Dark Destiny (Spin off Epi 2)

Dark destiny:

Recap: Here
(Link to last epi my one take of the episode WEDNESDAY 27th July (thank you Rusky for correcting my mistake))

Song to listen to during the update- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BiQIc7fG9pA (I hate you I love you by Gnash, best to listen to when Yuv is angry)

Yuvraaj flunks himself on his bed, his room dark, cold- eerie… He sits up and sees images flashing before his heavy eyes… Images of Suhani, memories of the past, her words constantly ringing in his ears…
Yuv: WHY SUHANI! WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME! I CANT!
He clenches his fists and stands infront of the make-up table that suhani used to use- and swipes everything off the table and punches the mirror continuously, blood mercilessly leaving his pale knuclkles…
Yuv: I HATE MYSELF! I HATE YOU SAMBHAV! I HATE YOU SOUMYA! I… i.. DONT HATE YOU SUHANI! I ACTUALLY LOVE YOU!
His uses his bl**dy fists to clear the beads of sweat away from his tired face… leaving marks of red- to him symbolising the worthless love he is holding for the person who will never come back to his life- leaving him in torment…
He storms out the room, everyone gathered by the door to spectate the act cause….
Pratima puts out her arm to comfort him, but realises the trail of blood he is leaving…
Sharad (in complete terror): Yuv… Yuv… Yuv…
He doesn’t pay head to his words, but walks off to the front yard and slams the door behind him…
He is alone, leaving only the raindrops to communicate to him, hugging his shirt when they seep in- for him they are helping as they are camouflaging the endless river of tears leaving his eyes. He stares up to the sky- allowing the rain to kiss his sorrow away- praying for a life better than this…
Suddenly his phone vibrates, he goes to pick it up when the watery blood washes over it… He doesn’t care when he notices Suhani’s name flashing…
“Yuvraaj, How is Yuvaan? Please tell me if he is causing any problems… Thank you…”
He tries to suppress his smile that is forcing itself onto his face… His fingers having a mind of their own immediately texts back…
“Yuvaan and problems? Never… Don’t mention it… Call sometime- maybe even visit he would be happy…”
he hits the send button and walks inside- calmer, it seems Suhani is his medicine a cure for happiness, a melody playing in his head to make sure that he stays sane…
Everyone confused at his sudden change in his behaviour- just then Yuvani runs to him..
Yuvani: Pa..papa… Are you okay?

Yuvraj beams a smile at her: Better then ever my princess (with that he plants a kiss on her forehead walking back to his room)
Pratima: Is he okay… What is happening to him…
Saurab: Don’t worry Ma… Sharad will have this sorted… He is the one who is always putting things together- he is our glimpse of hope…
Pratima nods, but dadi just glares at the shut door of Yuv’s room…
Meanwhile at the Shrivastas….
Suh: Sambhav! Give my phone back! I was only asking Yuvraaj about Yuvaan!
Sam: NO! YOU ARE NOT TALKING TO THAT MAN! THAT MAN WHO CAUSED SOO MUCH PAIN! IM CALLING HIM!
Suh: NO! I TEXTED HIM FIRST (she stretches out to get the phone from Sam’s grip but he firmly pushes causing her to stumble backwards hitting her elbow on the chair behind her- she stood there awestruck)
Sam: TUM! DON’T TEXT MY WIFE EVER!
~ Yuv: Excuse me?
Sam: DON’T ACT DUMB! YOU HAD THE CHANCE BUT YOU NEVER REACHED YOUR MANDAP IN TIME, NOT MY FAULT YOU RAN AWAY (he puts on a sadistic smirk)
~Yuv: Are you sure that I ran away or did someone kidnap me?
Sam: OH DON’T MAKE UP STORIES YUVRAAJ! NEXT TIME I SEE YOU EVEN LOOK AT SUHANI I WILL-
~Yuv: You will what Sambhav? Tell me? Will you kidnap me again? Ohhh im sooo scared, look im crying…
Sam is numbed at the thought, during this time suhani grabs the phone…
Suh: Yuvraaj… I’m sorry! He gets angry really quickly…
~Yuv: s…su…suh… Your voice is shaky… did he do anything to you…
Suh quickly cuts the call and looks up at sam lost in thoughts, she moves away from him- but can’t as her mangalstra is stuck to his button she pulls herself away and it shatters into millions of tiny beads awaking Sambhav from his deep thoughts.. His eyes ascanning each bead bouncing off the cold floor- still shocked he lashes out at suhani…
Sam: CAN’T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT! LOOK YOU BROKE THAT NECKLACE!
Suh: i’m… I’mm sorry… I got tangled with your top…
He hears the sound of thundering footsteps and realise what is happening…
sam: Offo Suhani (he strokes her arm) it’s ok… mistakes happen…
Suh: kya?

Lata: Suhani? What happened? Why was Sambhav shouting?
Suh: oh… I broke the mangalstra by accident…
Lata: SUHANI THAT IS A BAD OMEN!
Suh: Ma, you know I don’t believe in that…. bt for you I will get it fixed tomorrow…
Pankaj: But suhani…
Sam: Pankaj suhani is right… we got tangled… so we will get it fixed…
They nod and leave…
Sam: I’m sorry for shouting I got angry…
Suh just nods intimidated and scurries of…
Sam to himself: Suhani… You are making this very difficult.. tomorrow I will make sure everything will change…
Suhani runs to her room…
suh: what is happening! Did Sambhav really push me and shout at me… How did Yuvraaj recognise my fear… Am I even meant for marriage?
She falls back on her bedand reluctantly shuts her eyes- running away from the horrors that may sneak into her life….

Precap: Same as the episode (when they meet at the Jewelry shop with the goons)

Guys I started to relate it back to the episodes as the SSEL series is improving slightly… Just slightly… but I will add my own twists to it! Hope you enjoyed, I will be updating my OS soon… Ty for your support… 😀
Ly all Aqsaah x

22 comments

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Shilppy it’s only bcos of u I updated x u always put a smile on my face and encourage me x ty for lifting my mood up in my most difficult times I couldn’t have wished for a better di 🙊😘😊

  1. AFANFICWRITER

    |Registered Member

    This is soooo Amazing Aqsaah, the words were so complex, descriptive and visual and the story line was so much better than the original serial. I loved loved loved it! You are a fabulous writer Asqaah, its a pleasure to get to read your work. I wish my ff’s will read like yours, because yours are to good! xxx

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Oh Shreya 😭❤️ as I told u before I got my inspiration to write like this from you and some books that I read… I am glad that u enjoy this spin off x ty for ur amazing support it means TRILLIONS 💖👑

      • AFANFICWRITER

        |Registered Member

        Its alright after all your support to me is priceless, thank you so much for it 🙂 How could someone not enjoy this beautiful piece of writing!? Did you read my seventh episode? I wasn’t sure if it was very good and I was wondering whether you liked it…

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Oops did I not comment on the 7th epi, there have been days when this website is on maintenance so I get confused wheter I have commented or not x but thanks for remiding me x I will comment ASAP X

      • AFANFICWRITER

        |Registered Member

        Dont worry at all Aqsaah its not about the comment, i was just wondering whether you had enjoyed it because you opinion is invaluable to me. I too have been noticing that the website keeps on going on maintence and its rather annoying… thanks for the support Aqsaah xx

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Ty Rusky x I will try, probably updating my OS first then This and maybe my Findind my angel FF if I have time x ty for ur infinite support x

  2. Sanaa

    Sorry Aqsaah di for the late comment. Actually I was busy at my school and I was really tired that I fell asleep. Anyways ur master in making ffs and today’s part was outstanding…I’m sure that the next epi will be really intersting to read.

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