Our Dark Past Love (Chapter 7)

Our Dark Past Love
Chapter 7

In case if someone missed out on the previous chapter, here’s the link below:

Chapter 6

Okay, before you all start reading this I’m telling you all that this chapter is a long update so, be ready with your popcorn, snacks and everything you need. Moreover, this chapter is a mix of two voices so, be carfeul.

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Sonakshi (POV)

I had been searching for Elena all the while who had managed to disappear from the parlour. I wondered how she would’ve come here because the car was parked in the garage itself. “This girl really troubles me”, I thought and continued searching for her when someone pulled me aside. I was going to scream when the person covered my mouth and shifted his hands to my waist for tightening his grip on to the hold

“Dev”, was all I muttered to myself. I knew his touch and he was there to trouble me again. “Why on earth is everyone troubling me!”, I thought and slowly opened my eyes to find him grinning at me. He caressed my face and said, “I wonder how do you manage to look beautiful always!” I tried removing his hands with a disgusted look on my face but, he was least bothered. He tightened his grip and asked, “Pretty, will you accompany me to the dance floor?” I narrowed my gaze at him and wondered what had got into him that he was behaving so flirty and cheesy. I rolled my eyes and said, “Of course …” Before I could complete, he kissed my left cheek leaving me shocked and dragged me to the dance floor.

He held me by my waist and pulled me closer as the music started, it was a slow one. I looked at him unbelievably and after a fraction of seconds looked away. He loosened his grip on my waist as I feared he’ll let me go off again. I quickly wrapped my hands around his neck rather hesitantly but, I was scared to lose him. He passed me a satisfied smile and positioned his hands on my waist again. I looked at him and was lost in his deep brown eyes when he turned me around holding a finger of mine and quickly pulled me closer. My hands rested on his shoulder while his on my waist. I wanted to stay with him and hold on to him tighter as to never let him go away. But, that wasn’t what my mind wanted me to do. “Shall I listen to my mind or heart?”, I thought looking into his eyes which carried various emotions. He lifted me up and slowly brought me down. The entire while I was struggling to chose between what my mind preferred and heart. He made me stand and slowly pulled me closer to continue with the dance but, my mind took over my heart.

“Just stay away”, I mumbled and pushed him away. He looked at me shocked as I ran away from the dance floor towards the washroom. I locked myself inside the washroom and looked at myself in the mirror. I looked at the mirror and a faint smile covered my face but, soon it faded away. It wasn’t so easy for me to forget my past and that’s what always scares me from getting close to him. I walked close to the mirror while the tears rolled down my cheeks. “Sona, you can’t be so weak. Come-on. When he didn’t care once for you, why do you care? You need to stay strong and not let him make you fall weak”, I thought and gently wiped away the tears.

I applied a bit of foundation and making myself presentable enough went outside not allowing anyone to notice my absence. I walked towards the crowd and found out that the dance was over. I heaved a sigh of relief and walked towards the crowd when someone entwined their hand with mine. I looked up to find Dev standing beside me. I tried freeing my hand from his grip but, every time it only led to him tightening the grip with a gentle touch. He was talking to the guests as if nothing happened and everyone was staring at us noticing the proximity between us. I let out a faint laugh withing myself and thought, “How can you even think that Mr. Dixit would care about what you feel? Did he ever care that today he will?” I plastered a smile across my face and talked to everyone forgetting everything.

After a while Mr. Dixit was busy talking to an employee when I quietly freed my hand from his grip and walked away to talk to the other employees. I called the waiter and helped myself with a soft drink. I was talking to the employees when Mr. Dixit came and stood beside. I was about to go away when someone tapped on my shoulder from behind. I turned around and found Elena standing behind me looking completely gorgeous. “Di, I want you to meet someone”, she said. “I’ll meet them later after the party. Not now. By the way, you look absolutely gorgeous”, I replied. “Thank you!”, she replied passing me a gentle smile and added, “Di, please! Now itself.” “Elena, not now. Let the party get over”, I replied but, she dragged me away with Mr. Dixit following us. “Why was he following us? It was between us, the two sisters. God! Can someone please give him some sense to not interfere in one’s personal matters”, I thought looking at him and looked away after a fraction of seconds.

“Di, meet him”, Elena said and tapped on a guy’s shoulder who was dressed up in a jet black suit. “Excuse me”, he said excusing himself and turned around to face us while Elena said, “Vicky, meet di.” “Di, this is Vicky. Do you remember I told you that I met him in London? He came back to India just a few days before and I couldn’t make both of you meet each other because of some or the other reason. He’s Dev sir’s brother”, she added as me and Vicky looked at each other shocked. “Bhabhi?”, Vicky muttered. “Di. Not bhabhi”, Elena replied. I turned around to go away when Vicky repeated, “Bhabhi?” “I’m not your bhabhi anymore”, I replied and quickly walked out of the venue.

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Vicky (POV)

“Bhai, what’s happening?”, I asked but, he ignored me. “I’ll get on with you later”, he replied and walked away to talk to others before I could question him anything else. “Vicky, why are you calling my sister bhabhi? She’s my di”, Elena said. “Don’t you know bhai and di were in a relationship in their college?”, I asked while she looked at me widening her eyes. I snapped in front of her eyes and asked, “Don’t you?” She nodded her nodded saying no and said, “Please tell me how they got together. I want to know how everything happened.” “It’s a long story. We’ll talk about it later”, I replied and before she could request me once more I walked to away to help myself with the dinner.

It was around 10:30 when everyone had left. I had assured Bhai to take care of everything here and he could go home and take rest for a while. “I’m not your bhabhi anymore”, were the only words pondering in my mind. “What did bhabhi mean by that? Aren’t bhai and bhabhi together now?”, I thought when someone shook me making me come back to reality. I looked around and found Elena standing beside me with her arms folded across her chest.

“Why didn’t you go back home yet. Come, I’ll leave you”, I said and was about to take out the keys from the pocket when Elena held my hand. I arched at my eyebrows asking what while she said, “No need. I told di that I would be staying at Arushi’s house for the weekend.” “Okay, let me drop you there atleast”, I replied and freeing my hand took out the car keys.

She gave me a fed up look and asked, “Are you dumb? I am going to stay with you for the weekend.” I looked at her with widened eyes and within a fraction of seconds pulled her closer to me. “Baby, you’re too naughty. You want to have our first night before our wedding itself? I don’t have a problem though but,..”, I said while she gave me a hopeless look. “Shut up. Leave me”, she said while I tightened my grip and said, “We can’t go at home. Shall I book a honeymoon suite?” She pushed me away and while blushing said, “Shut up. Book a hotel room because you’re going to tell me Dev Sir’s, sorry Jiju and di’s love story.” “Elena, you’re going home right now”, I said but, she snatched away the car keys from my hand and replied, “Book the hotel room.”

“Elena, you’re going home right now”, I said chasing her trying to snatch the car keys from her. “No way. We aren’t meeting for a year if you’re not telling me their love story”, she replied turning around to face me. “Emotional blackmailing”, I muttered while she let out a soft laugh and both of us walked towards the parking lot. We settled ourselves in the car and I booked a hotel room for the two of us. “Tell me”, demanded Elena while driving and I kept my phone aside.

“Bhai was an all rounder right from the beginning. He always participated in all the events conducted by his school as well as his college. Even though this has nothing to do with the beginning of their story, I’m just telling you so that you don’t have a problem in understanding things later”, I said and looked at Elena who replied, “Continue.”

“One day, Bhai was late for his classes and as soon as he entered the college he rushed towards the building. He was in a hurry and didn’t bother to notice anything that was around him. Suddenly, he bumped into a girl and both of them fell down with him on top of the girl. They looked at each other for a few seconds and before Bhai could get up, the girl pushed him on the ground and stood up. “Can’t you see and walk?”, she asked dusting off her jeans. Bhai quickly stood up and replied, “I’m in a hurry.” He quickly ran away before the girl could say anything. “Mr. Obhodro”, she muttered to herself and walked away in the opposite direction.”

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Hello, everyone! Thank you for all your comments and support. I tried replying to all your comments individually and hope I’ve not missed out on anyone. I’m extremely sorry if I did.

Okay, the upcoming chapters are going to be in the narrative voice now unless the past gets over. Hope you all won’t get confused.

Anyways, how was this chapter? Let’s see what happens in the upcoming chapters. Please drop down your views on this chapter below. I’d be eagerly waiting to know them. Suggestions and criticisms are always welcome as they’ll help me improve but, no abusive language.

Best regards,
Ria

47 comments

  1. Nikki

    Ria! !!!!!!! U r really fantastic. …
    I just luv it.😘😘😘😘😘😘……
    But,I read eagerly to know about their past,but,u fade all my interest .
    Plz,don’t do this to me.”I mean don’t discontinue “Plz!!!
    I luv💖💖💖💖💖💖 this wonderful epi.
    So,Plz!post sooooooooooooon😍😍😍😍…..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Nikki di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, I am extremely sorry for not including the past in this chapter and disappointing you. I fell kind of bad about it. But, I promise the next chapter onwards it surely would contain only the past.

      I have started working on the next chapter. Hope I’d be able to finish it up soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  2. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Awesomeeee❤️😍😘❣💖💕💓💟💞💘💗💝😋💝💗💘💞💟💓💕💖❣😘😍❤️😍
    Post soon❤️❤️
    Eagerly waiting to know the past💘
    Love love❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ayushi,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I’ll be able to complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  3. dolly

    Hey ria. It was as usual fantastic. I was imagining all the sequences you wrote.😊😊😊 why don’t you post daily? Do you know how desperately I wait for you to post the next part.? Even now I am eager to read the flashback soon. 😊😊 so when are u going to post the 8th part??? Waiting!! 😊😊😊😊

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Dolly,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, erm.. I’d surely like to post daily but, my schedule doesn’t allow me to do so. But, if you all actually want me to update daily I’ll be shortening the length and updating you all which I guess would be unfair.

      Awwiiee.. you seriously wait for my update? That means a lot. Thank you so so much, dear!

      By the way, I am working on the next chapter. Hope I’ll be able to complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  4. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    Superb and fantastic……💋💓💕💖👍💟😘💗💋💕❤💖💕💓💓💟❤…….U simply nailed it…….vicky-Elena convo was cool…..😂😂👍……..the way dev and sona a attended the party ……😘😍💋💋❤💞💘😘😍……..loved each and every bit of episode …….💕💗💟💓😍😘❤👍💞❤💖💞💟💖😅

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Maleeha,
      Thank you so much, dear! I am glad you liked this chapter. Hehe..Even I liked the Vicky-Elena conversation.😂😂

      Anyway, I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I’ll be able to complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  5. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey jaan,
    This was simply amazing 🙂 I seriously loved the way you portrayed the emotions and scenes. I can’t wait for the past to unfold. 😊 Also update soon 🙂

    Loads of Love & Support ❤❤❤❤❤

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much, dear! I am glad you lied the chapter and also, the way I portrayed everything. The past would be continued from the next chapter so, stay tuned.

      Also, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  6. Heshine

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria. …….. 😍😙First of all I should say that u r a amazing writer….. ….juz amazing….!!!!u juz make everyone fall fa ur writing skill…..and juz u did fa me. 😍😍😘😙☺☺I juz wanna knw dear…..hw could u write such awesome episodes….!?? Ohh…!!! And coming to ur ff….!!! Ohh ohh I juz don’t want to end the reading as it was very interesting 😕😕but unfortunately it was ended… No prob will wait fa it….!!! I loved each and everything u wrote….😍😍😘😗😙juz imagined…!!😍😍its really amazing yaar….!!! Seriously I don’t have enough words to praise it…!!!💞💟sona’s dilemma, Dev’s love towards her….!!! Aww..!!!💞💞💝💜jz fantabulous…!! And vicky-elena is no less….they juz made it. !! And the past. ..waiting for it……💝💘💞💛so please do update soon…the next one… As soon as possible my dearie….!!!💟💞💜💘💞And also have no prob with the past being in narrative voice…!!!😉😉😂😉juz want it ….😙😙😘😍
    Loads of love…. 💓💞💝💖💕
    Heshine….

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Heshine,
      Thank you so much, dear for this beautiful and precious comment. I couldn’t possibly have asked for anymore. I am glad that you liked the chapter.

      Well, I seriously can’t imagine someone liking my writing skills. But, I am pretty glad learning about it. I am sorry to end it there but, would be continuing with the past from the next chapter.

      I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  7. Vinya

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode…. I’m eagerly waiting for the next one…pls post it asap…..keep writing and keep smiling ☺

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Vinya,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter.

      Well, I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  8. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    This was amazing!! And yes we think alike.. I loved their dance very much😍😍 and your descriptions always upto the mark👌👌 why did they separate when both love each other so much😭 very eager to know their past do post the next one soon.😗😗
    And surprise for you, you know I read your tei ff is everything really so perfect as it seems to be. Omg!!! That was too good❤❤ I loved it so much that I really can’t explain… Seriously your writing skills are bae😍💋💋
    Thank you so much for all your wonderful ff’s hatts off!! Keep it up..
    Love you💕
    Post the next one soon…😎

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Maria,
      Thank you so much, darling! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Haha..masterminds.😂😂 I am happy that you liked the dance as well as the descriptions. Erm.. let’s see what had exactly happened before that led both of them to their on separate ways inspite of the intense love between them.

      Haha..really? You read – IS EVERYTHING REALLY SO PERFECT AS IT SEEMS TO BE? – ? I cant imagine that even though you aren’t a TEI fan you read it. Well, that ff is really close to my heart. I am glad you liked that one. Writing skill, BAE? Like, seriously? Thank you so so much, pretty? It really means a lot to me.

      Haha..Thank you for reading all of them too!😘

      Well, I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I can finish it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Aarti (di?),
      Okay, please let me know whether you’re older than 16 or not, please? Hope you won’t mind.

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I can finish it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  9. Aashu

    I m speechless dear…….u r .mindblowing …….no word to describe what a amazing writer u r ???????? May GOD give u every success u want ……………..love u sweety …..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Aashu (di?),
      Will you let me know whether you’re older than 16 or no? It’s okay if you don’t want to, I won’t bother you.

      Well, thank you so much for this lovely comment! I’m glad you liked the chapter. I can’t really express my gratitude towards this comment. Thank you so so much!!

      Loads of love.❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Taneesha (di?),
      Will you let me know whether you’re older than 16 or no? It’s okay if you don’t want to, I won’t be bothering you.

      Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest.

      Loads of love.❤

  10. Erina

    |Registered Member

    So its warning from my side alsoalso😂😂😂😊😊😊😅😅😅😅 swtheart dont be shocked after seeing my long comment ……after a long tyme I’m writing such a ong comment bcse u forced me to do that but seriously bolu to ab mai jaldi krti nhi hun nd thanks swtheart for informing me about post …… 😘😘😘😘😘🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 WowWow swtheart u r awesome, commendable, fantastic, mind blowing nd what more to say u r 😘😘😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💟💟💟💟💞💞💞💞💞💞💝💝💝💝💝💝💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖seriously I don’t know how to express what I’m feeling write know I’m speechless no no u made me speechless swtheart 😊😊😅😅😅😅😄😄😄😜😜😜😜😜😜😘😘😘😘😚😚😚I wanna ask u only one thing where were u aap pehle kyu nhi aaye ?????? Nd swtheart believe me even I can’t believe ki how u don’t believe ur self u r truly commendable 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
    Now coming to ur epi it was hillerious matlab what a awesome epi …. D way u potrayed devakshi dance each single moment nd step was awesome nd I 😍 that part where sona wrapped her hand around devs neck …. Nd truely enjoyed each nd every moment whether its of devakshi or of vina(vicky +elina)……
    Nd what this u ended at that point….. U know how much i was eager to know what happened between them but to my bad luck u ended 😥😥😥😩😩😩😭😭😭😭😭
    Post soon swtheart i’m dying to know what happened between devakshi nd why vicky is calling bhabhi i guess kahin devakshi ki shaadi to nhi hui h na 😟😟😟😰😰.. Are yaar baby don’t do this plzzz post soon nhi to ur dii will definitly become mad by assuming what had happended 😂😂😂😬😬😜😜😜😛😛😛😝😝😝😝so know i guess u understand what impcat of ur writting skill had on me. Love u swtheart for giving me such a awesome nd amazing epi 😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Nd don’t be shocked by seeing erina such a long comment 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😉😉😉she is mental she can do anything…. 😂😉😉😉😛😛😜😜😜
    Okay bht ho gya bakbak now see u soon swtheart till then take care nd u know na ur dii loves u nd eagerly waitingggg for next part so post soon
    Love u 💓💓💖💖💖💟💞💝

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, dekho, pehle main TEI ke page mein hi likh rahi thi sirf. Aur phir KRPKAB ke kuch din baad yahan aa gayi.

      Frankly, aap bol rahe ho toh the chapter was good lekin, surprisingly there are certain chapters which I do like and this is one of them. I loved that part where I wrote about Sonakshi’s dilemma. I’m happy that you too liked that part.

      About the past, I’m really sorry for ending it there. The next chapter onwards you all will get to read only the past. Aise nahi bolte. You’ll be alright because I’ll update you with the next chapter soon.😀

      Well, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  11. Rockzzzzzz

    |Registered Member

    Hiii..ria,I am sorry that I comment in few of ur episodes..but from now on I will try my best to comment in ur every episode…i have read most of them though😥….anyways coming to this episode,it was fantastic…loved it😊…finally the truth gonna be out,just waiting to know what dev had done and ya just loved elena…😊😎😍….she was super cool….sona too was great but dev was behaving odd,i mean how could he just behave so heartless with our sona but u know still i loved him,his flirty and chessy character😍….post asap…because i can hardly wait😊😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Rockzzzzzz,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad that you liked this chapter. It’s alright pretty. I do understand that you might’ve been keeping busy so don’t worry about it.

      Awwiiee..You felt Dev was behaving heartless? But, what to do! He has to show some attitude to regain Sona’s love. Hope you understand the point.

      Well, I’m working on the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  12. Niki645

    |Registered Member

    As usual, awesome Ria di!!!
    How much ever I praise your writing , it’s never enough!!
    You really write so well…
    I love it so much…
    It was too good!!
    Post next one asap😘😘😃

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Niki,
      Thank you so much, dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Awwiiee.. it means a lot to me. Thank you so much for this bunch of appreciation.

      Well, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  13. Alka

    |Registered Member

    Thank u …. Ur writing is awesome …. I was a silent reader but ur ff is just so fabulous ….I always wait for ur update 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 plzzzzzzzz update soon
    Love u😘😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Alka (di?),
      Please let me know whether you’re older than 16 or no. It’s okay if you don’t want to tell, I won’t be bothering you.

      Anyway, thank you so much for this beautiful comment. I’m glad you’re liking my fan fiction. The fact that you’ve commented here being a silent readers makes me even more happier and I can’t express my gratitude for that.

      Really? You wait for my update!! It really means a lot. Thank you so so much.

      Well, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

  14. Shalini

    RIA…!!!! it was commendable….😄😄😄…awesome….👏👏👏👏…!!!!
    LOVED IT to the core…..!!!!!😚😚😚
    Keep it up….👍👍👍

    Love❤
    Shalini..😊

  15. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria di!
    Firstly, I’m terribly sorry for my late comment! Had been sooo stuck in my school work! And, from now on, since I’ve gotten school again, I might be commenting late. Please don’t mind though…but, I’ll surely try my best to comment on every episode!
    Now coming to the episode, it was superb! I mean it was completely magical! I actually fell for your words! The way you wrote everything was…aaaahhh…so wonderful! Sonakshi’s POV is always my favourite, along with Dev’s! But surprisingly, I loved Vicky’s a hell lot today! The episode was really awesome! And, I really mean all these words! It was simply majestic! Trust me, your writings are a great treat to the audience!
    Now, after getting to read such an incredible post, I can’t help but say ‘post soon!’
    Besides, how’s your hand now? Hope it’s perfect by now!
    Loads and tons of love to you!<3😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    P.S- Please don't mind if the comment turned out to be lengthy!

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Anshi,
      Thank you so much, sweetheart! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, this comment actually means a lot to me and I really can’t express my gratitude towards it.

      Moreover, it’s okay if you comment late. I do understand that everyone out here has a busy schedule but, taking out a bit of time for reading my piece of work really is something appreciating.

      Anyway, I’m glad you’ve been liking Sonakshi’s and Dev’s POVs. Also, it brings me more joy upon learning that you liked Vicky’s POV too.

      Well, I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

      P.S.: You domt say sorry for gifting me. Lobg comments are supposed to be my gifts.❣

  16. Erika

    |Registered Member

    hey ria hi awesome writing skills dear u write soo good fantastic read all in 1 go all were awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee so update asap

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Erika (di?),
      Erm..would you mind letting me know if you’re older than 16? If no, then it’s perfectly alright, I won’t be bothering you.

      Well, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked my ff. Seriously, you read it all in a go? It really mean a lot. Thank you so much!😀

      I’m working upon the next chapter. Hope I can complete it soon and you all can read it at the earliest. Do stay tuned.

      Loads of love.❤

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