DELIVERY-OS

Helloooo frnds… It’s Nive…ย  dont throw those daggers will try to post my ff/ss soon… I’m lil busy…๐Ÿ˜‹ I’m writing this os from my previous ff “the way you are”ย  I don’t have any idea how many of u still remember that story… it’s just a One Shot so dont worry…

Ok lets start,

Swara is in stage of her delivery… its her 9th month…
@swasan room,

Swasan are sleepingย peacefullyย in each other embrace… Sanskar feels wet… he sits with jolt… ย he looks swara she is murmuring and she is wet… he awke swara…

Swa (sleepy tone): Sanskar kya hua…ย  (she encircles her hand on his neck and starts to sleep by placing her head on his chest) Iโ€™m feeling sleepy…ย 
Sans: swara… u r wet…ย 

swa(sleepy): what… (she realized she is wet… she jerked..)ย sanskar is this time fr playing with water, huh… u are totally changed… I’m pregnant but u r getting mood swing… now wr we ll sleep oh god…ย 

sans: Huh swara I’m not playingย look I’m also wet u only made me wet…ย 
swara with crying face: sanskar what u are saying I didn’t do nothing why u always blame me (she feels something different) but why I’m feeling me only did…. something strikes in sanskar head…. both wide thr eyes…ย 

swa(stammers): sa…sa.. sanskar…ย 
sans(panic):ย  swara did.. did ur water brk…?
swa: whattt..? ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh…. she screams and faint… sanskar lifts her and shouts everyone name…

@living hall,

Rag: jiju what happened and shona… she panicked seeing swara state…
Sans: Cutie go and get water… she fainted…
Rags: haan jijuโ€ฆ she runsโ€ฆ
AP: Sanskar beta kya huaโ€ฆ is she fine..?

Laksh comes there by scratching his headโ€ฆ Lucky: oh god bhai what happened to u both, why u both not at all allowing me to sleep… and (looking at swara) why she is sleeping in ur hand… I knw she is a school girl it doesnโ€™t mean u make her sleep in ur armsโ€ฆ u know nowadays sanskrit and swayam (Raglak twin babies) also sleeping in bed only…ย 

Sans: shutup lucky… (to ap) mom I think swara water broke…
laksh: what… utmost he shouted (hearing laksh voice swara awoke..)ย ย  bhai what u areย  looking for, take her to hospital…

Sanskar: Idiot go and start car… how could I haan…ย  laksh runs… swara opened her eyes… swara: sanskar…
Sans: Swara… Swa:why don’t I feel any pain… my water was broke… baby is fine na… she started to weep…

Sans: swara nothing happen, our baby is fine dnt wry… Rags: haan haan shona, baby is fine u dnt cry… Ragini gt worried.. ย sanskar place her in car… Raglak and swasan leaves in one car… they inform gadodiaโ€™s also…

@Car,
Laksh irritates swara, thinking he is comforting her… ย swara made face and cries aloud… Rag: lucky if you utter one more word thn I will forget u r my husband… shut and drive… Lak: Ragu ma…

Sans: Lucky pls will you shutup… swara Iโ€™m here na dnt wry our baby is fine… he comforts her…) he places his hand in her tummy… baby kicked…
Swa: sanskar our baby… she smiled with tears… Sans: haan swara see our baby is moving, baby is fine…

Raglak smiles lil… He wipes her tears … she tightly holds his hand and place in her tummy… swa: don’t move ur hand… he nods and kisses her forehead…

All reach hospital, She doesnโ€™t gt pain so doctor gv injection to swara… Doc: Mr.Maheshwari nothing to worry… baby and mother is fine… if suppose she doesn’t gt pain then we will go with scissoring… sankar nods… swara felt lil relieved…

As per doctor advice swara is walking around in hospital corridor… sanskar is holding her by shoulder… swara is still weeping…whole maheswari and Gadodia are walking behind her…ย  AP and Sumi are sitting with Raglak kids…

Lak: Oye school girl youโ€™re a unique piece at delivery everyone will cry bz of pain but youโ€™re crying u doesnโ€™t gt pain… he chuckles at his statement… swara slaps laksh hard in his left cheek… laksh mouth opened ‘O’ with shock…

Lak:ย  this is bongu… as per logic u have to slap bhai na… ur cutie also slapped me only…why you slapped me… he pouts… Swa:itโ€™s all bz of u…

Lak: what I did… Swa: if at all u didn’t love cutie it won’t happen na…ย 
Lak: but how come my love is related to ur delivery… swa: bz of u oly he married me and I bcm pregnant… she pouts…

Lak: Huh I love ur cutie but ur pt master only said “I will gt marry my both granddaughter in same house and blah blah”

Swa:haan I won’t leave that oldiee also… today she is gone…ย I ll ask my dada to divorce tat oldie…ย  she cries… Lak: bz of us u bth married but did we ask u both to romance… swa:huh… she turn away…

He ask swara to slap sanskar also… swa: ugh then it will pain him… she kisses sanskar cheek… Lak: u r so mean… he made a face… all gv Unbelievable look to Swa-lak…

Sanskarrrrrrrrrrrrrr,swara screams… sans: swara is it paining… he shouts for doctor… Ragini comforts her…ย 
Laksh: yippee finally she gt pain… lucky jumps…

Swa: sanskar I’m hungry, I want kachori… sans: what..? Swa: haan with extra spicy…ย 
Dadi: hey pagal ladki here we are in tension u are asking kachori.. look at time it’s 3 in the morning…
Swa: Ugh I’m asking my husband u shut ur mouth… she gv him puppy look…

Sanskar want to be with her bz she will gt pain at any time… but she is asking na so he nods unwillingly… swara held his hand turns to shekar… swa: shekar u go na, I want sanskar be with me… shekar leaves…

Swa: ahhh… she hits her head… Sans: nw what happened… swa: I want cassata also… DP: beta wait will buy cassata… DP leaves hurriedly…Sanlak look shocked…. as thr papa never do this kind of stuffs even in thr childhood…

Shekar and DP comes with kachori and cassatta… Ragini starts to feed swara and sanskar is wiping her sweat…ย  by seeing swara laksh mouth starts to watering… as cassata his favourite…

Lak(to himself): he knw na I lyk dis flavour… thn why don’t he bought for me also… whenever I ask ice-creams this dad will gv punishment in my childhoodย  but now… Huh, god why don’t I bcm pregnant… u did injustice with all boys… he make face๐Ÿ˜ž

Sumi:ย  shona we are here for ur delivery but u r behaving like u r in some picnic… I don’t knw when will u behave matured… she scolds swara… shekar: mishti don’t say anything to my princess… AP: haan sumi ji, my daughter will be the way she is… Dada: sumi dont u knw she is in her delivery stage but u r scolding her, I don’t knw wen u ll behave mature haan… all supports swara… swa:he he he sumi u need this… she chuckles… sumi nods her head…

Swa: Oh god, how long I need to walk my legs are paining… Sanskar makes her sitย  and he started to press her legs… swara felt uncomfortable… swa: sanskar it’s ok… she took off his hand…ย 
Sans: don’t dare… he mover her hand and continues to press… swara looks him overwhelming…

One lady Doctor comes for rounds after seeing laksh in corridor… she gt frightenedโ€ฆ Doc(stammers): yo…. yo… youuuโ€ฆ

Laksh grinned wideโ€ฆ Lak: Doctor, youโ€ฆ he waives hi… doctor runs from there hastilyโ€ฆ he runs behind herโ€ฆ
Lak: arre Doctor ek Minute ruko naโ€ฆ all laughs looking at them…

**
6 months before,
@Operation theatre,

Ragini Scream in labor pain… laksh held her hand tightly… More than Ragini laksh is shouting…ย  Doctor ask him to go outside but he is not ready to leave… his Ragu ma is in pain, how could he leave her alone… but she is yelling at lucky…

Lak: Ragu ma breath in breath out… relax look at me nothing will happen… he is blabbering nonsense… Ragini get irritate already she is in pain… she gv a tight slap in his right cheek… Laksh hold his cheek and pouts…

Rags: who allowed this man inside ask him to leave… ย 
Lak: Man..? Ragu ma its me ur lucky ji… Rag: lucky ji my foot, itโ€™s all bz of you get out…

Lak: what I did..? Rag: what u did..? u only did everything bz of u oly I bcm pregnant…
Lak: you also cooperated with e na… he blushes…

Rags: hell with you… get out, I hate you… no not only u I hate all the man in this world… you boys are so selfish…
Lak: but I love you, I promised na I never ever leave you… so I wonโ€™t go…

Doctor and nurses are stuck between them… Doctor rolled her eyes… Doc: Mr. Maheswari if you want to be here than pls be quite…

Rag shouts in pain… she feels exhausted… she is about to faint… doctor and nurses are encouraging her…
Doc: Ragini just relax, see few seconds only just push… baby head is shown… Mr.Maheswari help her… Ragini Push…

Nothing get into laksh mind… Doctor ask him to help Ragini and asking Ragini to push… So he simply pushes doctor… she falls with thud… all chuckles… Ragini laughs aloud with pain by seeing doctor position… baby born oops babies born…ย twin boys… laksh fainted… ๐Ÿ˜œ

Laksh is admitted, his bed is next to ragini… he get conscious and looks for Ragini… she is weeping, all trying to pacify her… he get concerned and goes to her…. Lak: Ragu ma… Rags: Lucky… she hugs him tight and cries…

Rag: Lucky I didnโ€™t mean those words, I really Love You… donโ€™t leave me Iโ€™m sorry… he cups her face…ย 
Lak: never ever… he kisses her forehead…ย 
Lak: wr is our baby… ragini nods in no… Rags: babies… she blushes…

They get married bz of swasan so they named thr kids Sanskrit and Swayam… **

Lak:I thought to ask her sorry but she is gone somewhere…ย  he gv funny expression…

Swa:lucky u r doing funny… she laughs… and gt Pain and started to shout… she holds her bumb… Tears start to flow from her eyes… swa: sanskaaaar I cant… it’s paining… she cries aloud… sanky shouts doctor and lifts her… laksh runs to tk stretcher…

Doc tks her to operation theatre… swara doesn’t leave his hand… swa: sanskar dnt leave me pls… sans :ย  Doctor can I come inside..? doctor looks swara hand and nods… Sans: ty..

sans:swara look I’m here only…he holds her hand… swara nails pierced his hand…ย  its pained him but its paining him more by seeing her state… he looks her horrified… he never seen swara like dis before… she is trying to control but she can’t… she winced…

Swa: sanskar if something happened to me takecare of our kid… dnt marry again… I cant see u with any other girl…ย  I Love You… she cries miserably in pain… sanskar tries to Calm Swara…

Sans: sshhh… nothing will happen to you… tears starts to flow from his eyes… he composed himself,ย  he dnt want make swara more wk… he asked her to be relax…

Doc: Mrs.Maheshwari… push… come on… Doc is encouraging her… Swa: no I won’t if i push then it will hurt my baby… she is not allowing doctor to touch her bumb…

Doc:Mr.Maheshwari if she doesnโ€™t cooperate then it will make difficult fr delivery… sanskar get tensed….
Sans: swara let allow Doc to do her work, listen me… swa:no no sanskar… he tries to divert her…

sans: crying baby I knw u can’t push… swa: who said I can and yeah I’m not crying baby… she pouts in pain…ย 
Sans: ofcourse you’re… swa: no I’m not… both nok-jhoks… Doctor Smiles at swara childish behaviour and continues her wrk… sanky slowly pushes her baby bump…. swara gv last screams… swa:Sanskaaaaarrrrrrrr… baby cries…

Doc:congratulations Mr. Maheswari. Itโ€™s a baby girl…. Sanskar eyes filled with happy tears… Doctor gave him the baby… ‘my princess’ sanskar whispered and he kissed baby… Sans: swara look our princ… swaraย  is in unconscious… he panicked…

Sans: Doc why she bcm unconscious…? he pats her cheek… Doc: Mr.Maheshwari dnt wry… she must be tired, will gt conscious in few minutes… Doctor assures him…

They shifted swara to room…ย  everyone I swara room pampering baby… after getting conscious swara looks for sanskar and baby…

Swa:Sanskar… Sanskar looked at swara emotionally and he hugs her tight and kisses all over her face…ย  Sans: you knw always u scare me like hell before giving any good news… swa:dnt wryย  I wont leave you so soon… she smiles…
Sans: I love you… he pecks her cheeks.. swara: love you too… she blushes… Swa:sanskar our baby… she forwards her hand… sanskar gvs her baby… swara held near her chest…

Uttara and ani(uttara husband)ย  Skype and wishes them… Lak: (looking at shemish) I have to say ur both daughters are so strong… he caresses his cheeks.. swara signs sorry… Ragini kisses his cheek… he wide is eye with shock… and shows is another cheek to her, she blushes…

Swa: sanskar our baby is just like u na… look at her face cut and nose also, she is totally ur resemble… she pouts… Rag: but shona our Princess eyes are just like yours… swa(happy): really… sanskar caresses her hair… sans: haan..
swasan baby cries… hearing that Raglak babies start to cries…

lak: ahh they also started to cry hearing thr princess… he places swasan child in between his babies… trio held hands and Smiles…ย 
Rag: princesses u knw u hv 2 brothers to protect u frm everything u dnt wry… sanlak: Just like us…sanlak smiles…

Sans: you knw lucky today oly I realised every delivery is a rebirth of all women…
Lak: haan bhai the moment child is born it’s a new birth to all the mothers… they both hugs AP… while swara held sumi hand Ragini side hugs her…

Swaragini and Sanlak: We Love You Mom… they kissed thr mom…

Rags: waise jiju what name u both decided for our Princess… Swasan both look eachother and looking at Raglak… Swasan: u both are reason of our love… she is sweetness of our life… so her name is “INIYA” all smiles…

END

If it is bored navi only responsible…๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ I wote this one after asking her… It’s good or bad all credit goes to NAVI…โ˜บโ˜บ

Yesterday my nephew birthday..ย  look my dp that lil green wala veshti naughty is my nephew… Dont forget to wish him๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you all..โ˜บโ˜บ

150 comments

  1. Mammu

    Amazing yar….I loved it…I used read ur ff the way u r…I used to love it….n now after these many days u posted it thank u so much…n ur os is superb….I loved swaralak nokjok…swasan raglak love…Mothe sentiment… everything….

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Aww.. Thank u so much dr… I was in dilemma whether to post this one or not.. but after my frnd said I posted this one… I’m glad u luvd it…โ˜บโ˜บ

  2. Kakali

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    Niveeeeee !!!! I want this Laksh !!!! haaaaa *pull his ckeeks…
    I want this Sanskar !!! haaa *pinch his nose…
    I want this Ragini haaa !!!! *peak her cheeks…
    I want this Swara haaaa !!! *wrap her n send to my XYZ address…

    Will thnk u after Delivery of Swara…*at home service…
    huahh haa haaa love it… Thnk u.. ;-*

  3. Aditi Singh

    happy birth day.. n very nice… but I don’t remember the ff name in which this story happened… will u tell me the name…

  4. Vyshu10

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    Awesome…..what type of question it is…”u remember the way you are?” Its one of my fav ffs. I just love that ff and even “Love beyond ages”

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Its been many months na, so oly… I’m very happy still u all remember this one… Thank you so much dr…โ˜บโ˜บ

  5. Kakali

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    Ohhhh Godddd !!! Today i didn’t take almonds that’s i forgot to wish that cuteeee male angel …
    waaa !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTEE LITTLE MALE ANGEL….

    hope ur menu card is full of tasty dishes…. *watery mouth…

  6. Fairy

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    Frst of allll a veryyyyyyyy happpppy vala belated brthday to ur nephew…aww!! Hes cho cute ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š….lotz of love to him๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
    Now about dis os….uff!!!!wt to say navi dr its sooooooooooo amaznggg!!!!!!oh god!!!full of sweetnesss,…such a lovely os on two of d most loveliest couple raglak n swasan๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ loved it dr!!!hahahaha laksh is soooooo funnny๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚evn cassata is mine fav. Too ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† laksh litterely pushed d doc. Hehehehe!!,,,hez too much ๐Ÿ˜› …raglak scens were fabulousssssss!!!! Awww!!i dey had twins๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ sswara is cho chueet n ssanky aww!!he loves her sooooo much๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ n dey r blessed wid a bby priencesss๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„so cute!!!๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ alll in alll i reallllllly enjoyed readng it a lotzzzz!!!thnku soooo much for such a sweet os…keeep rockng n stay blessed dear๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Ha ha ha… its doc mistake she only asked him to push.. so oly he did๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ yep two lovely bubbly boys… โ˜บ Thank you so much for ur wishes and this lovely comment ๐Ÿ˜€ :D๐Ÿ˜‡ โ˜บ

  7. Tweetypankaj

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    You know nive yesterday only I read all the 45 parts of the way u are. Now it’s a bonanza for me wd his special part thank u dear. And ha say me the name of ur other ffs and ss also Na.

  8. chanu

    Awwww…
    Sooo cute os dr..
    I lv it sooo much…. :-* :-* :-*
    Navi thank u. Bz f u nly she wrote dis.. :-*

    Heee heeee
    dis swara is rly sweet… my childish grl..
    She is pregnant bt she act like a kiddo nly.. lols..
    And abt my sanskar… awwww
    lets nt talk abt him.. or else I cdnt stop.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜›
    ragu!! U r strong ah!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ poor laksh. Evry1 slap him.. lols..
    I lv dis laksh. He is sooo funny. Im laughing like mad bz f him…
    ๐Ÿ™‚
    and dp I lv u… ๐Ÿ™‚

    Keep writing dr
    be happy always
    ***HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTE LIL PRINCE!!!!!*****
    be happy always
    lv ya
    โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Ha ha ha.. she is really kiddo… I luv naughty kiddo wala swara lot.. โ˜บ Lucky is very strong boy so only swaragini slapped him๐Ÿ˜œ if u talk about sanky thn I couldn’t resist myself from listening you.. ๐Ÿ˜‹
      Thank you so much dr..โ˜บโ˜บ luv u too๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. SHAN

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    Nive we will praise navi…. Bcoz its awesome….. I loved it a lot….. Very very nice….. Its soooo cute….. This will be like an epilogue of ur ff….. Amazing os….. Loved childish swara a lot….. Very nice dr…. No words to say….. I enjoyed a lot….. And Nivi convey my wishes to ur nephew….. Kalakitinga….. ๐Ÿ˜

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Yep sure shan will convey ur wishes… I thought to gv epilogue as title but it’s been months na so oly gv dis title… I was in dilemma… navi sonna aprum tha post pannean… so Credit is hers oly… โ˜บโ˜บ Thank you drโ˜บ

  10. Vrishti

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    hey nive , its awesome. …. you reminded me of the old days when I was waiting for your story’s every update….
    Belated happy birthday to your nephew๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽŠ

  11. Manasvi

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    i was amazing… swara’s childish naure and sanskar’s care for her was so sweet.. i is fantastic os..
    and yaa wish your nephew from my side too…

  12. Hadi

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    Awww babies got their baby awsum dear it’s soo good to read their the continuation of the way u are feeling soo good waiting for ff post soon

  13. Navi

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    night thookam varla… epada morning varum un os padikanum wait painitu irundhen…. but later i got sad nive…. literally crying….
    then tu vandhen un os padika… u made me again happy,… infact i knw u cn bring smile on my face always.. ….
    now confession time: nive un os enaku past memories konduvandhuchu..
    enga athai pregnant ah iirundhanga and so we planned valgapu.. next day valagapu elarukum soliaachu.. hahahah here comes my papu… enga athai ku swara madhuri night paani kodam ie water bag broke… same again she did not feel pain, en thambi chumma ilama, nanaban padam patha effect la, athai vacuum cleaner kondu vanga, baby velila eduthuram lam so no worries nu sonana. enga athai ku siripu thanga mudiyala.. dei unaku ennga irudhu ipudiyala thnudhonu kindal pannaga.. alas elarum valagapu ku badhula baby vandhu pathutu ponnaga…
    semma comedy…
    next thnk u for such a lovely os.. no one will say bad comments about ur creation always.. i swear…
    next pavom lucky elarum avana slap panitanga…. hehheheeh atlast he got kiss…
    joliee swasan and raglak rocked…
    school girl nee innum adha mathala – lucky dialogue… loved it so much…
    then coming to bro budday…
    hapiiieee birthday to u thambi…. may god bless u and live 100 yrs and muduja alavu nive eli ya koduma paduthu… tc…. kisses….

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Navi I’m again typing this cmnt tu post panla ila na post panlya๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” nowadays u too bcm crying girl lyk swara๐Ÿ˜‹ CRYING BABY NAVI… he he he…
      Ha ha ha… unnoda bro sema naughty pola… huh navi thambi achea… ennoda akka ku kuda swara ku mari water bag broke aprum 17-18 hrs kalichu delivery Achu that too scissoring… enga vetla ella hospital tha irundhanga one day full eh sema tension eh…
      Lucky romba strongggggu adha all slapped him… see na bz of slap he gt kiss… andha ff la irundhu thana ezhudhuna so oly didn’t change dialogue..
      Ha ha ha thala Anna paiyan bday… thambi ila… already un wishes na kuduthutaru. .. enoda thambi ku nee advance wish panniteanu solidrean๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ Jan oly his bday.. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Na idhu boring eh irukkum nu nenachean. .. bz of u oly i posted this one… Thank you… โ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  14. Navi

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    anu va kidnap panitanga nenaikuren.. aaley kanom.. pesama indian embassy ta soli london embassy la search pana solanum…
    anu missing nu……

      • Navi

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        Ama nive nee solra madhri poster aduchuralam tv la ad kuduthuralam…
        @ hahaha 2020 la kuda varadha??? Enama ipudi panureengale ma….
        oi ena credit enaku nu solra.. its ur idea na chumma una encourage panen.. dats it… im grt fan of urs

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Adhunala tha credit unakku…. uk yesterday first I typed this then adha delete pannitean… 2nd tym type panna mobi yeduthu sombeari thanam pattu thungitean… un kita sonnadhala tha I posted this one..โ˜บโ˜บ

  15. Navi

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    nive readers demand for season 2 of “the way you are”… enaku siripu varudhu, uladhey ne pst panna matingura, idhula seasaon 2 may b 2018 la varum… but do think abt season 2, like all im waiting especially rabia – asked me to convey this msg to u….

    • Nive

      ha ha ha.. lol๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ season 2 nu patha odana I too thought same… irukkadhea first olunga post panna kaanum idhula season 2 va ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ 2020 aanalum varadhu…๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ oru very big sorrrrrryyyyyyyyy sollidu๐Ÿ˜‹

  16. Arshaanya

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    It was amazing nive…
    I loved it… who can frgt dat ff the way u r… it was one of d best ff i ve read….
    Wish ur nephew A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  17. Rabia

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    awesome dear i read your story nut i dont remember that i ever commented on it because i was a silent reader before ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Its ok dr… I’m also silent reader for many ff๐Ÿ˜‹ thank youโ˜บโ˜บ n yeah all the best for ur future… do come back soon… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  18. Savanshi27

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    Hey dear I do remember ur ff…. how can someone forget such an awsm ff and honestly whenever I feel lonely I just read some of d previous ff which are my fav and ur ff is also amongst them.. till now I have read ur whole ff.. each and every epi 7 times in total after u finished it and I must say it never bores me…
    I just love reading it…
    and coming to ur os… it was fantastic…
    it revived all d memories of The Way You Are….
    It was splendid seeing swara and lakshya’s silly fight.
    All in one it was marvellous… fabulous… and the praise continues…
    At last A very happy birthday to ur nephew….
    May he b blessed by d best..

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Thank you so much dr… โ˜บโ˜บ b4 posting this I’m very confused but after reading all cmnts I’m so happy… it’s all bz of my frnd navi… nw I’m in cloud9… u guys are still remembering and reading my ff… ty…๐Ÿ˜Š I’m so glad.. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  19. Akshata

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    belated happy birthday to your nephew, aww he is so cute. this is outstanding story. loved it. and i am totally agree with you every delivery is a rebirth of all women.

  20. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚NO WORDS๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHAMP..MAY GOD BLESS YOU WITH ALL HAPPINESS..

  21. Swara Kapoor

    Wow!!!!njce I loved it…. Especually the delubery part….. Its beyond Awesome….โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

  22. chandu

    I read that ff yaar…!! I still remember that lovely ff…!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ It’s not an ordinary ff…to forget…!!!
    The os is amazing …!! The whole story got rewinded in my mind again..while reading this os…!! If I start describing every scene..you wrote…then my comment will become an os..!! Hehe..!! I opened my mouth when I start reading it…with a mad smile…and didn’t close it till I complete the end..!! Loved it..!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  23. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Aweeeeee๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    Loved it I have no words I am sooooo happy while reading this you know I missed your ff plzzzzz start with season 2 again plzzzz…

    Swalak scene was awesome ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    Lucky pushed the doctor hahahhaha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚

    Plzzzz come backkk

  24. Mica

    |Registered Member

    niveeeeee…. aaarrgghhhhh, i hate you, you made me laughing like hell in my midnite…
    gooosshhh, this Swa-Lak, they both soo childish, thank god that they have mature partners….
    poor Swara, she got injection to ignite her labor pain, many women said that it most painful to get those kinda injection in our first deliver, goooooosshhhh….

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Really..? I dnt hv any idea about that, Doc gv those injection to my sis at her delivery… she will do so much drama for single scratch, hw she bore that pain.. ugh feeling emotional…my poor sis..!!! Thank you mica..โ˜บโ˜บ

  25. geetha

    I never forget your ff Nive.. Swara the way you are..i like that ff very much..whenever I feel dull, sad, I read ur ff…I will become happy. after a long time …i laffing continuously…Mindblowing OS…

    • Nive..

      |Author

      aww my ff gv smile on ur face… it’s pleasure to me… u dnt hv any idea hw happy I’m after reading ur cmnt… sorry dear I cant continue tat ff… Thank you..โ˜บโ˜บ

  26. geetha

    I missed ur ff a lot.. .really today os is awesome and mind blowing.,,,I like it very much..whenever i feel sad ..i readd this ff…i started laughing..pls comtinue ur ff..pls

  27. Shiksha

    Hi navi this is is chhho ccuute day we love it to the core. N sorry couldn’t comment in d last episode of your ff, chhoolly. But it was a fabulous story.
    N dear nice just got refreshed by this story. N I was having a hard time controlling my laugh while reading. U r just..just… Umm…..hmm. fan.
    Love you dear.
    Stay blessed!!

  28. Shiksha

    Uff! Crazy me! Happy Birthday to your nephew .
    He’s looking like my brother.
    He’s adorable but too much naughty. Haha.

    • Nive..

      |Author

      ha ha ha… it’s ok dr… ๐Ÿ˜Š Yep he is over naughty… Thank you for ur wishes and comment… โ˜บโ˜บ n yeah you’re just my umm… hmm… frnd๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜˜

  29. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Haaa enga athai kum cesarian dont knw d spelling. Stomach kiluchu baby eduthanga..
    oi nephew kum wish panen solu. Both r bros for me…
    nxt na inaiku enga ammatchi veetuku vandhuruken.. ingavandley enala notifications pakka mudiyadhu.. en phn mattum netwrk prblm bt tjis place is city.. huuhhh kodumai..:O :O x-(

    enaku anu msg send panadhu pakka mudiyala. So if u cn send hr msg that im good and ask abt hr.. and my pity condition too..:'( :-I
    nive thnk u so much for posting this and love towards me <3 :-* :-* :-* …
    Thn uk la tu is jealousy of us… hate it..
    last somegt confused on us nive navi.. ena panuradhu namma looty la avunga confuse ayeduranga ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
    wts ur star & rasi

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Anu ku inform pannitean… thala… we will chat in my activity pg… ok ya… enoda reply cmnt eh post pannitean.. ๐Ÿ˜€

  30. Nive..

    |Author

    posting 2nd tym… Ugh. ..
    CESAREAN only right spelling… poor me asking my colleague…๐Ÿ˜‹ ty dr… navi stomach kilichu nu la solladha operation sollu.. rendum same tha but andha word ketkum podhu enakku bayama irukku… ๐Ÿ™

    ha ha ha… both are ur bros.. ok ok… will inform anu dnt wry… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ she is busy in her studies…uk na anu kitta namma poster news pathi sonnean.. ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

    unakkum yen nandrigal pala.. โ˜บ seriously I don’t have any idea.. so many remembers this.. I did expect this much of response… Thank you navi..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    ha ha ha… nive eh ila navi eh๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” pavam boss eh confuse agituru…
    Mine was Leo and Puram… I’m a lioness..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› kakali cmnt paru..๐Ÿ˜‹

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Angel u like red color angry bird ahh.. thn u wud like me also.. bcz im short tempered girl so my friends wud call me angry bird sumtyms.. omg see im increasing ur names nowadays angel choco eli sooniyakari.. did i forgt any name??
        Angel now im ok… i will tell u whn i reach my place.. enala inga solla mudiyadhu.. aprm na ipa fn…
        yup ipa indha dialogue romba use panurom.. hahaha and bongu tooo…
        nive dr 10th date ovr.. cn i expect ss ff frm u hear aftr… b ready…
        bye tc…
        Na oru month a type pana msg a clipboard la copy panitu dhn post panuren.. if post agala na nxt tym paste panirulam.. so u too do that..
        angell ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    • Navi

      |Registered Member

      Hahaha nive uk ur my angel..whnevr im sad depressed ur enlight my mood.. today too nw i ws sad bt i sw ur msg… love u loads… my choco is always best and i want to tell u I LOVE U SO MUCHH โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ
      ;-* ;-*
      Haha enimea apudi solla matten.. stomach tear…thn na en nive confuse aaguren.. readers silaru confuse ayeranga.. adhn na apudi convey paniruken last msg la.. sorry… and ipa vettiya veta iruken la so enaku sentence kuda olunga type panna therla….
      kakali ku reply kuduthten..
      Jealousy tu huuhhhhh angry bird face… red color bird..3 tyms post panen.. last it got posted i guess

      • Nive..

        |Author

        Ha ha ha… lol… angel..? But u r my happy charm.. ๐Ÿ˜€ Hmmm…. enachu why sad..? Now ok na.. Ennala un mood seri agiduchea… I’m happy… Love You lot๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

        Na una sollala navi readers eh tha sonnean first tym type pannum podhu bracket la mention panni irundhean but second tym marandhutean… he he he…๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ ipo la namma adikadi Indha dialogue use panramo..

        Enakku red color angry birds romba pidikkum… it’s look too cute knwe…

      • Nive..

        |Author

        yep na short temper tha… but few oly knw abt dis… enoda look eh podhum… my dad and frnds used to say ‘Iva kitta peasa mudiyadhu kannla kathi vachitu suthuva, yerichudadha’ he he he… ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œbut adhula few seconds mattum tha konja nerathulya will bcm normal…โ˜บโ˜บ bz nammala yaarium tease pannama 10 sec ku mela irukka mudiyadhu paru..๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

        ok u tell me after u reached ur place…

        uk na una bongu navi nu sonnean la that day itself my frnd called me bongu eli… lol..๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… u msd ‘maha thala’
        he he he my ff/ss.? ok post panna try pannurean..
        Indha idea nalla irukkea… ok will follow tat… ini na clipboard la copy pannikurean…

        unnoda star and rasi ena..?

  31. Maha016

    |Registered Member

    awesome akka semma chance illa !!!! thalaiva u r great …sathiyama akka lucky unmaiya ve paavam and akk this is too funny and ungaluku theriyuma ennoda akka vukum ippadidhan aachu night 10:30 ku water bag udangiruchu avaluku paine illa apparam morn operation pannanga cute boy baby wowww akka ennala idhaellam marrakave mudiyadhu nenga ennaku ellathayum nyabaga paduthitenga….thank u akka

    • Nive..

      |Author

      enoda akka ku same thing happened… noon 12:30 ku water brk nxt day mrg 6.30 ku she blessed with baby boy… enoda dp la first irukkan paru andha kd tha akka paiyan๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ Thank you sissy..โ˜บโ˜บ

  32. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Neraiya conversations so confuse agum.. so started as new comment… enna oru adhisayam eli kulla oru punnai thoongitu iruku.. nee umaiyalea eli dhn.. thuru thuru.. funny lovely… haha adhu enamo unmaidhn namma nala aduthavungala tease pannama iruka mudiyadhu..
    uk angel na silent girl nu tjan elathukum theriyum expect my gang and family.. enga family la inum ena enga appa na silent nu nenailuranga.. bt he does nt knw abt my looty… enga amma and akka vum denaikum ena solu vanga * unakku vaaye (mouth) mattum illa naaye una kavitu poirum.. ena panuradhu rnaka en tongue control pana mudiyadhu tease panitea irupen.. nammaku sat sani mouth la..
    thn see ur frnd said bongu. Semma…
    en rasi rishabham taurus and star – rohini..

    • Nive..

      |Author

      En reply cmnt agiduchu… yesterday gangayammuna pathiya… ‘Vilagi nilu lakshmana ganga ipo enoda manivi’ Indha oru dialogue kaga veetuku sikkiram vandhean๐Ÿ˜‹ swasan poiana mrg first scene…

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Hahaha na ready iruken kittens ah kondu ponguradhuku.. cha i pity u nive.. for tv..
        aprm na romba neram try panen, enala un page pakka mudiyala..
        @anu ku msg – tell hr i too miss her.. tc of health and not to stress abt examz and b cool.. kanhaji is there to help u..
        Tc bye…
        Eeee 32 out – kandipa na unkitta pesitu dhn irupen bcz i cnt stop my mouth frm speaking to u. Oi maha ff la a thala nu don nu vera solita.. i donno y she kept me dat name.. ur name ws suprb.. aprm ezhli arasi nyc name .

  33. Nive..

    |Author

    he he he… poonai eh…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… uk enga vetla ipo 4 irukku… ipo pudhusa 3 kittens kuttiee potruku..thola thangala๐Ÿ˜•
    enga vetla frnds ellarukum na vayadi nu therium ..relations ku mattum tha theridhu… namma performance apdi๐Ÿ˜‹
    enoda frnd kuda andha dialogue use pannuva ‘elumbi (na tha ๐Ÿ˜‹) unakku vai mattum ilana na naaye kavitu poidum’ ๐Ÿ™‚ avala konjam adhigama kindal pannuvean..๐Ÿ˜œ

    • Navi

      |Registered Member

      Awwww three kittens ah.. enaku thariya plz.. ennoda chella kutti rendum semma settai panudhu nive.. na dhan soliruken la we ate pet lovers.. so na denaikum adha en lap la thoonga vatchuruven. Konjuven.. aww ipa adhuku kolupu adhikama ayeruchu. Na silent ah ukandhurundha, baby steps eduthu vandhu sokent en lap la thoongirudhu. My cutepies… night ana orey kushi avungaluku orey dance fight running chasing.. thangamudiyala..
      hahaha semma neeyum same fialogue un frnd la vangiruka..
      aww nee adha dialogue kaga vandhiya.. semma.. na dhenaikum ganga yamuna papen.. enaga ammatchi vera mutaye panivituten.. avungalum papanga becoz f me.. na pajka mudiyala na avungakitta kadhsi kepen..
      unta mattum na vayea moodavey matingiren paaru.. here afte zip my mouth…
      tc… angel choco
      last un innour peru ena?? Wt arasi??

      • Nive..

        |Author

        Thaivu senju andha kittens eh yeduthutu poidu thala.. ena adhunga romba irritate pannadhu…๐Ÿ˜ฃ
        I already told na enoda bro ganga yammuna vaikka mattean… only BBC all news channel in tamil history discovery mattum tha avan irundha…
        No need to zip ur mouth… aprum yaaru enakku cmpny kudupa…

        “EZHILARASI”๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹

        Anu msgd me … she is missing you… enoda activity pg la txt panna… she said ok…do check dr…

  34. Anu_M

    |Registered Member

    How are my two sisters? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Sorry!! Busy in studies but nive.. I read the OS.. it’s awesome.. thanks to both nive and navi 50-50 partnership.. when I’ll get time, I will read your FF! I’m sure I’m gonna love it ๐Ÿ˜

    • Navi

      |Registered Member

      Anu dr nopes anu sweetie.. im hell angry on u.. we are not sisters.. hw many tyms to tell dat.. we are friends. Engrave in ur beautiful brain and especially โ™ฅ
      hw ru with difficulty i txt u.. did u see my msg…?? I cnt even see my login page or any one’s sweetie..
      so forgive me… al d bst for examz.. tc.. we wil pray for u and we r dhr for u… eat well… hw is dad?? Tc buhbye sweetie ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Ty anu kuttiee โ˜บโ˜บ when u gt tym u posted urs yaar… I have long list to cmnt on ur ff๐Ÿ˜‹ @ navi, anu want too learn black magic… so teach her… u did PhD na..๐Ÿ˜œ and thala everyone knw u r don… na ena panradhu… (innocent look) ๐Ÿ˜‹

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Hahaha choco y evry1 tells me like dat.. thinking deeply
        @ anu wt do u want to do black magic.. bt i need hair dress foot soil if u give this i wud do magic..

    • Navi

      |Registered Member

      Wr r u sweetie ??? Come soon.. missing ur talks along with nive.. tc..eat well sleep well.. all d bst for examz..

  35. Navi

    |Registered Member

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR CHOCO ANGEL ELI MAHATHALA DON SOONYIAKARI AKA NIVE โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ
    may god bless u and have blissful and prosperous yr ahead.. love u loads tc… enjoy…
    happy birthday to u happy birthday to u happiee birthday to nive happie birthday to u.. may god bless u dr. May god bless dr nive.. hapie ling life to u.. its ur birthday cherish it..
    Choco wt dress u hv chosen and treat for me..
    sorry enala privaye msgs send panna mudiyadhu.

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Thala… U remember my bday. . Ty๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™Really u dnt hv any idea hw happy I’m… love u drโคโค ha ha ha… evlo name enakku… ๐Ÿ˜œ dress salary.. I said na I dnt lyk shopping… mom oly choose dress.. ena color kuda na inum pakkala๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹ pvt msg send agala na paravala no need to say sorry… โ˜บ

  36. Anu_M

    |Registered Member

    Happy belated birthday nive.. I have written on your wall and private messages you also but I’m late. I’m very sorry. I was too busy.. ok then I want my share of treat.. I’ll take that after my exam. Love you both.. my dear friends navi and nive ..

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