When she coloured my canvas – IB & DBO – Colour 48

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Colour 48

ShivOmSomu looks on shocked seeing Anika coming out of the room.

A: why Billuji, don’t I’ve the right to know what happened to my chutki.Why u people r hiding everything from me.Soumya at least you tell me what had happened?

S: woh actually didi….let bade Baal wale bhaiyya say( smiling)

A: why r u smiling Soumya, what is it…

O: don’t be tensed bhabhi, I’ll say( with a smile)

Flashback…..
Gouri was being restless.She was tossing & turning around in her bed.She could see a deeply sleeping Om, but didn’t want to disturb him.She tried waking him up but it didn’t work.She slowly get out of the bed & walked towards the door but unfortunately, she hit the flower vase kept on the table & it fell down with a sound. She bit her tongue & slowly turned back to see Om waking up , rubbing his eyes.

O: oh no….what’s this sound, ( yawning, he switched on the lights)

He was shocked to see Gouri standing near the door.His eyes were red with incomplete sleep.

O: what are u doing here gouri??? Can’t u sleep at this time ( still yawning)
G: woh..darsal….I want to have jalebis.
O:( shocked) now….at this hour of night???
G: haan….I’m so hungry & I want to eat sweet, hot jalebis.
O: where will u get hot jalebis now ???
She stood there with puppy eyes…..

G: please please Omkaraji, I want to have it now….can you bring me???

Flashback ends……

O: this is the problem bhabhi….Any solution ? Where will I get jalebis now??

A: oh bête ki, my poor chutki…. How can I help her now???hmm…..idea!!!!

So: what is it Di??

A: arey Soumya we’ve made jalebis for tomorrow’s function right. We’ll give her some from it!!!
S: no no Di. You remember na, when I asked Dadi permission to take some, she told that we can take it only after offering it to Krishna during puja.Then how will we take it??
Sh: then what will we do??

A: hamare pass ek khidkitod plan hai.Sub chalo Na meri saath….( logic sign)….

Rudra had woke up to drink some water , very unusually.He was surprised to see Soumya missing. He found out that she was not there in bathroom too. He slowly walked out of the room but was followed by the sweet , faint fragrance of jalebis.

” who is making jalebis at this time? that too in the upper floor’s kitchen?” He wondered & slowly walked to the kitchen area.

There he witnessed a marvellous scene where Gouri was teaching Anika & Shivay to make jalebis, surrounded by Om & Soumya.They were having a gala time.

R: agent Rudy on mission to catch some thieves in the kitchen at midnight.( loudly)
S:( surprised) hey cry baby, how come u wake up now???
R: such a tragic life is this. My beloved wife didn’t even call me….Leave it…my bhabhis totally ignored me even when I was there to support u in every thing… leave that too…My bros r having obros kitchen moment without me……oh my god….that too in this kitchen!!!
Sh:( laughing)there goes the dramebaazi…Rudra, there’s no big deal in it. We didn’t want to disturb you in ur sleep.Actually gouri had a craving for jalebis so we where making some….if we do it in the first floor , then all will wake up hearing the sound & the fragrance…

O: Mr.dumbbell Oberoi, I’d called u first to say this, but…
Sou: but Mr.sleeping handsome was in his heaven of sleep such that he didn’t hear the phone ringing.Moreover u r on a diet right, then how will u have jalebis???

Rudra made a pouting face, thinking about it, when gouri took a fresh, hot piece of jalebi & slowly went to rudra.

G: no one should tease my pyaari devar. I’m going to give the first jalebi to my dear. Come on , have it Na, just a chota sa jalebi.

Rudra was so happy that he side hugged his bhabhi & gouri fed him with her hand.

R: dekha O, my chulbul bhabhi is so so cute…
An: so u forgot me rudra , it was my idea to make jalebis at this hour of night…..( complained)
R: oho, no Ani bhabhi.How can I ignore my tadibaazi bhabhi….

AniRiRu shared a cute little hug, while Soumya moved to the middle of her bhaiyyas.

So: I’ve my two strong bhaiyyas with me dekha…..
Shi + Om: of course Soumya….

All of them had fun while making jalebis. After making sufficient numbers, all began cleaning the place & decided to have the sweet later.

A: Om is so cute na, bechari, he wanted to fulfill the wish of Gouri ASAP.
So: didi, didn’t u ever trouble shivay bhaiyya like this.

Shivay rolled his eyes at Anika.
S: of course, Anika used to pester me for something or the other. I’d to daily take her outside to have all those food from street vendors.Chaat, gol gappa, channa, etc…etc….
A: oh bête ki, even u also enjoyed all those dishes along with me & u r know scolding me, not fair Billuji…u r so mean nowadays…

Rumya were smiling seeing them fight.
R: don’t laugh much Sumo. I’m damn sure u will make me run here & there for bringing parathas in this stage….I’ll show u that time.

Soumya was blushing slightly & hitting rudra, while he saw some else.
R: Sumo, see that…

Hearing this shivika also turned to the other direction to see that beautiful sight.

Rikara were feeding the jalebis to each other. Gouri was sitting on the kitchen slab while Om was standing. They were lost in each other’s eyes & was slowly, feeding small pieces of jalebis.They were in their own little world….

A: dekha billuji, how cute they look like that…..
So: u r right Di, ekdum romantic….

ShivRu looked at each other & they together shouted, ” Om!!!!”

Rikara’s moment was broken & they turned to see the others, while Om slightly bit gouri’s finger as she was feeding him.
“ouch!!!” squealed Gouri,
O: ( tensed) I’m sorry dear, I didn’t take care.
He said while tending to her finger & slowly kissing it.
Gouri blushed & quickly took away her finger from him.

An: why did both of u called him like that.U destroyed their cute moment.Cheapde.
R:( serious) O, this is kitchen ok.U should behave with manners.Didnt u see we’re struggling to clean everything & u r…
So: stop it, bade Baal wale Bhaiyya, it’s ok we’ll manage.If u want I can take the sweets to ur room & have it.
G: nahi toh…woh…I’ll help u to clean everything, after all u all did this much for me Na, so now I should help u to clean this.
Sh: no neex gouri. u should take rest, Rudra was joking only.U must be tired .
R: haan chulbul bhabhi….I was kidding.

Gouri went near Shivay.
Sh: nahi bade Bhaiyya, I’m ok.I can help you, I’m not tired. & thank you for helping me to have such sweet jalebis, I’d never forget this.U were in deep sleep, still u came to help this little behen ….I’m happy to get such a loving family ( tears flowing down)

All smiled hearing this, specially shivay.
Sh: anything for my behen.( & hugged Gouri)After all I’m ur Bade Bhaiyya
He slowly wiped away all the tears from gouri’s cheeks.

R: guys , the moment is emotional but now it’s awkward.So no more tears after eating jalebis, heard chulbul bhabhi.

Gouri smiled hearing this.
R: now sab bolo
“Dil Bole Oberoi!!!” 💪

Don’t you think it was a beautiful & adorable Oberoi moment???

Then please do drop in ur views guys.
Waiting for ur replies…

Precap:- janmashtami celebrations!!!

Sorry for same precap😉 , not getting anything else😜

It’s a double dhamaka as I’ve posted the teaser of my upcoming work too.Do check it out.

Bye,
take care….

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32 Comments
  1. hi shraddha I was silent reader of ur ff now decided to say something after I saw the adorable obro moments its awesome dear keep it up
    love ur ffs

    Ayesha

  2. Dhar

    Awesome episode Dii.. Plzz do post the next update ASAP

  3. Hiiii shraddha….. How are u dear???…
    Your chappy is just awesome as always….
    Gaurikara feeding jalebies to each other…. soooooo cuteeeeeee….
    #CaringKara……

    Waise I am bit ( bahut thoda sa) angery on u…. Tum jaldi gayab ho jati ho after posting a chappy… that to for a long time….
    I ALWAYS MISS UR FF AND DOUBLE DHAMAKA LIKE ANYTHINGH…..

    BUT STILL LOVE U DEAR….

  4. Negisanyukta

    Awesome episode as usual.I just loved it to the core.😍😍😍😍
    I’m not getting enough words to appreciate this part.😇😇😇
    But i missed so many parts and comment-
    -ing.Everything from Rudra’s marriage to this episode is just like a dream come true to see their love,care,teasing and especially o’bro and o’bahus masti with family.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
    I hope u remember me,I’m Sanyukta.
    I think blue colour is suitable for this chappy.🔵🔵🔵
    Keep writing dear and eagerly waiting for Janmashtmi celebration .😄😄😄

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Hi sanyukta of course how can I forget you dear.
      I’m happy that u loved all the chappies, please do continue reading this ff.
      Love you 😍💖

  5. I loved it so much. Looking forward to more. Update asap.

  6. Niriha

    Awesome…..loved it to the core waiting for next part update soon

  7. Awesome….liked Rudy’s dialogue in kitchen………

  8. Verna

    This was soo cute RG 😉 😉 Now I too.want jelabi.. ok I’m going to nag my mom and u try to give next ASAP

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Oh no I shall send some online jalebis to you….OG😉😉….Of course shall come back with the next very soon👍

  9. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear.. Orange color for the sweet moments

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thanks Niki 💖

  10. Fffan1234

    Super awesome episode. Loved it.

  11. Wow! Wht a khidkitod epi.loved dis epi 2 d core. Such a cute obroi moment. I want 2 see scenes like dis in the show too.bt forget it.they can only give dat useless naagini scenes only. Btw hiiiii i’m a silent reader of ur ff.I read ur ff from d beginning. Bt couldn’t comment as I was busy vth my exams.bt now i’m free.I will definitely comment on every epi.plz post d nxt epi asap.I love 2 see dis caringkara.bye dr tc.n ur pp is sooo cute dr.

  12. Aarti32

    Luvly update

  13. B.k.maha

    Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrt……..

  14. Logesh.M

    Its very interesting shraddha…Ruri are having nice bond☺☺☺😂You reminded jalebi to me😏😏Its really awesome…keep rocking…update ASAP🙄🙄🙄

  15. ShailajaBanthia

    awwww how sweet loved rikara scens update soon

  16. Rasika

    Awsm.. Waiting for the next epi

  17. Yashu

    O god…loved it….rikara were awesome….eagerly waiting for nxt episode..

  18. Alekhika20

    Awesome update

  19. Tanz

    Wonderful part Di…. craving for a jalebi at midnight 😂😂😂…and yes this was an amazing O-bro-bahu moment…loved it😍
    Please post the next one soon 😁

  20. Simrat_14

    Yay! I’m catched up on your story. Suuuuuppppper interesting 😘

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Missed ur comments Simrat, happy that u came back…😍

  21. VHM

    good episode…waiting for the next …will now go on to read the teaser…also thank you for sending the links…it really means a lot

  22. Bubblu

    Almost all who read dis chappy is craving t have jelabis di..Super episode di..Luved the chapter..but i knid of miss AnRi’s bond…Like both are sisters so they could heve a cute monent during dis stage(i feel so) and wanted to see Tej and gauri’s convo…bcoz its his grandchild…I would like to know what you think of it…Sorry if asked for too much

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Wow Bubblu…. thanks for ur comment..
      & No sorry cutie, coz thanks for the suggestions.
      Ya I love AniRi bond & about TejRi I really thought of adding them in this but didn’t get a gap….
      Thanks once again for the suggestions buddy😍💖

  23. Zaveesha

    It was too awesome and adorable…

  24. AWESOME BEAUTIFUL CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT INTERSTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT ROMANTIC SUPERB👌👌👌😍😘😍😘😍😘💖💖💖

    Dear Shraddha
    It Was Awesome Se Bhi Awesome Wala Oberoi Moment Filled With Care Cutness Sweetness Fun Love😍😘😚😙💖Each And Every Moment I Really Love It RiKara Cute Sweet Awww Moment😍😘😚Gauri Bonding With ShivRu😘😚Rudy Warning Sumo Is Funny😀Totally I Really Enjoy And Love This Part Sooo Much😘😚💗👏👏👏

    My Health Condition Is Not Fit.Thoda Fever Hai…..Hamesha Fever Nahi Hothi,But Aathe Jaathe Rahthe Hai.So That Why Iam Commenting Late.So Please Pray For My Good And Fit Health😊🙏🙏🙏

    Take Care And Stay Safe😊

  25. Sagithya

    Awesome yaar… Loved Rudy Anika n gauri bond…. N saumya om n shivaay bonding… Excited for the next part… post it soon…

  26. Oh my mata!!so this was that secret.I thought that if something bad there.but this is jalebi scenes.You are so sweet that you wrote a sweet chappy like this.ummm..lovely.every detailing every moment is too good.awesome.keep writing like this.
    colour-sweet red like jalebi(don’t know how is this colour but as sweet as jalebi)

  27. Aliza111

    For the sweet jelebi obro obahu chap I suggest rose pink… And thnk u. Di for mentioning me in this chap … No need of sry… I tjiugt it was something great prblm but it was such a cutie rikara moment …. Tnk u and update asap

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