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RECAP-GOPI RECEIVES AN AWARD!!…
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@BAYLEEF RESTAURANT

Gopi hits Ahem’s lookalike…
She gets shocked!!…
Gopi: Ohh…Mr modi…we r meeting after that 2 years right…but what r you doing here!!…
Man: Excuse meh…
Gopi: And where’s your so called wife Mansi Modi…
Man: Excuse me listen!!…
Gopi: Go to hell…Mr modi go to hell with your ego n your family!!…
Man shouts: Chhupp!!…Ohh madam…i am not your Mr modi…
Gopi: Whaatt??..
Man: Madam ji…i am Jaggi…Jaggi singh…
Gopi: Jaggi…jaggi singh…

ON THE OTHER HAND…

Ahem n Mansi is shown in another table…
Ahem is shown slightly in a youth look wearing tshirt n jeans…
Mansi: Thankyou darling…
Ahem: Your welcome baby…i wish Ahaan could come with us…
Mansi: Yah i know he’s in hostel…
Ahem: Baby…wanna have some thing…
Mansi: Ofcourse…i will have a French Chicken soup..
Ahem: Waiter…two french soups…
Mansi: Ahem…why did u brought me in this City…its so boring…
Ahem: I know it darling…but i was bored staying in USA for two years…so i decided to visit here once…
Mansi: Really…
Ahem: Nothing changed in this 16 years…Its still the same…only Rajkot is looking more like Mumbai…
Mansi: But there she stays…
Ahem: Who that Gopi modi!!…who cares!!…
Mansi: Oh come’on…pls dont name her…
Ahem: Why…i am sure that stupid illiterate is praying in Mandir…to her so called Kanha ji…
Mansi: Oh god Ahem…she didnt changed in two years…wow…
Ahem: Yah i can predict…she is wearing a fade n torn saree…i think my so called modi family is on road!!…
Mansi laughs…
Ahem: Meera n Vidya…my two sensible daughters of there murderer mom…they r so stupid…i mean they can also stay with me n had a fresh life…but no i think…
He laughs…
Ahem: I think they got married to any gawar illiterate family…
Mansi: Well said!!…
Ahem: Bcoz that useless jigar…my so called cousin bro…has not so much status…that they will put her in a big proffesion…well i dont no anything about here’s economy…
Mansi: And what about ur mom n paridhi!!…
Ahem: Oh come’on…that lady is not my mom…she always trusted her gopi bahu…and if i say about paridhi…then she’s smart…i think she left modis years ago…due to there economic structure!!…
Mansi: And your baa..
Ahem: Baa…i think she’s no more…she died!!…due to..
Mansi: Ofcourse Burhapaa!!…
They laughs evilly…

ON GOPI’S TABLE

Jigar talks to some executives..
Meera is in busy in gossiping with Paridhi…
Kokila: Where’s Gopi??…
Sahir: I think…she is in washroom…Dont worry Dadi…
Samar: Yah may be Barimom is busy in any phone call…
Kokila: Okay!!…

NEAR WASHROOM

Gopi: Sorry…i believe…actually you exactly look like my ex husband!!…
Jaggi: Kamaal hain madam…
Gopi: Sorry…i am extremely sorry…you may go…
Jaggi: Okay…Bye!!…
Gopi: Bye!!…
Jaggi leaves crossing Ahem!!…
Jaggi in her mind: Beta jaggi…there are seven faces in this world like you…
He delights n leaves…

Soup comes…
Mansi: Ahem soup!!…
Ahem: Waiter…can i get a newspaper…
Waiter goes to bring newspaper…
Mansi: What do u want to see in news…Modis downfall…lol??
Ahem: Come’on Mansi…they r my family…i have to see that they r Alive or Dead!!??☻
Mansi: Okay look…
Waiter gives him newspaper…
Mansi: Noo…first I…
Ahem: Sure…
She snatches the newspaper n reads…
Ahem: Mansi read loudly…
Mansi reads: TWO ACCIDENTS ON STREET….A DOG KIDNAPS…LOL…GOPI MODI GETS HONOURED BY T10 AWARD…ROSE DAY…Whaattt??…Gopi modi gets honoured!!…
Ahem: Whaaaattt??…That some other Gopi modi…
Mansi reads: Gopi Modi…The business tycoon enlists her name in India’s top ten business companies….Today at 12 pm she got honoured by T10 Award…After crossing many hurdles in her life…She is been honoured by our Chief Minister…Now Gopi Modi’s turnover is around 1700 crores…due to her hardwork she’s in these stage…we should salute her n pray for her success..
Ahem: Whaatt??…What rubbish is this Mansi!!…
Mansi cries: I…I dont know this…
Gopi’s photo is shown at the front page…
Ahem snatches the paper n reads…
Ahem fumes: Noooo…
He kicks on the table..
And the hot soup falls on this pants…
Ahem: Aaahhh!!…
Mansi: Ahem…r u okay!!!..
Ahem: Shut up!!…I have to go to washroom…
He leaves…
Mansi: What the hell is happening…how can that gopi!!…

Gopi gets into a call…
Ahem runs to washroom…
He comes out in rage…
And hits Gopi…
Gopi: Hello…Cant you…
Ahem: Gopppiii!!…
Gopi: Ohhh…this time I m correct…Hello Mr Modi…
Ahem: You…
Ahem looks at Gopi’s saree…
Gopi smirks: We r meeting after 2 years right…
Ahem looks on…
Gopi: So..here…In Rajkot…maybe you got bankrupt!!…
Ahem shouts: Shutupp!!…
Gopi smirks n shouts: You shutuppp!!…
Ahem fumes…
Gopi: You r still same Ahem…you didnt changed…you’re still egoistic…and see me i am…wait i get to know by seeing face that you saw the news…yah yah i am Miss Gopi Modi…
Ahem in her mind: Bl**dy…i will kill her…
Modis n Mansi runs towards them..
Kokila: Gopi whats all this…
Gopi smiles: Maaji…see naa i met my husband…oops…ex husband…
She says softly…
Ahem looks on at Modis…
Ahem in her mind: They r looking so so rich…
Kokila: Gopi dont waste time in talking with useless people…

GREYSCALE EFFECTS

Mansi: Ahem…ahem control yourself…
Ahem: So you’re rich naa…n popular too…lets spoil this popularity..
Gopi looks on…
Modis looks on…
Ahem smirks n pulls Gopi’s pallu…
Everyone gets shocked!!…

GREYSCALE EFFECTS

Mansi smirks…
Media was too there…
Meera saves gopi’s dignity n stops the pallu from falling…
Ahem fumes..

SCREEN FREEZES on Gopi n Meera’s shocked faces…

PRECAP-Kokila slaps Ahem tightly n shouts that she feels shame to have a son like Ahem…Gopi calls police in the restaurant n gets him arrested!!…

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13 Comments
  1. Boss(Siddarth)

    Best fan fiction Raina . Very interesting story . Don’t end this fan fictions.
    ?.keep writing. Btw here wl Jaggi marry Gopi or Gopi wl unite with ahem.

    1. Riana

      Thanks a lot Sid???

    2. Riana

      Gopi’s saathiya will be jaggi here…No Ahem…he is the main villain in this ff☺☺

      1. Boss(Siddarth)

        Oh then Ahem is a negative character ?.

  2. Jasminerahul

    so gopi understood that its jaggi.jaggi is cool.mansi ahem r so irritating.they r so embarrassed to know how gopi n other modis r now.but ahem is so cheap to pull gopi’s pallu to spoil her reputation.good that meera saved gopi.precap is superb.want jaggi ahem meeting

    1. Riana

      Thanks a lot Jas???

  3. This was so funny!!!!!

    1. Riana

      Thankyou Rani???

  4. Shakaib

    Wow…what a superb update Riana…. I’ve to say I love it…. This one made my day…I got so bored of studies an you made my day yaarr..well..can I call you “yaar”…lol..just joking.. Don’t be serious….. GoGi meeting was so nice…I felt I’m between them….hahahaha….. Mahem(MAnsi-aHEM) talking was so funny…. Mahem are so evil there…its has so much interesting track…like Meera saving Gopi’s dignity which shows her love for Gopi….and which we never get to see in real one…post asap… And I’ve posted a OS NAME, ” Saath Nibhana Saathiya (One shot)-Decision yours”…read and comment when it published. Hope Gopi also slap ahem in next part.

    1. Riana

      Ofcourse u can call me yaar….no prob??….And i yah i had read n commented on ur OS…Thanks a lot Shakaib???

  5. Mansi

    Fantastic update?loved it a lot??gopi mistook jaggi as ahem..but it finally got cleared?this ahem is so cheap to tell about his own family like this n even his daughters too hw CN he think that?gd that soup felt on his pants he deserved that?gd to see Meera saving gopi’s dignity from falling by ahem’s hand..Precap is really good..Waiting to get more GoGi scenes?wish they had shown all this in real sns and ahem should get a tight slap from gopi BT alas this CV’s are not mature enough?update soon?

    1. Riana

      Thanks a lot Mansi???

  6. Krkavita

    Mansi & Ahem are very much irritating. Ahem pulled Gopi’s pallu but good that Meera stood by her.

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