A desire of star to get moon..episode-1 ”ek duje ke vaste”

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[ Promo ]


Its very early morning
the beauty of dawn ,the slow cool breeze that fragrance before rain has increase the beauty of paris…….
In that peaceful and calm atmosphere..the hands are turning over the pages of book the tinkle of those pink bangles is echoing in silence of morning her beautiful deep black eyes hv locked their gaze at book that slow breeze is playing with her long hair that are left open finally her gaze shifted from book to that beautiful sea which is now reflecting the smooth rays of sun a innocent smile stick to her pink lips her hands close the book and she close her eyes to feel the moment
girl p.o.v

ahhhh this time this moment i,m going to miss from tomorrow dont know how must be INDIA it has been 10 years that we had shifted here there are some foggy memories of that 12 years old sumo… Off course now i hv become DR SUMAN MEHRA one of the best neurologist but dont know y i always feel some connection to india may be its becoz its my motherland or may be i had forget something there 10 years ago for which i,m looking for long,,, that something,,,,,(she open her eyes) anyways whatever it is God knows that
i should leave now else i,ll miss the flight………..
P.o.v ends
and she walks away..
A black car stop infront of a big mansion ”MALHOTHRA MANSION”driver open the door of car and tall guy step out of it..
The perfect personality the rodex watch in hand that is busy in mobile his eyes are hidden in shades that are stick to mobile and he moves towards the mansion servant opens the door of house ”GOOD AFTERNOON SIR”
a smile apeared on his face he take off his eyes from moblie and remove his shades ”good afternoon”his voice soft sweet and their was some attraction in it and he walks inside….
He inters his room,,, his room or room of musical instruments one can say from far that room is of great music lover and offcourse who can it be other than ”SHARVAN MALHOTHRA” he opens his laptop which has a display pic of two lil girl and boy having mud fight he smiles looking at it and touch the pic of that lil girl

Sharvan P.O.V
ahhhhh it has been long time that childhood has passed away and it had take all the precious things away but memories her memories are still with me she must hv changed offcourse that cute angelic face must hv changed into beautiful one what if someday i meet her will i,ll able to recognise those deep eyes…. Will i meet her someday????? Ahhhhh that hope is continue from years…
POV ends…

He close the laptop and turns towards the window he put his hand in pocket and take out that half heart shape pendant he looks at it and close his eyes for while to feel the blow of wind……….

okkkkk jiiiii so how was it??????
I know lil late… No no very late and i,m holding my ears for that see……. Really sorry
but one good news i hv passed my one test but still some are remaining so lets hope for best
and abt epi how was it if it was good than cmnts are welcome and if bad than slippers and tomatoes are welcome but slippers and tomatoes are also welcome becoz i,m very less active these dayz in commenting πŸ™ πŸ™ πŸ™ shorryyyyyy

and yeah from now onwards there will be regular update every friday so stay tunned πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

dhair sara lov to u all


  1. WeirdSister

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    Oh angel…I missed u so much….d epi was fantastic….loved it like hell….ur usage of words….amazingggggg…if u don’t mind me saying…can I just suggest something…..plz put punctuations….better for understanding….sorry if u felt bad….d story looks awesome…..I m so very eagerly waiting for d next Friday….!!!
    Loved it….
    Nd love u!!!😊😊😊

    • Angel_pari

      Hey ws missed u too….
      And thanku sooooo much for liking epi and story…. And thankuuuuuuu i didn,t feel bad instead i feel good that u point out at my mistake so i can improve that i,ll try to focus on punctuations as well in next epi…. Love u so much….,,,.,,,,

  2. Sumo

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    chappal to pdni hi chahye … itna short update?? ek to itne din baad ar fr itna chota sa… thk h, pr next post lmbaaaa hona chahye.. okay ??? 😏😏

    • angel_pari

      arryyyy nh nh no chapalz plzzzz πŸ˜›

      next lamba hoga na bhttttttt lamba πŸ˜€

      but thanks for liking it… Next part is almost done i,ll post on friday….. Lov u loads

  3. Marie

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    Hello my lovely api..!!
    How r u..??
    Ooho that WS short…. Plzzz make it longer….cause it’s soooooo amzing finally we got our very Frst prt….!!! Yay!!! πŸ˜€
    N Frst ep is epic….! Seriously I have no words to explain that how great it WS….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Egrlyyyyy waiting fr Friday….!! Aah Friday plzzz cm soooo soon….
    Btw api….how r ur exams going…??
    All d best…!!
    N be regular…frm now on… πŸ˜‰
    Love u
    Take care !

    • Angel_pari


      Hey sweeto i,m good hru missed u soooo much……

      Thankuuuu for liking it ahhhhh!!!!!! As ur order maam next will be long very longgg……..

      And tom is fri so next epi will be there…. Thanku for ur support and love…..

      Stay blessed…….

  4. Fatimagulesarfraz

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    Aoa !!!! Ummmmmm after a looooong time .. thank God u posted … was waitingggggggg for many dayssss for this ff … nd finally u posted …
    This ep was fantabulous .. bt ye kya baat hui .. ek to itna late post kiya uper se itna short bt chalo koi baat nae .. bt next time plzzzz update longer han ..
    Nd congrats k apka test acha ho gya nd best of luck for ur coming test .. May Allah grant u success ..
    Take care ..
    Stay blessed ..!!

    • Angel_pari


      Heyyyy yahhh long time hru all good????

      Thanku sooo much for likng it…… Okk baba next will be long…. Paka

      and thanku sooo much for wishes…….

      Stay blessed..

  5. sona

    Pari…its not enough..to hold ears..u really..become late..not only in posting..the part..but also..for less comments of urs..these days..on tu..😐😐😐
    Well..Jo bhi hua ho..leave it..I’m very happy u r backkk….to banggg….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Šβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
    About..the episode..it was not at all less than..wt we felt..when u took us into pink paradise..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
    And all the best..for ur other exams☺☺

    • Angel_pari


      Ahhhh di missed u sooo much what to do yar studies are standing on my head!!!!!!!

      I,ll try to be regular………

      Thanku so much for wishes

      and i,m glad u like it πŸ™‚

  6. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hi pari di! Well i just loved the update! Am really excited for ur regular updates from now on cuz i find the idea of ur ff interesting. So, post soon. And yes heartly congratulations to u for passing the tests and wishes for ur future ones too! Lots of love. Keep writing dear.

    • Angel_pari


      Thanks alot nandini hru dear thanku so much for liking it……. Yeah now regular updates πŸ™‚

      thanks alot for wishes lots of love πŸ™‚

  7. Nikita

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    Finally you’re back! I missed you so much.. Ab bas aise hi jaldi jaldi post karo.. You described everything brilliantly.. So post soon!! And next wala lamba hona chahiye!

  8. Khushi

    Diiii yeh Kya itna chota update this is not done….but Abhi maaf kar rhi hun coz u said that u r having exams but plz post the next one a bit longer plz di…..
    This is such a cute episode
    Di I have a question have sumo forgotten shravan and its sumo only na who shravan is thinking about??
    Love u di try to post ASAP and a bigger one plz…but first give ur exams..
    All the best for ur exams di

  9. Angel_pari


    Ohhhhh khushiiiii okkkk next will be long promise i,m glad u like it….. And abt ur quests those will be answered in upcoming epis… Keep reading…….

    Thanku soooo much for wishes miss u

  10. Zuha Fatima

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    Shukar hai allah ka ke aap nay post toh kiya! Mai toh umeed hi chor bethi thi ke kabhi hamay yeh FF parhna naseeb hoga! Magar umeed par dunya qaim hai!
    Absolutely awesome! The intensity of the words gave a new life to Shraman and to this FF as well! Let’s see will the hearts meet! Well congrats for passing, and others will also go well, have faith on Allah 😊

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚ My Angel sissy πŸ™‚

    Loads of Love and support!

    Sorry for being late actually school is reopening on 8 so busy with HHW!

  11. Angel_pari


    Hehhehehe honestly mn n b umeed chor di thi k mn kbhi post krungi πŸ˜‰

    but see i did……. πŸ™‚

    but how r u ohhhh school reopening hmmm so much work its ok take ur time……

    And i,m glad u r liking it… Keep reading next epi is posted….

  12. Prettypreeti

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    Hey pari di not fair u r very bad
    When I was busy in studing u posted that time I want to comment at atleast 4 5 no but u very bad katti
    Vaise it was amazing super duper
    Loved it
    I love ur ff mai aap se abhi bhi katti noon
    I was waiting it for long time thank u god that aapne pari di se post toh karvaya
    Di mai aapse still katti hoon
    Lekin imSorry for late comment as u know my papers were going on please pray for my good marks
    Now as u will pray for my gud marks I m abhi with u
    Love u
    Keep writing and posting

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