DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 4 [By Renima]

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DBO : GAURIKA FF – UNEXPECTED QUEST OF LIFE- Part 4 [By Renima] Hello dil-e-ishqies…… So guys, hope u enjoyed previous episodes, without making much delay am posting the 5th part of this article ….Shraddha, this time I have tried my level best 2 make a long one….Pls specially tell ur views on it…….As usual here are the links 4 previous ones :
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Please read all and express ur views on it…..

Scene – 3 {@ Oberoi mansion, omkara’s room}
Gaurika was still in their hug only……Omkara’s tears were breaking down continuously and gauri was feeling extremely sad for him…….
Gauri : Omkaraji!!!! Omkaraji……
[Omkara slowly released himself from the hug and stared gauri……for a while…..] Omkara : Wooh!! I….I mean…….I am sorry……

Gauri : No need 2 say sorry omkaraji…….I can understand what are u feeling right now….. All I want 2 say is…
Omkara : Pls gauri…..Pls……Ur words are not able 2 change the reality……
Gauri : I know omkaraji….but trust matters a lot……
Omkara : I trust shivaay to the core…..But u know what he is not only my bhai, he is choti maa’s son, chote paapa’s pride, my mom’s relief, dadi’s pet, anika bhabhi’s love and in this house all admire him…He always stood as the great wall for me…..But always I can’t depend him…..as I know already he has lot of responsibilities……I prefer 2 be alone right now as I have 2 fight with myself…..So I can’t make any one in trouble…..
Gauri : Then u have to trust in urself ……

Omkara : What do u mean ??
Gauri: Omkaraji….u can’t trust god for certain reasons……U can’t share ur prblms with ur bhai though u trust him because u don’t want 2 trouble him…..If u want u can share it with me, but I think I will never be able 2 win ur trust…..[gauri’s eyes are filled with tears, omkara stares her 4 a while] But…..omkaraji……u can trust ur own heart…..Ur heart will never cheat u…….
Omkara gets mesmerized with gauri’s statement…..He came close to gauri and hold her hands…
Omkara : What did u said ?
Gauri : I said u have 2 trust in urself only….

Omkara : After that u told abt 2 trust heart…..why ??
Gauri : Omkaraji……our heart is like a mirror only, it will reflect what we are…But mostly we used 2 ignore what our heart says……Because we can’t change what destiny has written… Some times intentionally we will avoid our heart because situations will make things worse…. Our eyes may get cheated, but heart will not cheat…….[gauri remembers her wedding with omkara and omkara recalls the moment when ishana asked him 2 trust in heart only] Omkara : Ishana used 2 say that “dil par yakeen karo “……..I listened my heart during that days, but…..Any ways….leave it……gauri…..gauri…..

[Gauri was still in her thoughts only, so she didn’t re-acted…Omkara touched her shoulder and stared her……Gauri regained her consciousness back and stares Omkara with teary eyes……] Omkara ; I think we have 2 sleep now……

Gauri : Haa…..omkaraji…..[gauri is abt 2 rub her tears, omkara takes the hand kerchief from his pants pocket and handovers it 2 gauri] Wipe out ur tears and sleep….Gud night….
[Omkara lie down on bed and turned his face against gauri and covered himself with a blanket…..Gauri holds the hand kerchief towards her face and runs 2 wash room….] Scene shifts 2 washroom…..Gauri stares her own face on the mirror of wash room and looks @ the hand kerchief……Gauri’s view….”Gauri kumara sarma……..Omkaraji…….rewarded u a hand kerchief…….He didn’t wipe out ur tears with his hands, but he has given his kerchief 2 u…….Ur jatadhari hippy pati’s first gift …..Hand kerchief…..[gauri waved her hands through it and literally cries] Gauri…..whenever u will cry, u should feel happy because omkaraji’s handkerchief is with u 2 wipe out ur tears…..He has shown his concern towards u, no matter he doesn’t loves u, no matter u can’t become like ishana…..But he is with u…..gauri…..

When he was crying he lie down on ur body…….For gauri that moment is enough…….My love is not bounded in any terms and conditions….I will never ask omkaraji 2 love me and will never tell that how much I love him……But from heart I will always love him, because my heart is full of u only……For gauri omkaraji is her pati as well as parmeswar…..May be I can never be ur better half, but for me u are my world….my trust, my heart and my …….{gauri kisses on the hand kerchief and burst into tears only…..}
After a while she washes her face and moves forward 2 bed for sleeping……She finds omkara sleeping by holding ishana’s anklet in his hand……Gauri smiles with teary eyes…..She lie down on the pillow and stares omkara with teary eyes….Bgm…

“Tere hu tere jo chaahe kasam le le

Mujhko humrahee too apne gam de de
Saree umar hai mujhko dard judai ka sehna
Raste me khoyee hai manzil mere
Mere saath jayengee mushkile mere
Chaaha hai tujhko chahunga har dam
Marke bhee dil se ya pyar naa hoga kam “ [film – mann ] plays……
Scene – 4 [@ Hall, oberoi mansion] Next day morning, oberoi mansion’s hall is decorated with flowers…..Anika and gauri are engaged in preparations for satya narayan puja….Shivaay stares anika in romantic way and anika feels shy…..Gauri notes it…..

Gauri : Bhabhi……I will manage it….
Anika : No gauri…..Lot of work is pending….U will not be able 2 do it alone…..
Gauri : Bhabhi…..believe me I will do it……
Anika : Are u sure ?
Gauri : Haa….very sure……bhabhi…..I think bhaiya needs 2 talk with u……
Anika : Nahi ….I mean there is nothing like that…….His kanchi eyes always taunts me only, don’t bother about it…..
Mean while shivaay enters it and stare anika…..
Shivaay : Oh Jhansi Ki Raani……My eyes are taunting u, right ?? In room what was u saying u described this eyes as……
Anika : Shivaay pls……gauri is with us…..

Shivaay : So what , U are my wife and I don’t feel shame 2 say it frankly……[shivaay comes close 2 anika] Anika : Shivaay ,…nahi……I am feeling michmichi……[anika manages 2 run away and shivaay runs behind her saying “anika……no….i will catch u….anika…..” Their cherishing romance made gauri 2 smile with wet eyes only…….] “Gauri…..” [ gauri turned back and gets surprised 2 see her maa with jhanvi] Gauri : Maa!!! [gauri rushed and hugged her maa] Maa : How are u beta ?
Gauri : Am fine maa…..and tell me how u came , I mean u didn’t told me earlier…..If u would have informed earlier, I would have come 2 station 2 pick up u…..
Jhanvi : No need of it…..gauri…..This is oberoi mansion…..And here are so many servants…..
Gauri : But maaji….my maa has arrived and how can a servant will pick my maa ??
Maa : This is what damaadji also told 2 me……

Gauri : What ? I didn’t get u maa……
Maa : Omkara himself arrived @ the railway station 2 pick me……Yesterday night I called u…but u didn’t attended my call and daamadji said that u are in wash room……..When I told him abt my arrival he said it is his pleasure 2 see me in this puja only…..And u know what when I reached here, daamadji took the luggage and told me that am like his maa only…… Gauri beta u are so lucky 2 have a caring person like omkara as ur husband……Am feeling so happy for u …..{maa kisses on gauri’s forehead and hold her hands….}
Mean while gauri’s eyes went on omkara……Omkara was placing luggage in the hall and was walking towards gauri’s maa only……

Omkara : Maaji….U may feel tired after the long journey….U pls take rest……I will show ur room….Pls come with me…..gauri….pls bring coffee for maaji…..[Gauri’s maa smiles and goes with omkara…..gauri is surprised with omkara’s behavior……] Jhanvi : Gauri…..my son is good from heart….But I don’t know why he is not able 2 see ur heart ??

Gauri : It’s alright maaji…..Omkaraji is a gentle man…..And no matter whether he loves me or not I am able 2 find his pureness of heart and I promise you that I will always stay with him…..forever……All I need is ur blessings only……[gauri touches jhanvi’s feet] Jhanvi : Gauri!!! [jhanvi makes gauri 2 get up and hugs her with wete eyes] God bless u beta…….
Gauri : Maaji…..I have 2 meet maa…..
Jhanvi : Haa….beta….Go and talk with ur maa……
Gauri : Ji
Gauri goes 2 kitchen for making coffee…..Before she could enter an unknown person who has covered his face with a vamp time mask stops her by showing knife……
Gauri : Knife!!! Hey sankarji….[gauri gets scared] Rudra : Bhabhi…..it’s me rudy only……[rudra removes his mask and smiles] Gauri : Devarji aap!!! [gauri smiles]

Rudra : Mm….Bhabhi u smiled @ last…..I know yesterday onwards ur mood is off…..But now u will not be a cry baby……ok….That credit goes 2 rudy only…….By the way why u came 2 kitchen ?
Gauri : My maa has arrived….I have 2 make coffee for her……
Rudra : Why bhabhi ? U can tell it 2 any servant…..He will make it….
Gauri : No rudra…..My maa loves 2 have coffee made by me only……
Rudra : Bhabhi for ur kind information , this oberoi kitchen is made for oberoi brothers shivomru only….Ladies are not allowed 2 enter here…….
Gauri : But rudra….Maa has arrived after a long time….How can I disappoint her ? Pls….
Rudra : Ok ….But one condition ….
Gauri : What ??

Rudra : U have 2 make coffee for me and o also…….Agreed ?
Gauri : Haa…..devar ji….
Rudra : Bhabhi u call me as rudy only…..no need 2 call devar ji and all…..
Gauri : Rudy…..it sounds so cutee [smiles] Rudra : Why not ? Am the super hero and cute guy in the whole oberoi mansion..[rudy shows his mr.cool style] Gauri : Rudy u sit there….I will make coffee….
Rudra : Ok….bhabhi [rudra leaves]

Gauri makes coffee for omru and maa and gives one cup to rudy and goes 2 guest room
Scene shifts 2 guest room
Omkara arranges the bed for gauri’s maa…..Gauri comes there and stands outside the room and overhears the conversation
Maa : Arrey, why u are doing these things, daamadji ? I will arrange it….
Omkara : Maaji….U are our not only my guest , but also like my maa…..So it’s a son’s duty 2 take care of his maa very well….Am I right ?
Maa : Haa beta….But…….[omkara stares gauri’s maa…. Maa felt how accidently she addressed her son in law as son only…..] I mean damaadji…..
Omkara : [omkara moves closer 2 maa and smiles] Maaji U have called me beta……I don’t have words 2 express what am feeling right now……I need ur care and blessings only…….[omkara touches gauri’s maa’s feet] Maa : What are u doing, daamadji ??

Omkara : Am touching my maa’s feet only……Maa u don’t bless ur son ??
Maa : Stay happy always…beta……{maa blesses omkara with wet eyes and omkara gets up and smiles} Omkara….I need a promise from u…..
Omkara : Just order me maaji….Am ready 2 do anything 4 u……
Maa : Promise me that u will never leave my daughter gauri ……U will always live with her forever……[gauri’s maa extended her hand towards omkara]

Omkara : Maaji u asked me some thing for the first time and how can I deny it ?? I promise u that I will never leave gauri……We will stay together forever……
[Gauri feels heavenly with omkara’s statement…..She smiles with wet eyes and enters inside the room…..] Maa : Gauri……[gauri rushed near her maa and placed the tray besides the table….., maa holds gauri’s hand and stares her] Am feeling much happy for u beti……Sankarji listened my prayers…..
Omkara stare them with for a while and is abt 2 leave….
Gauri : Omkaraji……Ur coffee…….[gauri handovers coffee 2 omkara, omkara receives the cup and drinks coffee……]

Omkara : Excuse me…..I have some work….I have 2 leave……[omkara leaves] Maa : Gauri…..come here…..
Gauri comes closer 2 her maa…..Maa waves her hand through gauri’s forehead….
Maa : Gauri….everything is ok ?
Gauri : Haa maa….why u asked so ???
Maa : Relax…I just asked like that only…..Beti, damaadji is a nice person….He loves u a lot, won’t he ??
Gauri simply shook her head and pretends to be fine by giving a fake smile only……
Scene shifts 2 the hall …..All preparations are over and panditji has arrived for puja…….
Panditji : Now the newly wedded couple have 2 sit in front of the hawan kund…..
[Gaurika stare each other’s eyes for a while….] Rudra : Bhabhi…..O…come fast…..and sit …….
Dadi : Haa puthar….billu tell him 2 sit….

Shivaay : Yeah dadi….om….gauri…this is the family gathering …..Guests has also arrived here… I hope u guys understood it…..
Omkara : Shivaay!!!
Shivaay : Om..please…..
“If omkara and gauri has problem in doing puja, then no need 2 worry, we will do it”
All turned back and shocked 2 see tej and swethlana together …….Omkara stares them in anger…..Gauri and her maa get panic……

Jhanvi : Tej…..what’s wrong with u ?? Why are u doing this 2 me ??
Tej : Well ur son said me 2 stay with my fiancee cum future wife,…swethlana ….And am doing that only……Within few days we will be getting married….So if gauri and om has problem in attending this one, as a fresh couple swethlana and me are ready 2 do puja, what u say swethlana ?
Swethlana : Why not, we will do it with full of devotion ………Omkara…….By the way after ishana’s death omkara has almost went 2 mental imbalance only……He doesn’t hears any one and he has not trust in God also……
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!! U are talking 2 much…..How dares u blame my omkara……U have lost ur brains balance, not omkara…….And u don’t feel shame 2 hold a married man’s hand like these ??
Tej : Pinky, U are not supposed 2 interfere in my personal space……Swethlana is my fiancee and she has full rights 2 hold my hand……

Pinky : Waah!!! Jethji….U said points…then what about jethaniji…..She is ur wife…ur better halfs…..And ur lifes partner…..What’s her spaces in ur lifes ??[pinky hold jahnvi’s hand] Tej : Pinky!!!! {tej shouts in anger}
Jhanvi : What happened Tej ? She raised the right question only, what’s my space in ur life ?

PRECAP : IF THE HEART WHICH REFLECTS U IS BROKEN, U WILL FIND HARD 2 FIX IT…….

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16 Comments
  1. HEART TOUCHING MIND BLOWING EXCELENT BEAUTIFULL AWESOME SUPERB???

    GAURI RUDRA PART IS CUTE SWEET AWESOME

    GREAT JOB RENIMA DI????

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot uf from the depth of my heart

  2. I am literally crying di, my eyes are teary??
    I could imagine omri conversation, omg how are you able to write soooo beautifully, you are really talented. Seriously you should become a professional author or a script writer?

    Gaudy scene was nice too, really want to see how will omri unite.

    Thanks for mentioning me in every chapter, love you lotzzzzz?

    1. Renimarenju

      Oh shraddha….see whenever i writes naa…i don’t know why it becomes bit emotional….See i intentionally don’t want 2 make any one cry…..but sometimes it will be more emotional as what am writing is …it comes from my heart only……So it’s really difficult 2 put words…..sorry for making u as a cry baby…….and writer…..omg!!!! such a big compliment……see am not a writer …..haa sometimes i use 2 write some lines or stories …..since it portrays my heart’s feelings only…….And u can find so many people in tu who are extremely talented and are giving gud ffs….like samm, shivika,luna,kehkasha,kavya…..they all write better than me ……so the compliment u gave me ….they deserves it dear, not me….. And glad u enjoyed rudy-gauri ….see that was just 2 give something new ….and it reached u properly…..which means a lot…… Thanks 4 commenting

  3. It is awesome dii.. Omkara caring nature and guari monolog is awesome….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks nikki

  4. Yashu

    Awesome yaar….gauri n rudra’s part was so cute…it was fab…thanx 4 sending link…waiting 4 nxt….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks yashu

  5. Di..not fair yaar..ek toh aap itna emotional epi likhre…nd den mujhe bolte don’t b cry baby???????…

    Coming to epi.. it was fabulous…each nd every dialogue portrayed emotiemotions very well…nd I liked omkara nd gauri’s mom convo…post nxt part soon….

    di here is a request will u post jungle sequence amid gaurika…..i mean if possible.. plzzzzz..z???…

    1. Renimarenju

      jungle sequence…..i think it will not suit the stroy’s plot….see jungle scene happened beacause of that kaalo thakur naa…..so if i have 2 write jungle scene….then kaali thakur must come on this one…..It will be then a hate-love track of gaurika…..only……and it doesn’t make any difference from show and my ff….and i want 2 show though gaurika marriage was situational, like the show omie is not so much rude 2 hate gauri …haa from heart he is not able 2 accept gauri…but he has a soft corner for her….and some times he will feel anger also….it depends on the situation…..this is what i want 2 show…..ok…..and swethlana vamp kaafi hein…..and u want gaurika scenes naa……upcoming episodes u will find it…..slowly omie will start sharing things with gauri……ok…..pls wait for it….and emotional…..kyaa kare….laakh koshish karti hun but kuch naa kuch emotional har episode mein aati hein…thanks

      1. No problem Reni di….u write according to ur story…nd thanks for explaining me ur plot????….
        Nd update nxt part soon…i don’t hv patience????…
        Nd sorry for such an out of the track demand..?????…

      2. Renimarenju

        Saku……no need of sorry and all….u expressed ur wish and see it’s matters on the writing level of a person naa…that’s why i explained it,…..ok…..and thoda patience rakho….aaj sun hai….i will get time….and certainly will update it by today….ok…..

  6. B.k.maha

    Superrrrrrrrrrr didi… I loved it….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks maha….if u don’t mind pls send ur ff’s links, so that it will be easy for me 2 read dear……today is sun and i will get time also…..

  7. B_isha

    I am seriously sorry for late comments di frankly speaking I don’t have to words to describe what to say it’s beyond my knowledge di I gave you appropriate nice name emotions ki queen. ….. I was able to visualise the scenario ….

    Love you di
    Thanks for links
    Pleasure to read

    1. Renimarenju

      Bshama….no need of sorry yaar…actually this is a new work from me…so i just thought 2 send links for u so that i will be able 2 know ur view on it…..am feeling glad 2 see ur comment dear….thanks a lot

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