When the clock strikes 4 Shot (1)


Guys I am sorry sorry sorry sorry for making you wait for a long time and I am.making it 2 shots since it’s going really long.. Now let’s get to the story

A boy was waiting in the park sitting on a bench.. He reminisces seeing a girl sitting on a bench besides his bench reading books… He says to himself that girl must be a book worm Yaar always reading books.. She looks so cute in her chasma.. She is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen.. I will write songs about her all my life with all my heart..Suddenly he realizes that he is in love with her. He said to himself Oh my God!!! when did this happen!?
I need to share my thoughts with her before it’s too late.. Today he was bit early there is a clock in the park.. It strikes 4 and starts chiming.. He says to himself get ready Abhi, she will be here any moment from now..
It was half past 4 she was nowhere to be seen.. His thoughts ran wild…
Abhi said, She must be here now,why is she late today…? Did something happen to her!??
Just then some kids arrived there, he enquired them about her.From them he came to know that she got engaged and tomorrow is her marriage. He was shocked and went speechless.. He tried to speak but in vain no word came out of his mouth.
FB Begins
Abhi was sitting on the bench he usually sits to pen his lyrics, today he saw a beautiful girl sitting in the bench besides his bench… He wasn’t able to take his eyes of her..He had an amazing idea he started writing about her, and took his Guitar strumming it he sang,

Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Kisi zaaba mein bhi, woh laafaz hi
Ki zin mein tum ho kya tumhe baata sakoon
Mein agar kahoon tumsa haseen
Kaayanaath mein nahi hai kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin.

The girl who was reading all this while looked up , smiled at him and signed super and continued reading…

He thought can’t she just say it out aloud!?? Come on man I just wroteabout her and she dint even thank me..Then he realized he dint mention that this song was about her, he hit himself and was about to tell her but she was nowhere to be found.. He thought ok will tell her later…
The next day he came earlier the clock in the park strikes 4 and she comes and sits in the bench which is besides him..He was so happy, that he forgot that he had to tell her that yesterday’s song was abouther. His face was beaming with joy he kept on looking at her, she noticed this and just smiled at him in return..

Some kids playing in the park came to her, and she left the book there on the bench and went to play with them. He took that book and read it’s title, it was Sherlock Holmes ‘ A study in Scarlet’. He kept that book back in its place and said to himself Sherlock what!?? I only know Sheenlac wood polish who is this Sherlock!? By that time she came back again smiled at him and went away taking the book.. He was in a complete mesmerized state after she left Poof!! That magic was gone and he remembers that today also he forgot to tell her about that song..

He thought to himself may be he shouldn’t tell her.. Why should I tell her , Fugga jaisa Chehra( Balloon like face) not all speaking with me attitude huh!?? I too will show you Rock star’s attitude babe.. Next day he was bit late, he saw her crying and thought to himself Oh she is missing me that’s why she is crying.. O Poor girl..

He went near her and saw that she was crying for a long time and her eyes were blood shot.. Have to do something to make her smile Abhi.. Think of something come on man!! Suddenly he sprung from his bench his eyes were beaming and said Idea..
He took his Guitar and.. ( You guys know rest is history)

Kabhi Kabhi Aditi Zindagi Me Yun Hi Koi Apna Lagta Hai
Kabhi Kabhi Aditi Woh Bichad Jaye Toh Ek Sapna Lagta Hai
Aise Me Koi Kaise Apne Aansuon Ko Bahene Se Roke
Aur Kaise Koi Sochle Everything’s Gonna Be Okay
Kabhi Kabhi Toh Lage Zindagi Me Rahi Na Khushi Aur Na Maza
Kabhi Kabhi Toh Lage Har DinMushkil Aur Har Pal Ek Saza
Aise Me Koi Kaise Muskuraaye, Kaise Has De Khush Hoke
Aur Kaise Koi Sochle Everything’s Gonna Be Okay
Soch Zara Jaane Ja Tujhko Hum Kitna Chahte Hain
Rote Hum Bhi Agar Tere Aankhon Me Aansun Aate Hain ( Those kids playing also joined him)
Gaana Toh Aata Nahi Hai Magar Fir Bhi Gaate Hain
Hey Aditi Maan Kabhi Kabhi SaareJahan Me Andhera Hota Hai
Lekin Raat Ke Baad Hi Toh Savera Hota Hai
Hey Aditi Has De Has De Has De Has De Has De Tu Zara
Nahi Toh Bas Thoda Thoda Thoda Thoda Thoda Thoda Muskura

He was saying to himself, Waah! She started smiling….
He called her, Hey Aditi!??
She ran off smiling..

He was lost in thoughts again, why am I so into this girl, she neverspoke to me though.. Few days passed , they both were seeing each other daily and smiling at each other, she will continue reading her books, he will continue with his lyrics.. One day, when he was writing suddenly he started to hick up he felt someone patting on his head.. And he was handed a bottle of water, then he realized it was that girl who did this he felt very happy, excited that she too cares for him just like how he caresfor her, he was smiling like an idiot looking at her without drinking water, a boy came running and said, Uncle hick ups won’t go if you smile like this drink water… Abhi came back to his senses and stared at that kid and drank water.. He said, Thank you Aditi.. She just smiled and left the place.. He started to wonder why isn’t she speaking at all!?? May be she is bit passive type.. But i like her, she is cute, caring..That day he was so happy, when he went home, he heard Aakash calling him.. Bhai!!!!
I am very sorry Bhai, without asking you I arranged for a concert in Agra.. You have to be there for a week.. He felt happy and sad at the same time, coz he will miss his Aditi a lot.. With half heart he went for the concert…
FB ends..

Present day: He dint know what to do sat on the bench which she used to sit..
Aaliya came there and called, Bhai!!!He turned back, she pointed towards the clock which shows 5.. He got up from there and left with Aaliya.. He dint eat, speak or sleep properly that day.. Next day he couldn’t take this any longer so left for the Mandap where her marriage is scheduled.. He reached around 3:50.. There was no sign of pplgathering there, place is very well decorated but nobody was there.. With a heavy heart he entered insideand saw 4 ppl hugging each other and crying.. He recognized the girl and called her Aditi……

The girl came running and hugged him, the clock there chimed 4..
A voice came , a very excited one..
So you are my Jiju..!! Oh my god oh my god I am flying!!
Di you never said Rock star Abhi was my Jiju… and what about this Aditi!?? Who is that!? She realized and slapped herself mentally andsaid, Oh pet name for my di..
Please tell me na jiju how you fell for this book worm!? I really wanna know tell na jiju, please please please please.. Abhi put his hand out signing her to stop..
Abhi said, Meri ma only if you could give me some gap to speak back I can answer your questions! I am tired hearing you speak please go drink some water and come .. And thank God your di is not like you very silent.. And you speak enoughfor both of you.. I think that’s reason why she doesn’t speak.. Hearing this everyone there became sad!! Jiju you don’t know my di can’t speak at all she is dumb since birth!…

Precap:Pragya’s dad came and forwarded his hand for a handshake and said, I am Rampal Arora Pragya’s father a well known business man and this is Sarla Arora my wife.. Abhi took their blessings..

Guys sorry for giving a full song, and very
very sorry for making Pragya dumb.. I need feedbacks guys and no stones please…

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  1. Luvd it different storyline osme

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Manju it’s my pleasure ?

  2. sema twist yaaaaaaaaaaa

    1. Prathi

      Thanks ya?

  3. It was awesome I loved it

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Monesha.. ?

  4. Maya

    Awesomely awesome! No stones but only flowers ???????⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘

    1. Prathi

      Thank you so much for the flowers Maya ??

  5. super…

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Sugan ??

  6. No stones dear its a different story loved it???

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Saranya????

  7. Reshma Pradeep


    1. Prathi

      Thank you Reshma ? and I like your Dp ?

  8. Nice episode yaar bt so many doubts wat hpn to tat marriage who s the groom y thy r crying while abhi entered after tat how bulbul says abhi s her jiju ohhhhh god full of confusion???

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Durga.. ?You questions will be answered in the next shot have patience..

  9. Krish

    Nice………..difff story egarllyyyyyy waitng fr te nxt shot………..

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Krish..??

  10. No stones dear only flowers..it was superb…

    1. Prathi

      Thank you for the flowers Aliza??

  11. what a twist yar ,,,, superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Divya.. ???

  12. Vaishali

    awesome yaar prathi dii it was really really nice different one interesting one awesome love caring two what more i can say superbbb thanks fr supporting me always waiting fr ur next episode love u loadzz

  13. Prathi

    Thank you Vaishali for so much of love ??????

  14. Maahi

    omg dr it’s a way tooo awesome dr keep rocking

    1. Prathi

      Thank you Maahi??

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