DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 6 [By Renima]

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DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 6 [By Renima] Hello dil-e-ishqies……After a longgggggg gapppp I am posting this ff…Pls….don;t get angry on me for making much delay……I was sucked with workload and also my life is undergoing certain unexpected quests…so …I don’t know whether I will be able 2 write well or nottt… Sorry for the inconvenience. Okay…..i just hope all are doing well …Shraddha…..big sorryyyy for making 2muchhh delayyyy, as I started writing it 4 uuuu… If u have forgotten the story of my ff then pls check these links and then read this update….
Part 4
Part 5

If possible, Kindly read all parts and drop ur views …….

Scene – 7 { @ Oberoi Mansion, Jhanvi’s room}
Omkara : Mom…..
Jhanvi : Omkara…come inside….
Omkara : By the way mom, shivaay told that u wants 2 meet me….why ?
Jhanvi : Yeah…..Not only me, but Mrs. Sharma also wants 2 meet you…..
Omkara : I didn’t get u mom……
Jhanvi : Omkara….u know that gauri makes vastra for bhagwan ji as well as she sings bhajans……Gauri’s maa told me that in barely whole villagers are preparing themselves to attend the navratri festival…..Panditji has specially instructed that this time also gauri has 2 sing the bhajan…..
Omkara : That’s nice….And I think gauri has 2 go barely and attend the festival….She will be able 2 meet her friends and she will feel better also……
Jhanvi : Okay…..So get ready….u and gauri are going 2 barely by tmrw with Mrs. Sharma…..
Omkara : What ?? Mom…..why me ? I mean if gauri goes with maaji I don’t have any objection with that…..But why I have 2 go ?
Mean while pinky and gauri arrives in jhanvi’s room…Seeing om, gauri stands outside of the room and hides herself in the corner…..She over hears om-jhanvi-pinky conversation…..
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! Omkara…..what do u mean by whyss ?? It’s ur wife’s place and houses…..U have 2 take caree of hers…as well as u guys are newly married couples…… Now I have 2 explainsss u why u have 2 go ?
Jhanvi : Pinky…My goodness…U came in right time…..Pls tell him 2 go……
Omkara : Mom….choti maa…..U both know better that now I don’t trust in God….And if I will go there certainly it’s the festival time and I have 2 attend religious rituals…..Now I don’t believe in any kind of rituals and pujas…..Pls I request u both that try 2 convince gauri’s maa that I am not able 2 come there……Pls…..
Jhanvi : So u will not listen ur maa ?Right ??
Omkara : It’s not like that …..Mom….
Pinky : Then what , omkara ?? See gauri’s maa is our sambndhiji….And if she wants u and gauri 2 attend navratri in her home, how can u refuses that ? U made big promises 2 her that u will make happy of gauri always and now u can’t keep that promises ?

Omkara : Choti maa….pls try 2 understand…..
Jhanvi : [interrupts] let it be …..like that pinky……I will tell Mrs. Sharma that her son in law is not willing 2 stay in barely , his wife’s maayka…..[jahnvi is abt 2 leave…but om holds her hand and stops her] Omkara : Mom…..pls…..Maaji said that am like her son…If u will tell that am not willing 2 stay in barely she will think that I am not able 2 keep my promise……Pls…mom….Don’t tell like that…..
Jhanvi : Then u better go and say it…..I can’t make her sad….[jhanvi release her hand from om’s hold, om stares pinky] Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!! Don’t expects me 2 talks with her……Already she is upsets with all happenings occurred in satya narayan puja…..And I will go and tells her that ur son-in-laws not loves his wifes….then…
Omkara : Choti Maa!!! [shocked] Jhanvi : Omkara….i can understand @ which situation u got married and u are still not able 2 accept that ishana is no more…..And regarding gauri, she is gud from heart and …
Omkara : [interrupts] Mom….pls…..Don’t remind me abt ishana’s death again…..I am not able 2 find how it happened and I didn’t saved her in time….That is making me 2 feel guilty myself per day……Gauri……I don’t know what made me 2 connect with her and she is not telling any thing frankly but in her eyes I can see that pain…..Like I am not giving any sort of joy and happiness in her life ….But still she is with me….and that is making me 2 feel really bad for her fate……I don’t understand what is our relationship… If I feel hate for some one, then I can say openly….i hate u…..if I love some one then I can say…I love u…….If I feel some one has hurt me then I can say …I won’t forgive u because u have hurt me…..But mom…..neither I hates gauri, nor I loves gauri……She can’t imagine in dream abt hurting me as she is so pure…..But……I am not able 2 give her any sort of rights which a wife wants from her husband……I don’t know mom…..I really don’t know what 2 do….[omkara gets emotional] Jhanvi : Om….[emotional]

Omkara : Mom….choti maa, Gauri’s maa…..U all wish that I should go barely…..isn’t it ? Then for my mothers….I will go….[omkara stares jahnvi with wet eyes] I mean it…..
Pinky : Beta….If u feels bad for my wordsss then am sorry…..U know my tongue slips…. Maata raani ki kasam……I don’t have any intention 2 hurt u…..beta…..[pinky holds omkara’s hand and gets emotional] We all wants u 2 stay as happy…..The lonliness of ur life’s making us sad and we want u and gauri 2 stand together as u will get a new starts in life…..
Omkara : Choti maa…I know u all are expecting much from me…..Perhaps I can’t meet ur expectations……
Pinky : Oh My Maata…… No….beta……Don’t think like that…..Shivaay tells u are his best man…..So choti ma trusts u….that for my omkara….Nothing is impossible …..[emotional] Omkara : Choti Maa…..[omkara hugs pinky and gets emotional] Jhanvi : Omkara…..it’s okay…I will tell mrs. Sharma…
Omkara : Mom…[omkara release himself from hug] I am ready 2 go barely….
Jhanvi ; What ?
Omkara : U heard it ….right…..Mom…I will go and stay there ….But upto the end of navratri festival only….After that I will not stay there for a minute…..[emotional] Jhanvi : Haa…that’s enough,…beta….[jhanvi gets emotional and kisses on om’s forehead] I am feeling so happy…..omkara…..[she smiles with wet eyes] Omkara : Mom….I have some work….shall I leave ?
Jhanvi : Yeah…..

Omkar turns behind and walks away….Gauri who was standing outside the room was staring omkara and was weeping in tears only……She starts walking towards omkara’s room thinking about omkara’s words….. “Omkaraji doesn’t loves me…He doesn’t hate me….And he can’t hurt me…also….Hey sankarji….Now….u tell me what kind of relation we share…..I can’t see him breaking like these…..I can’t leave him, but I can’t stay in his heart also…..Then why we are together, what made us 2 connect us ?? The innocence of his eyes are telling that he is fighting with himself only…….Ishana came 2 his life by giving him hopes, but destiny separated that hope also from him……Why omkaraji has 2 suffer whole pain in life ? I can’t heal his pains….But I will try 2 fill his lonliness with happiness, may be the space in heart is not for me…..But I can stay in his life……What else gauri kumara sarma wants in her life ?? For gauri love is a devotion and omkaraji is her bhagwan…..I will be a devotee for my jatadhari omkaraji forever……Forever…….” [she finally reaches room and finds omkara sitting in the arm chair involved in thoughts…She stares him with teary eyes and starts walking inside the room…..She comes near 2 omkara…..She raised her hand 2 touch him, but quickly she took her hand back as she was feeling hard 2 stare his eyes……Omkara feels that some one was standing behind him…..He turned back and gets surprised 2 see gauri….
Omkara : Gauri !!!!
Gauri : Ji….omkaraji…[gauri rubs her tears] Omkara : What happened ., why are u crying ??
Gauri : Nothing…..
Omkara : I know ….u are excited 2 go barely…..And ur maa demanded me also 2 come with u and u was not able 2 convince her what is going in between us…..Isn’t it ?
Gauri simply nods her head…….
Omkara : Don’t worry…..We will go together……
Gauri : ji…..[gauri stares omkara’s eyes] Omkara : Yeah….we will stay there and attend navratri festival….Ok….Pack things….We are leaving tmrw….I will go and ask maaji if she need any help…..……[omkara smiles and touches her cheek and leaves……] Gauri stares him with wet eyes……
[Due 2 lack of time, am not adding family moments …..sorry for that……Straightly am going 2 next scene which will be focused on gaurika….Sorry for it…..}

Scene – 8 { @ Barely, Sharma Nivas}
After a day’s long journey mrs.sharma and rikara arrives @ barely and reaches sharma nivas….Maa involves herself in some house hold works….gauri helps her maa…..Mean while omkara prepares himself 2 take a fresh bath…..
Mrs. Sharma : Gauri……We have 2 prepare laddus first
Gauri : Ji ma……First I will finish making these ….[she couldn’t continue her talk as she heard omkara screaming……”Aaah….paani…paani”
Mrs. Sharma : Daamadji…..
Gauri : Omkaraji…..[tensed] Mrs. Sharma : Beta….go and see what happened 2 him….Hurry up…
Gauri : Ji….maa….

Scene shifts 2 gauri’s room…..
Gauri rushed inside and finds that the sound was heard from bathroom……
Gauri : Omkaraji….what happened ?
Omkara : Gauri…..my eyes are burning….Aah…. I think shampoo got sucked in my eyes….I am trying 2 open the shower, but it is not working…..
Gauri : Haa….it’s knob is not right….So water might have sticked inside it only……U have 2 press the knob tightly……
Omkara : Is it ? Let me try…..[omkara finds hard 2 press the knob] Gauri : Omkaraji……did u press the knob…
Omkara : Gauri ….i am not able 2 do it……my eyes are…..
Gauri : Haa it has got tight…. Relax…Omkaraji……I am coming…..
Omkara : No gauri….u won’t come here…..I mean…how…..could it be…..[omkara feels awkward] Gauri : Believe me….I will just press the knob and I will go….Pls….
Omkara : Ok….[omkara manages 2 open the door of bathroom, gauri gets into the bathroom and stares omkara’s face] Gauri : Omkaraji……Don’t worry……U just give ur hand….We will press the knob together…..
Omkara : OK…..[omkara extends his hand , gauri holds his hand and both of them raise their hands towards the knob…..They try their level best 2 press the knob which finally resulted the knob 2 come out and with much force water falls on rikara……] Gauri : Omkaraji…..[gauri was trying hard 2 move forward as water was falling on her face which made her hair 2 fall on her face only] Omkara : [manages 2 open his eyes and stares gauri] Come gauri…..[he extend his hand towards her ] Gauri raise her hand 2 hold om’s hand without noticing that from omkara’s hand soap has fallen on the floor only……She moves forward and her leg slips……
Gauri : Aah…..[ Screams….But soon she finds that omkara’s hand was on her body only……One of his hand was placed on her waist and the other one was on her neck only……Gauri feels a kind of nervousness by feeling her husband’s warmth on her body….. Her heart starts beating fast……She stared his eyes for a while…..omkara finds her scattered hair on her face….he slowly applied his fingers 2 keep them behind her ears only…..gauri close her eyes and touches omkara’s chest tightly…….Omkara was unable 2 take his eyes from her…..When all hair were held on the right place, gauri slowly opened her eyes and stared omkara’s eyes….She slowly took her hand from omkara’s chest…..Omkara also loosen his hand from her waist……Suddenly her eyes went on the lizard which was climbing on the wall behind omkara…..
Gauri : Aah….chipkali….chipkali….[gauri hugged omkara with much fear ] Omkara : Where gauri ? [omkara placed his hand on her shoulder ]

Gauri : Omkaraji….woooh…..aapke peeche……[gauri was pressing her face again tightly on omkara;s chest only] Omkara : I see…..[omkara extended his hand backward and caught it by holding it’s tail…..] This is the creature which made Gauri kumari Sharma 2 scare ??
Gauri : Nahi…omkaraji….pls…throw it……pls…[gauri closed her eyes tightly and lie down on omkara;s chest and entangled her fingers on his back tightly….] Omkara smiles and throws the lizard on the floor…..Gauri was still lying on omkara;s chest only and omkara’s one hand was on her shoulder only.…..
Omkara : Gauri!!!
Gauri : Nahi….omkaraji….. I am getting scared….[she hugged him more tightly like she was scared 2 go from his arms….] Omkara felt that she was finding his arms like a shelter 2 forget all her worries ….he slowly placed his hands on her back and waved his hand through her forehead…..
BGM…..“Milne ko tujhse bahane karun
Tu muskuraye wajah main banun
Roz bitana saath mein tere
Saara din mera
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah” plays….[film-yaariyaan]

PRECAP : JOY IS LIKE A GLITTER ONLY, BUT WHEN IT COMES IT WILL SHINE BETTER……

Sorry guys for short updteee…..Am not getting time as well as not feeling 2 write well…..also… I don’t know whether this rikara has satisfied u, drop ur views if u can….

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28 Comments
  1. Rasika

    Wow ,renima ,jhanvi ,pinky ,om conversation was nice their understanding ,and Rikara scenes is just fab ..overall nice ..keep it up

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lottt rasika…am glad that u liked it…..thank u so much

  2. Shreyanvi

    Reni di…….gaurika scenes were damm gud…????I was literally imagining this??….but u made omkara hold chipkali by tail????? ..actually first word came into my mouth was yuck cz I was imagining all this naa????…
    Thanks for this update…nd post nxt one soon..luv u?

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks saku dear….ur dp is so cuteee..i liked it…and chipkali….lol….kya karen…woh hero hai naa….. hamari pyaari gauri sarmaa ko bachana uska farj hein ki nahin…..joh jatadhari hippy pati ladkar gundon se apni biwi ko bacha sakta hein…unke liyee……chipkali kyaa cheej hein…..
      Am glad that u liked it…love u too

  3. CUTE NICE AWESOME MIND BLOWING WONDERFULL SUPERB??????

    1. Renimarenju

      Awww uf…..keep giving cutteee comments like theseee…..

  4. Shraddha-DBO

    Nice di,waiting for RIKARA union.
    Thanks for mentioning my name?

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot……yaar

  5. Its awesome….glad to see Gaurika scenes???

  6. Jayanti

    awesome loved…read it first time today….but amazing.,…and read all the other parts….fab….loved it to the core…next part asap

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much jayanti….I think for the first time u are commenting on my article….Glad 2 see u a new reader….thanks a lot……and i will try 2 post next one….but depends on my schedule only….

  7. Niriha

    Awesome……loved it to the core ???? eagerly waiting for next update soon

    1. Renimarenju

      Awww…thanks…seems now u are reading regularly my article.s, thanks a lot for commenting…. dear… i will try my level best…..2 post next one

  8. Verna

    OMG! I was really missing this story.. Because this is really close to my heart.. when I started reading this Stories I loved the intensity in ur story.. Specially I love the way u portray My Omi’s emotions and feelings.. I really feel what he feels.. I too cry when.he cry.. its really awesome dr.. pls try to post everyday..

    And about today’s part.. It was very emotional in beginning and so romantic in ending.. I can’t wait for next part.. pls update ASAP dr

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lottt for commenting verna….glad that this has gained a space in ur heart which means a lot….And om’s emotions…don’t know….why…..always i felt an unknown connection with that character, that’s why it happens….am feeling happy that u liked it…..and romantic… awww…..actually i just felt 2 show them in togetherness and i tried a different thing only….that’s all….and 2 post next one….oh…..it is bit dificult….but i will try my level best yaar… bye….

  9. Yashu

    Superb!!!! Gaurika scenes yaar…….???in luv wid dem…..esp that bathroom wala scene…..di it was really fab…..yaar it was so very cute……loved it…..waiting 4 nxt……

    1. Renimarenju

      Haaye…yashu…thanks a lottt yaar

  10. B_isha

    So , finally I am here didu ; I just love how you portray relationship and their complex feelings you know today special appreciation for gauri thoughts for om….. I was purely in ur imagination world I loved the chipkali part lol …..In my tu gang puvi is scared of lizard. …..really hahaha. ……

    By the way I have shared ur wall link with my whole gang on WhatsApp as i do , they all are drying to comment asap …..let’s see when they do….

    Oh my gosh yet again u made me spellbound by the description of janvi om pinki gauri. . Uff just loved it …..

    Heart touching ….
    Phir mileage comment box me. ..
    Till then …..
    Love you ….xoxo. …..
    Take care ….

    1. Renimarenju

      OH God!!! U surprised me by commenting here….bshama….and u shared my work’s link So sweet………i really don’t know how 2 thank u for thiss…..thanksssss a lottttttt dearrrrrr……U are really wonderful….i mean apart from author u are a wonderful human being also….and lizard… seems lizard made every one 2 comment here…….actually i am scared of lizard…..and …..it happens with me…..if i find any lizard on my room…i use 2 scream and will start running onlyy….. gauri’s thought…actually i got impressed with her words in dbo when she said “hum aapse prem karungi….badle mein kuch bhi nahi maangungi…prem bhi nahi and that train scene…. “itni nafrat…..zarur aapke saath kuch bura hoga, tabhi toh aap aise hein” these made me 2 write that thought of gauri abt omie…glad that u liked it which means a lottt…..and i love u 2,,,,,bye..

      1. B_isha

        Haha di Wese toh lizard aapka bhala nahi kar pai so ff me hi sahi and di u only said that i surprise sometimes. …as I am unpredictable Wese I really don’t feel I am that good like how ur describing it’s like a duty to me I love to do so …..so no need of thank you and Yaa that’s scene of dbo really reflected the purity of love ….

        Love you di
        Take care

  11. Chandini

    See i am here shama di???thanks for sharing the link otherwise I would have missed this wonderful gaurika scene….
    Reni di this is awesome I am spell bound om’s emotions were portrayed perfectly….actually my current mindset is like that regarding rikara…I don’t love them as I used to love ishkara….I don’t hate them too but somewhere something is missing but imagining them in your lizard scene mann I am dead???
    You are always awesome di

    1. Renimarenju

      Haa…finally am seeing u in my ff……feel so nice 2 read ur comment…and bshama shared the link….2 u…..really she is so caring….and have u started liking gaurika…some how iam liking them…but i don’;t want omie as angry young man by rating gauri as characterless and all it is not suiting with my best man omkara whom i enjoyed a lot in ib initially…. And that’s why i said…he doesn;t hate, he doesn’t love, it is not hurt also..then what it is ? perhaps…..i have 2 search for it….thanks a lot for commenting dear……. and even i can’t fill the space which ishkara has left in my heart…i don;t know why here also i brought ishana…though it was short am still not able 2 accept gaurika from heart….but i like them……

      1. Chandini

        I am happy to read and comment do
        And bhavi di you are right I am also hoping to see ishkara one day in some serial or other but reni di keep writing like this rikara will also become special already I am going crazy over kunal??

    2. B_isha

      Actually Renima di we all tu buddies have a group I shared this link there only ….so finally I am also happy reading ur cmt chandu …. I am also liking shrenal aka rikara but no one can grab or fill the place of ishkara … ishkara was special such as a moon in sky no one can change it whatever happens …

      May we see vrunal aka ishkara someday in some other serial it would surely be pleasure just like reading Renima di ff

  12. plse do update soon didi……….. Loving it so much

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey dear…i have updated it….
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/dbo-gaurika-ff-unexpected-quest-life-part-7-renima/
      Check it yaar….thanks for commenting

  13. B.k.maha

    Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…. Sry for late reply….

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