A desire of star to get moon..episode-6 ”ek duje ke vaste”


Epi starts……..

__After party__
sharvan is in his room besides window his gaze is locked at moon,he is again holding that pendant,a storm of thoughts is going in his mind….

Sharvan,s pov
in these years i hv always found u around me. in my dreams in my surroundings.
U was always in my heart, my eyes looked for u only in that huge crowd when ever i perform and when ever i pray i pray for just a day when i,ll get u back….but u did not recognize me????? U forgot me or i was not that worth to be remembered???? But atleast u love my music though u didnt say but ur eyes were showing ur love for a rockstar,for my music…..
Pov ends

he moves towards washroom and put water on his face several times and then looking at mirror he turn his hand over his face and droplets fall off..as if he wanted to through these thoughts along with these droplets…
“u hv forgot sharvan na then u will meet with sharvan malhothra now, destiny will write a love story of a rockstar and his fan not a lovestory of two childhood besties”
he smiles.
other side suman is also in her room looking at moon
and recalling all moments with sharvan in party
suman,s pov
awwwww i finally meet him..this day i,m going to remember for ever…
He is sooooo adorable.. Beside hving good voice and looks..he is perfect gentleman lil shy not much expressive,caring thats y girls are crazy for him….
But y he always bring mestries????? Y i feel connection to him????????
Pov ends

in search of this ans suman did not realise when it turns morning and door bell rings…
She looks at clock it was 6am
”who can be this time??”
she goes to open the door
there was a boy standing
boy:news paper boy mam(smilingly)

Boy:here(he gives her news paper)
suman:every morning u threw it from down of door then what was the need to ring the bell today
(and in talking she just notice her pic with sharvan in dancing pose on front page …her eyes get widened and with widened eyes she looks at boy who was smiling like mad)
boy: u meet with him???
I,m great fan of him
suman:(sumo comes out of shock) then what i do??get lost…..

Boy goes and sumo closes the door ”stupid”

she comes inside and looks at pic she was smiling unknowingly and then
”ohhhh shit i hv a meeting with dr sinha”
she kept news paper on table and gets ready then rushes for meeting
her meeting was in some cafe so when she was returning she bumped into a guy
suman:cant u ……… (again that face was in her front )
and then taking no time whole crowd surrounded shravan pushing suman at very behind….
Suman: (put her hand on head) GOD y he is everywhere to make me crazy….

though sharvan was trapped in big crowd he some how got a glance of suman from far and smiles but was busy with fans after a while when he got free he moves towards her
suman:(with widened eyes) u remembered me

shravan:ammmm nahhh hv we meet before???
sharvan: now when in whole crowd just a single girl will stay back then offcourse she will be noticed…no?

Their convo was continue when same goons entered with great voilence and everybody run out of cafe except sharman
goon:she was with that guy last night boss ( pointing towards suman)

and a very scary person comes towards her….and that time she could not find any safe place than sharvan so she hide at back of him and there sharvan,s holds her hand
and a cute eye locks come when sharvan looks at back in her eyes filled with fear assuring her that he is here only
goon was just infront of sharvan, and suman in behind of sharvan
goon:i hv nothing with u..even i,m ur great fan..give that girl to us
suman:(in mind) wowwww goons are also his fans 😀

and then sharvan grip sumo,s hand more tightly and pull her infront so now she was infront of goon and sharvan in behind of her and she look back with confused eyes
then shravan slowly moves towards her ear and whisper
”hey u r a independent girl. U can deal with any situation. I dont want u to hide at back of anyone. I want u to come in front and deal with it….i,m here just a step back from u”
and he grip her hand more tightly to make her feel his presence…….

Epi ends

so was it…, ok ok short one i know but next will be soon.. I,ll post more than once in week,, becoz if i,ll post in fri only than when will this ff end?? In year? 😀

and i,m sooo happy by response of u all i,m glad u all r liking it…and sorry i could not reply to comments of u all on my pre post…..

Lots of love

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  1. Marie

    OMG OMG OMG angel API…!!
    U r a great writer…. I loved every single word of this ep….!!!
    Wonderful fantastic awesome n many more 🙂 🙂
    Yo!! More than twice a week great news 😀 so happy but plzzzzz
    Post nxt one very very very soon plz plz plz
    Love u
    Take care

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwwww itna sweet cmnt parh k dil garden garden hogaya love u yar i,ll post soon 🙂

  2. Oh.god…
    So sweet…
    Loved it??????????

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku soooo much lov u 🙂

  3. Ruchi

    Hey Pari..
    How r u??
    Awsum epi…
    Hope that Sumo remember his childhood bestiee..
    Keep writing..
    take care..
    Lots of Love..
    Ruchi.. 🙂

    1. Angel_pari

      Hey ruchi u r cmntng first tym i,m glad u did i,m good hru…..

      Yeah hopefully she will….thanku sooo much dear
      stay blessed 🙂

      1. Ruchi

        sorry for not commenting before..
        in my ff I replied to one of ur comment and i told u that I like ur ff a lot.. 🙂
        most welcum dear..

  4. Nikita

    Amazing episode di..
    ShraMan realize soon na..
    That part was indeed epic when sumo said that even goons are fan of him..
    Accha di, woh diary kaun padh raha tha? Shravan or Sumo?
    Okay, the episode was lovely, now I gotta go..
    Bye !
    Take care !!
    Loads of love,
    Nikita <33

    1. Angel_pari

      Heyyy nikki sweety hru? Thanku sooooo much i,m glad u enjoyed it…..
      Nd that dairy part is lil late but wo sumo parhegi …ok????

      Take care stay blessed

  5. pretty preeti

    Di di Jamaal kr diya
    Nice one
    Loved it
    So sweet
    Shraman fabulous
    Post next one fast

    1. Angel_pari

      Thnku so much preeto

  6. Sharmansangel

    I will not talk to you aap itna suspense kyun rakhti ho

    1. Angel_pari

      Ary ary princess plz naraz mt ho next time no suspence..

      Now give me cute smile plzzz

      1. Sharmansangel

        ?? lekin ek sum hi suspence mat nikal Dena mereliye aapne itna kaha vahi kafi hai love you my angel di

    2. Angel_pari

      Thats like my kiddo

  7. Oh myyy. What an episode.. Loved it.
    Anxious to read the next episode. Please post soon.. I love your ff. What a story. You’re an amazing writer ☺

    1. Angel_pari

      Ohhh zainab thanku so much for such a sweet cmnt… Lots of love i,ll post soon 🙂

  8. Neeti

    plsss pst regular, even if it goes till one year we don’t have prob
    baise di promo wala kab pst kar rahi he ap,plss pst soon….
    woww Shravan said destiny will write a luv stry of a rockstar and his fan bt u will write it na??
    bt ye kya Shravu ne Sumo ko goons se ladne ke liye akela bhej diya :(….
    pst asap di and mera ff ka promo zaroor parna “ahy did u left me”
    love you di – Neeti

    1. Angel_pari

      Hahaha neeti year tak kya yar tm b na kuch v anve he 😉

      hehehe aryyy u wont believe just now when i was reviewing epi.. On that line i also was thinking how will destiny write i,ll write na 😀

      ary ary akele khn bheja uske peche e to khara h bechara 😀 😛

      hmmm i read that it was nyc 🙂

      1. Neeti

        hehehe hero peche khara he aur heroine goons se ladegi…?hahaha….
        kayar Shravu

    2. Angel_pari

      Hahahaha neeti hans hans k mera pet dukh raha h

      kun mera acha khasa sence begar rahi h….. Chup hoja warna next epi mn yeh sb mjhe aande marenge 😀

      1. Neeti

        kis ne bola apko ye log ande marenge…ap itna aur cute chije likti he ki koi apko anda nai mar sakta aur waise bhi anda lekar ap thorina bal me lagayengi jo ye sab apko ande denge…?

  9. Rukhsar

    Wow the epi was fantastic lovely. And yeah i have a suggestion for u why you’ll post only 2 times in a week if u wanna finish it then post everyday so that we can read it everyday ?????

    1. Angel_pari

      Awww rukhsar so cute 🙂

      but if i,ll post everyday then my studies will get disturb na but i hv better suggestion mn is ff ka os bna doon 😀 😀

      what say?????

      But how r u doing thanks for comment i,m glad u like it 🙂

      1. Rukhsar

        Os wala option b bura nahi ha but phir us ma itni detail nahi ho gi na ?? ??????

  10. WeirdSister

    Hey angel…..now I m angry wid u…plz plz post long epis….this was too short….nd u stopped it..right at d moment…I think u r planning to kill me wid suspense…!!
    Anyway luv u lots nd lots!!???

    1. Angel_pari

      Aryyyy aryyyyy niyatiiiii dont be angryyyyy plZzzz ab jaldi b post kron or long b howwww????
      Hahah no nooo no suspence onwards paka

      love u stay blesed

  11. Zuha Fatima

    Angooooo Api (Wow what a name ??) This was something so sweet that I was smiling so hard that I started having stomach ache. Such a sweet and adorable love story, from childhood sweethearts to rockstar and a fan, I am like WOAH THIS IS ABSOLUTE AMAZING??? Well this is really like DESIRE OF STAR❤❤❤ So cute love angle (Till now it is a love angle only waiting for LOVE TRIANGLE when jealously ignites?) Okay bye have a good time and STAY BLESSED 🙂 Loads of ❤❤❤❤❤❤

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂


    1. Angel_pari

      Hey princess!!!!!
      Hahahah nyc name

      awwwwww that was such a wonderfull comment thanku soooo much

      well love triangle hoga b ya nh dont know

      love u load

      and i heard abt ur grandpaa…feeling sorry, may his soul rest in heaven…..take care of urself and ur family…………

  12. Silent reader

    Wow awesome epi❤️
    Goons are also his fans?

    1. Angel_pari

      Silent reader u had just made my day
      thanku sooooo much 🙂

  13. Ufaaq

    Hey anju what’s up
    Amazing epi yar loved it
    Description was amm.maINGGVG
    take care anju

    1. Angel_pari

      Heyyy ufii all good wbu…

      Thanku soooo much sweeto 🙂

      lots of love

  14. Fatimagulesarfraz

    OMG !!!! what an interesting nd incredible ep .. just enjoyed it till the end ..
    Desperately waiting for next part ..
    Post very very soon ..
    Take care ..

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku fatima i,m glad u enjoyed…, i,ll post soon take care…..

  15. Ariana

    WOah!!!! Really? Shravan man!!! Wht a wonderful way to end the epi. Wanna kill me or something? Pls post asap or i’ll die for sure. Don’t keep such a big suspense. Pls pls pls post soon. Btw the epi was fabulous. U r an awesome writer.
    Lots of love

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwww aru!!!!! Hahahah no no i,ll end this suspence very soon

      thankuuu so much

      lots of love stay blessed 🙂

  16. DevSona

    Charmed by your concept?..Even if I’m more like a DevAkshi fan, I am in love with this ShrAman!!?. It’ll be great to watch (or read 😉 ) Sumo fighting with goons having Shravan besides her??. Keep writing. Awesome work 🙂

    1. Angel_pari

      Heyyy devsona…….omg!!!!!!!
      U had just made my day thanku sooooooo much…..i,m glad u like the concept…thanks alot…

      Lots of love 🙂

      1. DevSona

        The pleasure’s all mine 🙂 and this post have made my day!?

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