Craziness Vs Innocence (SwaSan fs) Shot 1 by Marsuu

Hello guys!! This is Mars with a new crazy story?? Don’t make fun of the title I got this one only???.
Okay coming to the story, this is a teenagers story and there is no family drama as whole series will be shooted in school and hostel???. I thought now a days I’m getting serious with my stories so here is light humorous story showing friendship, attraction and teen love.
Let’s see who is crazy and who is innocent???
Hope so you will like it.

Craziness Vs Innocence(SwaSan fs)
Shot 1:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 17 years old currently studying in 12th standard. Flirting, teasing, making fun, zero in studies, craziness are few words which describes him perfectly. He is extremely handsome that all girls want him as their boyfriend but he is waiting for his princess. He is spoiled brat who do everything except studies.He is leader of their gang.

Laksh Maheshwari: 17 years old cousin
of sanskar.He is also not good in studies and spoiled.He has girlfriend kavya. He always support sanskar.

Ragini Gododia(??? she in my story shocked??? Me too?? but you will enjoy trust me, if you really know what I mean??) 17 years have high attitude and ego. She thinks she is the best (but I doubt?) She has huge crush on sanskar and is always after him may be he will accept her (not even in her dreams?)

Kavya Mehra: 17, always with ragini she is laksh’s girlfriend. she is also little similar to ragini.

Kavita Kapoor: 17, she is sensible calm and sweet girl but crazy at the same time.She is Nikil’s girlfriend and they are really serious in their relation.She doesn’t like ragini much.

Nikil Khanna: 17, same like sanskar and laksh crazy and zero in studies but he is not flirty as he really loves kavita.

So Sanskar Laksh Nikil Kavya Kavita and Ragini all are classmates and spoiled gang of the school. Their gang name is “Crazy Gang”. Sanskar is the leader and the most popular boy of the school.They always fail in semester exams just try to get passing marks in finals. No teacher like them infact they are known as disturbance of the class.
No one mess with them as all are scared of their pranks. They are back benchers.

(Where is our heroine??? Coming coming how can I forgot shona??.)
Swara Bose: 17 years old, wearing specs but she is beautiful to extreme level. Her innocence can attract anyone. She was topper in her previous school and is new in Sanskar’s school as her mother, shomi got transfer from Delhi to Kolkata.She is innocent but not coward(remember it) Her answers are enough to shut the other person’s mouth.(that u will get to know)

Ram and Sujata maheshwari: parents of Sanskar.
Ap and Dp Maheshwari: parents of laksh.
Shekar and janki Gododia: parents of ragini.
Shomi Bose: only parent of swara.

All are living in hostel and its joint hostel of boys and girls in St Joseph Convent School. Maheshwari’s are the trustees of the school.
Kavita kavya and ragini live in one room while Sanskar laksh and nikil share one room.

Story Begins:
Basketball Ground:
Sanskar is tapping the basketball on the ground alone as it’s evening and he is passing time. He is roaming in whole ground. He loves basketball alot and is champion in it.
While he was fully indulge in playing with that ball sweating and breathing heavily then only one girl came near him and said
Girl: hi Sanskar
Sanskar stopped tapping the ball and look at the person.He got irked seeing the girl.
Sanskar(irritated): what ragini!???
Ragini: may we talk for sometime??

Sanskar(sternly): no
Ragini: but why??
Sanskar: bcoz I don’t want and plzz for god’s sake stop sticking to me.
His tone was highly frustrated but it didn’t effected ragini and she said
Ragini: see Sanskar in our gang all are couples kavya laksh and kavita nikil except both of us.
Sanskar: then???
Ragini: don’t you think we should also start our relation.
Sanskar: we already have relation.

Ragini (happy): really what relation?
Sanskar: brother sister you are my elder sister.
Ragini: I’m not your sister and we are of same age then how elder.
Sanskar(shrugs): now you look elder to me what can I do???
Ragini: sanskar
Sanskar: hey plzz you leave don’t eat my brain.
Ragini left from there fuming.

Sanskar(shouted): good bye sister.
Laksh who listened them came near sanskar and said
Laksh: why don’t you get committed sanskar instead of flirting here and there.
Sanskar: I’m not mental to be with ragini and moreover she is my sister.
Laksh: I know you don’t like her even I’m not saying ragini but any other girl there are many who are crazy after you.
Sanskar: you know laksh I’m waiting for my princess who will become Sanskar’s Queen, the day I will get her I will stop all this flirting.

Laksh: and when she will come???
Sanskar: that destiny knows. Who knows she may come today only(winks)
Laksh: you and your high standard talks.
Sanskar: leave it you won’t understand.
Sanlak went to the hostel.

Shomi came to leave swara at hostel. She preferred hostel as she is most of the time busy with her work and their house is also far.
Shomi: swara take care of yourself and concentrate on studies.
Swara: yes ma u don’t worry and you too take care.
Shomi: okay bye

Swara: bye.
Swara picked her bags and came inside the hostel. She searched for room no.5.
At last she got it.

Room No 5:
Swara knocked at the room, soon the door got opened by a girl and she is kavita.
Swara: hello I’m newcomer
Kavita: ohh you are new one who is going to share room with us.
Swara: yes
Kavita: plzz come inside.

Room is big enough to accommodate four students. There is four beds for single person and four cupboards and four study tables.
Ragini and kavya make faces seeing swara. Swara’s bed is last one so she keep her bag on it. Ragini went near her and said with full attitude
Ragini: Ragini Gododia
Swara(turn): who??
Ragini: me who else?
Swara: ohh

Ragini: now u r going to live in this room so you have to listen to me.
Swara(confused): why???
Ragini: bcoz I’m head of this room.
Swara: even I’m going to pay equal rent didi.
Ragini (shocked): didi?? I’m just 17
Swara: you are very tall to me so i thought to give respect.
She said blinking her eyes. Kavita chuckles bcoz swara is unknowingly insulting ragini.
Ragini: do you know

Swara(cut her): no
Ragini: I’m telling that u know I’m the most beautiful girl of the school,boys are dying to talk to me.
Kavita(mumble): that’s why still she is single.
Swara smiles listening to her and said
Swara: what should I do then give you miss universe tag???
Ragini: don’t fly too much
Swara: I don’t have wings.

She said innocently moulding her lips.
Ragini stamp her foot on floor and left.
Swara got busy in setting her clothes.

Swara is standing in the balcony staring at the stars when kavita came and stood beside her
Kavita: hello
Swara (smiles): hi
Kavita(extend her hand): so friends I’m kavita
Swara(shake hand): swara
Kavita: you don’t pay much heed to ragini she is egoistic type.
Swara: ohh
Kavita: well you look very sincere. How are you in studies?
Swara: thanks let’s see here but I was topper in my previous school.
Kavita: great means you are not suitable for our gang.

Swara(confused): gang.
Kavita: our crazy gang where all are zero in studies and spoiled.
Swara: ohh I myself will not join that gang plz don’t mind.
Kavita: no no its common all say this only.
Swara: let’s sleep we have school tomorrow.
Swakav went inside and slept.

Next Morning
St. Joseph Convent School

Class 12:
Swara is sitting on the first bench alone and reading some book. Crazy gang is sitting on last benches all are there except sanskar.Its early morning when students are coming to school so there was time for the class to start. Then only sanskar made his entry and his gang shouted
Nikil: here comes our hero
Swara has the urge to see him so she lifted her head up and saw sanskar but he directly went to last benches. Throwing his bag on the floor he jumped and sits on the upper bench where we keep books.
They are laughing and shouting which was irritating Swara but she didn’t reacted. Only few students were there in the class. Accidentally sanskar’s gaze spot swara who has almost buried her face in book.
Sanskar (narrowing her eyes): who is she???

Kavita: new comer and out roommate.
Sanskar: she looks beautiful lets add her in our gang.
All were looking at sanskar as if they had seen some ghost.
Laksh: you called a girl beautiful sanskar are you okay.
Sanskar don’t even look at girls to praise them is far thing.
Sanskar: yeah if God has gifted her beauty then I should praise.

Kavita: but you never praised anyone earlier.
Sanskar: then I had never seen such beauty also earlier.
Ragini was fuming all the time but who cares?
Ragini: she can’t be in our gang.

Sanskar: and who are you to decide this???
Ragini: I mean sanskar she is not of our type she is very studious.
Sanskar: did I asked you ragini?? no na then don’t speak
Kavita(taunting): someone gets so much insulted but still not leaving the gang.
Ragini was about to say when sanskar said
Sanskar: let me call her here
Kavita: she is not interested to be our gang member.
Sanskar: ohh then let’s tease her.

Sanskar made paper ball and throw at swara. Swara looked back when the ball hitted her.
Sanskar: hey specs one come here.
Swara set her specs and went to last bench.
She stood in front of Sanskar
Swara: yes
Sanskar: intro
Swara(confused): what???
Sanskar: introduction dear (fake smile)
Swara: Swara Bose
Sanskar: Miss or Mrs??
Swara: I’m 17 so if you have common sense you can guess.
Sanskar was shocked to know that this little girl will speak like this he thought she will be scared.
Swara: may I have the honour to leave plzz.
Sanskar: okay

He said senselessly. Her actions, her beauty made him numb.
It was another shock for all that he didn’t teased her.
Sanskar: she took my heart lucky
He said placing hand on his heart and act like if dying.

Ragini: what was in her???
Sanskar:she is really pretty.
Ragini: but she was wearing specs.
Sanskar: yes with specs she made me crazy when she will directly see in my eyes I will surely get heart attract.
All laughs while ragini make faces.

Soon the teacher came so they settle down on their seats.

To be continued…..

Well don’t worry about so many characters bcoz camera will focus on swasan only????.
If you don’t like kindly ignore but don’t bash over here.
Plzz leave your comments if you want to read further.
Thank you
Take care

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  1. Bush1122

    Ohhh it was really superb….????
    Damn awesome…
    Loved it to the core…
    Swara gave smart answers to Ragini… she needed it most….??
    Mind blowing shot….
    Sanskar… love at first sight ahhh…??????
    Fantastic diii….
    Tc…? luv u….??

    1. Mars

      Yupp swara is smart to shut others mouth???? I’m happy that you loved it thank you so much dear
      Let’s see whether sanskar fell for swara???
      Love you????
      Take care???

  2. Shriti12

    It’s so awesome…. Specially swara

    1. Mars

      Aww thank you so much dear tc????

  3. Super and I like the ragini character u know what I mean update fast

    1. Mars

      I know what you mean smart swasanians??? thank you so much dear will post soon tc????

  4. Arpita arohi

    Awesome ????waiting for next part

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post soon tc????

  5. Awesome ???

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  6. AbrahamEzra

    It’s superb. And loved this innocent yet bold swara. I loved it dear

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear tc????

  7. Shreny

    Omg!!!!!!! New story again…… seriously loved it dear.plz post next part soon………..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you loved it will post soon tc????

  8. Samaira_khan

    I’m really sorry Mars but y did u have to make ragini a gray Shae I mean u could make raglak right.. I’m sorry if u feel bad ND I know it’s completely ur wish.. It’s OK I’m once again sorry..

    1. Mars

      Hey it’s okay it’s your point of view and I had thought of ragini’s character like this only and it’s needed in the story and don’t come to conclusion plz its first part.
      Thanks tc

  9. Ahhaaa baby… This is damn exciting….
    Now u have tempted me…
    The way u are progressing is worth appreciating sweetheart ???
    Keep writing
    Stay blessed
    Update soon….

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much for your words sweetheart??? now if you are tempted then will post soon?? thanks tc????

  10. Harneet

    OooMmmGgg di . from where u get these crazy stories .. just amazing .. finally someone has created sanky’s character as 0 IN STUDIES .. BCZ IN ALL OTHER STORIES he is flirt . smart .handsome BUUUUTTTT intelligent too . so u r the girl .. who made a twist in TU WORLD HISTORY .. part was awesome .. keep it up .. continue soon . love you ??????

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear yeah I thought to make sanskar zero in studies bcoz its going to be fun further glad you liked it tc????

  11. Marsssssssssss I loved this epi ??
    It was awesome and u knw why ??
    I’m happy that u r showing bro sis bonding ????
    first epi was really entertaining ??

    1. Mars

      Hahaha of course I feel blessed to write bro sis moments?????? I m glad you loved it and much entertainment is on the way???
      Thank you so much dear tc?????

  12. Hi mars I m a silent reader, but today I have to break my silent, seriously ur ff r amazing. I have read all ur ff like my dangerous boss and crazy me, naughty billo 1,naughty billo 2,my better half, believe me, he is dangerous n uncontrollable feelings. OS like well Deserving n crazy girl etc… But my favorite is naughty billo n my dangerous boss and crazy me plz post that fast…

    1. Mars

      Awww that’s so sweet of you that you commented thank you so much dear I’m happy that you read and like my stories I will post them soon tc??????

  13. Rachna

    Awsm Dr… Update soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc????

  14. Superb ….I like the concept..good work ???

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  15. Awesome dear…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc

  16. This seems so interesting babe…
    I really want to read such types of story…
    The introduction of every character was worth the way u continued the story….
    Swara… Umm I love her yar… She is studious.. Bt not dump…. This was really a nice way of portraying….
    Loved this.. N plz update this soon yar…
    Will be waiting…
    N ya agar ho sake to ragini ko positive karna….i knw u must have surely thought something… Bt if u can… Sorry if I hurt u.. Bt this are my pov…
    N u knw I love u… So mujse naraz na hona ?????

    1. Mars

      Awww glad to know you loved it??? and yuppp swara is not dumb that u got to know today but its just starting age aage dheko kya hota hai???
      About ragini just leave her it’s not that important will try to change her character?????
      Mai narazz nahi hu I know????love you????
      Will post next part soon hopefully??
      Thank you so much dear tc????

  17. Rosey

    wow marsuuuuuu dhamala kamallll
    i want next sooner i love this sanskaar and wow swara great one and mostyly amazing part you are my sister heheheh cant stop laughing

    1. Mars

      I was also ROFL writing that dialogue??? u know which one?? I’m happy you liked it thank you so much dear tc????
      Next one will try to give soon ????

  18. Tamil

    It’s amazing dear…..interesting. ….loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc?????

  19. Rabia0032

    Oh my God yaar i am lovinggghg???????
    Omg swasan are Great….
    And ragini????????yaar how mich sou insult her????

    1. Mars

      Right someone is not affected with the insult????? I’m happy you like it thank you so much dear tc?????

  20. Chaitu

    Marsuuuu awesome dear where u will get such ideas to write a simple is I’m scratching my head from last 2 days u r awesome writer dear I loved Ragini character as u know what I mean give next part soon sorry dear as I didn’t comment on ur previous ffs I dont know why my registration is not working….

    1. Mars

      Don’t scratch your head as I also don’t know answer????? I know what you mean dear?????
      Its okay no need of sorry???
      Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc????????

  21. NDSG

    Hahahahaahahahahah????????? itni insult hobe k bad bhi koi gang chodh k nahi ja raha…

    ??????? clap for Kavita. Ragini Didi???????????. In show Ragini was younger sister but looks older one.

    And our cutie pie Shona? with specs she stole his heart without specs he will die?????????

    Too good waiting for further

    1. Mars

      Areee depuu dear kuch hote hai jinhe insult nahi feel hoti samja kar aur yeh usi category mai ati hai??????
      Good job kavita????
      Shona is cutie pie love her????
      Sanskar tho ho gaya dewana Swara ka aage dhekte hai kya hota hai?????????
      Thank you so much depuuu dear will post soon tc?????

  22. Awesome??
    Ragini didi????
    Swara:: loved her???
    Waiting for next one

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear glad you liked it will post soon tc??????

  23. AnuAnn

    Marssu .. just after reading character intro I’m commenting.. u made my day???.. hope u get what I mean???.. after seeing others response I get to know what others feels abt it..same like me..???.. keep going baby Nd rock it

    1. Mars

      Awww i got it anuu baby what you mean??? I’m happy that you liked it I know it has character you asked me if you remember????
      Thank you so much anuuuu dear tc??????

  24. U r really an amazing writer
    ..I have no words…Awesome like always

    1. Mars

      Awww that’s soo sweet of you?? thank you so much dear tc?????

  25. Maryam

    Fantabulous Yar..!! Dil la gayi mera Yar..!! Lovvvedddddd it Sweetheart..! Now I just want to Hug u tight.. .!!! N sorry I wasn’t able to comment on MDBACM..!! The episode was Amazing, totally love it..!! Sorry again…
    Plz plz plz plz post next soooooooon?
    Stay blessed..!! Keep smiling

    1. Mars

      Awww hug you back more tightly??? no need of sorry yrr its okay I’m glad you loved it thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc????????

  26. superb..intresting dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  27. Amazing start dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  28. Neptune

    Marsuuuuuuuuu…. amazing yaar.. loved both SWASAN’s character….

    They will surely make an awesome pair…

    Soooooooooooo excited to read further… and about nagini oops ragini I don’t want to comment about her.

    But whatever sanskaar said about her was soooooooooooo damn true

    Post soon dear??????????

    1. Mars

      Yupppp let’s not talk about someone unwanted ??? coming to swasan
      Indeed they will make awesome pair crazy Sanskar innocent swara???
      Yeah Sanskar said right to his sister??????
      I’m glad you liked it
      Thank you so much nepuuuu will post next part soon tc???????

  29. Wowwwwwww

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  30. Awesome blossom man just loved it….. and I must say what answer sanky gave to that nagin that she is his elder sister lol that was funny and so true and I just wish bhai behan fans read this story it will at least shut their mouth and clear their misconceptions… loved swara’s character she’s so cute man plz post the next part soon
    “PS to bhai behan fans swasan only belong to each other and to no one else”

    1. Mars

      Swasan shut someone’s mouth???? leave them yrr let them think what they want bcoz reality is swasan is heavenly?????
      I’m glad you liked it thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc???????

  31. Neha_01

    Loved is really sweet concept..update soon Mars.
    Like the way swara gave answers to ragini. Also Kavita’s character is nice

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc????

  32. Wow awesome i loved It….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  33. Interesting….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  34. amazing ff

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  35. Tweety_SwaSan

    Mars dear…. ? This is just amazing… SwaSan school story… Haye… ? I just loved the title of the story…. It’s perfect… ? Everything is too good… SwaSan answers to someone are bang on… ? Well said, she truly looks like elder sister to both of them… ? Wow Sanskaar already fida over Swara… ?❤ So cute… ?? Eagerly waiting for SwaSan beautiful journey… ? Thank you… Tc… ❤❤??????

    1. Mars

      Yeah swasan showed someone’s right place???? you know what I mean. It’s going to be fun to witness swasan school life wait for it. I’m glad you liked it thank you so much dear will post soon tc???????

      1. Tweety_SwaSan

        You are absolutely correct about someone… ?? Me eagerly waiting for more… ?? Love you dear.. ❤??

    2. Mars

      Love you??? will give soon ??

  36. Superb dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc????

  37. Soujanya


    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc????

  38. Vyshu10

    awesome….behen ko aur mile baba ji ka tullu

    1. Mars

      Right she deserve baba Ji ka thullu only???? thank you dear tc???

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