A COMMON LOVE STORY –XXXV

BHARAT MILAAP PART 3 THE PLANNNNN………
Arzz kia hai……..
“AAj kal ……….
Aaj kal………….
Aaj kal tere mere vpyaar ke charche hain zubaan par……..
Sabo maloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi………
Toh aap kehte ho aacha ‘TOH KYA??”
Lol I just killed it 😛
Ok real good 1 shayari 
“Bina dard ke aansu bahaye nahi jaate ……..
Bina dard ke aansu bahaye nahi jaate…………..
Bina pyaar ke rishte nibhaye nahi jaate
Zindagi me bas ek baat yaad rakhna….
Kisi ko rula ke apne sapne sajaye nahi jaate”

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It was around 4:30 am in the morning, we got up quite early, and it looked as if it was midnight,
That was quite early for the coldest winter’s coldest day, of the decade,
The good deed we were Gonna gave us strength, to , set every possible and available source with alarms,
As the alms ringed tin , trinGGGGG , a beautiful lullaby song , wait a second who the ____ in this word set lullaby song as an alarm tone…………………..
I think don’t loves his/her life……..
The next was the whole neighbourhood up , and shouting at us to stop the alarms, and the two families gathered in kids room, I mean in the hall where we were sleeping and we the peace or “MISSION UNIFICATION” or “MISSION BHARAT MILAAP” workers still fast asleep………. 😛
Somehow I got up after taking my first bath, when I hit my mother’s hand all trying to stop her from waking me up, and I bathed from 5 cups of hot milk that were , decorated on a tray, held by my aunties hand standing besides my mother, as my mum’s hand hit the tray,
I woke up shouting in burning pain……………

Well the neighbors enquired my health from their balconies or calling my parents on phone, and also they half sleep heard my scream,
And my commandoes not even a a yawn , or movement from their side,
Really un ke kaano par juu (lice) tak nahi rengi 😛
Hmph !!!!!!!!!
What can be done of those descendants of kumbhkarana…………….
I was really pissed off now, firstly morning tragedy now this, I could not disturb anyone as they were my guests but one person was there upon whom I felt no mercy ,
My sweet siso ♥♥ she really couldn’t react that day in front of the guests orrrrRRrrrr true say , MR. R…………..
If it wouldn’t be him she would have really killed me that day, for intentionally stepping on her arm while she was sleeping and also waking her up with a bang , as I lost balance , and fell on her, well she was in great pain,my father stared at me with anger as I left from the hall,
The ext we freshened up , and packed ourselves, I mean wore , a warm, fatty, too many layers of clothes, and then had hot coffee,
We then discussed our plans , and……………..
And………………..

Hell yeah…………….
Doom you guys…………….
They all , my commandoes were all asleep again……………..
Hmm……….. pardon me for my language but what, could a sweet lovely♥♥ cute and talented girl do if that happens on the first day of her mission to unite her love♥♥ with his younger brother,
I went to my room put on my headphones and fell asleep soon…………
Then I was scolded by those silly, brats for sleeping in the very begning of such an important mission 😡 😡

LOL can you guess what happened next well wait ………..
I request patience…………..
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heyy ya all hw r u ?? doing well na??
@ manha &@ dia my solo commenterzzzzz lov u u know ur that comment really gave me a ray of hope that m not going soo bad at the story that onlyyyy comment encouraged mea lt thank u and keep commenting lov u and this chap 4 u my lone sweet commenter .
also besties dr @@ minnal for your xams  waiting 4 ur scolding and feelings abtthe stryy :p lol
@ dia bak missed u missed u u dr….

@ nishaa or @ pikachuu if u read it a biggg flame thrower on u yaaar i read natty’s pages cmmnts and manha said u said good by hell yeah u nd natty both emo fools really if i don’t get a solid reason for your dissapearence i will really publish a fic on u two and ask tu to make it feature if not that it would hav a link posted by me on almost every page i m really really vvvvv cant even xpress so byy my lat not so kind words till i get a solid reason, anywaysss i m willing to mrdr u bth emosnal ppl m just gnne………… i really dunno d matter just read a cooment, and didn’t lol if i hurt u butt m really ……………..
i m derptressed sooo all credit to nisha nd natty emo pplsss aalsooo was last chapter too bad onlyy two comments  :p don’t care atleast two sweet readers 

Credit to: Richa

14 comments

  1. Gm early morng 1st cmntr jwaloo nyc to c ur cmnt ♥ u thank u keep reading tc muaaah☺ sry yestday u cmntd late i had sent fic by dat tym cudnt add ur name lol tc besties
    l
    l splng nd grammar chk mesd up again:-P
    its pyaar in shayari nt vpaar
    next nt ext
    gonna do
    1st milky bath
    p***d off
    hah evn speech 4 natty n nish

  2. Thank u nd keep readin ruby dr 😎 ☺ lol tc gm
    m fyn jwalu wbu nd dia yup she is dvga is in 12 th nd board lol tc kep readin

  3. manha

    richa maata aap toh dhanya ho. Ab aap ke darbaar me aaye hai toh prasad lekar hi jayenge is baar. Heyyy i hav read ur reply in last chap now. Sorry i was busy. Ok so the jokes were gud. History wala toh sab se top. lol.

    Ab is baar toh tumne meri jaan hi leli. Kya hamare pyaar ke charche chal rahe hain ohhh aur hame bataaya bhi nahi kisine. uffff. hamesha mujhe aakhir me pataa kyun chalta hain.
    Dusri wali shayari nahi richa. oh zindagi ka wusool hain. Jo shayad aajkal koi nahi aapna na chahta. thank u dear for all these. They really mean something.

    Ohhh why is this short update. But koi nahi Hamari drama queen ka toh koi jawaab nahi. It was superb. N u r just amazing. U really have a unique kind of writing. Bechari pehle toh koi nahi utha ab jab so rahi hain toh sab usi ko daat rahe hain. lol. It was quite funny. Jaldi jaldi update karo richu.

    Haan tumne dekha nishuuu. uff us ladki ka kya karu. Ek msg rakhti hain aur gaayab ho jati hain. Hame mauka bhi nahi deti baat karne ka. Nishuuuuuu if u seeing this plzzzzz talk to us. We r waiting for u dearyyyyyyy. plzzzzzzz. plzzzzzzzzzz.

  4. Heyy yaa manha nice to c u ♥u haan aur parsaad ☀¤♣\ (•◡•) / a big hug ☺ hehe
    aur choti wali updates i kunki maine aur b post kia tha parsun aur kal epi analysis me sasaswti chandra aur fic me short stry (ff) b post ki laammmbbii wali lol read last part shuru intro h 😎
    haan g charche har jagah h manhu dr kya karein hum hain hi itne famus 😛

    itni tareef 😳
    shinchan styl ab m itni b khas ni lol 😆
    nisha i’l kil hr nd natty nd seriusly i wil publish a fic of thm both 😡
    nyways lol lov u tc keep readin muaah ♥

  5. Yours Nisha

    hey richu and manha love u my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Both are my saviours yes dear the reason and the justifications you get one the same page where you write the comment richu love u meri lovely lileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    and yes oh yeah

    aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zubban par
    sabko maaloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gaye toh kya.

    Well I read this Acls and woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    You write actually about yourself I think so because whatever you write is actually similar to my situation once a time. and I think its yours too.

    but really loving it all. dear

    The milk falls nobody actually awake .

    Logo ke kaan mein jun bhi nahi rengee such me Bindaas.

    Love u dear and the reason and a message left for all of you my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees on the same page where you left the message.

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always friend

  6. manha

    nishuuuu ye kya hain yaar. plzzz aise ma kaho. we r not going anywhere. we r still here. we r just not getting place to talk. It was ur ff where we were talking n meeting each other. But now u r not posting it n u r not accepting our hangout request too. plzzz dear just take time n write two para n post it n then see everyone will come there n we can all be as we were early. Its not a way to leave. plzzz socho.

    Richu tumm bahut khaas ho aur tum bahut acha likhti ho. haan naine dekhi short story. But couldn’t comment. sorry. r u in wattpad, i have seen ur winter tale story in that.

  7. richa (titli)

    hyy manhu LOV U no matter dr but hw was it??
    OHHH IS MISS NISHA HERE WELL I WAS PREPERING FAREWELL GIFTS 4 U ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    ANYWAYS AS I SAID I WONT GIVE A DAMN GOING BACK TO CHK RE4PLY THERE AND UR REPLY SAVED U FROM BEING FEATURED IN MY FIC AND IF U THINK M RUDE HERE ASK TELLY FRNDS CONNECTED ON FB WITH ME M THE RUDEST TO THEM WHEN I M NOT IN MOOD ND THEY DONT 😛 ….
    BYYY GTG M VVVVV BUSYY AND DONTHV TIME TO WASTE
    MANHU DR U KNOW THAT SONG AADMI MUSAAFIR HAI …
    I REALLY DO BELIEVE AND DONT CARE ANYMORE AS MANY BETRAYED ME NDDDD 9I GOTYYY MANYY GOOD BY MAIL MANYY NEVER REPLIED I CRIED A LOT I TREID TO CONTACT ASK UNKNOWN WHO WRITESV ON SWARAGINI SHE DIDNT REPLY AND I SEARCHED ALL PAGES 4 HER AND WISHD HER ALSOOO KAJUU BHArfii i senddd dhamkiss to her LOL I REALLY HV BCM A PATTHYER ND DNT CARE ANYMORE

    IF GITS R LESS TAKE MORE ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    LOL MANHU DR TC

  8. Yours nisha

    hey manhu dear I leave it a message here to make u know that I am fine dear and I told u too to see naty page , I write there my heart dear.

    if it is one page then I say it to one page meri jaan.

    and yeah about hangout request dear I am not willingly doing it. it is actually a fault I even not be able to open my mail id then how can i see ur hangout request . there is some mistake or you can say I can’t be able to understand what happened , coz I never make a gmail id doesn’t have a phone no. this is the reason. and actually its a fact that if you want to make a id you need to have a phone no. or any other mail id .

    that’s why the g+ idea is actually new to me and I can’t be able to connect properly.

    and yes love u manhu this is a new day and i am fine too meri jaan.

    looks like richu u r angry on me dear, You have a right to be angry dear,

    yes a true confession, I don’t know for which time period I am here, but yes I am here because of all of you. The reason is to meet you all first for coming this site now. I visit before earlier for reading manmarziyaan and then what makes me bind here is just the love of you all dear.

    I am sad because so many friends actually left , yes a little sad,

    life is never a bed of rose, when people came and they actually unknowingly made a special place in ur heart and when they left it is actually hurt you dear. I am getting hurt too. when I see so many people going . I have actually a habit to meet you all everyday.

    its okay Life is never be the same we all are girls and we all have a life and we can’t be here for life long.

    and I just try to not getting hurt dear. The time when I actually leave you all is actually happened accidently because of some major problem , till when god and situations are in favour for me I am here to meet you all because i love u all by heart.

    The decision maker is always you all meri jaan.

    To take me in or to kick me out from here.

    Your wish and my command dear, I know u r busy dear, and I respect your time a lot dear.

    and love u also dear always by heart it does’nt matter that I may be with u for life long but u always stay in my heart for life long as a sweetheart . You all made ur place safer in my heart

    I actually not here to do anyting with my mind , I am actually writing saying what ever it is it is direct by my heart.

    If I actually making or doing or saying anything wrong dear then let me know ,I will Leave this place then silently and never open the link of fanfic
    Its a genuine promise dear because the reason to visit here is just to making u all smile.

    love u by heart

    keep smiling

    once a friend always a friend.

    I am getting easily

  9. yours nishu

    hey my sweetheart dear

    tumhari iss 50% katti ko 50% batti mein dalke 100% pyaar zaroor denge dear.

    Love u meri jaan.

    back in the mood.

    and coming on new page dear I have facing problem to reach on wordpress.com I explain it on naty page. too dear. I read ur message herer and there too

    so I don’t know u came here and there I give u the link of there

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-life-episode-38/comment-page-1/#comment-828010

    love u meri jaan.

    no need to bear a senti nishu anymore

    I am here and smiling too now.

    Love u keep smiling

    once a friend always a friend

  10. dia

    Luvdd this part……nd milk part was…can’t describe that….nd mr rep nd siso….

    Luv u nishu

    hy manha nd jwaloo

    devu di miss uu

    atb

    lichu di chholly fol late cmnt

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