A desire of star to get moon..episode-2 ”ek duje ke vaste”

Sharvan is holding that heart shape pendant nearby the window and feeling that cool breeze, he suddenly feels something strange and open his eyes
and looks out of window from which whole city can be seen offcourse our rockstar,s house is on great heights as he is…
mumbai the city of dreams as busy as alwayz, here life goes so fast, that one has no time to look back everyone is just in race to reach at heights but me..
I,m already at heights and on that my fans has taken me, i was not supposed to be singer. Nahhhhhh!!!!! I never used to like singing but life does not goes as we want. when and where music became my life i never knew and today i,m again getting a feel that something unexpected is gng to happen
a new twist, a new turn in my life is on the way. Ahhhhhhh this air!!!! i,m feeling someone,s fragrance in that today what msg that slow breeze has brought to me???
And he moves towards his guitar he took that and start to sing

kuch khuwab hn palkon pe saje
kuch ansu h ankhon mn chupe
kuch chahteinnn hn adhori si
kuch batein hn unkahiiiiiii si

(he feels the music by closing his eyes)

jura hn tmse kuch es tarah k dil ab yeh dharke kuch is tarah
tu milja mujhko kuch is tarah
ankhon mn basja kuch is tarah

kuch iss tarahhhhhhhh
kuch is tarahhhhhhhhh

in hawaon mn h tu kahen

kuch is tarahhhhhhhh
kuch is tarahhhhhhhh

in sanson mn h tu basi

kuch is tarahhhhhhhh
kuch is tarahhhhhhhh

tu hi to h ab har kahennn


and our rockstar, completely engrossed in music got irked by his phone

”tring tring”

he kept the guitar aside and pick up the call
” yeah”

”hello sir i just call to remind u abt today,s concert i hope i didnt disturb u”

”ahhhhh i dont hv memory problem i know their is concert today. thanku !!!! For disturbing me”

he kept the phone and throws it at bed…..
___________________________________some thing abt sharvan:
the air port of mumbai is filled with pplz as always some are gng towards their destination while others hv reached their destination in that huge crowd suman with high heels wearing black tights with pink top and scarf around her neck.. comes out of air port and look around at crowd outside,
sun rays were falling on her and she use her hand to stop them her eyes were searching for a cab and after a while she find her self in shadow and she looks up,
there some worker were fixing any poster,, she was trying to hv a look of that but she could not as workers were infront,so she simply avoid it and goes ahead but then she hear a great noise behind her and when she turn back her eye fall on that poster she was
not able to take off her eyes from that..
suman,s p.o,v
OMG!! So handsome who is he!! Any celeb or what??? Just a min before whole crowd was busy in itself and now there is not a single eye which is not stick to it…..
WHO IS HE???? and what is written there?
” if u r die hard fan of rockstar SHARVAN MALHOTHRA than dont miss his concert tonight 9pm at xyz place”(this was written on poster)
sharvan?? Sharvan malhothra!! y this name seems to be familiar to me,,,,,,,,,,,,
ahhhh come on sumo!! Look around he is well known celeb so may be i caught that name somewhere..

Pov ends…..and she walks towards the cab and sits in it.___________________________________
one of the biggest and costly hospital of mumbai hving the best doctors and one of the best doc SUMAN MEHRA is also gng to join it…..
But the owner of this hospital ‘DOC SINHA’ A very arrogant and selfish person what he only wants is money
doctors are said to be angels,life saviour but he is devil he just take in peoples by different ways,,,,,,

and in big hall of that hospital a convo is gng on btwn a doc and a person
person: doc plz dont do this,, plz dont stop treatment of my son
doc: sir plzzz try to understand this order is frm doc sinha i,m helpless… U hv not pay ur previous bills we cant continue treatment

the doc eyes were stick to file during convo he was avoiding eye contact with that person but the guilt, the helplessness was visible in his eyes & his back was shown, his face was not clear and then a voice is heard from back
doc turns and blow of wind disturb his small hair his confusing eyes were searching for that voice a very innocent face was giving killer look

(INTORODUCING VARUN KAPPOR AS DOCTOR VIHAAN SHAH,,,,,, DR vihaan very flirty and playfull boy but a very devoted and good doctor)

and his searching eyes stop at suman who takes her steps towards him

suman: u r a doc rite??? And u r giving priority to money than a person,s life

vihaan: i,m a doc and i know that to save someone,s life is our first priority but how will this hospital work if we will treat everyone in free

before suman could say anything another person join them
a quite aged person in three piece seems to hving a quite strict personality ” dr sinha”

dr sinha: rules are rules and if u r not ok with them u can go to another hospital for treatment..
Suman: (showing him her card) doctor suman mehra it was only u I guess.. who has offered me to join this hospital (in attitude)

vihaan raise his one eyebrow and smirk

dr sinha:ohhhh dr suman i,m so sorry i could not recognize u as we had never met
suman: (cuts his line) i think its our first and last meeting becoz i,m not gng to join ur hospital, where the rules are more important than a person,s life

she aheads to go but dr sinha stop her
dr sinha: ahhhh a typical young passionate doctor!!!! Ok i give up we will give best treatment to his son!! Will u reject my offer even now

suman was silent and looks at the person whose eyes glow up by hearing that his son treatment will continue he was holding hands before her in happiness and doc sinha forwarded his hand towards her
dr sinha: so welcome to health care dr suman
suman: (avoiding hand shake) thanku i,ll join from tomorrow….. And she leaves

vihaan,s pov
wowwwwww!!!! What a girl..
Beauty with brains….. Dr sinha huhhhh!!!! That devil give up before her hmmmmm now its gng to be fun becoz sinha has got a strong opponent and she will bring a change.. Yeah!!!! I,m sure… Sinha u r gone now.. welcome miss suman welcome!!

Pov ends
outside suman was looking for a cab when a car stops infront of her and vihaan steps out
vihaan: hiii may i drop u anywhere
suman:no its fine i,ll manage
vihaan: i,m sure u will manage (leaning on car) u left sinha speechless so u can do anything but i cant miss to hv a drive with a beautiful girl soooooo (he opens the car,s door)
suman: (smile) how u became doc and that also so flirty ,,,, and where was that ur so cld attitude before doc sinha?
Vihaan: actually i hv one nd only job and i love it. more ever i hv no intention to lose that (naughtly) now plzzzz (pointing towards the car)

vihaan makes inocent face and suman sits in car
on the way vihaan turns on radio song was playig,,

Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ik lammbi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana Mujhko alfaaz bana lo
Dil ki awaaz bana lo
Gehra sa raaz bana lo jaana

(suman was enjoying that she was completely lost in his voice )

Hawa hoon main lipat ne do

(and she feels a jerk of air by which her hairs flew)

Mere qatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do………

wow!!!!! What a melodious voice he has.. Who is he??
Vihaan: ( looks at her as if he has saw an allien) u dont know him seriously?????

Then suman shares her whole history, geography biography, πŸ˜€ that she is back here after 10 years nd all
vihaan and suman chit chat abt their lives and as suman was curious to knw abt sharvan so vihaan tells her enough abt him and they reached her home

suman comes out of car
suman:okkkk soo see u tomorrow… Thanks
vihaan: uhhhh!!! Bad manners doc, one should ask for a coffee to frnds? No?
Suman: (laughs) i,ll surely ask but some other time as i really dont hv idea what will be situation inside….. I hv to clean it up… Do u want to join…
Vihaan: na na !!! Plz carry on i hv no interest to become sweeper…bye

suman:(laughs) bye…..
And she goes inside

suman,s pov
and here i take first step in my home where i hv spent my childhood….. Ahhhh childhood i hv weak memories of childhood.. How can someone forget childhood.. Stupid me!!!! But life is so stressfull from start that it has given me only bad memories only pain and sorrows i didnot remember anything else… But that school where i spent whole day some foggy memories of those days are there but there is no use to recall all that as that time is gone……..
Ahhhhhhh now let me make this house able for living
(she maintains whole house and in last she inters her room)
wohooooo my room.. My dolls are still there everythng is just same as i had leave it…..
Pov ends……………

After whole busy day she freshen up @night and switch on tv and goes to take a book from shelf..
But she become statue when that same voice falls on her ears, her hand was on book but she was not getting sences to take it

Tere bina jeena kya
Tere bina jeena kya
Tujhse kaise bataun yaara
Tere bin mujhpe kya guzre
Woh zindagi hai hi nahi
Jo tujhse juda guzre

(she turns towards tv… Sharvan,s life concert was gng on… She was lost in his eyes, his voice.. she was completely attracted towards him)

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara

(suman: u hv made me crazy abt u in just a single….. Just a single day! And i hv become ur die hard fan)

sence shifted to sharvan who is performing in concert and there is a huge crowd

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara

(he comes down from stage and walks in crowd )

yaara.. Kahi se bhi chalun main
Kahi se guzru mein
Tujhi se aa milun main yaara.

(some black and white flashbacks of that girl comes before his eyes)

Zara sa sarphira hoon
Zara sa bawra hoon
Jaisa bhi hoon tera hoon yaara
Teri palkon talle meri saans chale
Meri saans chale tere dham se

(he was singing selflessly and his smile was sign that how much he was enjoying his fans cheering for him)

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara yaara..

Suman,s eyes were fixed on sharvan but a fast blow of wind came and turns over the pages of dairy kept on table which make her to move towards it..
She was taking steps towards table and pages of dairy were continously turning

Tu kagazon pe dil ke
Likha hua hai tabse
Duniya mein hoon main jabse yaara

(she takes the dairy and on its very first page their was a heart and in it was written ”SHARMAN FOREVER”
sharman??? She try to recall but fails)

Tu mera ho chuka hai
Dil phir bhi maangta hai
Har lamha tujhko rabb se yaara Mera tere siva koi aur nahi
Tu naa hona khafa kabhi mujhse

( then a half heart shape pendant caught his attention placed on table)

but again sharvan,s voice make her avoid them so she kept them back and sits down enjoying his concert

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara yaara..
what guys!! epi ended it was so long and still u r reading down…….


so how was it and most importantly how was its length?????

Plzzzz do comment and thanku so much for previous comments… Comment section of last epi was really special for me as u guysss freely complain abt short and late update and abt being less active……
Keep commenting like this and there were some new commentors also so i big thanks to all……..

And what abt this epi?? I,m bit confused abt it as making it longer i hv progress the story bit fast and their were many sences!! So was this ok??? Plzzz tell me ur reviews freely..

and is there need to say that i love u all?????
No na…

But still i love u all sooooooo muchhhhh πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

see u all on next friday take care

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  1. Sumo

    so .. so.. so… should I tell u one thing , I have been a part of my school band n a big follower of music.. I insanely follow every kindaa music.. but, out of the three songs u wrote today I can recall only one.. ” mujhko barsat bna lo” dis .. d rest of the songs r from which album?
    n about the ep it was entertaining.. loved it..???

    1. Angel_pari

      Hey sumo whats up how r u????

      Ahhhh same pinch music is one of my great interest also…….and abt songs well one is my composition that was ”kuch is tarah” for this ff…

      And other dhal jaun mn was from rustom movie


      go through it….. Its really nyc and after hearing song when u will read that part u will get perfect imagination πŸ˜› and i,m glad it entertain u….

  2. Ariana

    Superb!!! Tnx for a long chapter. And i could connect my school’s musical band. Ahh!! memories. thanks for making them young and fresh. Thanks. Waiting for tnx part

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku so much arina i,m glad u like it…. Next epi will be soon πŸ™‚

  3. AhnΓ±n my anju is back
    Soooorrrryyy for the previous epi problems in my tab u know
    Soloo the epi was a superb duperb hit I loved the pow of shaeman and that pendant waiting
    Anju Congo for ur test from my side a biggggg buggy and best of luck sweetu
    Take care
    Lots of loveee and hugs

    1. Angel_pari

      Ahhhhh long time ufaq missed u……

      How r u all good……

      Its ok yar i,m glad u commented in this part

      and i,m glad that u r liking storyyyyy

      and thanku so much for wishes lov u alwayzz πŸ˜›

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hey pari di! I just loved the episode. Its really alag to imagine shravan as rockstar. We all love u too. Even we will see u next friday. The choice of song is really beautiful. It was really nice that how were the lyrics somehiw matching the situation. That part was just wow.
    Lots of love. Keep writing. Loving this story.

    1. Nandini aka Nandu

      And yup forgot to mention that mujhe pata nahi chala but yes this was a lenghtyyy one. U have done a fab job dear!???

    2. Angel_pari

      Ahhhhj. nandini thanks alot yar sachi mn bht mehnat kri h….. I,m so glad u r liking it lov u too and yeah song was perfectly match with situation i also think so….. And i just came across with that a day before πŸ™‚

      1. Nandini aka Nandu

        Ofcourse aapki mehnat saaf-saaf dikhaye se rahi thi. And shayad WO rang bhi layi? post soon. And yes , am gald that am reading ur ff. This song is just wow✌?lots of love??

  5. Marie

    Hyyyy angel di…!!!
    How r u..???
    Ahmmm Ahmmmm……….
    Wat say abt d ep…..sumo shr ki die hard fan ho gai or Mai aap ki….!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    U ri8 so amazinglyyyyyyy dat m short of words today…..
    I only want to dedicate fan song (frm fan movie) to u…!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    Is ke ilawa I have no words….. πŸ™‚
    Hahahah ep ki length…Mai bolo
    I want more more more……!!! Hahahahah plzzz ab besetiiii mat Karna….bt kya karoon ap itna acha likhti hoo…..ke I want more…! Bt I knw ke ye ap ki nazar Mai bht lengthy tha.. Plzz or lamba πŸ˜€ Lekin agar nai likh sakti toh itna to must hai….. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    Eagerly waiting fr nxt prt….
    I think sumo n shr have some past connections……despretlyyyyy waiting…
    Friday plzzz jaldi aajao….!!!!!!! Plzzzzzzzzzzz
    Ok ok byyyyy
    Take care…..
    Love u mostttttttt….!!!
    Frm ur choti pagal sis…. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰
    Maria πŸ™‚

    1. Angel_pari

      Hahahaha ary my chotu si doll love u soo much………….

      Hahahahaha no besti yar never and aur bara chaheye to parhai kon karega??? Its enough ;)….. And fri to 6 days bad e aayega…….

      So lil wait…… God bless u take care..,,,

  6. Sharmansangel

    Nice episode pari di waiting for the next part

    1. Angel_pari

      Hey riya hru?? Thanku so much… Next epi will be soon

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey !!!! Awwwwesome awwwwdorable fabbbbbbbbbb amazing ep … nd ahhhh !!! That length is too gud … ab ek week was itna lenghty to bnta henaa ..
    I enjoyed it till the end .. ???? .. luved it to the core. ..
    Post soon. .
    Till then take care ..
    Allah Hafiz ..

    1. Angel_pari

      Hahahaha thanku sooo much fatima i,m glad u enjoyed it……

      But hey frm which city u r dear…. I hope u didnt mind i,m asking this

      1. Fatimagulesarfraz

        No no that’s ok .. m from Lahore

  8. Nikita

    Hi pari di..!!
    I’m so happy right now!!

    Kya likhte ho yaar app……. Sumo attracted to him.. wow ❀❀❀❀
    the diary, usme likha hoga na shraman ke baare mei?
    likha hona chahiye.. so that she reads and realizes….
    and the length’s perfectly fine.. itni hi rakhna..
    And post soon!!


    1. Angel_pari

      Hey nikki hru?? I,m glad u r enjoying it…..

      Ahhhhh nice guess yar i think its gng to happen πŸ˜›

      will post soon
      lots of love take care……

  9. This was just amazing ,plz post nxt episode soon I can’t wait n plz while ending the ff make happy ending plzzzz

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuuu soooo much next epi is on fri lil wait plzzz πŸ™‚

      and abt the end happy or sad dont know but i can say one thing that u will like it……….

      Thanku πŸ™‚

  10. WeirdSister

    Hey angel…do I need to comment every time…that it mind blowing….u write so well…!!!
    I loved it so so much…!!!
    Nd luv u too….hope u r doing well…??

    1. Angel_pari

      Hey ws i,m completely fyn wbu

      thanku sooo much i,m glad u like it…. But are u thinking to post any story??? Do tell me when u post…..

      1. WeirdSister

        I m currently writing one….just for u ppl….don’t know when I will be able to post…I hve just started it…hope to be back wid u ppl again…!!??

  11. superb epi. thoroughly enjoyed it. come up asap

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku sooo much i,m glad u enjoyed next epi is soon πŸ™‚

  12. This was aah-mazing. Loved it. I wish Fridays could come sooner. πŸ˜€ A little more longer would be great too. πŸ˜‰ I am loving your story and the way you portray everything. Can you please post more than once in a week? Anyway, in the end I’ll say you’re a great writer. πŸ™‚

    1. Angel_pari


      Thankuuuu sooo much…. Hehehe fri will come after 6 days πŸ˜‰

      ahhhh more longer??? Than u guyzzz will get bore reading big passages its fine na

      and abt posting 2 time i,m so sorry i,ll try if i can…. I,m glad u r liking it keep reading and commenting…….

  13. I don’t knw..about the song..I never listened..but the lyrics are just like…the song made for this part of ur ff only..

    1. Angel_pari

      Di abt which sonf u r talking if first then it was made for this only by me πŸ˜‰
      and if abt last one then plzzzzzz do listen it its amazing


      i,m sure u will like it and u knw first i choose bol do na zara but just a day before posting i came across with so it was perfectly match…. But did u like epi???????

  14. Neeti

    Hello Angel di sry if i did nt cmnt in pre epi. I had my exams so i could nt cmnt. Bt i really liked the epi and this epi also. Sry i can nt cmnt too long. I have to study,bye.
    Lots of luv- Apki chutki Neeti

    1. Angel_pari

      Awww chutki neeti ap bht cute ho πŸ™‚

      and i,m glad u r liking it.. Comment when u r free i know studies are important…….

      Lots of love

  15. Prettypreeti

    Pari u nailed it
    As now I think u had prayed for me
    So mai abhi hoon
    Kitna sweeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttttttttttt
    Epi tha
    Just loved it I m really glad that I have a sis like u
    Mai tumse katti thi isliye narraaaz toh nhi ho na
    Ok leave it
    I just loveeeeeededddddeeeddd iyt
    Very gud
    Love u

  16. Affaa

    Yaar I miss you soooooo much on this friendship week….you named our sisters but in very relation their should be friendship…I don’t know on friendship day you will be their in tu…so I wishing happy friendship day my jaan…This is our first friendship I’m thanking tu for giving me such wonderful sister…love you dea…
    Okay okay I’m sorry…my speech over now coming episode….

    First of all sorry for not commenting on last epi…and sorry for being late…
    Outstanding episode…Thank you sooo much for long episode…I felt sad when it finished…mind blowing yaar…I completely enjoyed it….

    How are you??? Didn’t you missed you’re api haaa…how is your studies…take care…
    Love you soooooo much

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