A desire of star to get moon (intro) ”ek duje ke vaste”


Hey guyz i,m again here to eat brain of u all 😀
with a new story i wanted to share it with u all since so long and i cant wait more!!!!!
So here we go with intro

They story is about our ROCKSTAR actor singer and model SHARVAN MALHOTHRA

and a simple sweet fun loving girl DOCTOR SUMAN who want to live every moment of life with fun a free bird

their is a huge crowd in a concert cheering for sharvan malhothra
sharvan!!!! Sharvan!!! Sharvan!!!
A spot light falls at stage on a guy who is holding guitar and his back is toward audience he starts to sing
Aahatein kaisi yeh aahatein

Sunta hoon aaj kal aye dil bata
Dastakein dete hain dastakein
Kyun ajnabi se pal aye dil bata
(whole crowd cheerish)
Kuch toh hai jo neend aaye kam
Kuch toh hai jo aankhe hai nam
Kuch toh hai jo tu keh de toh
Haste haste marr jaaye hum
(he turns towards audience and spot light falls on his face)

other side suman is looking his concert on tv with a wide smile and place her hand on her heart ”ahh y my heart beats fast when i saw u” she gives a flying kiss to sharvan……

Lets see what will happen when our star will get desire to get his moon..

So this was intro how was it???
I,ll start this ff after eid and after ending the magic of love…….

And i,ll love to share that till now i hv just wrote random stories but this one is full of suspense masti romance and love so this is special for me hope u all also like it…..

Let me know abt ur thoughts 🙂

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  1. Interesting….. Post ur next part soon

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku lily, i,ll post soon

  2. Wow yar really nice….can’t wait for the epi ????????

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku naina glad u like it

  3. Sumo

    wow pari… rock star shravan n doctor suman… m veryyyyy excited to read dis… m just thinking how entertaining it would be… post soon.. ???? shravan on armaan mallik.. wow???

    1. Angel_pari

      Hahahahaha thankuuu sumo even i,m excited to post 😉
      i hope u,ll like it 🙂

  4. LovelyLady

    Bilkul frsh plot…. eagerly waiting fr epis…. jst wsh fr solid bonding between shraman ……. all the bst fr epis ??????

    1. Affaa

      Hai miss do you remember me haaa….how are you

      1. LovelyLady

        Afaa di…. sry na ….. kitna tease krte ho……
        I m good … aap kaisi ho….. n tyaria kaisi chal rhi h… ????

      2. Affaa

        Soooo chweet pakka no teasing….I I’m teasing you bcoz I love you baby

    2. Angel_pari

      Thankuuuu lovyyyy i,ll post soon till then keep waiting 😉
      i,m glad u like it 🙂

  5. I m madly waiting fr the nxt episode

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku i,ll post soon

  6. Waiting for the epi …..?

    1. Angel_pari

      Coming soon 🙂

  7. Wowww!!!very nice intro….waiting to read next

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku shiny!!! I,ll definetly post soon keep commenting

  8. Pari..I’m so happy..u r back..
    Vo bhi..ek dhum..bindhaas story k saath..
    All the best..and our good wishes will b always with u☺☺☺??

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwww thankuuu so much sona di i was missing u badly love u 🙂

  9. Nikita

    Interesting… Postsoon

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku nikki i,ll post soon

  10. Affaa

    Sorry sorry for being late….its okay yaar..what happened if you didn’t read my ff….ff is only reason to talk…being in touch that’s enough….oh oh by my talk I forgot about introduced a new start…I think it’s very interesting…I’m very eager to read epic..All most preparation for is completed…waiting for eid….what about you haa…finished your shopping…from where you’re…and your real name….and your an amazing writer….love you lots… Allahaffiz..take care

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwwww diiii its ok thankuuu sooo much i,m soo happy that u like it 🙂

      yeah waiting for eid 🙂 but my preparations will start from tom as one week vication 😉 yipeee

      and i,m frm pak 🙂

  11. WeirdSister

    Really angel…it’s so different….eagerly waiting to read ur ff….

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuu so much WS i,ll post soon 🙂

  12. Khushi

    Wow wow wow di…..the intro was fab….rockstar shravan and doctor sumo….what an amazing idea….post soon di ab aur wait nhi hota…plz post asap

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuuu so much khushi i,m glad u like it 🙂

      hahahaha bs thora sa wait sweeto i,ll post soon 🙂

  13. Fabulous intro Di….! Cant wait to see his desire for moon 🙂 🙂 😉 it is great awesome n etc etc….! Loved it plzz post next 1 asap!!

    1. Angel_pari

      Hahahaha thanks maira i,ll post after eid paka thora sa wait 🙂

  14. Shalini Naicker

    Awesome intro. I am very excited for the episodes. Keep writing.

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuuu sooo much!!!!

  15. Awwwwwww angel I hate u I hate u to the core ap be mjhe apni dono ff k bare m nae btaya I m not or good friend name thats y ufaq is very very angry on u very much
    Anyways the episode was amazing I will read the story but will not comment because u have not told me earlier 🙁 angry angry very angry take care

    1. Angel_pari

      I love u i love u i love u to the core

      soo sorry yar mn btane wali thi tmhari new post esa ho skta h k mn tmhe bholon

      plzzz dont say like this ur my sweetheart yar







      plzzzz forgive me sweeto

      1. Its OK
        Its OK
        Its OK
        Koi bat nae sorry I think I overreacted sorrryyyyyyyy love u yar

    2. Angel_pari

      That,s like my girl

      so how r gng prep of eid 😉

      and did u kept fast 😛

      1. Not yet started I will start from tomorrow
        And fast….. I have kept 15 and u????

  16. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Its really amazing and different story?? .. eagerly waiting for first ff ? .. promo was absolutely fab ??

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuuu sooo much i,m glad u like it epi will b soon keep commenting…..

      But r u frm pak 🙂

      1. Fatimagulesarfraz

        Yesss !!!!! Bt how do u know ??

    2. Angel_pari

      I,m also from pak so i guess by ur dp 🙂

      1. Fatimagulesarfraz

        what really??? ? ..okkk

  17. Kavina

    I loved it

    1. Angel_pari

      thanks kavina i,ll be glad to hv ur reviews on epi,s also keep commenting….

      1. Kavina


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