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Home»Fan Fiction»Dear to nobody (RagLak) – part 2
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Dear to nobody (RagLak) – part 2

AstraBy AstraJune 14, 2017Updated:June 14, 201752 Comments7 Mins Read
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WELCOME TO THE WORLD OF IMAGINATION

thank you guys for all previous comments…

Into part: Intro

1st part: Part 1

2nd part..

Dear to nobody 2

Ragini looks shocked with Shekar’s words.

Daadi: Shekar, but this kid is our heir..!! for him we have awaited for long..!!

Shekar: but, that cheater’s son shouldn’t be born in my house. We have to kill him before he born..!!

Ragini cries,
“Papa, plz..!!”

Shekar: Ragini, you have to listen to me now..!!

Ragini:: if you do any harm to my baby, forget that you have a daughter papa..!

Shekar shocks.

Rag: I won’t let you do any harm to her.
Ragini holds her womb gently again…

The flash back now…………….

Fb..

As Laksh has agreed, Ragini takes Laksh to her home. Sanskar goes away with Swara.

However Laksh feels happy within him, that he is going to meet a big family. But, if the plan need to succeed, he has to be as himself. He shouldn’t be friendly with any members of family.

By the time RagLak reaches the house,

Shekar is talking with a lawyer.

“So, those 1000 acres of land belongs to the 3rd generation. Who will be the first heir, they will get the whole assert. This is what the ‘Will’ written by your father..”
Says the lawyer.

Shekar nods his head. Then he turns his eyes to see RagLak who are standing at the door. Shekar smiles,

“Janaki, and maa.. see your ladoo has come..!!” shouts Shekar. They both runs and comes near Ragini and dips her in kisses. Laksh looks them in a smile.

Then all looks at Laksh.

Shekar: are you Ram prasad’s son..?

Laksh looks in doubt.. Ragini punches his leg slightly..

Laksh: ya ya.. yes uncle, I’m Laksh..

Shekar and Janaki shocks.

Shekar: but… his name is Sanskar…

Ragini hesitatingly,
“Ya.. that only papa. He is Sanskar..!! right know Sanskar..!!”

Ragini glares at Laksh,

Laksh: no uncle, my name is Laksh. Not Sanskar.

Ragini looks angrily at Laksh.

Shekar: but, Rp said your name as…

Daadi: shekar, maybe you listened wrong..!! don’t disturb our son in law now. come beta…

Daadi holds Laksh hand and takes him inside.

She makes Laksh sit in couch.

Then two kids(one boy and girl) come in a run to Laksh.

Those kids glares at Laksh. Laksh looks at them confused.

Girl kid: are you the to be son in law..?

Laksh smiles: no..! I’m your new friend..!!

Boy kid: only who gives us gifts are our friends..!!

Laksh smiles and takes two big choco bars from his bag. Those kids excite and hugs Laksh. He amazes. no one has hugged him till now like that. he feels emotional.

“Chotu, Mansi… go and play out..!!” Ragini says.

{Assume Chotu as our Ratan in PPK}

Chotu: you are a devil, did you ever give us anything like this..??

Ragini shocks.

Rag: arey, you have become hippo like this with chocolates I gave..!!

Mansi: ya ya, something like 1 paise, 2 paise wala…

Ragini: you both..!!

Ragini chases them both. Laksh laughs looking at them.

Janaki: three are the big shaitans of house, you have to put a lock for our Ragini.

Laksh laughs, “surely aunty, I will..!!”

Ragini who listens looks at Laksh confused.

Shekar who goes out, calls his friends and neighbours to show Laksh… Laksh becomes a celebrity in seconds.

Ragini becomes little sad that she was cheating her family.

Later,…

Ragini shows Laksh his room. She looks at Laksh. He was smiling and he was seemed to be happy. It’s true Ragini was amazing looking him like that. Laksh was never like this.

Rag: Laksh, what was that..??

Lak: what..?

Rag: why did you say your name as LAksh..? you are Sanskar here..!!

Lak: Ragini, I came to act. But.. I don’t like to change my name..!! I’m Laksh, wherever I’m..!! if you don’t like, say.. I will go away..

Laksh is about to take bag and move out… Ragini stops..

Rag: shanth..! shanth Laksh..!!

Laksh acts as if he is annoyed.

Rag: hmm, don’t act now. I know you are intentionally scaring me..!

Laksh laughs, “just kidding Ragini.”

Ragini smiles: I know…

Laksh sits on the bed happily and says,
“Haaa.., don’t worry..! Laksh is here na..! I will act perfectly and make your family dislike me.”

Ragini amazes. Laksh is behaving like this cool the first time. Laksh will be looking all around the room.

Rag: haa… is the room comfortable..?

Laksh smiles,
“comfortable..! no..!”

Ragini gives a sad expression, “why..?”

Lak: I have to go to nature call, if you are here..!! how..?

Ragini exclaims: Laksh..!!!
And she goes out silently.

Laksh laughs again,
“Omg, I have never laughed like this in my life..!”

….Dinner time…

All family was sitting together.

Shekar, Janaki, Daadi, two kids, Ragini and with them Laksh.

Laksh was eating like this first time together with a family. He has kids around him in orphanage, but he was always lonely.

Daadi was feeding Ragini.

Rag: bas daadi maa…
Daadi: eat ladoo, see how thin you became..!!

Chotu: thin..? she became as drum..!

Ragini beats on his head.
Rag: your mom dad will come know..!! then I will say all your mischief things to them..!!

Laksh keeps smiling looking at them.

Mansi: lucky, take this devil away soon..! we can’t tolerate her..!!

“Lucky..!!” hmm.. some has called him with all love first time… Laksh thinks.

Ragini is about to beat Mansi.. but soon she coughs as she was talking while eating.

Shekar: careful beta…!!
He pats her head gently and Janaki gives her water.

Laksh keeps looking at their affection towards her. Soon Laksh gets tears. He was happy for Ragini… but sad for himself.. he never got this love.

Laksh gets up from dinner.

Janaki: beta, you soon got up. Eat curd rice too…

Laksh: no aunty, I’m full. Thank you…

Janaki: hmm.. thank you..?? thank you is only for outers.. not for the family members..!!

Laksh feels emotional with her words… he smiles and nods his head. Laksh leaves from there with a smile but his heart was weighted now.

Ragini observes his feelings.

Laksh was standing in the balcony before his room. Ragini comes there.

Rag: laksh, are you okay..?

Lak: no, I’m not..!!

Ragini looks on…

Lak: Ragini, I’m feeling really down. I never got such love… no one never hugged me when I was crying. No one ever consoled me. I understood no one will come for me. Ragini… when there are people who care for us, surely we will cry.. so that there are so many for us..

Ragini keeps looking.

“when there are no one, why there is a need to cry or feel sad..? So, I have made my heart as a rock. I have stopped responding for emotions..! “Emotions..?” what they are even..?? I don’t understand, a family is weakness or strength..?”

Laksh says. He was holding the railing of terrace while talking to her.. looking into sky.

Ragini stands beside him and she too looks into sky.

Ragini: Laksh, family is indeed a strength. but.. you need not feel that you don’t have one. You know why..?/

Laksh looks at her. Ragini looks at him and smiles. She holds his hand gently. Laksh amazes.

Rag: because, I’m with you from today.

Laksh keeps looking.

Rag: I will be always with you as a friend. This is my promise.

Laksh smiles.

Her promise is seen by the millions of stars in the sky….

Fb end…..

Those millions of stars are visible from the hospital window to Laksh. He was looking at them silently. His operation was success, and he is safe now.

Laksh looks down and sighs.

“Excuse me, someone has come for you.” A nurse says to Laksh.

Laksh turns his eyes and looks.

It’s Maheswari Durga Prasad. Laksh amazes and looks on….

To be continued….

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    52 Comments

    1. avika on June 14, 2017 2:42 pm

      superr

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 4:09 pm

        thanks avika..

    2. raguzz01 on June 14, 2017 2:54 pm

      nice..

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 4:10 pm

        thanks raguzz

    3. Ankita on June 14, 2017 3:42 pm

      You balance present and oast both amazingly

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 4:10 pm

        thanks a lot ankitha..

    4. Asw on June 14, 2017 4:12 pm

      Amazing yaar update that ff the concept from serial ? keep going

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 6:19 pm

        thanks dear.. i will post..

    5. CrazygirlS.P on June 14, 2017 4:17 pm

      Amazing dearie

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 6:19 pm

        thanks dear…

    6. Aamy on June 14, 2017 5:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 6:19 pm

        thanks aamy

    7. Jiyani on June 14, 2017 5:13 pm

      Awesome pls post it started again ff pls

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 6:20 pm

        thanks dear… i will post..

    8. abi on June 14, 2017 5:20 pm

      Superb
      New plot It’s different and awesome

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 6:20 pm

        thanks abi..

    9. Mitra on June 14, 2017 5:51 pm

      Amazing. U r. Really superb.

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:10 pm

        thanks mitra..

    10. aleeza on June 14, 2017 5:57 pm

      Amazing

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:11 pm

        thanks aleeza..

    11. asra on June 14, 2017 7:06 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:11 pm

        thanks asra..

    12. DivzS on June 14, 2017 7:23 pm

      Super chappy.. Dpm? Is laksh his lost son? Anyway, I leave the mysteries to be revealed by you. Waiting for next…

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:14 pm

        hmmmmmmmm…. i don’t know… hehe, yeah.. everything will be mystery… thanks dear..

    13. Monu on June 14, 2017 7:25 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:15 pm

        thanks monu

    14. Akshata on June 14, 2017 7:54 pm

      awesome, update soon

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:15 pm

        happy to hear this jahapana..

    15. Ammu on June 14, 2017 8:27 pm

      Interesting episode dear and loved Raglak scenes. Is Laksh is DP’s son??? Feeling bad for Raglak. Eagerly waiting for their flash black and please post next ASAP

      • Astra on June 14, 2017 8:41 pm

        thank you so much ammu… u will know..

    16. IQRA222 on June 14, 2017 9:09 pm

      asthu di it was fab episode totally loved it
      lucky’s bond with the family was super sweet
      and chotu’s and mansi and ragu’s bond was fab
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      lots of love<3 <3
      bye bye

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:02 pm

        thank you so much dear..

    17. teitokUn1718 on June 15, 2017 5:48 am

      Loved it…

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:02 pm

        thanks kun

    18. Malu on June 15, 2017 3:52 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:03 pm

        thanks malu..

    19. Elizebathlovely on June 15, 2017 4:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:04 pm

        thanks dear..

    20. Soumya on June 15, 2017 5:03 pm

      Simply superb di…post next soon

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:05 pm

        thanks dear

    21. Arjuna on June 15, 2017 5:30 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:05 pm

        thank you

    22. Laashya on June 15, 2017 6:25 pm

      Lucky is so cute and awesome part

      • Astra on June 15, 2017 7:05 pm

        thanks a lot dear

    23. Anju on June 15, 2017 7:39 pm

      Nice episode

    24. Vennila on June 15, 2017 7:42 pm

      Nice dear

    25. Rehna on June 15, 2017 7:49 pm

      Awesome dear

    26. Monisha on June 15, 2017 8:49 pm

      Superb part

    27. Vini on June 15, 2017 9:45 pm

      Fantastic

    28. Sherin on June 16, 2017 8:09 pm

      Awesome dear

    29. hemalattha on June 19, 2017 3:24 am

      Superb

      • Astra on June 19, 2017 11:55 am

        thanks dear

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