Her dance made me fall for her Episode 11

Episode,
Everyone is excited for the engagement especially Dev, why not? Today he was going to propose Sona, love of his life. Elena comes on stage,
So are you guys ready to witness the most romantic engagement?
Sona is shocked by her words, the most romantic!
Elena: so here I call upon the most handsome bride groom Mr. Dev Dixit and the most beautiful bride on the stage. Everyone claps for them. Sona again has tears in her eyes. Elena runs towards Sona and says come we will also go on the stage.
Sona: its ok we will stand here.
Elena pulls her along with her to the stage. Dev stands opposite Sona and Tanya. Tanya moves back. Sona is puzzled, Elena and tanya smile.
Dev takes the ring and comes forward, he kneels down, takes Sona’s hand in his
Sonakshi Bose, we have always fought with each other, even today I remember the first time I saw you, the way you danced, your dance made me fall for you! And the first time when I met you as always we had clashed with each other and I held you by your waist. And I was lost in you. And you know after you started your dance class, I visited you everyday just to see you, see you dancing! I saved you from those goons who were trying to hurt my Sona. And then the most difficult phase, your accident, because of me! It was really very painful. And when you were finally alright, I treated you so badly! I am so sorry for that, I want to tell you that I cant live without you! I love you so much Sona! I really love you! Will you become Mrs. Dixit?
Sona had tears in her eyes, she was really crying a lot, she nods in yes.
Dev gently places the ring in Sona’s finger. He stands up and wipes her tears and hugs her tightly, she hugs him too. Everyone claps for them. Dev kisses her hair
Niki: Are bas bas bhaiya bhabi!! Yeh sab apne kamre mai karna!
Everyone laugh! Dev and Sona break their hug and feel embarrassed.
Elina: Now Sona make him wear this ring.
Sona: No I cant marry you!
Dev: Why?
Sona: Tanya…
Tanya: Why cant you marry him, uh?
Sona: But you were going to marry him na..
Tanya: That was all our plan Dev and Sona! I will tell you. Ishwari aunty had told me that you both love each other but Sona was not realising it. So they took my help to make you both realise your love for each other! Even Asha aunty and Bijoy uncle, Elena, Saurav are involved in our plan.
Sona looks at her parents with a shocked face. Asha, Bijoy, Elena and Saurav smile.
Dev is shocked as well! : Maa…
Ishwari smiles.

Sona: but.. I mean how? I mean I am unable to understand..
Elena: tujhe kuch samajne ki zaroorat nahi hai(you don’t need to understand anything)
Now make him wear the ring fast.
Elena gives the ring to Sona. She is happy but still has tears in her eyes.
Riya: Ab bas bhi karo bhabi! Kitna rogi! Make up kharab ho jayega! ( Now stop it bhabi, how much will you cry? You will spoil your makeup!)
Sona: Hmm.. Dev wipes her tears. Sona makes him wear the ring. Everyone clap for them.

Sona feels uncomfortable and she feels dizzy, she holds her head and is about to faint when she is held by two strong arms.
Dev: Sona…. Open your eyes. Everyone gets worried.
Asha: Sona..
They take her to Dev’s room. Dev calls the doctor. Some time later, the doctor checks her,
Doctor: She is alright now, these are the medicines to be given to her. This happened due to stress, please take care of her and she should stay away from stress, she will gain conscience soon.
Dev: Thank you doctor, he goes to leave him out.

Everyone gets busy in the preparations of marriage except Dev who was sitting with Sona holding her hand waiting for her to gain conscience. She slowly starts opening her eyes, Dev gets happy and kisses her hand. Sona smiles looking at him. She tries to get up when Dev helps her. Dev smiles seeing her.
Dev: I have hurt you a lot na? that’s why you took stress and now see what is your condition! I am only responsible for this, I am so sorry sonakshi!
Sona: First of all its Sona for you! And secondly its not your fault, I also behaved rudely with you na! I am so sorry for that.
Dev: No sona, its all my fau..
Before he could complete one soft hand is placed on his lips.
Sona: Don’t ask for forgiveness! Now we both are together then what is the sense of all this? Haina?
Dev nods his head and kisses her hand. Sona shies.
Dev: one thing! You have not yet said those three magical words .
Sona: Which three words? Sona blushes
Dev: don’t act smart as if you don’t know!
Sona: I really don’t know!
Dev: Acha!! Ok then bye.. he gets up to leave
Sona holds his hand and says Dev…
Dev: leave me Sona, I have some work
Sona: is it more important than me?
Dev makes a puppy face,
Sona: Acha ok, I will say
Dev smiles cheerfully,
Sona: umm.. I.. I
Someone knocks the door, sona smiles, dev shows an angry or sad face!
Dev goes and opens the door,
Asha: How is my sona?
Sona: I am fine maa.. maa thank you so much for all this!
Asha: are.. you are my daughter, I will obviously do this for you na! if not you then for whom I will do this? Pagli.. Asha has tears in her eyes, sona wipes her tears and makes her smile.
Dev smiles seeing their bond.
Dev: if all this emotional talks are done then can I spend some time with my Sona?
Sona blushes hardly.. asha smiles,
No damad ji.. you cant meet her!
Dev: What?? But why??
Asha: I am just joking.. you be with your sona.. I will do all the preparations for marriage!
She leaves, dev locks the door.
Sona: What are you doing Dev?
Dev: locking the door!
Sona: but why? We are not married yet.
Dev doesn’t reply and moves towards her, sona gets down from the bed and moves behind,
Sona: Dev…
Dev: hmm… dev keeps on moving towards her. Sona feels butterflies in her tommy when he comes too close. Sona tries to move back but realises that she had already touched the wall. He pins her to the wall. She tries to go from her left side, but Dev keeps his hand on that side, she tries to move from the other side but he blocks her way again. Sona could feel his breath, he moves closer, sona closes her eyes. Dev kisses her soft eyes, he kisses her both cheeks, Sona blushes, he goes to kiss her soft rosy lips, they share a lip lock, a deep one, and they depart to take breath. Sona hugs Dev tightly and says I love you Dev, I love you so much! Dev says I love you too Sona!
The episode ends.

So done with this episode! I know it was not so long, but I tried to do my level best. Hope you all liked it! Thanks for those who are commenting, but I feel that there’s something missing in my story as the comments have decreased. If such is the case please let me know I will try to improve my skills. So please do comments! 🙂 Love you all

44 comments

  1. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    Maria……😍😍😘😁😋😊😘💘💋❤💖😍😋..superb one….and ur writing skills r perfect dear…..💖❤😋😘😘😍💘…….u need no improvement………and finally dev proposed😂😂😁😊…..awesome………and amazing

  2. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Wow Maria di! The episode was simply FANTASTIC!!!!
    Aawwwww…Dev’s proposal was so unique..like it all seemed sooo unplanned to Sonakshi 😅😅
    The way Dev took care of Sona was soooo cute😍
    I can imagine the look on his face when someone knocks on the door before Sona was about to say the three magical words…soooooo damn adorable😍😍😍😍😘😘😘
    Overall, I loved the episode to the core and every word was unique in its own way and expressed the best out of emotions 🙂 🙂
    Do post soon di!
    Hugs and kisses,
    Anshita😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  3. Maria

    |Author

    Hey guys,
    I want to say one thing to you all! I take out time from my schedule just to provide you with some love Story! But it seems that you all are not liking the track or maybe there’s some other reason! So I just want to say that say frankly whether you all want me to continue or not! Otherwise 15th maybe the last episode☺

    • Erika

      |Registered Member

      hey maria no pl. dont end this ff it is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i loved it and i m sure that there are many other silent readers who love your ff so pl. dont end it and your writting skills are perfect

    • AnShIta

      |Registered Member

      Hey Maria di!
      I understand your situation and trust me, even I would’ve e thought of same if I didn’t get many positive responses. However, as long as you’re writing, there’ll definitely be a few loyal friends including me to read and comment your posts. Please take this point into consideration and then make up our mind.
      A sincere request from a fan😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘

    • Erina

      |Registered Member

      Yeh maria no no no don’t think to stop it dear. I love ur writting skill nd ff sorry that i haven’t commented on this epi but dear i was busy in navratra thats why. But seriously i’m madly in love with ur ff d way u described dev nd sona character, their love for each other, their fight, concern everything i superb. Trust me u r awesome writter so continue dear don’t stop their r far more stories that u can write dear nd i don’t think that their is need to tell u as u r awesome nd commendable writter itself. Don’t break my trust by stoping this.
      U know what whenever i wish aur want to see d epi 100 nd more than that nd when i share this with writter of ff god knows why they stop their ff. I wonder is they not understand what i have said aur something like i have said this to Maleeha lecturer ff vali, sakthi stolen heart vali nd know u also dear. Ab to lgta h mai kisi ko apni wish aur desire share hi nhi kahungi 😂😂😂😂😂. Plzzz dear its humble request not stop this ff plzzz plzzz plzzz nd if now also u think to stop then its my bad luck to once again lose one more awesome writter. Nd as devakshi confess their love i also want to say to u i love u to swtheart 😍😘😘😘💞💕💕💕💕
      With loads of love
      @Erina

      • Maria

        |Author

        Awwww I’m so pleased seeing your comment! You know what I was actually waiting for your comment and finally you did! I’m so glad that this is one of your favourites! I’m really very happy! Your comment really made my day☺ you want 100 episodes omg!! That’s practically not possible for me😂😂 but still I will keep entertaining you by my ff. I will try to write as much as possible! I love you too darling! Thank you once again! 😘😘😘

    • Erina

      |Registered Member

      Awww i’m happy to know that u r looking or waitingggg for my comment swtheart sachiii seriously i was not knowing that but yaa u r definitly one of my favourite writter swtheart nd its my pleasure to have u so no need ur thanks required…..
      If u want to thanks then don’t leave my hand by stopping ur ff nd sachiii 100 epi jyada ho gya kya 😂😜😛😜😜😛😛😛😛kya kru its all ur fault tmhre ff ne mjhe pagal jo bana diya h 😛😛😜😜😂😂
      With loads of love nd till then take care swtheart

  4. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Waah re Maria😍😍 An episode filled with emotions, romance and cuteness❤ so finally dev and sona become devakshi💃💃 that engagement scene was wonderful🙌 haan tou I was correct all were involved in that plan.. cool😎 last part!! Oh God😍😍 feeling goosebumps🙈 Zabardast special episode❤❤
    And don’t end it so soon yaar, it’s just start of their love story give it some more time😌 plus nothing is missing in ur fiction, it’s complete package🙌 so don’t end it in a hurry please🙏

    • Maria

      |Author

      Ya you were correct! Thank you so much appi☺☺ yaya I’ll not end😅 thanks for telling that there’s nothing missing.. I’ll surely not end it! And one more thing, it’s up to you totally ok! Actually I have started 2-3 shots on my other favorite show edkv, so only *if* you wanna read it you can tell me, I’ll send you the link once it’s posted!☺ im telling this to you only because you don’t follow this serial but still you are reading my articles which is a great pleasure for meme! That’s why I’m telling you 😜 it’s totally your wish☺😅

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