Confusion… (manmarziyan) a comedy one shot

Arjun mehra,was feeling proud after becoming a psychiatrist. It was his first day…He was super excited.
“I will become the superhero after solving the cases to my patients….”
“sir don’t gett too much excited.Yje prrevios doctor,Neil was driven mad,literally,by the patients…..”Radhika,her assistant said.
“well,I am not scared.who is the first patient?”Arjun asked..
“well,mr.and mrs.bhalla,please come in,”radhika calllled them.
Arjun heard some noises…well sounded like..
“jhansi ki rani…..oye,tu chhup kar….aap chup kijiye na,raavan kumar…..”

Then a couple entered.
A man, aged like 40-45 and a woman,same aged entered.
“Hi, I am…. ”
“raava kuumar”Ishita interrupted.
“sorry,your name is Raavan kumar,”Arjun looked on puzzled.
“well,people know me by the name of Raman kumar Bhalla,and she is jhansi ki rani,Well,Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla,”Raman said.
“whatever,please tell your problem,”
“well,I am raman kumar bhalla,Ex husband of Shagun arora.But she left my child Ruhi when she was 6 months old.And after

a few years,on Ruhi’s insistance,I married jhan…..I mean Ishita.And then,again,For a third child,I opted for surrogacy,and I didn’t find another lady except for Shagun.Then shagun died,and the spirit of her landed inn ishita.But then,we found out,Shagun was not Dead…and theen…………………………………After 7 years,Ishita came back to me,but now shagun also looves me,whereas,Mani loves Ishita.And we are planning to make Mani and Shagun married.But me,Raacan kumar and jhansi ki rani still love each other,but we won’t tell itt to each other.And still the name of the serial is “yeh hai mohabbatein”.all thanks to Ekta Kapoor,”after blabbering for 1:30 hours,Raman stopped.
“Raman,I am proud on you,you still remember all the tracks.”Ishita said.
“Hold on one second.I didn’t understand anything,why so many complications,just go and marry each other,what’s the point of doing all these?Arjun was shocked.
“yeah,we also want to marry each other.But maybe,we will get married after Adi will become a grandfather,”ishita said.
Raman:I think……nothing will.happen even after consulting a psychiatrist. This serial is all messed up.Well,thanks doctor for your precious time….
“May I come in,”a person requested.
“arreu,Abhi,how are you,”Raman hugged the person.
Ishita too hugged Pragya.
“what happened with you?”Raman asked.
“same ekta kapoor problem”Abhi said.
“well,then doctor,all the best.Because this one is the most complicated case of all time,”radhika told Arjun.

After Ishra left.Abhigya settled themselves on the chairs.
Arjun ate a parasitamol and asked them to start.
“at first,doctor,I am abhishekh,short for abhi.and this is fuggy,”Abhi said.
“Pragya,”
“now,answer me on question doctor,after how many days,the tummy of a pregnat lady turns big,”asked abhi
“well,after 6 months,why you are asking such a weird question?
“because,in my serial, a lady ramained pregnant for 1.5 years,with a slim figure.I wonder,how’s that possible?”Pragya said.
“What’s the name of this serial?”Arjun asked
“kumkym bhagya,”
“Well,I refer a senior psychiatrist,akshara singhania and gopi modi.They are the most successful in solving cases for really long time..
“thank you,doctor,” saying this,they left.
Arjun was looking devastated.
Radhika then hurriedly entrd the cabin and said,”Sir,a mad woman in the asylum,Is creating havoc,”
“Let me check on her,”

Arjun then heard a noise and went to the lady.
The lady:well,you are very fair,fairer than my yuvraaj,And also handsome.I want to make you my grandchild.I want you to exchange you with yuvraaj.
Arjun:Why?
Lady:As you are more handsome…ha ha ha.
Arjun was like,oh my god….where have I reached!
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Radhika when enters the cabin of doctor arjun mehra,He was packing all the items in a bag…
“Where are you going,”
“TO Birdsong”
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Well, guys,how was it…please tell me…….I am crying……..for your comments……please………. give your precious comments,it means a lot to mee……luv you
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Credit to: Nishi

22 comments

  1. Deeksha

    It’s good…… Pragya seen was awsome I was shocked because I don’t follow that serial… nice one…..

  2. Sreee

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    Lol di…pataka..really her shows r like that…my frirnd a diehard fan of kkb ,and used to torture her with the same que abhi asked..sweet memories….haha…oor arjun..and neil already ran away…gosh siperb…loved it..

  3. Sweetie

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    Oh Superb dear..I don’t know the tracks of the other serials and you mentioned them..I can share them with my friends..lol..But seriously this OS is superb..Laughed to my heart content when Pragya said about Tannu’s figure..Haha.. πŸ˜€ Do write more.. πŸ™‚

  4. Rg2015

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    Superb. I enjoyed it. I dint know Tanu remained pregnant for 1.5 yrs. . If u look at d plots this way I seriously don’t know how Thez guys earned trp. Compared to all this mmz ws soooo much better. But thoz crackpots pulled d plugs. . But I enjoyed this one to d core… Loved it. Kudos to u.

  5. _Ritu

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    Dear u made me laugh like anything..I dont watch any of this show but yet I enjoyed reading it..Ekta’s show…I will keep my mouth shut….and this is the reason why I love MMZ..no stupidity..no baseless things only pure relationships and love.. πŸ™‚ good job dear..

  6. Rossy

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    Superb,fantastic…m rolling on floor now…omg ekta serials…don’t know what she will do Indian tv industry..why don’t u add her new interests animals,snakes,birds,dyan,pisach,rakhashya…omg…seriously..anyway thank u for giving such funny OS…

  7. Emz fasa

    Awesome superb mindblowing πŸ™‚ i have killed ekta kapoor million time in my thoughts πŸ˜‰

  8. krity

    Oh my goodness my tummy is paining like anything nd that the dadi wala part was awesome I’m shedding the tears because of laughing so hard I salute u yr come soon with some more hilarious one shots…I literally felling pity for Arjun..

  9. S.v

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    lol i never knew anything other than manmarziyan but i’m laughing like anything for the comedy update. I was soo stressed up but now i’m smiling . Thank you for that………

  10. Jessie

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    Haha..Hey Nishi.. this is fantastic… oh god..am rolling on floor.. IshRa part ma fav.. Raman u remember all tracks.. lol.. tats difficult.. Aakir wo Raman kumar Bhalla hai..!! Mani loves Ishu..*shock*I stopped watching it when Ishu landed in jail.. n pragya ‘s ques abt Tanu.. Rofl.. I too have d same one. So slim yet preg for more than a year.. tats called maiya’s magic!!πŸ˜‰ Arjun finally packs 2 land here… Aww.. how chweeeet.. am welcoming him with Tight hugs.. loved it dear… waise ishveer ko chod diya! Kyun.. I wondered their fate..kabhi chance to milega ya nahi pyaar karne ki..always separation… bear hugs.. do write comedy tracks..

  11. Gianna

    LOL am laughing so hard, pregnant for 1.5 yrs with slim figure, omg Ekta is screwing ppl with her shows. Good one Nishi

  12. Neha

    Is Cooolll….plzzzz plzzz plzzz continue this…thanks for writing comedy track….something differrent…i love it…1.5 year pregnency hahaha lol… πŸ™‚
    plzzz next one update soon… πŸ™‚

  13. Jnana

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    I’ve been watshing the serial’s of these boring tracks just to see some spark but all in vain. May be they will never get a spark. But this was awesome. Marriage after ADI’s grandchildren even that is possible. Those people never grow old….lol

  14. Roma

    Omg nishiiiii…it’s hilaaaaaaarious. ..I’m laughing like helll. …lol…tooo good…love you loads. ..muaaaaahhhhhh β™‘β™‘β™‘

  15. Nishi

    Thank you guys for your precious comments…you don’t know what it means to me…love you loads

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