My Cinderella…. a raglak ss (part-1)

Hi guys…. It’s ur maha with my second OS… M sry today I can’t give u epi of my ff” the soul of my life”. Instead I thought to write an OS. So here is the OS.

Laksh maheshwari: actor…. He is a well known actor… Girls go mad for him… But he loves only his cindrella… He dont who is she… But loves her madly….
Ragini malhotra: assistant of laksh. Has feelings for laksh but couldn’t release it. Just thinks that it’s an attraction like every girl….. Knows abt laksh’s cindrella… But don’t know anything abt her.
Now coming to the story…..
As I already said laksh was a famous actor who is the heartrob of every girl…
He is in his shooting….just then he gets a call
Lak: haa raj did u get to know anything abt her.
Raj: no sir… We didn’t have anything related to her. We just only know that she is an orphan n u have her chain… It’s not enough Bhai..
Lak: raj… Do anything but plz find her….
He disconnects the call.
Lak(monologue): he takes the chain form his pocket n holds it… I don’t know who u r n where are u. But what u did to my father is just the thing which made me think abt u. I couldn’t see u that day. I just saw ur chain lying on the floor… M sure that u are made for me n I’ll definitely get u. He keeps the chain in his pocket again…
Just then rags comes there….
Rag: sir… Shoot is ready director is calling u.
Lak : yeah m coming….. He goes to the director…
Director: laksh today the scene is u have to propose the heroine… N u didnt know her earlier but with the help of this anklet u cane to kniw abt her.but she will deny u… N did u get the concept.
Lak: yeah…. He goes towards the heroine.
Director: ready…1…2…3…action….
Lak closes his eyes n dreams abt his cindrella….he opens his eyes n sees towards the heroine. He imagines his cindrella….
Lak: u dont know how ur presence makes me crazy… When u come to me then I don’t know why but my heart start beating fast… I didn’t see ur face till now I started searching for u. Whenever u come near to me my heart recognise u… But I don’t why till now my eyes could not recognise. Atlast I found u… Will u… Be my better half.. I promise I’ll give whole happiness.
Girl: m sry I couldn’t love u….
Lak got pain in his heart… But y….
Girl: I dnt know anything abt u… N how can I believe a stranger like u… N it’s my life decision. N my father have the full right to take any decision regarding my mrrg. While laksh proposing the heroine ragini felt pain in her heart the pain of losing him. The pain which arises thinking abt his separation from her.
She turns her face to hide her tears.. She wipes n sees towards the act.
Lak: I know it’s somewhat strange for a girl n no one will agree to a stranger. If u want I can come to ur father n ask for ur hand….
Girl: I don’t love u.. N this is final. Don’t irritate me more plz… Saying this she goes from there. While our laksh stood there helplessly with tears in his eyes..
Director: cut it…. Very good laksh…. But laksh didn’t speak anything n goes from there…
He comes to his home…
Lak: I don’t know why but what if my Cinderella also deny my proposal… I can’t take that. I felt like my Cinderella spoke those words…. No…. I can’t take that….but what if she has a boy friend… Or what if she is married… No no no she is made for me. She is my Cinderella…

Scene freezes…. Guys tell me is it worth of reading. If yes then I’ll continue. Orelse I’ll stop it. N continue my ff…. Give ur opinion through ur comments.


  1. Fairy


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    Wowwwww dis title is soo catchyπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ loved it dear…yes yes yes!!!plz do cont……😊😊😊😊 m eagerly waitng to know whoz dis cindrella ????hope shez ragsπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€loved raglak sooo much😊😊😊😊 keep rockng n stay blessed dear….superb story yaar..😊😊😊post nxt part soon☺

  2. Asra


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    amazing story. .. plz continue dear don’t stop….it’s interesting dear…waiting for nxt one…plz update soon…tkcr dear…

  3. Radhika..


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    Awesome di continue it . the tittle only is very attractive and the story is more attractive . hope ragini is laksh Cinderella only. Loved it di .love u ☺☺

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