Hi guys…. i’m back……
how was diwali? hope u guys enjoyed…….
u know guys….. i love suspenses…. be it in the movies i watch…. books i read…. or stories i write….. and i make sure there r more than one….. unwinding at different phases of the story…. when we know something that others dont know….. its thrilling…. and when we know what even the characters dont know….
i had loved my friends’ reaction for each twists….. remember when swara snatched lucky’s phone…. thats when it was revealed that she is his sis…. that surely was a shock…. and then when it turned out that ragini already knew that…. and then Sanskaar….. and the most exciting thing would be when the whole thing comes infront of Laksh…. wonder what his reaction would be!!!!
there had been a lot of missing links in the story which u may or maynot have noticed…. believe me when i say that i left those like that for a purpose….. i like to bring imp out of things which others might hardly have noticed….. i told u guys that i narrated the story to some of my frnds… u know wht the difficult part was? keeping a straight face while narrating something which may mean something entirely diff when the secret is out….. huff ANNIE stop blabbering and start with the story!!!!
here we go…. hope this goes well… FINGERS CROSSED! And for those who wished it to be RAGSAN… i rly cant help it….sry…. and ha i would have to copy a lot of things from previous epi…. well to just save u guys from an urge to read the whole story again… as i said… a lot of loose threads u may not have noticed!
“Do u rly think that smearing one’s hairline with vermillion will make u her husband???”
She turned around abruptlyhearing the sharp angry voice.
Lucky : ” Sanskaar! U here?!”
Sanky: “Do u even realise wht u did….or what u r about to do?!”
Laksh: ” Sanky, pls… pls dont interfere…. this is my personal matter….”
Sanky smirked came forward and stood right next to Rags. Rag saw Swara silently joining the family. No one else really noticed her.
Sanky: “Oh, really?!… personal matter.. its far beyond ur personal matter… it involves others… their lives…. life of one girl whom u where supposed to get married to…. life of one girl whom u claim to be married to….. its not just ur life but their’s too…. and u think that u can decide about their PERSONAL matter? U r still answerable…. if not to us… then to the girl with whom ur marriage is fixed…. u think its easy to walk out? without having to confront her… well it may be… u can walk out…. thats ur choice… ur PERSONAL matter…. but Ragini… she will stay here, in this house, till Monday, and then she will accompany us to Kolkata… u can talk Ladoo directly then…. that is, if u want…. she will take a decision about Ragini… and my DI’s dicision will be FINAL… i’ll see to it PERSONALY! (guys this was not at all the original convo but i had to change the whole thing due to change in the BG)
Laksh was confused. Neither was he expecting Sanskaar there nor were his words making any sense.
Sanskaar who was walking into the house stopped abruptly hearing Laksh calling him “Sanky?” He turned his head partially towards Laksh and smirked.
Sanky: ” well after today,…. i would prefer being called by my full name Sanskaar… SANSKAAR DURGAPRASAD MAHESWARI!”
Saying this he walked off into his room.
Saying Lucky was shocked would be an understatement. Slowly everything started falling in place.
‘The reason y Sanky never liked Ragini at first… well he-Laksh had told his BIL to be-Sankaar-that he was in love with a girl. may be he was the one who told her everything. Laksh wanted to talk to him. He knew that Rag was gonna do exactly what Sanskaar said.’
He went into the house in search of Sanky.
Both the girls were staring the way, the 2 guys went. Then they looked at each other and burst out laughing.
“DRAMAQUEENS” It was Sharmishta who said that.
Rag: ” Aai! Not fair…. we r drama queens, ha? Then what about u guys? What was that again? Ya… ‘Are u trying to tell us that… u r married…’ overacting ki dukhaan….”
Mishti: “rly?! u didnt even see me and u r telling me that i was overacting…well let me just go and tell him all the truth… what say?”
Rag: “Aai.. Aai.. wait! U do know that i was gonna tell him everything. But after what he did today…”
Mishti: “he deserves a punishment.”
Rag: “i was gonna say we could surprise him… but punishment doesnt sound that bad…”
Samy was standing in front of Rags, telling her about his convo with Lucky… liike he did everyday. she remembered the day Swara moved into her room. Sanskaar had called up to tell her how Laksh strongly defended her, a girl whom he hardly knew and apparently had insulted and fought with them. she chuckled at the memory.
Samy: “Ladoo, he is demanding to see u. He wants to talk to both of u- Ragini & Ladoo. He even said that he would leave behind everything… even his surname.. if thats what is keeping u away from him!” he chuckled before continuing “the part that we thought wouldnt be needed is also coming into play. He is rly fighting with his family for u. And the biggest problem is that u r on our side. He desperatly wants to see u.”
Swara: “He loves u a lot di! And he is gonna kill us whwn he gets to know…”
” Even i’m worried about his reaction Beta… But i guess its gonna turn out well… as Shona said he loves u lot and nothing else matters!” DP said.
Samy: “Ya that right Pa… We will just keep Ladoo in front and he will melt”
Swara laughed hearing him.
Swara: “here u r planning to use her as ur armour and what was that earlier…’My di’s decision will be Final!’ i have never heard u calling her di..”
Samy: “she IS my sister. U just call her di… that doesnt make u her sister. U r not her sister, but her..”
Rags interupted: “BHABHI! i know!
DP who was shaking his head hopeless seeing their fight looked at Ragini shocked hearing her.
Swara’s jaw dropped. Samy stared at his sister bewildered. He had indented to say Nanad but she just reversed the whole thing… pointing to the relation they shared, which no one except the trio knew . he so wished that Swara wouldnt blush. But she had turned crimsom. Now he was the one who felt hopeless. It was not rly that the family would disapprove, rather each one of them would start pulling his legs. He didnt rly ming his Ladoo doing that, but the thought of the mothers doing it… it rly frightened him… the thought of being caught up between them…. he relaxed seeing that his sis had stepped in front of Swara, blocking their father’s view of the blushing girl.
Rag: “I think we should get them engaged.”
“WHAT!” she heard her bro exclaim. But she knew him better. He would be struggling to contain his excitement.
she continued: “Get them engaged next week during the functions and get them married in a few months.”
DP: “but Ladoo… they keep on fighting…”
Rag: “that wont be a problem…” Sanskaay stormed out of the room. DP looked on, while she continued. “u do believe me dont u?”
He nodded his head. He did believe on her intuitions and decisions, they had always turned out to be the best for them.
DP: “i’ll talk to paditji!”
she nodded her head smiling. She was still blocking his view of Swara. DP left them alone. She turned to look at Swara.
Rag: “So?… Happy?”
Swara hugged her tight and then left the room.
Swara was walking through the corridor when someone pulled her into a room.
“so what did they decide?” Sanky asked locking her to his body.
Swara: “the way u came out… Papa felt that u r not interested… so…”
He got worried”So?”
Swara wrapped her arms around his neck and smiled at him. “he is talking to panditji!”
Samy: “ha?… wow!”
” get a room guys!” Rags who just got into the room said. Swara tried to pull away from Samy seeing her. But he held her firm by her waist.
Sanky: “We r already in a room, Ragini!”
RAg: “have some shame man… i am ur elder sister after all… OK… what would u have done, if it had been one of our parents?”
Sanky: “others have the basic manners to knock the door” Swara was still struggling to get out of his hold. “Stop it! I’m not gonna leave u!” he warned Swara.
Rags smiled at that. ” Be like this always. Never leave her for anything.”
He smiled back at her and extended his free hand to her. She reached out and hugged the both of them.
Rags: ” i think i should go. I’m sry that I disturbed u 2″ She teased
Sanky: “Well, should i be sry.. for keeping u away from ur HUSBAND?” He winked at her countering. Ragini’s eyes widened. She hit him playfully.
Sanky: “Ahh! that hurts !!!”
Swara: “And Aai calls us ‘dramaqueens'”
Rags: “dont worry Shona! she meant the 3 of us…”
guys i rly want to continue but i have a rly bad back ache sitting in front of my pc… my cousin took my tab with him and i dont know the wifi password of my own modem to use my phone… crazy right? and i still have confusions to clear…..
So starting from the top… Sanskaar is Samy…. about how Adi became Shakthi in the original…. its the change in BG… the original was something like a royal story… and thus fancy names… Shakthi Pratap Aadithya Dutt… hehe… crazy name right… the others too had similar names….
the first encounter… it was well planned… and Sanskaar obviously knew what she was saying….
*(Are u talking to me? I’m really sorry… I don’t know English that much!)
Sanky:”what? I didn’t understand a thing … What language is that?”
“Bengali” lucky said automatically…
Sanky:”Bengali? But how do u know?”
Lucky just looked on at the shocked face of his best friend…*
and then Swara’s entry he knew about Laksh’s plans from Swara.
The fights deliberate!
*“how dare u…. ” he started
“how dare I what?” She snapped back.
Sanky: “u lied to us, and ur clothes…..”
Rag: “What about my clothes? I wear what I like! Who r u to qns me?! And I didn’t lie…. Ask ur frnd, I said I don’t know Enlish that much . I’m way better than u can even imagine. So now would u pls leave me alone?” She said it with a pls but it was more of a command than a request.
That didn’t do good. It angered him more.*
Samy tried his best to make Laksh sure of his feelings by questioning him… opposing him…
*Sanky: “Bhai! I agree with ur sister. Aren’t u going a bit too fast? U just met her last day. U don’t know anything about her. How can u fall in love with such an arrogant girl. She is….”*
*Sanky: “Bhai, I would still ask u to think again. Try to know her better. U don’t even know if she’s committed or not.”*
*Sanky: “Ya, trying! but u’re not gonna do a single step right! I can’t believe that I let u dance with me and that too even after knowing what a r!”
Rags was Shocked. She Stammered :”W..What…do u mean?”
Sanky:”Oh! U really didh’t understand me? OK…. I’” tell u! Ur a scholarship student right… U don’t even have the Standard to stand next to me and I allowed u to dance with me…”*
this was a brother testing Laksh’s love for his sister.
But this shocked Ragini because this was not planned.
and he had called her to apologise.
*Ragni’s phone ringed right then . A smile appeared on her face seeing the caller id
Rag: “What do u think… Do I sound like I’m not OK!
Rag:”Yaar …. I’m at the office and I’m perfectly alright! ”
Rag:”Wow… I can’t believe that I’m talking to the great Mr. Maheswari”
Samy : ..-.
Rag: ‘Ya…Ya..- but I’m Ur elder sister, not younger one… So stop Worrying about me….. And It would have been another matter, had your gf blown my cover… ”
she chuckled at his response.*
*Sanky:” U really love her a lot, don’t u…U r the perfect person for her… ” lucky stared at him “… She won’t get someone else who is this stupid.” He completed*
It was actually a slip of tongue from his side, which he managed quite well.
And he had always been in love with Swara and Not Ragini… ha Rags and Sanky did love each other… as frnds… as siblings….
*Sanky: “well… actually its not her, that I grew fond of, It’s u! And the easiest way to get to u is by being her frnd.” The other 3 looked at him shocked .*
he was telling the truth. And that is what shocked Rags and Swara unlike Laksh.
*Sanky was looking at Nithya(Rags) through the mirror time and again. She had a cute smile on his face. Even though he wanted to spent the evening alone with the girl he loved, he wasn’t that selfish.*
He wasnt that selfish, not to help his sister…. and ha he wanted to spend the evening with Swara.
*Swara will be replacing Rag… ini . .. as Sankar’s partner.”
Swara: “But I don’t want…”
Aarav: “Ragini asked u to!”*
well, u know y she did that!
*Sanky : ” sry guys I can’t make it . I will be a little busy. ”
Swara : ” err. … dhi,I too won’t be able to accompany you guys. ”
Rags :”what?! Then we will go some other day!”
Swara (looking at laksh’s face before replying ) :”no dhi, it’s ok, u guys should go!”
Lucky felt thankful. Shona too was backing out. That meant, he could spend the entire day with his princess.
But Ragini knew her better. She might be planning a day out with Samy!*
ofcorse they were planning a day out together.
*She couldn’t afford laksh seeing the picture. …. god save her now!*
a pic with sanky and Swara together??? no way!
*Rag : ” swara. .. is it the one which Sa…”
Sanky : ” hey wait….I completely forgot. … u talking about this chain? ”
He took out a chain and pendant from his pocket. Pooja grabbed it immediately from him.
Sanky : ” actually, this was on the table in our room…. I was wondering how this came in our room. It is obvious that it doesn’t belong to us guys. And seeing the S in the pendant I guessed that it must be yours…… I’m sry I forgot! But y does the pendant have 2 S?…… and what is so special in it that u r crying for it?”*
The chain that sa… Samy gave her… He was teasing her… and the 2 S I guess u guys already know…. She was angry… because he was teasing her infront of Laksh!
*Ragini frowned as he handed over the red bangles to her.
Rag : ” what! U have seen the lehenga. It’s not red.”
Sanky : ” I know. But believe me this will look great with it.”
Rags shook her head disapproving.
But she finally agreed seeing his hopeful look.*
THE lehenga and not MY lehenga….
*Sanky was waiting in a lonely corridor for her. She was at first shocked when she got pulled towards a hard chest… but she relaxed instantly at the familiar pair of hands around her waist and lips against hers.
Sanky : ” heaven!”
She chuckled at his expression.
He took her hand in his and kissed her pulse.
“As I said …. The bangles do look good with the lehanga”
“And how does the lehanga look on me?”
He stiffened at her flirting tone. But he recovered immediately and replied in a husky whisper.
“It looks good on u…. so damn good that the only thing I want to do is take it off u!”
She stiffened at the statement and a shocked expression crossed her face.
“What ?! I’m just being truthfull!”
She struggled to get out of his hold.
” relax girl…. I just told u what went through my mind…. I DO know my limits!!!” She practically relaxed at the way he said that. “But I CAN get a kiss can’t I? ” She blushed at his tone.
Their lips were just inches apart when they heard laksh’s voice calling out for sanky.
She pushed him away and ran out.*
I have used only SHE and HER…. not my fault if u thought that it is Ragini….
*“Mr Maheswari! ” he had exclaimed. SHe stiffened instantly.
At first she tought that someone was addressing Sanskaar….
*Rags : ” to get a good life partner. … ”
Sanky took her hands in his.
Sanky : ” well… u have already got one, haven’t u? ”*
He was talking about Laksh.
*Rag : ” laksh. …. I want to tell u something. ….”*
She wanted to tell him everything. But he didnt let her….
*She was sanskaar’s expression change from shock to anger. He turned around in anger and stomped out if the temple.*
Obviously one would be mad if someone marries his sis like that!
and ha he told their parents everything that happened in the temple.
*“GET IN” Sanky said.
Sanky : ” swara. .. no qns just get in…. and listen to me!”
Sge nodded her head.
Sanky : ” I have a lot of things to do…. and u r gonna help me…. ”
He gave her his phone.”dial ur papa’s no ”
Swara : ” ha?”
Sanky : ” just do it Swara!”*
i guess thats all…. well i dont rly know…..
hope u liked it………. sry again for those who wanted ragsan…….u guys guessed that Sanky is Samy… and I had to change that!
So the extra epi…. epi 11… and i guess i was successful…..
thanks for reading guys… and pls do comment……..