7:55 am

        Hello Neha di.
        Thank you so much for commenting. I am happy that I surprised you. Yeah, Shivaay was in a meeting, when lost in her thoughts?, okay I will include that element.
        Rikara confession and Tia’s bond with om, thanks again? and its okay.

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