My DeSi GirLZ (ragsan n swalak) ~ Prologue

A women is shown 7 months pregnant
Lying on hospital bed n holding hand
Of a man sitting beside him… They are waiting for doctor reply…. ‘Congracts its a twin’doctor said… Women and man have happy tears in their eyes n hugs each other… ‘Its a boy or girl’ man asked hoping for a boy.. ‘Sorry sir we cant tell u this’ doctor said politely n headed towards his cabin..
Women look at man painful eyes n he goes

Women pov

God plz make him realize his mistake n give birth to girls i knw after our daughters arrive in this only they can change him i dont want them to suffer plz God ‘women wipes her tears n carefully goes’

End of pov

After 2 months

Women is shown lying on the stricture holding her baby bump n continously shouting n shrieking… Man holds her hand n trying to calm her down

After sometime

Man is shown moving here n there outside the ooty restlessly n continuously praying…. He stops when je heard crying voice of babies… He stops n happy tears start flowing… A nurse come wid 2 babies in her hand she give one baby to man… Man holds the baby.. ‘ its a boy na’ man asked the nurse… ‘Congratulations sir u have twins daughters’ nurse says n give him her 2 daughter n goes………. Man looks at his both daughters continuously he stops one man n asked’ excuse me is there any orphanage house nearby’…. The other man looks at him confused ‘ yes nearby to temple’ man asked staring the man….. ‘Thank u’ man replies n goes inside room… He places both his daughters on the cradle n goes for pay the bill.
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‘Mam i got them at nearby temple’ said the man to orphanage head…..
‘Are u sure mr. Gadodia they have no one in this world’ said the orphanage head looking at man.. Man look at his daughters n politely says’ yes mam there is no one’.. ‘ sister takes these girl ‘ said orphanage head.. Sister come n takes both girls from his hand.. Both girls are holding his finger with her small hand.. ‘Mam they r not letting him go’ said sister..
Man calmly takes off his fingers from both girls hand n rush towards outside something inside him Pierced with knife…. He sits in his car’ lets go’ he said to his driver…. ‘Hmmm’ driver nod looking at his sir with moist eyes

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Man comes inside room n sees his wife smiling weakly lying on the bed.. Man comes n holds her hand tightly n nods no… Women looks at him n cries loudly hugging him.

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After 7 years

Same women is shown playing with 6 years boy ‘ beta stop u will gor hurt na stop’ women said to her son ‘no maa i m having fun catch me’ said the boy running ‘ beta stop na’ women said running after him ‘ papaaaaaaa’ said the boy running to his dad ‘ champpp’ said man n take the boy in his embarace…. ‘What did u brought for me’ said the boy looking at his fathers hand… ‘Ooo i forgot’ said the man qith sad face.. ‘ go i m not talking to u’ said the boy folding his arms in anger… Women smiles seeing them.. ‘ ok if u r not talking then i will eat this choclate alone’ said the man taking out choclate from his pocket.. Boy face lits up n he snatch the choclate n hugs the man ‘ u r the best papa’ said boy n kiss him in cheeks n jumps off from his hold ‘ u r the best papa’ words makes him pale n he headed to his room widout a word… Women looks on…
‘Madam’ said their driver coming to women.. ‘Yes kaka any help’ women said to driver… Driver looks at her with moist eyes n tells her that her daughters is alive n that her husband give them to orphanage… Women looks at him in shock tears starts rolling she goes to her room n sees his husband standing staring at sky she goes n slaps him hard on his face

‘Mishti’ said the man wid moist eyes
‘ i never thought bcz of ur thinking my daughters have to suffer i thought if my daughters will born then may b they can change a jerk like u but no i m wrong bcz of u i lost my daughters mr. Shehkar gadodia from now i break all ties wid u from now i m only mothet of my children’ said the women with rage in her eyes.. ‘Listen to me misthi’ said the man pleading..

Women shows her palm to man indicating to stopp ‘there is nothing left to listen mr. Gadodia and from now i will myself find my daughters’ said women n leaving the room banged the door hardly.. Man sits on floor n cries

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So guyz do u like the proluge i hope so its all past hope u all like it n sorry i knw its short … yeah coming soon wid epi 1 till then take care n keep smiling

FizoπŸ‘―

40 comments

  1. Raglak,swasan,ragsan,swalak fan (dipti)

    Awesome …..concept I am waiting for to see swalak and ragsan…thank u for ragsan and swalak

  2. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Wohoooooo fizo wt a story yaaar!!!! Its reallly unique n interestng… ahh!!m hatng dis shekhar..how cn he do dis yaaar???? Poor sumi n babiesss!!!waitng eagerly for nxt part!!! Keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweeety πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ love u yaara πŸ˜‰

  3. Sally_blr

    |Registered Member

    Shorry da chotu for late comment. I had a football match to organize. Im holding my ears with pout. And this is totally a different concept. I loved it. Interesting. Shekar is really a jerk. Love you…..

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