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Home»Fan Fiction»“A Deal!!!” TwiNj SS (shot 1) ~By Tamanna
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“A Deal!!!” TwiNj SS (shot 1) ~By Tamanna

twinjfan.tamannaBy twinjfan.tamannaApril 12, 201715 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi friends! Oh ok so sab log tayyar ho shock ke liye be ready!

Note: This would be a ss and I won’t be able to post regularly!

Disclaimer: This article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and I unknowingly do so I sincerely apologize!

Lets Begin!

“Kunj I wanted to say something!” She said. “Yes maya! Same here, I also wanna say something! ” said Kunj faintly.
“Oh ok! You first!” Her heart was dancing while saying this. She thought that he would confess again.
“Okay! So I want you to meet someone, come…” he said extending his hand towards his back.

A girl comes in and holds his hand. Her eyes were like stars. Her hair was like velvet. Her cheeks were like vanilla and strawberry icecream. Finally her lips which were smiling showing all the 32 teeth. So beautiful smile.

“Meet her, My fiance, Ms. Twinkle Taneja.” Kunj said proudly yet pain in his voice. “Hello Maya!” Twinkle said with a broad Smile. Maya looked at kunj shocked. Here she was planning to make her his but it turned all upside down when she met Ms. Twinkle.
Kunj: (teary eyed) Actually we came here to invite you for our wedding.
“And you must come.” Said Twinkle with her never fading yet Beautiful smile.
Twinkle went forward to give the wedding card but she stumbled when she banged to the hospital bed.
“Are you Blind?” Retorted an angry Maya.
“Kya karien Maya, sab aap ki tarha khush naseeb nahi hothe!” (“What to do Maya? Not all are lucky as you!”)Twinkle said smiling but yeah her voice showed pain. Kunj’s face fell on Maya’s sentence. Maya was confused.
“Yes I’m. Blind! Mai nahi dekh sakthi!” Maya looked at her, shocked. Even she felt her words to be harsh. She felt bad for her. She continues, “But no worries! I have kunj with me! I m so lucky. Now I don’t feel pain, because I have kunj! I don’t need eyes to see the world because my world is beside me! I can feel him! What Is the use of this world when I have my world all for me! He is my world, other things don’t matter to me.” Her eyes had now turned glassy. Kunj looks at her lovingly and even had guilt in it. His eyes were teary. Even Maya was guilty. She even thought “is this love? If yes, then its beautiful!” But brushed her thoughts. She wanted Kunj. It may be an attraction but still it hurted her. Her chains of thoughts were broken when Twinkle handed her the invitation card. “Kunj weds Twinkle” it read, enough for Maya to realize that now Kunj is someone else’s. It hurts her.

“Oh ok Twinkle! Lets move now” said Kunj. Twinkle entwined thier hands in a tight grip. Maya looked at their entwined hands. Twinkle and kunj move out. Twinkle’s face was still glowing with that heavenly smile. Even though her sufferings, she still have learned how to smile. And here Kunj, gets sad for small to small reasons! But after the entry of this angelic creature, he learned to smile again. Heck, he even wished to give this beauty his eyes but the problem was money.

Twinkle, how she wished to have eyes! Her pain is hidden in a small chamber of her heart which has a cover on it called ‘smile’.

Kunj remembers how he got this Angle.

*******

So this is the story! How is it? I know all are shocked. I guess all thought that the girl to be Twinkle but it was Maya. Here Twinkle is Blind. I m so sorry for that! But its really important for the story to proceed further.

Drop ur comments whether positive or negative. Any confusion do ask me! Ignore mistakes!

See you!

With love,
Urs Tamanna

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    15 Comments

    1. SidMin23 on April 12, 2017 10:04 pm

      Nice story do post asap

    2. Purvi128 on April 12, 2017 10:07 pm

      Hey meri jaaaan……!!!!! ?????
      What was that??????
      I didn’t even had a single thought that it would turn out to be like this..??
      Like seriously.??
      I mean how?? Its too amazing..
      I m SPELLBOUND…
      Twinkle is BLIND…
      Her line ‘Kya karein Maya sab apki tarah khushnaseeb nhi hote’ it pierced my heart into pieces..!! ????
      I didn’t expected that not even in my dreams..!!
      I must say you are the best writer meri jaan…
      You made me speechless..
      Mere dimaag ke kisi kone me bhi esa kuch nhi aaya tha…
      I m AMAZED…!!
      U r such a brilliant writer.!
      I m loving it.
      Their Love ?? you can’t even imagine what I m feeling ryt now after reading this. ?
      Post asap.. I can’t wait.
      LOVE U LOADS ND LOADS ND LOADS ???❤❤???❤❤❤????????????❤❤❤

    3. nrk on April 12, 2017 10:29 pm

      this was unexpected :$ . And I was thinking how could tw lie to kunj.now I happy its not twinkle
      feeling bad for tw.kya kunj still loves maya.waiting for next epi

    4. Simiyy on April 12, 2017 10:30 pm

      Hey dear
      It’s a nice story
      Post soon
      Loads,of love

    5. nishfd on April 12, 2017 10:56 pm

      Awesome yr
      Post asap….

    6. maha on April 12, 2017 10:56 pm

      shocking twist…but intresting.plot
      post soon

    7. SidMin on April 13, 2017 12:13 am

      Awesome … plot it’s really different .. I mean something new . ..
      Can’t wait …post soon …
      Love you ❤

    8. Presha on April 13, 2017 12:14 am

      Hey tammatar…
      Its amazing…
      Just loved…
      I thunk thid one has mysteries..
      Lovely…
      Love u..
      Post soon….???

    9. Purnima.agrawal30 on April 13, 2017 1:48 am

      Amazing interesting shocking

    10. Cp on April 13, 2017 5:22 am

      Ohhh bete kii???yeh toh locha hai locha?you rocked I am shocked??btw on a serious note..it is amazinggg????I was thinking that twinkle would not have done that?…….post next soon ??

    11. Fatimaa. on April 13, 2017 12:00 pm

      Ohh..what a twist tammy..
      Well i m amazed wid it..
      Post soon…
      Love u

    12. Nisha on April 13, 2017 12:51 pm

      Wow tamanna epi was fantabulous
      I loved it
      Plzzzzzzz post soon I can’t wait

    13. Ramya on April 14, 2017 12:20 am

      Awesome amazing unique tamanna
      Lovely superb
      Love u keep smiling

    14. Sohi on April 14, 2017 2:59 pm

      Very interesting plot
      Mujhe tho bahut bada shock laga when he said Maya
      Felt Lil bad for twinkle
      Do continue and post soon
      Bye

    15. baby on April 18, 2017 6:43 pm

      ohhh god tammy……….☺
      I mean srsly shock pe shock……….
      hey bhagwaan srsly I thot it to b twinkle n here she is blind…….
      ohhhh my goodness……well still loved it a lot………
      osm speechless……..loving it………cant w8 for nxt……♥♥♥♥♥
      post nxt asap……….☺
      love u……..♥

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