My Cinderella…. a raglak ss (part-2)

Hi guys tq for ur response. I’ll give next part…. Today I’ll give somewhat big episode. So now I’ll continue my SS.


Here begins the episode…

Lak: what if she also say the she can’t… She can’t…. He cries his heart out.
Other side….
Rag was in her room.
Rag:… Why m I feeling sad. It’s just an act. But … It will come true…. He will propose his Cinderella… What is happening to me.
Voice: pyar…….
Rag: what… She sees the direction from where it is coming..
Rag: Bhai…..
Man: ha… Bhai…. U r sister of the great Sanskar malhotra…. But u r crying here…
Rag: Bhai. She hugs him n cries…
San: ragu stop crying….. Now tell me everything.
Rag: I don’t know Bhai what’s happening to me. When he propose heroine I couldn’t see that.
San: isse hi pyar kehthe hai…
Rag: no Bhai. It’s not love. Just it’s an attraction….. Every girl dreamt of him like this only he is handsome good-looking so every girl think like’s not love Bhai. He is the heartrob of every girl.
San: acha if u say that it won’t become true. Becoz u believe or not u love him. N that’s true.
Rag: Bhai…. Even if I love him he won’t love him.
San: can u tell me y that so…
Rag:(stammering): be…becoz…he..he… Lo.. Closes her eyes…. He loves someone else….while saying this she feels extreme pain in her heart.
San: oh…. So matter is complicated….. But ragu I want to tell u one thing…. Love is not the thing which always wins… Sometimes it will be the happy feeling which united the love birds. Sometimes it is the most painful feeling which can’t unite two love birds. N sometimes one sided love is the best feeling. He says with tears in his eyes…

Rag notices this…
Rag: Bhai m sry.. Becoz of me u are crying…. M sry I again remembered u bhabhi…

San: isa math kahna ragu… Thou didn’t remembered me anything. She is always here points to his heart… But ragu I want to say one thing. Don’t do bad things which make u repent.. Ok..
Rag: OK Bhai….. U r my inspiration….. Tq Bhai…. I will see he never come to know abt my love.
Rag hugs San….
San(in mind): God…y. Y… Always my family…. Frst u snatch my love.. Now my sis loves a person who already loves someone else… Why r u doing this to my family…. Make my sis strong…

NXT day…
While laksh was in his room…
Lak gets a call
Lak: haa bolo….
Raj: Bhai… I came to know somewhat abt bhabhi… Actually she is staying with her Bhai… Her parents died in an accident. Her name is piya…..
Lak: ha… I also listened when dad said her name….
Raj: Bhai.. That chain gave a lot of information… It’s very rare…. It is purchased by only rich people. N it was purchased by only 3 people. In that I came to know that one is a person. His name is karthik. N other one is kareena but she has that chain with her. N the third one is piya…. I came to know that she is the daughter of one the richest business magnet sharad kapoor… They settled in us. But becoz of his daughter wish they came to India. N here they died in an accident. N after that their children went off. There is no other information abt them. Even we don’t know whether they are alive or not….
Lak: stop…never say that they are dead. She is alive she is alive I know…
Raj: sry Bhai…
Lak: did u find their photos…
Raj: no Bhai…
Lak: no…. U said they are one of the richest people na why couldn’t u find their photos… Tell me dammit….
Raj: becoz bhai as per the sources I came to know that he never brought his family in front of anyone……
Lak: OK… I don’t know but I want her….at any cost…. Did u get that….
Raj: ok bhai…
He cuts the call
Lak: her name is piya kapoor…but where are they….

He goes to hospital….
Lak: papa…. Plz wake up. U know I can’t be able to leave without u. U know what Papa I came to know abt piya… I want to tell u one thing Papa.. I….I.. Want to make piya ur dil…. Ha… Only if u agree…. Once u gain conscious then I’ll make her stand before u…. It’s my promise Papa.. But plz get well soon. Becoz of ur absence m feeling lonely… A lone tear fall from his father’s eyes. He sees that…
Lak: no Papa.. U r my hero… U shldnt cry… Plz…..he wipes his tears….

Rag:m getting late… Ragu… Don’t be nervous u shldnt make him dbt u.behave like before only. Hufff…now go… She goes to mm but no one is there…
Rag: kaka where is laksh sir….
Kaka: beti sahaab went to hospital…
Rag: hospital…. Hospital kyu… Is he alright…
Kaka: he is alright beti just went to see bade sahab.
Rag: oh..OK… I’ll wait for him.

Scene shifts to hospital…
Lak: doctor can I take him to my home. Actually I want him to be in family environment so that he can cure n get well soon.
Dr: I also wanted to talk to u abt this. Instead I want to sujjest that…
Lak: tq Dr…..
Dr: how many times shld I tell u to call me sanskar not Dr. Ok…
Lak: OK Sanskar…..(guys San doent know that rag is working as a assistant for laksh he thinks she is working in a company. N laksh also don’t know that ragini is sanskar sister)
Lak takes him to mm….
As soon as he enters he sees that ragini is sitting in sofa….but ragini back is facing them.
As soon as he enters he calls ragini.
Lak: ragini….. When did u came….

Rags turns towards them.. As soon as karan(laksh father) saw ragini he shakes his hand….
Laksh is with ragini he didn’t see that…
Lak: actually ragini i want to ask that u r my assistant but I want u to take care of my father….. If u dont mind. I trust u. U will take care of him very nicely. Plz don’t deny…
Rag: sir don’t say like that… Its my pleasure to look after ur father….
Just then rag gets a call.
Rag: ha..coming…(to laksh) sry sir but if u permit me I will start my work from tomorrow…. I have some work today…..
Lak: OK no prblm….. He sees towards his father…..
He goes to him….
Lak: Papa… From tomorrow ragini will take care of u. She is very nice girl….. I trust that if she take care of u.. u will become well soon….
He laughs n takes his father to his room.
Screen freezes…..

Guys it ur turn now to give me the comments…..
Guess who has is this piya….. N where did she go…. N who is sanskar love… That is raginis bhabhi… Guess guess…

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  1. ♥♥♥♥

    1. Maha6

      Tq keerthi for commenting

    1. Maha6

      Tq sindhura

  2. I think ragini is piya

    1. Maha6

      Tq lovely. May be or may not be

  3. Fairy

    Ahhhh!!!maha wt to say yaaar…..brillent update sweety…???ragsan convo ws sooo awesome…m feelng sad for rags…??? n whos dis piya ,maybe nickname of rags???jst a guess dear…sanlak convo ws sweet…waitng eagerly for raglk moments…keep rockng n stay blessed dear?????thnx for postng a long n amazng update sweety????

    1. Maha6

      Tq fairy…. M very much glad that u found it interesting. Tq once again yaar.may be rags sweet name is piya or may not be. Whatever let’s see

  4. Jazzy

    Awesome.I think ragini is the same girl

    1. Maha6

      Tq jazzy. Plz wait for little to know who is piya. I believe u will wait.

  5. Ragz_teju

    awesome… loved it to the core

    1. Maha6

      Tq Ragz_teju

  6. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Piya will be our Ragini right
    And Ragini’s bhabhi no idea
    Waiting for the next one…………..

    1. Maha6

      Tq spp for ur overwhelming support. N abt rags as piya u will know but plz wait a little.

      1. SPP

        U r always welcome dear
        Keep Smiling

  7. Awesome episode

  8. Amazing ☺☺??
    Piya is our ragini only . Maybe be she lost her memory and due to rivalries sanskar changed his name and ragini ‘ s name .

    1. Maha6

      Tq ashnoor for commenting. May be ur guess is right or may not be. Just wait a little to know the truth

  9. Radhika..

    Awesome part di ragsan brother sisters laksh sanskar friends nice it is interesting di and laksh father start shaking his finger by seeing ragini means the answer is sure ragini is piya and about sanskar love firstly I think its swara but if swara is not there than it may be kavita or someone else who us her bhabhi bit now not may be she died and swara will enter soon think so and the rest is on u di just loved it. Continue soon. Loved the part u????

    1. Maha6

      ___ radhu. N abg the guess let’s see. N it’s an raglak ss so swasan scenes are somewhat less. Dont feel for that.

  10. Awesome

  11. Megha123

    Awsm part loved the suspence & i guess piya is ragini’s bhabhi

    1. Maha6

      Tq megha

  12. Superb

    1. Maha6

      Tq arjuna

  13. IQRA222

    Awesome and lovely
    I think that ragoo is only piya
    Waiting for the next part

    1. Maha6

      Tq IQRA.

  14. Sreevijayan

    Awesome update dear..

    1. Maha6

      Tq sreevijayan

  15. Asra

    amazing dear…it’s interesting….ragsan conversation r super….loved it….eagerly waiting for cinderalla…Plz update soon…tkcr

    1. Maha6

      Tq asra… For commenting. N yeah I’ll try to update soon.

  16. Fats

    Wonderful update. I love RagSan’s sibling relation. Their conversation was really heart touching ?. And I think that Piya might be Ragini. Can’t wait to read the next part.

    1. Maha6

      Tq fats for commenting. U said u can’t wait to read the next part but plz wait for me….plz….plz….plz… N abt rags being piya u will come to know soon.

      1. Fats

        Aww, don’t worry hun. Even though I say that, I still do wait ?. Update whenever it’s possible for you ? xx

      2. Maha6

        Tq fats u r such a lovely n understanding friend

  17. Maha6

    Tq malu

  18. Awesome di

    1. Maha6

      Tq kiddoo for commenting

  19. Samairaseth


    1. Maha6

      Tq samairaseth

  20. Awesome

    1. Maha6

      Tq sherin

  21. Wonderful

    1. Maha6

      Tq tani

  22. Joyful Jessica


    1. Maha6

      Tq jessica

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