The dead patient ( Ardhika forever – mmz fanfic) chapter 1

” they call u as my dead patient ” arjun spoked to radhika who was not in a mood to open her eyes.
Arjun continued without response :-
” i didn’t say anything ……now don’t be angry with me…..this image of yours is created by you only ….i will not waste my energy ….by fighting and requesting them to show some concern ” .arjun complained.
” and …don’t u dare think that iam in love with u ..u are only my patient ..” ….” what if i had left my everything…..and had become your personal doctor….really ….i want to curse you ….making me dance on your index finger….bad move ….very bad move …miss mishra …..” .arjun continued.

” Hey ….now don’t smile and stop smirking ….in your mind …i swear …the day you woke up from your slumber..the first thing i will do……is to f**k you right here in the hospital bed” ….so ” now like a sweet and shy girl ….stop smiling” .arjun continued complaining to his sleeping beauty.
” i want to tell u something ….now promise u will not laugh on that .. okay ….my mom nandini really want me to get married…to a girl of her choice…..now don’t laugh that much …it will give u stomach ache.” ….” u know what ….arrange marriage suck…..so i…i ..told her that i had a girlfriend .” Arjun continued and lil stammered .
Radhika who was still in coma …….words entered her ears….but are not reaching her mind…or may be reaching …but she won’t able to respond .
” Now don’t hit me …okay …when she asked me the name of my girlfriend …all of a sudden …i didn’t get anything in my mind ….and i blurted out ….out your name ….your name radhika ” he said in a scared voice ….after few minutes…
” Again …u started …now stop laughing ….stop embrassing me…..i know many ways to close of a mouth of a girl” …saying this he looked towards the lips of radhika .
He took a doctor cream and applied on her lips…” this will protect u …juicy lips …” he said while caressing her hair.
” you know what… first of all ..people used to call me … Doctor se*y …..u know earlier …they used to call me with this name ” ….but when i took ur case they started calling me …” Doctor crazy….” …so hillarious ….” Doctor crazy ” …saying this he laughed holding his stomach….

Outside nurses who were roaming halted on seeing him laughing like a kid .
Sister maria .:- ” love is really …f**king dangerous” .
Priya with fake tears :- oh god i can’t see a handsome doctor like this ….pls help him …
Arjun ….” u know what a new intern ..was calling me …crazy doctor se*y ….it is not that bad too …”

Arjun smiled again ..” i can smell something is burning ….now don’t be jealous ha …..i will not leave until i quenched thirst from u ….now start blushing ” .
Arjun halted seeing her patient’s body …..her cheeks had started turning crimson red ……..he never understood ..after reading so much science…that how can she in her unconsious state ..can blush ….surely she is listening to him ….her case was not much complicated ….she can be brought back from her deep sleep ….just need some endless efforts.
” Your brother …neil once …tried to advise me.. to leave your case….and provide the services to others too….but how would not appreciate it …..if i tell him ..that your cousin is a god damn witch …who does black magic ….and she had heavily possessed ….otherwise a doctor like me ….so handsome ….and intelligent …will not be latched to your sister….like a bl**dy revengeful soul to any god damn human body ” he spoked in one breath getting lil irritated.
” By the way ….iam going out with laila to have burger… if u want u can join us….” he looked towards her….hoping for a respond ….but radhika was still not in a mood to wake up .
“Damn …womwn ur are so lazy ….even demons don’t sleep that much .” Saying this he moved out of the room.

Precap:- radhika rocked …arjun shocked.

Credit to: sammy or ashita

64 comments

  1. sammy

    Wrote it in a haste but in next update will write arjun’s emotions more when radhika will get up ….guyz read it slowly

  2. Gauri

    Sammy I want to hug you for this update….The way you wrote the Ajun’s words to sleeping Radhika…went directly to my heart…keep it going loads of love πŸ™‚

  3. Dev

    Hai sammy….a touchy epi…..d epi was cool with d dialogues of arjun to his sleeping beauty….
    Love u lots tc

  4. aastha

    hey sammy loved it…………..arjun’s wrds are sooo full with love 4 her………..i was happy reading that the blush covered her face…………………plzzzzz update lost patience…………love u…………..

  5. nita

    Nice episode…… waiting for Nxt one precap is interesting.. Wll radhika too respond to his love???? Wll she loves him??

  6. ❀?Natasha?❀

    This is out of the world??????…..srsly ur story is fantabulous?????…..sammy i r really an amazing writer……..❀

  7. Emz fasa

    Amazing sammy i loved arjuns dialogue on his looks that was hillarious pls update next chap today itself

  8. hima

    nice sammy..such an intense love…really felt it through arjun’s words..precap is interesting.everyday you are making us crazy with your stories.tc dear…..

  9. Sammy darlzzzzzzz u r really some kind ??? u r tooooooo good yar ✌✌✌ loved it ??? love u darlzzzzzz ✌?? u r rocking ? ur precap oh. wowwww. wat a rhyming?? waiting for. d next with soooo much eagerness πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ loved it πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  10. nisha

    U know what sammy your story is such a sweetheart story

    I mean the dialogues you wrote is just amazing 7

    I loved it to the core

    waiting to see the dead patient very open her eyes and

    also waiting eagerly what’s new you are going to add in the story

    Rads profession

    Rads personality ( because its still very closed, I mean how it going to be bold , shy , straight forward , soft ,

    how ??????
    7
    But I loved Arjun character

    there is so much to unfold

    lets see what’s up in your mind

    waiiting eagerly love

    sammy see u soon with next part.

    love u keeps smiling

  11. Hope

    Its so emotional….

    actually in my childhood
    i used to talk wid a mango tree lyk its my bff..#lol and i really thought dat he communicated wid me through falling leaves and moving in wind..
    #crazycutechildhood…

  12. Omg Sammy…why is it end…..i want moreeeee….the precap …oh god i can’t sleep now…update both of this n lost patience….???

  13. Chinmayi

    Sammy its beautifull ……i m again in luv with this arjun! Here sammy rocked….doctor arjun is very sweet..
    Keep on rocking dea..bear my hugs and kisses :* :* i wanted to appreciate u for ‘my lost patience’ also…i read all ur works…keep on rocking gal πŸ™‚

  14. Shree

    Too too good… It’s so emotional.. So I donno.. I cried.. He loves her so much… Keep up with the good work dear..

    Love you ??

  15. lavanya

    very emotional…arjun made me cry…how pure can a bond be…you have showed it…please keep going…your stories are indeed fabulous

  16. Raaga

    Hai sammy
    wonderful update yaar…
    loved it how arjun is trying to bring her back …
    thank you dear

  17. Supriya

    Sammy yaar rula diya tune meko…..m not lying but srsly the words r really worth my tears…..the way he was provoking her to wake up was just splendid….. Sammy u know after lost patience this one z my fav…..the love bwt them z something indescribable in words….Sammy tusi toh badi changi lines likhte ho…..loads of love

    • sammy

      Thanks kavina ….and stay connected with the lost series too..do give ur views there too

  18. Gianna

    Sammy what do u eat that u write all these stories and write them so well. Pls send me the recipe. U are like the Pandora box always giving us amazing stories. Loved this so so so very much. Pls pls post the next one soon. God bless u ????

    • sammy or ashita

      Thank u so much Gianna ….. I mean u 10 times better ff writer than me….but still thanks for the appreciation ….love u a lot:-D

  19. Sammy darling…very heart touching episode….arjun care for her..I loved it..he is really doctor crazy yaar….as always u nailed it baby…waiting for next one…love u …tc..muaahhhh…

  20. Roma

    O my goodness sammyyy…wowwww mind blowing update. ..very heart touching n emotional. …arjun’s emotions n feelings for sleeping rads is very adorable n passionate. …can’t wait for the next episode when rads will wakeup….how will arjun rxn….what will be her condition….does she know arjun loves her….had she been listening to all his words while in coma???I’m very curious n anxious to know what will happen next. …how do you do it my honeyyy. …so many lovely stories with very different concepts n plots….I’m loving all your stories n getting crazyyyyy for each n every one….keep it up honeyyy. ….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh β™‘β™‘β™‘

    • sammy

      Thanks Roma 2 chapters are already updated pls check out that…..iam glad u are liking it:-)

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