DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 5 [By Renima]

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Hello dil-e-ishqies…… Hope all are doing well …Sorry I couldn’t keep my promise 2 post on sunday….. Shraddha…my schedule is gonna hectic onwards tmrw and I will not be able 2 post on a regular basis…But I will try my level best….And I can’t assure u when I will update this ff.…..Certainly will try 2 post early, but it depends on my work….Pls forgive me guys… As usual here are the links 4 previous ones :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=GAURIKA+FF+%E2%80%93+UNEXPECTED+QUEST+OF+LIFE

Please read all and express ur views on it…..

Scene – 4 {@ Hall , oberoi mansion}[continuation from last part] Tej : Ridiculous!!! This stupid lady is not ready 2 stop raising questions on me……Am just fed up with these things….
Swethlana : Tej……what 2 do ? She is demanding her rights in your life……after all you are her husband….i mean soon 2 become ex-husband…….
Dadi ; Tej….Pls don’t insult jhanvi before whole family……
Tej : Excuse me….maa….It’s not me but jhanvi is making herself to be insulted before every one……She knows 2 shatter tears and gain your sympathy only…..Shameless woman…..she is still behind me…..
Omkara lost his temper……He rushed towards Tej and presses his shirt’s collars and stares him in anger……Omkara : How dare u speak like this 2 my mom ? I will kill you….mr.obeori……

All gets tensed with omkara’s anger…….Shivru rushed near omkara and tried 2 stop him….
Shivaay : Om…pls control urself….
Omkara : How can I control shivaay ? He has insulted mom…..My mom always bear this man’s sins….And he is treating my mom like…..
Jhanvi : Omkara…..pls…..stop it…..Guests has arrived in puja…..I don’t want any kind of prblm… pls…..[emotional] Rudra : Haa….O….paapa…pls…..I think we should not make this as an issue…..
Shivaay : Om….pls…..we will talk about it later…{omkara released his hand from tej’s shirt’s collar…}
Dadi : Tej..its’ better u leave puja….I don’t want any kind of hindrance here…
Tej : Maa….what are u saying ?
Dadi : I mean what I said……Am still alive puthar…..U have forgotten the fact that it’s me Kalyani Singh Oberoi is the head of this family…… I hope u understand my point…….
Tej : Am understanding everything clearly….maa….. U all are on one side and I am not….
Swethlana :Tej…am with you [swethlana holds tej’s hand and stares every one] Don’t worry…..Let them do their puja and we will enjoy some time alone….
Tej : Enjoy!!

Swethlana : Haa Tej…..Let’s go 2 club and have some fun…..
Tej : That will be nice…..I need a change…..[tej stares jhanvi sharply and jhanvi stares tej and swethlana with teary eyes] Lets go swethlana…..
Swethlana : Yeah……[tej and swethlana leaves] Dadi : Omkara….gauri…..puthar…..u both sit before the hawan kund……
Omkara : Dadi…pls……I don’t believe in these kind of pujas and rituals….it has no meaning @ all…..
Jhanvi : Omkara…beta….we can’t change tej….But this puja is for u and gauri….This is for our family……For our happiness……only….
Omkara : Mom!!! [omkara touches jhanvi’s hands] What u get by worshipping god ? U seriously thinks that our problems will be solved….. Pls mom….. don’t trust in god…..he doesn’t have eyes…..
Gauri : Omkaraji…….I know u don’t have trust in these things…..But your family trusts u…..they believe that with this puja everything will come as good only…..U said that u want your maa to remain happy always ……If ur maa believes that with this puja prblms will be solved then, At least for your family I think u have 2 attend this puja….. [Omkara and Gauri stare each other’s eyes……. ] Gauri’s maa : Daamadji u said that am your maa ….then I request you……won’t u do this @ least for your maa’s sake ?
Omkara : Maaji……[omkara holds gauri’s maa’s hand and stares her eyes] Gauri : Omkaraji…..Maa trusts her son and believes that her son will always keep that trust….. May be u can’t find god in idols but if u find maa’s blessings as the most valuable thing then certainly god exists in maa only…..

Omkara : Do you think god exists in maa…..
Gauri : Haa…omkaraji……U trust and love your maa a lot, then believe that maa is your god…
Omkara gets mesmerized with gauri’s words…….He stares jhanvi for a while…..He moved near jhanvi and touches her hands…..
Omkara : Mom……I don’t believe in idols which I make now….Because they don’t have any power…..But as gauri said I always wish your happiness only……I will do this puja if you bless me…..[emotional] Jhanvi : Omkara!!! [jhanvi hugs omkara and gets emotional] Dadi : Today the trust of gauri has won……She said the right thing….One who cares for his maa will always be blessed with maa’s hands……The son who loves his maa to the most will never fell down……gauri…..U strengthened omkara’s trust…..U did a big thing……
[Omkara and jhanvi released themselves from hug and Gaurika share an emotional eyelock] Pinky : Oh My Maata!!! Jethaniji….U should feel proud 2 have a son like omkara …..and daughter in law like gauri…….Now u need not 2 be sads….Ok…..
Jhanvi : Haa pinky….Am feeling so happy that omkara agreed 2 do this puja…
Rudra : But Mom, the credit goes 2 gauri bhabhi….
Dadi : Haa jhanvi puthar…..Omkara, gauri ….our blessings are always with you….
Gaurika smiles with wet eyes and receives blessings from dadi,jhanvi,pinky,sakthi and gauri’s maa …..omrunika make them 2 sit before the hawan kund…..gaurika stare each other’s eyes for a while……According 2 panditji’s instructions they follows everything and finally panditji applies kumkum teeka on their foreheads respectively…..He then tells omkara 2 fill gauri’s maang with sindoor……Omkara stares gauri’s eyes……Gauri also stares omkara’s eyes…..
Anika : Oh Bete ki!!! Omkara……Fill sindoor in her maang…..This is the rasm…..
Omkara stares jhanvi and gauri’s maa for a while …..he finds that every one’s eyes are on him and gauri only……He recalls gauri’s maa’s words…”won’t u do this @ least for ur maa’s sake?” He again turned his eyes towards gauri…..he slowly takes the sindoor in his hands….Gauri’s eyes are filled with tears……Her heart starts beating fast……Omkara fills gauri’s maang with sindoor…….Gauri close her eyes and feels heavenily…..[ BGM…..“Tadev Lagnam Suridam Tadev
Naarabalam Chandra Balan Tadev
Vidya Balam Daiv Balan Tadev
Lakshmi Pate Tendra Yugam Swarami
Shubmangal Sawadhan” plays]

Jhanvi and Gauri’smaa smiles with wet eyes and fold their hands….
Jhanvi : Maata raani….Pls give my omkara and gauri all happiness and keep their bond together forever……
Gauri’s maa : Sankarji!!! Just like maa parvathi and lord shivji I wish gauri and daamadji’s relationship should stay throughout their life……
The moment brought a pleasant smile in every one’s face…..Gauri opened her eyes and stares Omkara……Omkara was unable 2 look @ her eyes any more……He says “Excuse me” and leaves……Gauri stares him with wet eyes…gauri’s maa feels strange…..
Jhanvi : I am sorry….Whatever happened today,….I mean aap….
Gauri’s maa : Sambndhiji…..I can understand…..Be strong…..Everything will be alright…..[gauri’s maa holds jhanvi’s hand and smiles]

Scene – 5 [@ Pub] Tej and Swethlana are sitting closer 2 each other….Swethlana entangles her fingers on tej’s chest and gives a wicked smile…..
Swethlana : What happened, Tej ? A hot girl is sitting with you and you have lost some were…
Tej : Nothing like that swethlana……[tej places his hand on swethlana’s hand] I am just thinking about what my maa told today……
Swethlana : Tej…..She said a point…..I think seriously you have 2 think about it….
Tej : I didn’t get you…..swethlana…..
Swethlana : Tej u are a successful business magnate, u are the head of oberoi business empire, but what about your home ? I mean in oberoi mansion all praises for shivaay singh oberoi and he is like the prince charm for your maa only…..Always she used 2 call him as Billu”…..And jhanvi……u know what jhanvi’s sentimental drama has separated you from your own family….If it continues, slowly they will separate you from business also…..
Tej : Swethlana !!! [shouts] Swethlana : Why are you shouting @ me Tej ? I am telling the fact only…..
Tej : Swethlana…..I am alone the owner of 5000 crores…….Won’t you think this is not sufficient for a living ?
Swethlana : Tej….am your well wisher…..And I think from the perspective of your future only……Shivaay rewarded with the title business man of the year also….Now all respects him more….The way your maa talked today, I find it as quite new…….Today she asked you 2 quit the function….May be tmrw she will ask you 2 leave oberoi mansion for her billu…..
Tej : [interrupts] Stop it….Swethlana……I am Tej Singh Oberoi…And I agree shivaay has grown up and has become a leading business man, but I made this oberoi business as the empire…..And whatever shivaay achieved today, it’s because he followed my steps on business only…….And I will never allow him 2 cross my way…..Nothing can separate me from oberoi mansion……Tej Singh Oberoi knows better 2 grab things which he wants rather than any one…..
Swethlana : I am impressed….Tej….Then do some action…..It will be very interesting 2 watch…..[swethlana gives a crooked smile….tej consumes his drinks and stares her ]

Scene – 6 {@ Art Hub}
Omkara was depressed with the incidents occurred in his house……He stared his canvas for a while and finds that it was empty…..Omkara’s View….”Just like this canvas my life has become empty…..I filled so many colors in this canvas, but I was not able 2 find what exactly suits the canvas…..I don’t understand what destiny has planned in my life…..I undergone certain incidents in my life and all I find is nothing just pain only…..Day by day am witnessing how Tej Singh Oberoi is changing his behavior and attitude towards my mom…..My mom is a victim of his sins and being a son am not able 2 do anything for my mom…..Why this is happening ??” [omkara feels extremely bad and was lost in thoughts] Shivayand Gauri arrives there and feels sad for omkara……They stare him for a while….
Gauri : Omkaraji!!!!
Omkara turns behind and gets shocked 2 see gauri and shivaay….Omkara : Shivaay….[om rushed and hugged him] Shivaay : Om…..my best man……U are here…..I was searching you in entire oberoi mansion…..
Omkara : Why what’s the matter, shivaay [shivkara release themselves from hug] Shivaay : Nothing serious….Badi maa wants 2 talk with u……
Omkara : I see….by the way….Gauri…..[he stares gauri’s hand and finds a tray in her hands and gets confused] Shivaay : Om, why can’t she be here ? Come on she is your wife…..
Omkara : Shivaay,….You knows it better that am not able 2 accept gauri …..and….
Shivaay : I know om….But u know what….U hadn’t take ur breakfast and as your brother I can’t see my bhai in hunger…..So I aksed your wife 2 take break fast for you ….
Omkara : Any ways….By the way, why mom wants 2 talk with me , Shivaay, Is there any problem ?
Shivaay : She just told that she wants 2 meet you and talk 2 you only…..I think she can’t share it with any one else than you…..Gauri tell om 2 have his break fast and come soon….Badi maa is waiting for him….
Omkara : But shivaay, what’s the matter ?
Shivaay : Om……I have a meeting with client…..So I have 2 leave……have ur breakfast…..I have made it specially for you……See you guys later…..Bye….
Omkara : Bye ,shivaay…..[shivaay leaves] Omkara stares gauri ……
Gauri : Wooh!!! Omkaraji……
Omkara extends his hand towards her…..Omkara : Ok….keep it there [omkara points out his finger on table]

Gauri places the tray in table and stares him….
Omkara ; Gauri…..U might have feeling that am really a bad husband, won’t you ?
Gauri : No omkaraji….I never felt like that…..In fact I always find you as the best person in this world…..
Omkara : What do you find in me, gauri ? Our marriage was not a bond of hearts, it just happened because of the circumstances only……And we are in this relationship because of certain reasons…..We should have broken it already, but when my mom undergone through cardiac attack and demanded me 2 bring u here, I brought u in my house….We live in house….We share one room, one bed and u wears sindoor for this relationship……But still we are not together…..And to make things strange your maa asked me 2 keep this relationship forever ….Before her trust I was not able 2 tell anything…..I made a promise 2 her that life long you will stay with me…..But I don’t know how long it will stay ? Because as a husband I have never given u the right which u deserves in my life…..And may be because of this reason u will have started hating me also……won’t you ?
Gauri : Never…….Omkaraji…..I won’t demand any rights in your life…..No matter whether we share a room and bed, but still we can’t be one but I am ready 2 live with you forever…..Omkaraji…..Gaurikumari Sarma always admires you and feels to be lucky as your wife…… And my heart says that I will be able 2 maintain this relationship with full of trust only……
Omkara : Trust!!!! Why you trust me ?
Gauri : Because am able 2 see ur heart in your eyes…..
Omkara : What my heart says ?
Gauri : It says that you are in pain…….I don’t know whether am able 2 heal it, but certainly I will try 2 reduce your pain…..
Omkara : Better u don’t look @ my eyes……It’s showing my bitter life only……And don’t trust me also because it will reward you more pain……Whomever trusts me am able 2 give them pain only……[omkara thinks about ishana, gauri stares omkara and gets emotional] Gauri : Omkaraji……wooh…..Break Fast…..
Omkara : Yeah…..[Omkara sits in a chair and starts taking breakfast…In the midst he started coughing….. Gauri places her hand on his head and makes him drink water…..] Thanks…. [omkara and gauri stare each other’s eyes and gauri smiles ]Gauri…….U wait here……I have 2 go wash room….
Gauri : Ji….[omkara leaves….] When omkara left gauri’s eyes went on the entire art hub….She find pretty idols and certain paintings….She waved her hand through some of them and starts walking…..Mean while her dupatta sucks on a shelf which was placed @ the corner……She turns behind 2 remove her dupatta from it….Suddenly her eyes went on a diary which was placed there…..She took it in her hand and opens it…..She finds a girl’s photo in the diary and stares it….Behind the photo her name was written and it was none other than Ishana only….Gauri’s eyes are filled with tears….She waved her hand through that photo….Gauri turns the pages of diary and finds a folded paper ….She takes it and reads……”Ishana…..i don’t know how should I tell what I feel for you…..But certainly I have written this lyrics for you only….I want you should dance on it……”She finds lyrics of song and reads it….While reading her eyes started filling with tears only…..She places the paper towards her chest and started singing the lyrics of song written by omkara…..”Jo naa keha sake tum, jo naa keha sake hum…..Kehane lagi donon se woh….
Khamoshiyaan….Oh Saathiya……Saathiya…..Saathiya……”
On the other hand omkara was coming back 2 art hub hears the song……He whisphers….”Ishana….” and rushed inside ……he finds gauri singing oh saathiya song….He moved near her and touches her shoulder….Gauri gets shocked 2 see Omkara…
Gauri : I am sorry….omkaraji….woh….

Omkara : Pls continue it….I want 2 hear it……[omkara’s eyes are filled in tears] Gauri continues 2 sing with teary eyes…..”Do dilon mein jazb kar de saare jazbein gahre-gahre….Kal kyaa pata mile naa mile nazdeekiyaan…..oh saathiya……saathiya….saathiya….” [Gauri was unable 2 sing it fully as tears were falling continuously from her eyes only…..Omkara takes the paper from her hand and stares her with wet eyes…..
Omkara : Ishana was prepared 2 perform for this song…..But before that I find her in road…..It was an accident…..She was ……[omkara’s hands started shivering ….paper falls down and omkara bend in his own knees and literally cries] Gauri : [sits near him] Omkaraji!!!! [she holds his face on her hands] Omkara : Gauri……I am able 2 give pain only……This pain is my life…….U can’t expect any thing rather than pain ……[.Gauri slowly raises her hand to wipe out omkara’s tears….Omkara turns his eyes towards her eyes…..Gauri bows her head and decides 2 take off her hand…..But soon omkara touched her hand and extended it towards him….He placed her hand over his forehead and was crying only…..Gauri feels extremely sad 2 see omkara in pain….] Gauri : Omkaraji!!!!
Omkara : Ishana…..why she dead ? gauri….why ??
Gauri : Omkaraji….pls…..control urself…..
Omkara was unable 2 do anything, but his tears were conveying his inner pain only….He hugs gauri and Gauri made omkara 2 lie down on her lap…..Gauri waves her hand through his forehead…..Her eyes filled in tears were falling on omkara’s forehead only……Gauri was ready 2 bear all pains for omkara and omkara was in a dilemma before life’s unexpected turns…The unexpected quest of their lives were not able 2 pour happiness on them, but their hearts started uniting with each other as they were able 2 feel each other’s pain…..
BGM….. “Agar Mile Khuda To Poochhoonga Khudaya….
Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka….. Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya…
Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat…… Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat …..Waah Re Waah Teri Kudrat
Uss Pe De Diya Kismat….. Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat…..
Yehi Kya Woh Mohabbat…… Waah Re Waah Teri Kudrat….
Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi…..
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki…… Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
Toh Lut Gaye Haan Loot Gaye….
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein….Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah….[film- hum dil de chuke sanam]

PRECAP : LIFE IS A QUESTION MARK, WE HAVE TO ADD COMAS AS LIFE HAS 2 MOVE ON….

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29 Comments
    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks yaar….But Do u able 2 read it fully ? But in my phone, i find some parts as missing….

  1. Renimarenju

    GUYS, PLS I HAVE SUBMITTED THIS SAME ARTICLE AGAIN AS SOME PARTS ARE MISSING….I DON’T KNOW WHY IT HAPPENED…..I HAVE MESSAGED TU……HOPE THEY WILL POST THE RIGHT ONE SOON……SORRY FOR INCONVENIENCE…..

  2. Kiya

    Its lovely and amazing….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks but yaar but do u able 2 read it fully ?

      1. Kiya

        Yes dr

  3. Shraddha-DBO

    Hi di this is emotional than the last part, could really feel the pain. So happy that you mentioned me.

    I have started my first ff , have posted it , please do read, I will message the link also.

    Thanks for posting even in this hectic schedule?

    1. Renimarenju

      Shraddha…thanks yaara…and dear are u able 2 read my article fully……i mean in my phone only half part is showing……

  4. Shraddha-DBO

    Also di, if I post a fan fiction,will it come both in IB AND DBO?

    1. Renimarenju

      I don’t know exactly about it..if dbo is written before the title then they will post in dbo only….else they will post in both ib and dbo page…that’s waht happened with my 3 shots which i wrote for gaurikara earlier

  5. Good but omkara should be a bit more strong

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks for commenting and suggesting….I wabt 2 tell u some thing…..Hope u will understand it/// See abc,,,,omkara is not weak in this one….actually he is depressed with his life due 2 ishana’s death, jhanvi’s sorrows, tej’s misbehavior and swethlana’s wickedness……And omkara is sensitive which we witnessed in show…..and that’s why he is becoming emotional in my ff…..See omie is different from shivaay and rudra……Om believes every relation should be come from heart whereas for sso every relation is a deal only…..That’s the difference……And i agree with u 2 portray omie as more strong…..But according 2 my story of this ff @ first omkara has 2 trust himself, he has 2 understand certain reality and how gauri will stand with him in his entire fight of life and slowly omkara will face all things and he will become more strong……Have patience yaar……I need some time 2 show these quality……which i can portray
      through pretty no of episodes only……So pls forgive me….

  6. Verna

    Wow dr.. this is really emotional and I can feel each every feel.. u have felt this and wrote and I can feel same.. I loved this.. excellent

    1. Renimarenju

      Verna..thanks a lot yaar ….And you are right……when i write some thing it comes from heart….

  7. Just one word AMAZINGGGGGGGGG…
    Waiting for nxt 1…

    1. Renimarenju

      Oww Saku,…..how are u yaara, thanks a lot

      1. Hey I m very much fine di…wht abt u??..all gud??..

  8. It is nice one dii… Rikara confrontation with each other and guari cares om is superbbbbbb…

  9. Yashu

    Omg….it was such an emotional part yaar….loved everything in it…waiting 4 nxt…

  10. EMOTIONAL AWESOME AMAZING???

  11. good luck with ur fanfiction renu di….

    its reaaly great

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks abc hope u understood my view

  12. Rasika

    Awsm epi dear….. Hegediya, dear , are you from karnataka and do read my ff Gaurikara a love story,

    1. Renimarenju

      Am doing well and yes iam from karnataka…i will read ur ff when i get time probably i will read it tonight or tmrw …and will comment dear…thanks a lot

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