CHUDAILBAAZ (EPISODE-2)

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Ok so here comes the next part of the history creating ff. peeps all the chudails are overwhelmed by the comments of yours’ on the previous part so they are expecting to get more comments this time. So please peeps don’t let them down or else they will show up on your nightmares.

EPISODE-2
Sutlu sat in her regal position on the sofa, not knowing that Daksh’s dog just did pee on it. She opened her phone and started watching videos on YouTube using her free Jio network.Her first video was a demonstration on ‘How to Become a Maid’. She watched closely as the woman showed how to do jhaadu-pochha, bartan and kapde She got horrified to see the drab fashion sense of the lady. Mrs. Kapoor came from behind.

Sutlu: mom….
mrs. Kapoor: Arrey beta Sutlu? Kya hua?
(arrey sutlu? What happened?)

Sutlu: Mom, you see the clothes of this maid? Just look at the sari! Horrible!

mrs. Kapoor: Par ye to wahi hai jo Maine kal Sunday bazaar mein 600 ki 2 li thi!
(but this is that type of saree which I bought 2 pieces yesterday from Sunday market by rs 600)

Sutlu: What?! 600 ki 2? Oh My God! Kahan se? Kab? Aur mujhe kyu nahi bataya? Aur ek minute. Aapke paas 600 rupay Kahan se aaye?
(what? 2 of 600? Oh my god.. from where, when? And why didn’t you tell me? And 1 minute from where did you get rs 600?)

Mrs. Kapoor: wo khanna ji se udhaar liye the…
(I took a loan of 600 from khanna ji)

Sutlu: kissse..?? khanna ji se..?? wo kyun dega aapko paise
(from whom? From khannaji? Why will he give you money?)

Mrs. Kapoor: wo bahut dayalu hai maine bahut request karke manga to usne de diye.
(he is very knd I just asked him and requested him and he gave me)

Sutlu: ok fine… but mujhe salary milte hi use lauta denge
(ok fine… but after I get my salary you will pay him back)

Mrs. Kapoor: waahhh DBO ki sabse bari villain ka self respect bhi hai?
(wow… the great villain of DBO also has self respect?)

Sutlu: ok fine but mai aise saari nhi pahnungi… after all I’m the most stylish woman and agar mai kaamwaali bai banker gayi to wo log mujhe pahchan jayenge
(ok fine but I won’t wear these types of dresses…. after all I’m the most stylish woman… and if I go like this maid then surely they will identify me)

Mrs. Kapoor: to phir?
(then?)

Sutlu: Don’t worry Mom. Mere paas idea hai.
(don’t worry mom I have idea with me)

mrs. Kapoor: Idea to bekaar hai. Jio lele, free ka hai!
(idea is not so good now a days. Take jio it’s free also)

sutlu: MOM!!!!

Mrs. Kapoor: what’s the idea?

Sutlu: chulbul jaise ghusa tha oberoi mansion me mai bhi aise ghusungi.
(the way chulbul entered the oberoi mansion I’ll enter the sam way)

Mrs. Kapoor: matlab ladka ban kar
(you mean in the get up of a guy)

Sutlu: haan… tabhi wo log mujhe servant bana kar rakhenge
(yeah… then only they would accept me as their servant)

Mrs. Kapoor: to theek hai tu ladkon ke kapde khareed kar laa…
(fine then… just go get get the clothes of a guy)

Sutlu: par paise??
(but money..??)

Mrs. Kapoor: I don’t know

Sutlu: ok wait…

Sutlu broke her piggy bank and took out 500 rupees. Our sutlu was in the local Sunday market, looking for apt clothes for her new job.

Sutlu: Ye kitne ka diya?
(how much does it costs?)

Sutlu asked as she held up the jeans.

shopkeeper: Madam hai to 200 ki.
(madam it’s of 200)

sutlu: Sasta lagao
(hey say some cheap price)

Shopkeeper: Ab isse sasta kya hoga madamji?
(now how can it be cheaper than this madamji?)

sutlu (widening her eyes): Svetlana Naam hai mera!
(my name is Svetlana)

Suddenly, a fly, which was roaming around saw those huge brown pools of her eyes and mistaking them for gobar, went inside. Sutlu screamed,stumbled back and so, fell in the gutter behind. And with the splash of dirty water the jeans went dirty.

Shopkeeper: Madamji ab to ye aapko hi Lena padega. Wo bhi 200 ka
(madam ji now you only have to take this of 200 only)

The scene shifts to oberoi mansion where ssutlu enters in her oh sorry his new get up.

Ramesh (a servant): Saab, Chulbul to Gauri Bhaabhi Nikla nhi nhi nikli. Isliye humne Naya servant rakha hai

Om: ok bring him inside… waise is he a boy?

Ramesh: haan saab rukiye mai use naam puchta hu
(yes sir wait let me ask his name)

Ramesh went out called the new servant in and asked his name

Ramesh: . Kya Naam hai be tera?
(what’s your name?)

Sutllu: Sutlu!,Ji Saab. Sutlu.

Omkara looked at the man in front of him.

Om: Sutlu, what kind of name is this?

Sutlu wore a loose sweatshirt and jeans and had a beard. But something was wrong.

om: Ye tere lips Ko kya hua?
(now what happened to your lips?)

stlu: woo……….maine….matlab, mujhe madhu makhhi kaat gayi!
(actually…woo…I mean, bee has bitten me)

om: Achha, dava lagaye?
(oh… you applied medicine?)

sutlu: Ji ye to bachpan mein hua tha. Tabse aise hi hai.
(actually it happened at my childhood and from that time it’s like this only)

Om: what bachpan se aise hi hai?
(what.. from your childhood it’s like that?)

Sutlu: haan saab
(yes sir)

Om: ok whatever…Okay. Achha suno Ramesh, isko saara kaam samjha do. Aur Haan, please, mera washroom saaf karwa do.
(ok whatever… listen ramesh, make him understand about every work. And yaa please clean my washroom)

ramesh: Haan Saab, theek hai.
(ok sir…)

om: Okay then.

Omkara went away. Sutlu, yes, our dear own Svetlana, watches Omkara walk away. Ramesh turns to her oh sorry him.

Ramesh: Haan to, Khaana banana aata hai?
(yaa.. then do you know cooking?)

sutlu: Nahi.
(no)

ramesh: ohh, cleaning?

sutlu: Haan, wo ho jayega
(yaa that I can do)

ramesh: Theek hai, tu Sir ka toilet saaf kar de!”
(ok fine, then you clean sir’s toilet)

sutlu: Kya?
(what?)

The scene shifts to mrs. Kapoor’s house.

Roop: aaee.. meri kappuu… meri janeman.. meri dil rooba
(aaee… my kappuu… my jaaneman… my darling…)

Roop then places a hard kiss on kappu’s (mrs. Kapoor) cheek

Kappu: chor ri meri sundarriii…
(leave me my beauty queen)

Roop leaves her.

Roop: par mai roop hu..
(but I’m roop)

Kappu: haan.. mujhe pata hai.. par sundar jo hota hai usika to roop hota hai to isliye sundari kaha
(yaa I know… but the people who are beautiful they only has roop (beauty) right)

Roop: iska mtlab tum mujhe sundar kah rahi ho?
(that means you are saying that I’m beautiful)

Kappu: nahi meri janeman sundar to hogi meri jootii..
(no my love. Beautiful is my new shoe)

Roop: kappuu…

Kappuu: ab kaam ki baat Karen?
(now let’s talk about something worthy)

Roop: haan batao..
(yaa say)

Meanwhile daksh comes in and starts crying.

Daksh: sutlu ki maa….. waahhhhh… wwwwaaaa…
(sutlu’s mom…… waahhhhh… wwwwaaaa…)

Kappu: phir se sutlu ki maa?… chor bata kya hua?
(again sutlu’s mom? Ok leave say what happened?)

Daksh: wo mai cheetiyon ki dangal dekh raha tha…
(actually I was watching at the dangal of ants…)

Kappuu: kya cheetiyon ki dangal??
(what ants dangal??)

Daksh: haan waha par cheetiyon ka dangal chal raha tha (pointing to the window)
(yaa the dangal of ants are going over there (pointing towards the window))

Kappu: phir kya hua?
(then what happened??)

Daksh: phir mai jo cheeti ko support kar raha tha wo dusri cheeti ko kiss karke aage badh gaya….
(then the ant hom I was supporting kissed his opponent ant and walked away)

Roop: waah direct dangal se kiss… kya combination hai..
(wow… from dangal direct to kiss… nice combination)

Daksh: ye budhiya aunty kaun hai?
(who is this old woman?)

Roop: excuse me I’m roop

Daksh: maine aapke roop ke bare me nhi pucha… maine aapka naam pucha hai
(I have not asked you about your roop I just asked your name)

Roop: haan wahi to bata rhi hu ki mera naam roop hai
(yaa I’m telling that only… my name is roop)

Daksh: phir se roop… arre aapka naam
(again roop…….. arre what’s your name?)

Roop: tu chup karega… agar nhi kiya to mai Shivay sisso’s and anika sisso’s ke clubs ke members ko bula kar laungi…
(will you shut your mouth……… and if not I’ll call the members of Shivay sisso’s and anika sisso’s club)

Daksh: ye log kaun hai?
(who are they?)

Roop: ye log tumhare pyaare Shivay bhaiyaa and anika bhabhi ke supporters hai agar tune kuch ulta seedha kaha to teri to khair nhi
(they are the supporters of lovely Shivay bro and anika sister-in-law… and if you do something wrong then you are gone)

Daksh again starts to cry.

Daksh: anika meri bhabhi nhi hai…
(anika is not my sister-in-law)

Kappu: aye haye abhi bhi anika ke sapne dekh raha hai…
(aye haye still now you are dreaming about anika)

Daksh: mai so nhi raha jo sapne dekhunga..
(I’m not sleeping that I’ll watch a dream)

Roop: ok theek hai chup.
(ok now shut up)

Daksh shuts his mouth. Roop and kappu decides to go to oberoi mansion along with daksh to kill shivika at night.

AT NIGHT

Anika was jumping on the bed and was about to fall. Shivay comes there and holds her. They share an intense eye lock

Shivay: anika….

Anika: hmm…

Shivay: tumhe nhi lagta tum aaj kal thora zyada kha rhi ho?
(you don’t feel you are eating too much these days?)

Anika: kyun?
(why?)

Shivay: bhaari ho gayi ho mera matlab… moti fatso ho gayi ho…
(you became weighty….i mean you became fatso)

Anika: aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe moti bulane ki?
(how dare you to call me fatso?)

Shivay: ab ho gayi ho to maan bhi lo… dekho tumhe uthaya hai to mere saans phul rahe hai
(now you became that so just accept it…… see I put you up and my breathing rate increased)

Anika: haaawww… kahin aapko astha to nhi ho gaya?
(haaawwwww…….. you are not suffering from astha na?)

Shivay: astha?

Anika: haan wo jo hota hai na.. jisme saans phulta hai wo
(ya that……. Are that in which the breathing rate increases)

Shivay: asthma… asthma kyun hoga mujhe
(asthma……… why will I suffer from asthma?)

Shivay leaves his hand and anika falls down on the floor. Anika gets up and looks at Shivay very angrily.

Shivay: kya hua?
(what happened?)

Anika: duniya hil gayi aapne ek moti ko jo dharaam se phenk diya..
(the world shook as you threw me on the floor)

Shivay (pointing towards the floor): haan dekho ye dekho floor hil gaya
(yaa see… seriously the floor also shook)

Anika: bagad billa kahinke
(bagad billa)

Shivay instantly hugs anika to cool her down and and rubs his face to anika’s face.

Anika: uuurrrgggghhh….

Shivay: kya hua meri moti ko… mera matlab meri biwi ko…
(what happened to my fatso… oh I mean to my wife?)

Anika: aapke ye mahan shakal par ye jo nukile se daari hai inki to mai oh my maataa kar dungi
(hey… I will do oh my maataa of your piercing beard)

Shivay: nhi darling isi look ki wajah se to tum pati ho…
(no darling for this look only you got impressed)

Anika: itna bhav mat khaiye.. shivika club ko sharminda kar diya… favourite pati to ban nhi paaye ab chup ho jaiye
(oh don’t be like you are the king… you made shivika club ashamed by not winning the favourite pati award…….. so you should shut your mouth now)

Shivay: achha tum jaise favourite patni ban paayi ho
(yaa as if you became favourite patni)

Anika: wo to aapko nhi mila isliye maine mera wala bhi chor diya..
(actually you did not get so I also left it)

Shivay: haan bari aayi chorne waali
(yaa… as a big leaving master came..)

Anika: aapne zyada kaha to mai aapko chor dungi…
(if you say more then I’ll leave you)

Shivay: tum nakhre-noor jahan ke kahin aur dikhana bagad billi
(you show this nakhre-noor jahan ke of yours anywhere else bagad billi)

Anika: ohh ye mera dialogue tha…. Script writers se kah dungi ki aap mere dialogues chura rahe ho
(ohhh these dialogues are mine… I will tell to script writers that you are stealing my dialogues)

Shivay: theek hai meri maa shaant ho jaa bacchaa shaant ho jaa.
(ok fine my mother be cool my child be cool)

Anika: aap pahle decide karo maa yaa bachha
(at first you decide mom or child)

Shivay: ok theek hai kuch nahi and ab koi jhagda nhi…
(ok fine nothing and no fighting now)

Shivay hugs anika tightly and romantically.

Anika: Shivay aapko mai Gillette ka razor and yardlay ka shaving cream gift karungi aap please apna ye jo muh hai na saaf karke aanaa….. romance ke time par seriously bahut chubhte hai…
(Shivay I’ll gift you a Gillette razor and yardlay shaving cream to clean up your face……… at the time of romance seriously your beard pricks)

Shivay: ok de dena ab sone chale??
(ok fine… now let’s go and sleep?)

Shivika went to sleep but pinky keeps on peeping at their room through the pool side window. Nyantara comes there and sees pinky peeping into their room.

Nayantara: oye pinky ponky dinky donkey… kya kar rahi hai re tu idhar?
(oye pinky ponky dinky donkey what are you doing there?)

Pinky: routine jaasosi

Nayantara: wo kya hota hai?
(what’s that?)

Pinky: arre jaasoosi kar rhi hu… har roz karti hu isliye iska naam maine routine jaasoosi rakh diya hai
(arre I’m keeping an eye on them…. I do it every day so I named it as routine jaasoosi..)

Nayantara: par abhi to wo log so gaye to???
(but they already slept then???)

Pinky: haye re meri eyestars… ye log shivika hai.. ye to samajh… international Jodi ke winners…
(oh my eyestars… they are shivika… understand that… the international Jodi awards winner)

Nayantara:to phir mai bhi dekhungi andar…
(then I’ll also peep inside)

Pinky: kyun re mere bête ne naachne ke kya paise diye tu to uss par hi chadh gayii
(why?? My son paid you for your dance and you just climbed up on him?)

Nayantara: nhii… aapko galat sapna aayaa hoga agar mai uss par chadhti to wo abhi tak zinda nhi bachta..
(nooo… you watched a wrong dream….. if I would have climbed up on him then he would have died)

Pinky: oyee.. aise koi bolta hai.. tere muh pe kire pare
(oyyeee… don’t say like that…. May your mouth get’s filled by insects)

Nayantara: aur tere muh me hare k kire ki potty pare
(and in your mouth may the potty of those insects get’s filled)

Pinky: oye tu jaati hai yahan se yaa nhi
(oyee are you going from here or not?)

Nayantara: nhi jaungi tu kya kar legi bo
(if I won’t go then what will you do say)

Pinky: mai Shivay ko bulaungi…
(I will call Shivay…)

Nayantara: bula… phir mai to use aur zyada araam se dekh paungi… haaye mera Shivay raja..
(call him…. Then I’ll be able to see him more clearly and closely… haaye my Shivay raja)

Pinky: bas kar… achha theek hai ek kaam karte hai tujhe Shivay ko dekhna hai na to hum dono yahan par baithkar jasoosi karte hai… mai 2 ghante jaagoongi phir tu 2 ghante jag janaa
(ok now stop it… ok fine let’s do one thing you want to see Shivay na? then we two will sit here and keep an eye over them… at first I’ll remain awake for 2 hours and then it will be your turn to stay awake)

Nayantara: theek hai par iske double paise lagenge..
(ok fine… but it will cost double)

Pinky: theek hai le lena… ab tu so mai jaagti hu.
(ok take it later… now you sleep I’m remaining awake)

Nayantara slept off and Pinky remained awake peeping into shivika’s room.

PRECAP- WAIT AND WATCH…… OH MY MAATAA BEGINS

This part also done. People you all can also shower your ideas to bash these chudails. Hmmm.. done now a credit giving ceremony.
CREDIT FOR THE OMLU PART- BELA
CREDIT FOR CONVERTING ASTHMA TO ASTHA- VISHAKHA AND HER SPECIAL AUTO CORRECT PROBLEM
CREDIT FOR ANTS DANGAL- NILASH

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103 Comments
  1. Mehakchalag

    Amazing.U three again nailed it.Love shivika nok-jhok.U add some spa tadka also.Add some tia reki and universe scenes and rudra scenes if possible.

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Mehakchalag???
      Keep watching….Umm, reading Chudailbaaz?

    2. Vishakha

      thank u mehak… yeah adding spa was another way of celebrating their win 😉 rudy scenes are coming up.. will try to add tia and her universe too.. 🙂

      1. Mehakchalag

        ok vishakha..waiting for next…

    3. Nilash

      Mehak you can actually shower us with ideas that how to add Tia along with her universe scene. And we personally will surely try to add them. Please dear stay tuned. And adding spa tadka was just a by chance decision of the creators and i’m glad you liked it.

  2. Nivedita

    Lol! This is hilarious! ????? Raised to zillion! ???
    This I would watch on TV. Only the po*t* part was a bit much.. everything else too good! ??

    Tum log collaborate Karke likh rahe ho?

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Nivedita???
      Actually, Nilash and I collaborate on what to add or not while Vishakha and Nilash write the exact scenes. But all the part which had Sutlu in this episode was written by me??

      1. Nivedita

        So cool gals! ??Loving it to pieces! ??Actually aisa serial hota Indian TV mein toh mazaa aa jata!??

      2. Nivedita

        Oops Dono base same commment- ??but imagining routine jaasoosi ma’s and sutlu Bai..and dangal ants– kya drishya hota on screen! ????

      3. Bela

        Nivi, if that would have happened, then no one would have questioned Ishqbaaaz winning so many awards in SPA2017???

      4. Nivedita

        True Bela- a comedic demonic Saas would be much better than evil personified Dinky – she is going to be the top Chudail looks like in IB world.

        .

      5. Nivedita

        True Bela, IB mein comedic OMM hoti, toh kya kehna.. this negative Dinky toh Chudailbaaz mein hi thik hai!??

    2. Vishakha

      thank u nivi and welcome to the world of chudails 😀 😀 we’ll make it even more hilarious together 😉

      1. Nivedita

        Thanks Vishu! Talk to you soon..

    3. Nilash

      Hey Nivi di yooo!!!
      A bbbbiiiiggg welcome hug to you. ok i know shity part was too much but i wrote it so personally i say sorry for that. and yeah from next time you also get ready to reply a thank you back to every one commenting.
      now be ready with all your pagalpanthi ideas see you soon at 5

      1. Nivedita

        See u soon Nilu! I am sure others may have liked the joke.. so don’t mind my comment. ? These chudails deserve some comeuppance!

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Haaye !! Nilu di , bela di , vishu . Ek baar phir aap logo ne kamal kar diya . Totally ?????????????????? .
    Sutlu se kya kya kaam karva ya . Air vo 9taara aur omm se bhi . Coconut tree wale ko toh ants ka dangal dikhva diya aur dara bhi diya . ?????????????
    Totally amazing . Loved it . ????????

    @ nilu di , di mere exams ached the except as I said chem aur maths . Di , kal mera result hai . Plzz pray na . ??

    Bela di , vishu , nilu di . Plzz post soon . I can’t wait for next . ???

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Surbhi Sharma ???
      All the best for your result?
      Stay tuned

    2. Vishakha

      thankuu surbhi 🙂 aage aage dekho sutlu kya kya kaarnaame karti hai 😀 and coconut tree wale ko humne nai daraya wo bechara to khud hi dar gya 😉 keep reading 🙂

    3. Nilash

      Surbhi tu bata mai tujhse naraz houn ya khus??? Maths ki omm karwa kar aayi hai but phir bhi chudailbaaz ke liye wait???
      theek hai we will try to post soon but maine kuch gyaan jhara hai pkj page par unhe dhyaan me zarur rakhna.
      and thank you for this sweet comment next part aur mazedaar ban raha hai to aur zyada hasne ke liye ready ho jaa. but chudailbaaz sirf padhai ke baad
      and love you loads

  4. Ananyagour

    This was hillarious main hass hass ke pagla gyin hoon awesome episode

    1. Vishakha

      thanku ananya 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Ananya bas isme pagla jaogi to next waale me kya hoga??? so abhi thora control kar lo kyunki next wala shayad isse bhi zyada mazedaar lage.
      we will be waiting for your comment on the next part as well dear

  5. Kanfi

    Oh gosh-…!!!!?
    It was soool hilarious,’-.from where u all got this idea yaar’,,
    Hats offf….

    I like the way u used SPA 2017 here-,,,hehehe,,it was very funny..-
    They didn’t win fav pati n patni bt they indeed r….!!!

    N plzz dont shave shivaays beard…!!!!
    He look dashinh in that….!!

    Well done ,,i m loving it,,,!!

    N congo to all of u for IB n DBO achievmnt in SPA 2017

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Kanfi.??
      Including SPA is totally Nilu and Vishu ka idea, I just played with Sutlu here??

    2. Vishakha

      thank you kanfi.. and dont worry we love shivaays beard too so its completely safe 😉 the credit for the entire chudailbaaz concept goes to Bela 🙂

    3. Nilash

      First of all Kanfi very sorry for not replying you back soon and sorry for replying so.
      Thank You for this motivating comment dear. And don’t worry we will not shave off Shivay’s beard. Yeah they are fav Pati Patni of course without any doubt.
      And dear please stay tuned.
      And congratulations to you also for SPA achievement.

  6. This one is damn hilarious. ..???? Sutlu ki maa????????
    Aap logon ne toh haar baat ki tadka dali he is main……nice one..

    @Nilash dear, ok i am giving credit to vishu dear for amazing name SUTLU…?????

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Arpita, Nilu and Vishu deserve all the acclodes???

    2. Vishakha

      thanku arpita 🙂

    3. Nilash

      Arpita more hillarious episodes are on its way. you loved that tadka?? thank you so so so much for that. please stay tuned dear. Sutlu ki maa wala dialogue hum har ek episode me daalne wale hai so usme hi thora sa has dena and thank you so much for this lovely comment

  7. Nilash di seriously so funny …voh chikni chameli ki part bohot accha tha…tum theeno na u r rocking …continue…

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot anikaa???

    2. Vishakha

      thank you anikaa 🙂

    3. Nilash

      Anikaa… tum wahi ho na jise maine reply nhi kiya tha??
      and thank you so much and sirf nilash di ka naam kyun mujhse zyada pyaar awwww love you dear. and haan next parts ko padhna mat bhulna

  8. omgggggggg nilash bela vishaka didi’s its veryy funny ri8 frm beggining to the end u trio r reaally very amazing its very difficult fr u i three to discuss all to type to translate in eng and all hatssoff fr ur work

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Saidha???
      I guess the coordination thing’s credit goes solely to Nilash, she is been working really hard????

    2. Vishakha

      thank you shab 🙂 yes the coordination and translation credit entirely goes to Nilu.. 🙂 stay tuned

    3. Nilash

      Thank you Shab but vishu ne sirf mujhe iska credit diya hai but i’m dividing the credit hum sab seriously bahut zyada dimaag lagate hai dialogues par. so shab ek request read this ff after your studies only. and i know you will surely listen to your nilash di right??

      1. diii i think aap ko koi misunderstandings hua hai mera school june mein eech shuru hogi tab tak mein very free uske baad mein shaayad hi tv bhi dek paaungi kyun ki 10 baje sone jaana hai aa phikar not fr me studies first

  9. AnuluvsIB

    Phir se aageye u gals!! ??
    Daksh.. cheetiyan dangal.. servant sutlu.. pinktara air routine jasoosi.. asthma Shivaay and fatso annika..
    itna bas ek update me.. ???
    I seriously can’t take it man!! ???
    U roped in 2 more clubs today.. and brought in SPA too!! Smart huh!!
    I loved it???

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot AnuluvsIB ???

    2. Vishakha

      thank you sooo much anu dear.. 🙂 haan hum phr se aa gaye and abhi aur ayenge so be ready 🙂 😀 keep reading and commenting.. 🙂

    3. Nilash

      Haan wo clubs ko include karne ka idea Amayaa ki dhamki thi to kara hi padta isliye kiya aur saare clubs bhi include honge but dheere dheere. And spa ko ek to tribute dena tha na to aise hi de diya.
      And Anu next parts ko please padhna shayad aur zyada mazedaar lage??

      1. AnuluvsIB

        Definitely! Waiting for the next one..

  10. Wow!!! Awesome epi!! Was laughing soo hard after reading this…
    Every time I read the word sutlu I crack up!! ‘Cheetiyon ki dangal’ *hahaha*
    ‘Astha’ ‘Asthma’ part was amazing!!!!! Nd ‘Madhu makhi ne kaat liya’ just superbbbbbbbb..
    Loved it a lot!!!!! Nd aap logon se mein binti karti hoon plzz mera ‘shivaay baby’ ka beard matt katna, I love them…Update nxt one soon!!

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Bhavana. ???
      Shivaay ki beard ka dekhte hain???

    2. Vishakha

      thank you bhavana 🙂 dont worry hum tumhare ‘shivaay baby’ ka beard nahi kaatenge 😀 😀 😀 stay tuned..

    3. Nilash

      Bhavana you are so sweet. you cracked up at SUTLU only then i must say some more stupid names are on our mind be ready for that.
      and about shivay’s beard vishu assured you we would not cut it so i just hope we would not do that. but no bharosa of me as i write the dialogues so i can do anything. no dear i am just kidding we would not cut it for sure.
      and please stay tuned dear

  11. Everyone did a great job. Haha ???.

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Archisha???

    2. Vishakha

      thanku archisha 🙂

    3. Nilash

      Archi thank you and be ready to laugh more

  12. It was too good….
    Can’t stop laughing….
    ‘Sultu’ to ‘Astha’ to SPA to ‘Cheetiyon ki dangal’ everything was hilarious….
    Post soon….

    1. Vishakha

      thanku shivika 🙂 stay tuned for next 🙂

    2. Nilash

      thank you Shivika and next part is not ready yet but we will surely try to post soon and do not forget to comment after reading the next part

  13. Gayathri.visu

    OMM!! Visha, Bela, Ash(ViLaSh, if u don’t mind is this name ok for u guys?)…each n every part is hilarious!! That youtube video scene…ha ha! Finally Sutlu servant is aagaye!! ‘Kappu’ and ‘cheetiyon ki dangal’ convo is very funny! Shivika’s ‘Astha’ to ‘asthma’, ‘moti’, hugs, ‘beard’…..I LOVED IT!!

    Girls keep rocking….. GO GIRLS GO!!

    @ASH, check my msgs dear…

    1. Gayathri.visu

      Forget to mention.
      Including SPA, SSO & Anika sissys clubs are very good. Stupid Pinky ponky n NT….mannerless people!

    2. Bela

      Thanks a lot Gayatri???
      Stay tuned??

    3. Vishakha

      thanku gayu :)i knw these chudails are mannerless but stay tuned to know what we do with them 😀 😀 😀

    4. Nilash

      Gayu… i checked your messages and replied you back as well.
      And dear i’m glad that you liked this part. please stay tuned and i have no problem with VILASH but don’t know abut other two girls
      i just love your go girls go comment please keep this line constant

  14. Arthi

    Oh my god….. I was waiting for ur ff and here it is today…..and I just loved everything and about SPA awards it was superb and I just loved shivika as always…….

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Arthi???

    2. Vishakha

      thank you so much arthi 🙂 your wait really means a lot to us 🙂 stay tuned for more..

    3. Nilash

      Thank You Arthi please keep reading and loving like this. It means a lot dear that you were waiting. We are trying to upload the next part soon please stay tuned

  15. Just read both parts n I was literally laughing holding my stomach its that wonderful.I was wondering how u write this n ant dangal part I liked it d most n also all d names that u have given to d characters

    1. Vishakha

      thank you madhuani 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Madhuani…. I would call you madhu only no problem na???
      Please read the following parts also as more hilarious things are on the way. And many more names are yet to be introduced so please stay tuned

  16. oh god…..how can you three write this much hilarious epi………..I am still laughing….spa awards was the highlight for me….post as soon as possible……..will u three would like to accept me as ur little sis…..I am 13

    1. Vishakha

      thanku so much aashi 🙂 aww so sweet yes of course u r our cute little sister for sure.. love u 🙂 next part coming soon…

    2. Nilash

      Aashi you are of course our sis and surely you can call us di no problem with that. And dear thank you for such a lovely comment please stay tuned. Next part got stuck in the traffic we are trying to get it out from there I mean we will surely try to post the next part soon dear. And we will include more spa award in the following episodes.

  17. Alekhika20

    Amazing

    1. Vishakha

      thanku alekhika 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Alekhika please stay tuned dear

  18. Superb update.. too good…

    1. Vishakha

      thank you ankita 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Ankita please stay tuned dear

  19. Loved this episode. Can’t wait for next ‘o my mata’. Plz update soon….

    1. Vishakha

      thanku shivangi 🙂 next o my maata coming soon.. 😀 stay tuned 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Shivangi … we will surely try to upload the next part soon please stay tuned

  20. Tanz

    I have even read the 1st part but I just couldn’t comment there but I’m unable to stop myself from commenting here. All three of you have really done a wonderful job and I think it’s the funniest possible way to bash these chudails….The dialogues were superb and I couldn’t stop laughing ????I would love to read more of it.

    1. Vishakha

      thank u so much tanz.. the credit for the dialogues goes to nilash and bela.. u can send ur ideas to bash them too 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Tanz please keep reading and loving like this. we will surely try to upload the next part as soon as possible. and i’m glad that you liked the way we bashed them and more funnier bashing is on the way.

  21. Archiya

    HI Lovely gals..
    I missed the first part , but here i Am commenting for both the parts.. its just too good.. humor at its best.. loved it, post the next soon
    PKJ involved in the FF is the best part

    1. Vishakha

      hey archi.. thanku so much dear.. this ff is dedicated to our lovely PKJ so please share ur ideas too 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Archu. more humour is on the way please stay tuned dear. and you liked that pkj part thank you dear please keep loving like this.

  22. Jerry_36

    Now my laughter is out of control !! You three are just amazingly awesome. Shivika moments were too good.
    No words yaar. Speechless bana diya. Bela di and Vishakha di, you are doing an excellent job.
    And Nilash di….I am Angy with you, when are you updating your ff. Post soon this one too. Love you all❤

    1. Vishakha

      thanku sooo much jerry 🙂 and yes even i am angry on her for this 😀
      see Nilu.. i knw u r going to kill me fr this but still m replying to u also here.. ab to maan ja yaar.. ab to post kar de… 🙁

      1. Nilash

        Vishu i know you would be angry and more than that you would be hurt to know it that i have not uploaded the next part of the O’bros ff but dear i will let you know about the reasons later. Please pardon me dear.

    2. Nilash

      Jerry you are angry on me??? Please don’t be na i’ll surely try to upload the other ff of mine… And dear just excellent job to Bela and Vishu not to me??? Ok i can understand you are angry. Can’t say exactly but i will surely try to post the next episode of O’bros tomorrow.
      Thank You dear for loving the ff and stay tuned.
      Love you loads

      1. Jerry_36

        Nilash di, I was angry. Not now, by listening to your sweet apology I instantly forgave you. And yess you are not doing an excellent job, you are doing an undoubtedly outstanding work. Your work is a distinguished one. Love you di❤

  23. AMkideewani

    Hahahahh super fantabulous my dearies I love it❤❤❤❤❤?????????????????

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Crazygirls for loving it. Please stay tuned dear.

    2. Vishakha

      thanks a ton dear 🙂

  24. LAX

    Guys..!!
    Funny..!!
    Astha for Asthma n Routine Jasoosi…!! Lol…!! ????

    1. Nilash

      Lax di you commented i’m soooo happy to see your comment. please di stay tuned as more hilarious episodes are on it’s way.

    2. Vishakha

      hey lax !! thank u so much dear for reading and commenting 🙂 hehehe… Nilu and Bela I’m taking these astha and jasoosi credits if u don’t mind 😉

      1. Nilash

        Vishu credit sirf khud mat lo apne auto correct ke problem ko bhi do agar wo nhi hota to ye waale dialogues nhi milte hume. 😉 😉

  25. Piyuu

    gals its really funny…keep it up. waiting for next part.

    1. Vishakha

      thanku so much piyuu 🙂 next part coming soon 🙂

    2. Nilash

      Thank You Piyuu please keep reading and motivating us….. next part is under processing

  26. Sahi…

  27. Ranilya

    Hey girls….awsome work here….nilash, Bela n vishu….?????
    Very hilarious…..
    Loved the shivika nok-jhok….actually it took me to the blush club too…..??
    Waiting for the next epi….
    Best international jodi hain to international romance karna chahiye….when Pinky is peeping in…???

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