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My Crush: ek simple si love story TS (shivika) shot 3

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Hi ishqbazians I am glad u liked it really really glad coz 27 comments unbelievable my almighty. ….btw Thanks thanks a lot thank u so much for commenting I know u are really excited for the next part coming to it
One more thing to clear is… it is 5 shots or may be one more as per ur wishes.and separation is needed for reunion

Shot 3
Om is rolling on bed and laughing out louder and louder
Shivay :hey just stop it om
Om (hiding his laugh):what’s going on ha …..crush vrush …that too shivay Singh oberoi
Shivay:what to do om that girl makes me crazy
Om:really! !!!….k then make me talk to her
Shivay:but y
Om:because I wanna talk to that crazy girl who made shivay fall for her. …..u r so studious and crush…make me talk to her
Shivay:k tomorrow…cutting him
Om:no tomorrow vommorow today itself that too right now call her
Shivay: but she may be sleeping right now
Om:please ha u both just had a talk and now she slept…don’t worry man I will not steal her from u
Shivay:cool bro …..wait
Calls anika
Om(whispers ):put on speaker….
Shivay resist at first later on om’s insistence he does so
Anika:hey shivay I know u r also thinking about me but it doesn’t mean u will keep on calling me my shiv
Om giggles

Shivay:anika….she cuts him in between
Anika:ok dear don’t be angry now ..I m sorry my crush .my dear…my….
Om keeps on giggling
Shivay cuts her:anika just listen to me ur call is on speaker my brother om wanna talk to u
Anika:oh my….shiv u should have informed me earlier
Shivay:u didn’t allow to speak me
Anika:btw ….hiii om Bhaiya
Shivay giggles listening ‘Bhaiya’
Om:Hi anika…seriously ‘Bhaiya’
Anika:y can’t I call u that as ur elder than me
Shivay again giggles
Om:anika see every girl doesn’t say Bhaiya to a boy elder then her….by the way calling me bhaiya may leave u in loss
Shivay was confused
Anika:how ??
Om: because if we meet and u found me more handsome then shivay. ….means….bhaiya….I hope u understand
Shivay gives him death glare
Anika:it’s okay shivay don’t give him death glare
Om shocked as how she knows about it
Shivay just smiles

Anika:btw om Bhaiya i will not find anyone more handsome then shivay may be not even his brothers. ….let me tell u one thing om Bhaiya ur brother is one piece antic not found anywhere. …and coming to his character that’s why I have a crush on him …….(to shivay) shivay u r the best
Shivay(all the while had a killer smile on his face):anika I will call u later bye…… (putting off speaker)I crush u
Anika (blushing):me too bye
Cuts the call
Om:u r really lucky man
Shivay:jealous ‘om Bhaiya’
Om:not jealous my bro …..happy for u
They share a brotherly hug and om departed to his room
Shivika slept thinking about each other

Next day
Noon
Shivay calls anika
Shivay:what’s my crush doing
Anika:thinking about her crush
Shivay:ani I wanna meet u
Anika:me too
Shivay:let’s go on a date tommorow
Anika:that’s fantastic idea
Shivay:okay done
Anika:but one request shiv
Shivay:what my ani
Anika:take some romancing tips from om Bhaiya and Rudy
Shivay:do you think I am not romantic
Anika: yes
Shivay:so u will meet tomorrow to romantic Singh oberoi
Anika :let’s see
They cut the call
Shivay was thinking in his room
Yup that’s right I don’t know even A of romance …should I take tips from omru …ya it’s okay I will ask them
Just then omru enter his room
Ru:what’s up Bhaiya
Shivay:guys I need help from u both
Rudra:wow shivay Singh oberoi needs our help
Om:what’s the matter shivay
Shivay:actually omru I am taking anika on a date tommorow
Omru:what ….really!!!!!!
Shivay:guys relax …..
Om:in that case u really need help shivay
Rudra:coz Bhaiya even don’t know meaning of romance
Om:let’s start..firstly give her some flowers like rose or her favourite ones
Rudra:next arrange a special place for date like a romantic beach or a restaurant but remember in that place u must be given some privacy
Shivay:thank u my bros..
Rudra:and remember one thing Bhaiya one kiss u must take and come
Shivay:seriously!!!!!!….rudra
Om:yup he’s right
Shivay:but i don’t know how to kiss
Om:seriously shivay should we teach u that…..I know u r sincere student so don’t know about these things but that doesn’t mean that we should teach u
Rudra:kissing is a thing we should learn ourselves bhaiya…..if it was a girl I would have thought her but to u…..not at all bhaiya
Shivay makes a sad face
Om:don’t be sad shivay. ..do one thing…
Shivay:what????
Om (handing him his phone songs):Google baba ki jai ho…Google baba ki jai ho
Shivay’s face lightens

Next day
Morning
Anika’s home
A parcel comes from amazon. Everyone was bit confused as no one has ordered anything. Anika was about to open the parcel in front of everyone. …..she gets a text from shivay “‘get ready my ani it’s time for romance”‘ then she understood so she took the parcel to her room ….everyone questioned her …..she said that she has ordered books.

Later in evening
Anika was getting ready in her room.
Just then ishana enters
Anika was wearing a gown of upper part maroon velvet and lower part was dark red with having pearls over it
Ishana (whistles ) :what’s going on
Anika (scared) :nothing ishu
Ishana:it’s okay ani u can tell me
Anika (thinking if she tells her she may get a secret sharer friend and even a helper):tells her about shivay everything
Ishana:really!!!!not bad going….ani…let me help u
Ishu helped her .anika became ready and escaped from house.when anyone asked about her ishu said that she went to tuition classes

At someplace
It was a beautiful beach with a table along with two chairs kept over it a fruit Champaign bottle and with few perfect roses
There by stood a man in maroon three piece suit looking sizzling hot ,dashing,and of course handsome. ..it was none other than our cutie SSO waiting for anika
Just then anika came.shivay was completely mesmerized seeing her she was wearing the perfect gown gifted by him above with a beautiful bun and few strands of hair peeping around her temples.she looked mesmerising pretty
Shivay couldn’t take his eyes from her.
But came to senses however

Anika came and hugged shivay as she missed him a lot.shivay tightened his hug.
Breaking hug
Anika:hii shivay
Shivay took rose from the table
Shivay:come my beautiful lady have a seat
Anika blushed

They both sat comfortably there…..had a light talk ….had drink …..shivay by now was only in his white shirt and maroon pant

Shivay: come let’s wet our feet
Anika:yup sure
They went near the water held each other’s hand tightly to balance. Now they were standing in water half drenched.suddenly it started raining

Anika:my God. …come shivay let’s go

And she was going but a strong hand stopped her.she became hell nervous Shivay came near her turned her towards him.opened her bun .anika held his shoulder out of nervousness. She looked too hot in open wet hair.shivay was now loosing himself completely.he moved closed towards her and pulled her by her waist.she dug her nails in his shirt. Shivay now brought one of his hand near her face and started caressing it.she closed her eyes.now shivay’s hand came to her lips and started caressing it. She started breathing heavily.taking no more time shivay brought his lips so close to her that they can feel eachother’s warmth breath.now he connected his lips with her .he sucked her lower lip sensously.she brought her one hand among his hairs and started caressing it and with another hand she made her nails dug deeper into his shoulder. He was sucking her lower lip and bit her lip.she moaned in pleasure while she started enjoying it and sucked his upper lip.now shivay started to suck her upper lip wildly and she his lower lip.the kiss was becoming more wild and passionate that she opened her mouth and allowed him to taste her every bit corner of her mouth and he enjoying it sucked her tongue later he opened his mouth and she tasted him.she was enjoying tasting him as he was tasting very good ………..enable to breath at the last stage of lacking oxygen they broke their kiss unwillingly, unwillingly and unwillingly
Anika blushed to the hardest seeing her and his condition and just run away. Shivay was himself shocked at his actions but was so much happy because of their first kiss

Precap:separation

Sorry I didn’t write about separation in this part but next part it will be pinky promise I will give
please give the same response for this update too really if got less comments I will loose interest and may not update the next short.
Luv u all so much my tu friends

With big big big boxes of love
Mahi

44 Comments
  1. I commented previously and I am again saying the same that I am a big fan of your skill to write with ease and flow and provide a long lasting impact…Keep going..And sorry for the spelling mistake mahi

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks thanks alot Alex it really really means alot for me

  2. Nithu

    Amazing..waiting for nxt part…

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  3. Awesome….

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  4. Manu24

    amazing πŸ˜€

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  5. This is a complete package ..romance fun comedy and Rona dhona (jo separation pe hoga)
    Wow yar.. You reminded me of my school time crush .!!!❀❀
    Awesome epi mahi!!!
    Next wala epi..please post asap !!

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks thanks alot for commenting mansi

      1. Hey Mahi..when are you gonna post the next part ??

      2. Mahi_

        it takes sometime as I am having my exams now

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  6. Ruksy

    Loved it 😍😍😍😊😊😊

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  7. Awesome episode…

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  8. amezing episode…mahi

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  9. Rithik

    Awesome

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks alot

  10. Its awesome….. But I hope that you’ll unite them…😊

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear. …Wait for next shot

  11. Awesome ep Mahi can you plz give the link of your pervious episodes in your next post.

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear. ..Yup sure

  12. JanviSingh

    Wooow yr… Now I feel like I’m having a crush on this story… It’s just adorableπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear janvi. ….

  13. It was superb dear love it i have read all parts of ur Ff really fantastic dear no words for u πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜’

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear …really means alot

  14. Yvonne Codner

    Thank you soooooooooooo much..really enjoyable

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  15. Lisaaa

    lovely..

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  16. Awesome…

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  17. Awesome

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

  18. Vincy

    Awesome but separation its gonna hurt

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks alot for commenting

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks alot

  19. Shivika

    Amzing……fab…..

    1. Mahi_

      Thanks dear

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