My Cinderella – a raglak ss(part-4)


Hi guys. I think u r waiting for my ss. So guys do u want to know what did ragini listened in phn that she got shocked… So today u will come to know that. Follow this ss.
Rag lifts the phn n remains shocked.
Laksh was just then coming back to home to take his phn…
Rag stood there silently without any expressions.
Laksh comes to her…..
lak:ragini… what hppnd….
Rags just gives the phn to laksh n goes from there with teary eyes.
Laksh didnt notice that she is crying he simply took the phn being confused with her behaviour… As she is very talkative. Never keeps quite.
Lak:what happnd to her suddenly. He keeps phn near his ear.

Lak:raj…. Bolo…
Raj:bhai aap kuch bolte kyu nahi.
Lak:kya hua raj… Kuch bolo pehle…
Raj(excited):bhai…. Bhabhi mil gayi….
Lak(extremely happy):what.. Kaha…. Where is she…. How does she looks. Send me her photo
Raj:bhai… I didnt see her yet. I just came to know that they changed their names n his brother is working as a doctor…
Lak:did u find there present names…
raj:no bhai… I met one person who stays near there house… Today ill come to know abt them.
Lak:m coming….
Raj: ok bhai…. Come to the cafe near the studio from there we will go…
Lak:ok m coming…
Scene shifts to ragini….

Rag comes out of the house n sit on a bench in garden. Raj words are echoing in her ears…. “shadi ki tayari karo bhabhi mil gayi…. I found ur Cinderella….”
Rag:wiping her tears… No ragini u shldnt cry… All will not be lucky to get their love. U love laksh sir but he loves someone else…. Loves doesnt expect return it just knows loving the person n want to see him/her happy… laksh sir got his love. U want his happiness. N his happiness lies with his cinderella. She wipes her tears n goes inside the mansion. as soon as she enters laksh hugs her n twirls her.
Lak(while twirling):ragini…. Ragini.. Ragini…. Im so happy today… He puts her down… U know my cinderella…. My love…. I found her…. After so much of struggle i found her… All this while ragini is controlling her tears….he holds her shoulders.. Today m gonna see her… Wohooooo m so… So… So… Happy. He leaves her shoulders. M sry… Actually i excitement… He was interrupted by her…
Rag:no prblm i understand. No need of any explanation… N congrats….
Lak:tq tq tq so much… I have to go bye… He leaves. Rags who was controlling her tears now started crying…..
San calls rags… As zoon as she sees san call she wipes her tears n lifts the call.
San:ragu… Shld i come to pick u…
Rag:n.. No.. Bhai… I’ll come.
San:ragu…. Are u crying?
Rag: no bhai… M not crying…..
San:ragu dont lie to me. I know u cant lie that too to me. Tell me what hppnd…
Rag:bhai….. She starts crying….
San:shshhh m coming right now.
Rag:no bhai… U be there… M ok….
San:no… M coming. Thats it. He. Cuts the call. After sometime san comes n takes rags to their home…

Screen freezes……
Guys sry for short update. But i promise next part will be big.. Till then bye.

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    1. Maha6

      Tq sindhura

    1. Maha6

      Tq ammy

  1. Fairy

    Ahhh!!! Now m confirmed dat cinderella is ragini nly???? yey!!! M sooooo happpy …bt at d same tym m sad also coz of rags condition… Shez thinking dat lakshs cinderella is someone else bt in reality shez nly hes love??? bt..still m nt confirmed about rags being cindrella *fingers crossed,wish dat my guess comes true??? update ws sooooper awesome …keeep rockng n stay blessed dear??????

    1. Maha6

      Tq fairy. Yeah u r right rags only laksh’s Cinderella. When our beautiful ragu is there then how can i think of other Cinderella. Yeah m also feeling sad for ragu… But dont worry she will get her love

      1. Fairy

        ???wen u r d writer,i dnt hve ny fear…i know u”ll surely unite dem sooon yaar??????????

      2. Maha6

        Tq fairy. N haa i want to unite them soon. Becoz i like happy endings. N may be they suffer in between. Par ek kahavath hai na “anth bhala tho sab bhala”. So no prbm but m not sure whether their love stry goes smoothly or they may face hurdles… To know that stay tuned to this ss.

      3. Fairy

        Yeh !!!dr m already excied for dere further story????take care sweety?

      4. Maha6

        Tq fairy…

  2. Awesome dear <3333333ed it sooooooo much 🙂

    1. Maha6

      Tq eba for commenting.

  3. Sreevijayan

    Interesting update dear…

    1. Maha6

      Tq sreevijayan

  4. Ragz_teju

    awwww feeling sad for ragini… it’s amazing Laksh’s cinderella is ragini loved it

    1. Maha6

      Tq rags_teju for commenting. N haa feeling sad for ragu but no prblm she will get her love. How can i think of keeping others as Cinderella when our ragu is there…

  5. Fats

    Fabulous update. Aww poor Ragini, she was so hurt by the phone call. And its so sweet how Ragini’s willing so sacrifice her love for Laksh so he can get happiness with his Cinderella ❤️. Can’t wait to read more ?

    1. Maha6

      Tq fats for ur inspiring comment. But dont worry she will get her love soon.

  6. Superb

    1. Maha6

      Tq lovely

  7. Fantastic and Cinderella of laksh is our favourite ragini only . Waiting for laksh reaction . When he will come to knew that the girl he was finding is in front of him . He will be double shocked…..triple….ten times shockeddd .
    Pls update fast dii.
    I am addicted to your ff.

    1. Maha6

      Tq ashnoor for ur wonderful comment. Yeah he will be double shocked by the truth. Are u waiting for his reaction then stay tuned to my ss. N m happy that my ss reached ur heart n u r following it. Tq so much for this… N btw how can i think of other girl when we have our beautiful ragu.

  8. Awesome di

    1. Maha6

      Tq kiddoo

  9. Its amazing….Totally mind blowing…I think Ragini is Laksh’s Cindrella….Anyways I am waiting for the next episode…Update it soon dear…Tale care and stay happy…

    1. Sorry for typing mistake is take care….

    2. Maha6

      Tq riya for for ur overwhelming support. N tq for comenting. N u r right rags is his Cinderella. N no prblm i understood the wrd. Bye.

  10. Awesome

    1. Maha6

      Tq saranya

  11. Asw


  12. Awesome

  13. A.xx

    Great wonder if he’ll find out next episode as she’s going back to her house and they are going to their neighbour’s to find out about Sansku and her…I think Lakshya’s dad knows she saved him as he waved at her and Lakshya didn’t notice and anyways loved it and update soon.xx

    1. Maha6

      Tq A.xx for commenting. N lets see ur guess is crct or not. N I’ll try to update soon.

  14. Awesome.

    1. Maha6

      Tq sherin

  15. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Feeling sad for Ragini
    Now it is confirmed that Ragini is his Cinderella right
    Excited for the next one
    Update soon………………..

    1. Maha6

      Tq spp. Yeah m also feeling sad for ragini but i think that love is pleasurable only if we gain after so much of struggle right. Even if someone get love so easily its nt so much interesting, I think like that… N how can I think of other girl other than our ragu as laksh’s Cinderella…. Hahaha

      1. SPP

        U r right
        U r always welcome dear
        Keep Smiling

  16. IQRA222

    it was awesome
    cant wait for the next part

    1. Maha6

      Tq IQRA for commenting. Plz wait for next update a little atleast for me.

    2. IQRA222

      off course i will wait

      1. Maha6

        Tq IQRA

  17. It’s very interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next

    1. Maha6

      Tq ammu. I’ll try to post next part soon.

  18. Awesome

    1. Maha6

      Tq malu

  19. Dharani


    1. Maha6

      Tq dharani

  20. Awesome part

    1. Maha6

      Tq malu

  21. Superb

    1. Maha6

      Tq arjuna

  22. Radhika..

    Awesome part di i think ragini is only Cinderella of laksh . and sanskar is a doctor and they change their names everything corelate to ragini and sanskar. The chapter is awesome ………..felling sad for ragini but soon she will get happy………and waiting for laksh to find her his reaction and what will he do after finding her. And part is not short at all it is just amazing one loved it . love u di????

    1. Radhika..

      And the most important the way u describe ragini way of thinking about love just love that she thinks firstly for his happiness than his love ??

    2. Maha6

      Love u radhu for ur support. N ur guess is right. Ragini is his Cinderella or piya. N __ for saying that I wrote nicely ragini thoughts for laksh

  23. Jazzy

    sooo ragini is cindrella only superb

    1. Maha6

      Tq jazzy. Haa ragini is laksh’s Cinderella..

  24. nice amazing next part soon

    1. Maha6

      Tq nikky

  25. Asra

    awesome dear…finally ragini s our laksh cinderalla….superbbb dear….sanky u r really caring bro…tkcr dear….

    1. Maha6

      Tq asra… For commenting. N yeah ragini is our laksh’s Cinderella. How can I keep other one when our rag is there…. Kyun…

  26. Sorry 4 the late comment. Interesting story

    1. Maha6

      Tq monu… No prblm for late comment. U have commented that’s enough for me.

  27. Marvelous

  28. Joyful Jessica

    Superb… egarly waiting for next part ☺??

    1. Maha6

      Tq joyful jessica

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