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Date pe chale??- short os by yaashi

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Date pe chale???
“Oh god pls help me!!! This is so difficult. My tigress is super angry on me!!!” Kabir was Grind To A Halt.
“What to do now??? She isn’t replying calls,msg. I need to change her mind anyhow.my darling is very understanding.she will understand!!!” He assured himself.
Actually ,kanchi were together but secretely.
sanchi wanted to go in pub with her besties ishagya,veer and others .so veer was her partner for that .obviously kabir was super jaleous and he gave sanchi some extra work ,so that she cant go with them!!!
They left without her and now his cute sanchi was turned into silent tigress for not letting her go with tbem..
” khud to kabhi bahar nahi le jata,aur jab main khud kahi bahar jaane lagti hu ,to aa jata he muh uthake” she said to herself,but he listened the first line.
She left the place stamping her foot on floor.
Here with kabir,
“Kabir beta,ab kya karega tu??” He panicked..
” toh tu usko bahar leke ja!!!” Popped up angel kabir.
“U mean date??” Kabir asked curiously.
“Par what if she says no???” Appeared Fattu kabir.
“But why would she say no??”kabir questioned.
“To tu ek kaam kar, koi 35-40 saal ki ladki type aurat pata le aur sanchi ko bhul ja” laughed angel kabir like devil…
So finally kabir decided to take her out on date..

After sometimes,
“Ummm,get ready into something nice” he commanded her.
“Q?? Tumhari shaadi hai??” She fought back!! He startled at her.
“Ummm,we are going out” he grinned!!
“Like really??” She scoffed! And concentrated her files,thus avoiding him completely!
“Ohh,common ! I know u r dying to go out with me!” He flashed his 32 theeth..
She gave him ‘accused glares’ .
” so ,wear ur red dress!u look killer in that !” He pointed out.
“Ohh,so finally u got time from ur KP” she fleer..
“KP? who is KP??” He asked confusingly..
“Oh,so u dont know??wanna know,right ??then go and spend time with ur kp! Dont show me ur face” she barked at him.
“Just shut up ! What is this new drama Kp! ” he asked.

“Ur KhadoosPanti. Go and stay happily with it? I m not coming anywhere,becoz i hate uh!!” She said looking deeply into his eyes..
“How dare u say that??” He grabbed her by waist and pulled her toward him ,thus incresing proximity between them!
“And how u dared to give me unnecessary extra duties!!” She punched him back!!
He trailed his hand little down on her nape and she gasped little.
“How dare u shake my concentration every time?” Uttered he.
She moved little back.
He again came closed . ” how dare u inroad my dreams every damn night??” He was husky.
” how dare u invade my thoughts like nothing?” He said in low voice!
“And how dare u put urself in my heart that to without my permission” he completed ..
“God!!god gave me permission to do that!!” Omg she is clever enough ..
“Umm,i asked u out sometimes ago!!” He said looking in her orbs.
“And i m saying yes!!!” She engulfed him in tight hug..
And the atmosphere filled with mist of their love..

Thank u dear readers …….

25 Comments
  1. Niyaaa

    Hey yashi awsome mindblowin.. ur os r allways too gud sweet cute..just like u.. Seriously always make me smile u can imagine m showing full of my battisi…. Actually abhi h nahi mere battisi wisedom teeth nahi aaye h… Hehe.. I loved u used fattu kabir instead of devil kabir… Nd sahi kahan angel ne 45 yrs ki lady ko pata or khush rah.. Kyunki hamara kabir to KP se baaz aane se raha..hehehe. I just loved it from core of my heart.. Awsome keep it up nd post more more more.. Lovv u tc

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u niyaa dear.luv u too

  2. Tooooooo gd.. Just lv it sooooo much..

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx dear

  3. OMG. It’s short but damn gud.

  4. awww so cute dear

  5. Riyarocks

    yaashu dear….I had all my 29 teeths out(3 wisdom waale aani baaki hai…haha)….yaar tum ko kya kahun….kamaal, dhamaal, bemisaal……..too good…just too good……..luv u loads sweetieeeeee……….

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx priyanka dear..

  6. Priyanshipp

    khud to kabhi bahar nahi le jata,aur jab main khud kahi bahar jaane lagti hu ,to aa jata he muh uthake” she said to herself,but he listened the first line.
    To tu ek kaam kar, koi 35-40 saal ki ladki type aurat pata le aur sanchi ko bhul ja” laughed angel kabir like devil…
    Ur KhadoosPanti. Go and stay happily with it? I m not coming anywhere,becoz i hate uh!!” She said looking deeply into his eyes..

    Superb dear. I just love ur os.

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx for liking it dear.

  7. RuCh23

    😍😍😍 Yaashi sweetie you always write such sweet os’ I just loved 😘😘😘

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx ruwani for liking it

  8. Amazing…. I was laughing all the way

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u amnaa

  9. Khamoshi

    Yaashi dear… no words are left to praise ur work dear… fab one again… too cute to handle..😀😁 love ur OS dear..plz post next one soon

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx mitali. Glad u liked it. But i m not sure that i will post something new now. Bcoz i m facing same problem ,lost interest. This is probably my last post on savitri devi..

      1. Khamoshi

        Ab main bhi tumhe lamba choda bhashan du? Main continue kar rahi hu to tum bhi karo..not fair dear 😉😬😅😆😂😄

  10. Riyarocks

    Yaashi dear, I’m commenting this on behalf of Anuradha…Wonderful … Awesome.. I m speechless yaar… Very good story well executed… Great yaar…

  11. Abhilasha

    Really amazing…. So finally sanchi man gyi date k liye…..superb dear loved it!!

  12. Rajnandini

    Kai bhaari aahe yaar!!!!! Me tar dole visprun pahat hote……tujha hai os tar saral jaaun majha rudhayala sparsh karun aala!!!! Khup khup chan….keep it up dear…..

  13. Aww….so cute OS Yaashi dealer just like u…..post next one soon….lots of love to u my sweetie.

    1. It’s dear.

  14. Jessicca

    Awww this was so cute… Amazing… Outstanding

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