DARD DILON KE..A swasan ff(prologue)


Scene -1:swara-idk how u look,what’s der in ur heart, wat u think abt me,but m sure abt my feelings.Since d day mom & dad fixed r alliance “srf tum mere dil me rehte ho”…. Sanskar-mom & dad cn never be wrong wid their decision. M sure Swara wud be perfect for me m so desperate 2 meet her…

Scene-2:Sanskar-I like u Swara..Swara-(blushes nd liking dwn fidgeting wid hr fingers) I..wo..um…I..mean.. I like u 2..sanskar smiles& both head downstairs when der fingers brush against each other making sanskar smile coz he did dat intentionally whereas Swara is shocked nd later smiles..

Scene-3:Laksh-Ragini here in public I officially dump u..Ragini-(teary eyes) laksh..how can u?? What did I do?? Plz tell me I’ll rectify my mistake but plz dnt leave me I’ll die widout u..L-I don’t care just stop bothering me and if u evr lovd me den LEAVE!!!!..

Scene-4:At mandap Swara and sanskar r taking 7 rounds of d holy fire nd making promises 2 each other when all of a sudden AP(Sanskars mom)-Ragini!!!!.. Scene-5:Sanskar-mom nd ur family will suffer fr my sis condition. And ur sufferings are gonna star frm 2day.Aaj mein hmari rishta todta hoon.aur iske saath Ms Swara subhramanyam mein tumhare har sapne ko todta hoon,tumhe todta hoon..Swara sits wid a thud like a lifeless body and stops responding 2 their words…LEAP AND A NEW START….so guys here’s d prologue I’ll soon start updating d chapters..

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  1. KrsytleS

    Interesting dr

  2. Praju

    waiting eagerly

  3. Mica

    uhuuuu… so swara takes revenge ?

    1. Dobbykim

      For dat I’ll HV 2 stay tuned wid my ff ..

      1. Dobbykim

        I mean you’ll have 2 stay tuned wid my ff 2 knw what Swara does

  4. nice..interesting..continue soon..tc..

  5. Abirsha

    Interesting….. Post soon…. But pls update only in english…. ?

    1. Dobbykim

      Thanks and I’ll surely update the chappies in eng except for a few phrases..u know they make a nice impact in Hindi a bit more effective

  6. Dobbykim

    Ohhk guys so I’ll post soon next chapter probably 2day or 2morrow fr sure.If u have any confusion wid d prologue den do ask me m there 2 clear all ur doubts and one more thing in Scene-5 there’s a correction in sanskar’s dialogue its-“u and ur family” not “mom and ur family”

  7. Arshaanya

    Continue soon

  8. Vyshu10

    interesting…upload soon

  9. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Awsm.. Update soon..?
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

  10. Mahjabeen

    Awesome dear

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