CRITICIZE… Saathiya (SS) SOME SHOTS… SHOT-1

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Hey guys…Its Riana…n here i came with my Another OS named CRITICIZE…Lets think some different…We always saw in the real show that Ahem had always criticized gopi for everything…This ff starts with gopi killing Radha and ending up in jail…Lets start…

@OMKARESHWAR

Ahem,Kokila,Jigar n Paridhi are shown standing dumbstuck…
When gopi kills Radha via Trishul!!!…
Gopi cries a lot for her mercilious act…
After that court gives her punishment for 14 years…
Gopi asks everyone to stay away from her during jail terms…
She leaves in police van…
Ahem leaves Rajkot n settles in mumbai with Meera n Vidya…
Paridhi doesnt abandones Rashi…
And kokila Rashi stays in Modi bhavan only…
Gopi counts days that when she will get free again…

Time passes…Days elapses…Gopi is bored in jail but still she had some hope…that she will come out of jail again…

AFTER 14 YEARS…

@CENTRAL JAIL

Now 14 years are passed…
Gopi is shown wearing white n blue saree during jail terms…she is shown quite dull n messy as she was not in proper condition in jail…
She does pooja…
Jailer comes…
Jailer: Congrats gopi…you are free now…Its 14 years passed…its a long time for anyone to stay alone without any family member in jail…but gopi killing anyone is not a solution…

Gopi: I understand your point mam…but i was totally destroyed from inside…when i saw my sister became an evil in front of us…
Jailer: Okay lets stop this discussion…
Gopi: That means…
Jailer gives back gopi’s luggage n the money cover which she had earned in those 14 years…
Jailer: Goodluck gopi…for ur new journey…
Gopi bids adieu to all n leaves for Rajkot..

@MODI MANSION….RAJKOT

New renovated Modi mansion is shown…
Baa,Hetal,Jigar,Paridhi are having breakfast…
Samar n Sahir enters with a bang news that gopi is been released…
All gets glad…
Gopi enters Modi mansion for the first time after so many years…
She reminsces her old moments…
Hetal hugs Gopi…
Gopi hugs everyone…
Gopi: Where’s Maaji??…
Kokila comes downstairs in her new look…

She is shown wearing a beige n green colour saree…with slightly whitish hair n light gold jewellery…n spectacles…
Kokila: Aagayi meri Gopi bahu!!…
Gopi gets emotional: Maaji…
She touches her feets n hugs her…
Kokila: I was waiting for you since 14 years…
Paridhi shouts: Rashi….
Rashi [BHAVINI PUROHIT] enters…

Gopi: I missed u a lot maaji…
She looks at Rashi n gets shell shocked!!…
Rashi smiles…
She is shown wearing pink top n navy jeans with open hairs…
Gopi: Radha….
Kokila: Nooo…not Radha…she’s my Rashi…
Rashi: Barimaa…
Gopi gets emotional…
She hugs her…
Rashi: Pari mom…told me everything…how you saved my life from my evil mom Radha…Just bcoz of you…i am allright today…
Gopi: See became so sensible…
Rashi smiles…

Gopi: Btw…where’s my Ahem ji…Meera…Vidya…is he in office…
Kokila: Actually Gopi…Ahem left Rajkot years ago…
Gopi gets shocked!!!…
Kokila says her everything…
Gopi: I cant believe this…how can ahem ji do this with us…He never loved me…
Kokila: He thinks that you’re responsible for everything…i was wrong in making the decission that ahem is perfect for you…
Gopi breaks down…
Gopi: Atleast once i will try my best to bring Ahem ji back…where’s he??
Sahir: He’s in Mumbai…he told to dadi…
Gopi: Okay…i have to leave for Mumbai..

@MUMBAI

Gopi meets Ahem in his new house…
They looks at each other…
Gopi: Ahem ji…whats this??…you left us…
Ahem fumes: Who r you??…i dont know you…i think you’re in wrong place…
Mansi: Ahem…who’s she??…
Gopi: I am his wife Gopi!!!…
Mansi: Wrong…Ahem is my Husband!!..
Gopi: Whaatt??…
Ahem: Yah Miss Gopi…i had married Mansi…as i was not in relationship with you since years…i had never loved you…but betrayed me always…
Meera n Vidya enters..
Meera: Mamma…
Vidya: Mamma..
Gopi hugs them both…
Meera: Where was you mamma??…why didnt you let us meet in jail…
Vidya: We get to know everything from dad…
Gopi: Did your married this lady!!..
Meera: Yes mamma…He married Mansi mamma its been 12 years…
Gopi gets shocked!!!…
Gopi in her mind: Ahem ji…forgot me so easily…ofcourse he was practical in life…and i was always emotional…
Ahem: Now pls dont create Drama here…Get out…and let us leave happily here…
Meera cries: Mamma…
Gopi: Meera vidya…do you want to live with me or your dad!!!…
Vidya: I want to leave with you mamma…i dont to stay with this dirty person…he’s so dirty that he spent one night with that lady…
Gooi gets shocked!!…
Ahem: Yah so…i love Mansi…so i consummated with her…and we too a have a 6 years boy name Ahaan…
Gopi shys in shame…
Mansi smirks…
Meera: Yes mamma…let us leave with you…
Ahem: Meera…Vidya dont you dare to do this…
Mansi: Meera vidya…how dare u…Gopi is a murderer…
Meera: My mamma is not a proffesional murderer…she killed that lady as she was torturing us…like u use to torture me…by washing clothes n cleaning utensils…
Gopi screams: Whaaatt??…you tortured my daughters like this…
Mansi shouts: Meera!!!…
Meera screams…
Mansi raises her hand…
Gopi holds Mansi’s hands..
Mansi: Leave me…Gopi!!…
Ahem: Gopi…stop this drama…n get out…
Gopi: Now i will leave from here taking my daughters…do u get that Mr Ahem modi…

Meera n Vidya starts packing there bags…
They starts getting ready to go with gopi..
Ahem: Meera n Vidya…dont u dare to do this else i will break your legs…and you will stay handicapped..
He smirks..
Mansi laughs…
Gopi gets furious n Slaps ahem…
Ahem shouts: Gopiii…
Gopi shouts more loudly: Shut up!!!…be in ur limits else i will break your legs…n then you will stay handicapped…
Ahem fumes…
Mansi in her mind: I wont let her leave…else who will do my household work…maids are so costly these days…
Gopi: Meera Vidya lets go…
Ahem: Gopi…stop…I said stop…
Gopi looks at Ahem and shows are thumbs down??
Ahem:????

SCREEN FREEZES on Gopi’s smirking face…
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PRECAP-Gopi comes with Meera n Vidya inside Modi Mansion…Kokila does Meera n Vidya’s Gravapravesh…Time passes n Gopi starts working in Family business…She meets a handsome man…
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I KNOW GUYS…ITS TOTALLY DIFFERENT FROM THE REAL SNS 10 YEARS LEAP BUT HERE I COMPLETELY CHANGED AHEM’S CHARACTER INTO A NEGATIVE PERSON…DID U GUYS LIKED IT OR NOT…PLS PLS PLS SHARE THE COMMENTS BELOW (NO HARSH COMMENTS)???

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14 Comments
  1. Isaaq

    I love it. That was my favourite leap to be honest when she killed Radha, I am happy to see Meera positive here. I love Ahem here as a negative character. In fact the story you are doing right now is going to be season 10. Because in my ff I’m going to do the whole Radha story all over again. From getting tricked by Siddharth and turning evil- all the way to where she will get pregnant by Ahem and become Gopi sautan and you know the end… Radha was my favourite vamp.

    Will she come back in this ff?

    1. Riana

      No…Radha will not come back??…Thanks a lot Isaaq???

  2. Jasminerahul

    i’m so happy that u have come up with another story.how many episodes does this ff have?Ahem is so heartless to abandon gopi n marry mansi?they have a son too.glad that Vidya meera understand gopi here unlike in d serial n left d house with gopi.good to see ahem getting slap from gopi.glad that here paridhi luvs jr Rashi.do Jigar Pari have kids here?Surprised to see Bhavni in double role.i;m glad that Jr Rashi is not angry with gopi n is grateful to her.new guy to meet Gopi.Wow.i’m curious to know who he is.Will u b uniting Gohem or is it a new guy 4 gopi?

    1. Riana

      This FF has Some shots…as i mentinoed before…here will be only 4-5 shots…i wrote this ff just for fun…And no Gohem will not appear here…Thanks a lot Jas???

  3. Shakaib

    Wow Riana di.. Its totally different… I love it…. It has get much interested in first part…. Can’t wait for next one… Ahem as negative character…. OMG..!! Who is that man in Precap…waiting for next..one..!!

    1. Riana

      Soon i willpost the nxt part…Thankyou Shakaib???

  4. Krkavita

    Glad that Meera & Vidya didn’t hate Gopi. Though ahem is negative in this ff, he told the truth to the girls. Mansi made the girls to do the housework at the young age. It is horrible. What was Ahem doing? I hope the Modi family knows that Ahem married Mansi.

    1. Riana

      Thankuuu Krkavita???

  5. Mansi

    Really it’s a different story I lvd it a lot??gd to knw here Meera n Vidya both dnt hate der mother BT instead hate der fathr for doing wrong wth der morhr?n r even ready to leave hm n going wth der morhr BT DS Mansi is soo evil hw CN she make Meera Vidya do household work lke a maid?lvd Rashi jr’s entry n Pari lvs hr unlike serial☺wondering who tht man CN be for gopi??I liked ahm’s character in negative it’s something whch isn’t shwn in d serial BT being a dad hw CN he say lke DS to Meera Vidya gd gopi slapd hm n smirk too?update soon..

    1. Riana

      Thanks alot Mansi???

  6. Nandhini

    Nice Riana…everyone understood and supported gopi except ahem…now i understand completely why in real serial meera and vidya hated gopi? because mansi brainwashed them in such a way that they will hate their own mother…here mansi is treating them like servants..why ahem was keeping mum in dat matter?? Now meera vidya got relief from the torture…i loved the slapping scene of gopi and ahem…and mainly i loved the mind voice of gopi where she said to herself ahem is practical and she is emotional?

    1. Riana

      Thanks a lot Nandini???

  7. YES I LOVE TWISTS!

    1. Riana

      Thanks Rani???

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