“Oh no! what will we do now?” I heard Sally shrieking. I was waiting in a restaurant, which was our favourite hangout spot, for these two to bring some food. It was a self service restaurant. I was starving. I headed towards them as I heard her scream. Both of their faces were horror-stricken. “What happened?” I asked them. “Woh, we don’t have money. This dumbo hasn’t brought money and I don’t have change. The problem is we have ordered and the food is billed. And they don’t have change. What shall we do now?” Sally told me worriedly. I took my wallet. To my shock, I didn’t have change either. I searched for my credit card. It wasn’t there. God! What will we do now? Sally and Sasha sensed my feelings and gave me a shock filled expression. I gave a helpless look to them. “Mam, do u have card?” The man at the cash counter asked me. “Actually…” Sasha fumbled. “How much is the bill?” A manly voice made me startle. Oh Jesus! It was Mr. Bumpy. How did he come here? “Sir, here’s your bill” The man replied. “No. I asked for their bill.” Bumpy said pointing us. “I’ll pay for them” We three were shocked to the core. “Here’s their bill sir. Do u know them sir?” The man asked. “Mind your own business” he replied aggressively, which silenced that man. I hate this. I don’t want to eat food paid by this man. I cursed myself for not bringing my card. “No thanks. We don’t need your help.” I told him. He gave a sharp look at me and then at that restaurant man. “Gini, be quiet. This is a good opportunity. I know u hate this. We can pay rudra later.” Sasha told me. I was sceptical, but we had no other go. “Thank u Rudra.” She chirped. He just nodded his head. “So, friends??” Sasha asked him. “What!!” sally and I shouted in unison. “Sasha, no!” I warned her. She didn’t pay any heed to my words. He just nodded his head in approval looking at us. This shocked me more. What’s wrong with him?? Sasha grinned widely at him while he left the place. This man is another mystery.
“Merry merry Christmas! Merry merry Christmas!!” I sang in joy as Christmas was around the corner. That wasn’t the actual reason. The main reason is I am going home for this Christmas. It was a heavenly feeling. I will meet my mystery man. “Why are u shouting like this goondi?” Bumpy’s blunt tone broke my chain of thoughts. “Bumpy!!!” I screeched intentionally. He closed his ears, annoyed. I laughed at him. “Goondi, u are too much!” he told me. “I know!” I replied with a mischievous smile. Life is very uncertain. It brings more shocks and surprises every day. I never dreamt even in my wildest dreams that this Bumpy and I will become the best of friends. I still don’t know how it happened. But, I know one thing. Bumpy is such a nice person at heart. Though he might look a hard nut to crack, he is a beautiful person from inside. After that restaurant incident, we had been at loggerheads often. But as time passed, I realised that he is a man of good thoughts. When he helped me when I was lost in this new city 2 years ago, a friendship which would last forever, blossomed between us. Yeah, It has been 2 years since I joined this college and since bumpy’s and my friendship developed. That incident was a huge nightmare for me and his timely help just made me talk to him and behave with him in a better way. That developed into an everlasting friendship between us, later. He calls me goondi, as I look like a goon. And I call him bumpy, for which he yells mad in anger. He is an orphan, who lives with his grandma in Bangalore. My hatred and mistrust against men changed after I met him. He made me realise the goodness of a selfless friendship. I am glad that we are friends. He has completed his course and is pursuing house surgeon here. So, we meet often. “So, when will u come back goondi?” he asked me. “After new year” I replied. “Will miss u bumpy!” I told him. “Hmm” he replied. “So, u won’t miss me!” I huffed in anger. “Of course.. Not goondi!!” he yelled as he started running. “You !!” I yelled as I chased him. I chased him so fast that I didn’t realise that I collided with someone.

I opened my eyes as I found myself in the arms of that person. That person came into my view. It was him. My mystery man. My SHIV. I looked at his chocolaty orbs as I looked at those after a long time. I was unable to move my eyes from his. His eyes locked mine. I remembered when I saw him at the bus stop. My encounters with him and then my proposal, everything flashed into my mind. And then his rejection.

“Look, u are immature. This is just an attraction. Keep your mind away from all these distractions and just focus into your dream. Your dream of becoming a doctor like your father. Don’t let these distractions and attraction affect your dream. First, fulfil your dream and then let’s think about it” He said all these in a go. I felt all my dreams and hopes crashing down to the ground. The locket, which I had in my hand, was dropped into the ground. I felt hot tears streaming down my cheeks. May be, he is right. This is an attraction, perhaps, according to him. But, I will prove myself and will go back to him again. This is my promise. Gini mathews’ promise.
***************************END OF FLASHBACK*************************
But, I realised in these years that my feelings towards him were not attraction and it was something beyond that. I worked, am working and will work hard to prove him that my feelings towards him were true. Though, I felt bad and upset due to his rejection, It was his rejection which made me score higher in my higher secondary, which in turn, gained me an admission in this college. I will prove Shiv that what gini can do.
“Gini, are u ok?” bumpy’s voice brought me back to reality. I straightened myself and looked shiv painfully. I nodded my head. “What are u doing here?” Shiv asked me. How the hell he can behave normally? Ok, fine. I am ready to pass all his tests. “Well, I am doing medicine here” I replied casually, as if unaffected by him. “What are u doing here?” I asked him. “I came to meet Mr. Sharma. Can I know where his room is?” He asked me. “First room in upstairs.” I replied. He went from there. “Who’s he?” Bumpy asked me as he placed my hands in shoulder. While I was struggling to answer him, I failed to notice a pair of blood shot eyes looking at our direction.
Guys, deesh here. I know that the story is progressing very fast. I can’t help it guys. Sorry for that. Happy pongal/ sankranti / lohri to all my friends and sisters. Have a great one. Keep supporting. I typed this chapter in hurry. Hope u liked this chappy. Thanks for reading. Love u guys.

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  1. Berdilla

    Romba nalla iruku superb iniya pongal nalvathukal deeshu chellam and tour family dear

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much sweety. Love u ?

      1. Berdilla

        Doll na ff update panunadhu vandhu jan 12th doll

  2. Berdilla

    I mean your

  3. Happy Sankarnthi…?Wow….bumpy and goondi awesome?….love them n Mr.mystery rejected gini?..but I think he did that for her future so k…..first scene was too funny ??…so those two bloodshot eyes are of shiv Na..? ?And will be waiting for next update n plz of possible make it longer… u ?….TC…

    1. Deesh

      Happy sankranti to u too dearest naimi!! Your guess may be or may not be true ? glad that u liked it naimi. Will try to post soon yaar. And will give long updates too. Love u too ?

  4. Amazing.

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much jaan ?

  5. Amazing part, sis please post long part

    Happiee sankranti

    1. Deesh

      Lovely dear, sorry. I know am giving short updates. But I will give long updates next time. Thank u so much buddy. ?

  6. plz tell it’s shiv who is getting jealous

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much Lisa. Wait a little more dear. ?

  7. Raglakholic

    Omg deeshu
    It’s outstanding update yaar
    Loved d hotel scene
    Awwww..d way rudra helped dem is awesome
    So shiv is back
    Wow who is dat looking at gini nd rudra???
    Let me guess let me guess
    Its shiv na??
    Wow it’s superb
    Flashback is wonderful
    Poor gini was heartbroken
    But it gave her new spirit
    Eagerly waiting to read more
    Please do continue soon
    Nd yeah happy sankranti to u too

    1. Deesh

      Hey harshu. Thank u so much dear. Glad that u liked it harshu. Your guess may be right or may not be ? will post soon harshu. Thanks a lot ?

  8. Asw

    Nice yaar same to you for the pongal wishes ohhhh shiv is jealous of gini & rudra friend ship keep going

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much buddy for ur wishes. Glad that u liked it. Thanks a lot ?

  9. At first I want to say that yesterday you told me that “Hope you will like it”…Deeshu I will definitely like it…How I will not??? You tell me…Your each and every episode made me numb you know…

    Now coming to the episode…Its amazing totally mind blowing and outstanding…And I am happy that now Rudra and Gini are friends…And Sally di don’t become jealous for their friendship OK????…I think those blood shot eyes were of our Shiv’s…I think he is getting jealous for their friendship…See here Sally di is jealous of Gini and there Shiv is jealous of Rudra??…Such a nice thing and interesting too…But Deeshu I have a request… Please make Sally di jealous of Gini…Pleaseeeee…But don’t make her negative…Just make her jealous…It will be amazing to read???…And I am just eagerly waiting to know about Shiv’s reaction…I am sure it is none other than Shiv only…But feeling bad for Gini…She was really heartbroken…And happy sankranti Deeshu…This story is not progressing very fast according to me…So don’t say like this again and again yaar…Stay happy and keep smiling always…Love you?

    1. Deesh

      Riyu. First of all am sorry for not being able to chat with u today. My WiFi is not working and am replying from my mom’s phone. Sorry dear. Thank u so much for understanding me dear riyu. Ha ha… Ur idea is fantastic riyu. Yeah of course how will I make sally sisso’s role a negative one?? Of course not. Yes riyu I just imagined sally sisso jealous of gini and am roaring with laughter ??? happy sankranti to u too ?? love u too ??

      1. Deeshu don’t ask sorry OK because I can understand your situation…And thanks for liking my idea…But pleaseee make Sally di jealous of Gini…And Sally di don’t get angry on me OK…I am an innocent bachcha *innocent face…But please Deeshu make her jealous…And make Shiv also getting jealous of Rudra…It will be an interesting one to read…Deeshu it’s a request from your Riyu…

    2. Sally_blr

      ROFL. Riyu my cute innocent bacha I’m not angry at all. And I’m just confused am I jealous of gini in this chappy? And I am just wondering how will I look jealous? I seriously wanna see that. And don’t worry I will not throw you from a hill. But I’m laughing imaginig myself jealous

      1. Di you are laughing at my thoughts….That’s not fair…I know that you can’t imagine yourself as jealous of Gini…But try to imagine it…Don’t underestimate my beautiful thoughts???…And what is “ROFL”?

    3. Deesh

      Riyu.. Ur request accepted ??

      1. Thanks Deeshu for accepting my request…Love you?

    4. Deesh

      Riyu. No need of saying thanks dear. Your * beautiful* thoughts are making me laugh. And ROFL means Rolling on the floor with laughter. Love u too riyu.

  10. Ragz_teju

    shiv rejected her proposal so bad but he was right studies comes first but his rejection made gini persuie good score… I am thinking the pair of eyes is shiv. .. he would be jealous of goondi and bumpy friendship hahaha stupid guess… chappy was amazing as usual dear… loved it so much ???

    1. Deesh

      Oho dear ragz. Who said u r stupid? You are such a brilliant writer and one of my fav in tu. Thank u so much ragz. You will get to know in the next chappy. Glad that u liked it. Loads of love ??

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much ?

  11. Asra

    hi deeshu sweety…yeapadi iruka….sry pa late’a comment panrathuku…update semma dear….bill pay panra scenes superbbb dear…loved it alot…Mr. bumpy and goondi best friends ayidangala….superbbb sweety….andha pair of eyes shiv nu nenaikiren….shiv gini oda proposal’a reject panathu kastama than iruku….aana avan apadi panathu naala than gini high mark score panirka nu nenaikum pothu santhosama iruku….enaku onu matum theriyum gini ku shiv mela irukirathu attraction illa love than kiratha gini kadipa shiv ku prove panirva….waiting for nxt one dear…
    Last Happy Pongal deeshu sweety…tkcr sissy…

    1. Deesh

      Hello asru sisso. Sorry LA solladheenga pa. Na nalla iruken. Neenga epdi irukeenga?? Unga comment a paakum pothu enaku romba santhosama iruku. Thank u so much sisso. Take care. Love u ?

  12. awesome amazing superb mind blowing outstanding plzz its a request to all raglak ff is ts ss writer plzz try to write more bcoz see how swasan ff ts as is so much and our is decreasing so much plzz yaar raglak fan saw always injustice by CVS now we can prove that love raglak so much I can’t write as I am very bad in writing but plzz write more plzz be regular don’t be late for raglak plzz hope we get next update or some more new ff tomorrow or day after day tomorrow plzzzzzz its a request plzz try to give more ff plzzz

    1. Deesh

      Oho nikky. Don’t underestimate yourself dear. Just give a try and see. I am sure that everyone will like it. Thank u so much dear. Glad that u liked it. 🙂

  13. Jazzy

    amazing chappy partner and maybe shiv has that locket still with him in his neck awwww i know i know i think too much but i feel so and who is seeing them maybe shiv only and the name hahahaha goondi amazing

    1. Deesh

      James bond. Seriously u have to be in CID. Ok, let’s see whether ur guess is right or not. Glad that u liked that name partner 😉 Thanks a lot. 🙂

  14. Hey Deeshu it was jst awsm yr mind blowing…N tht Shiv rejected our Gini..How foolish person he is…N finally Rudra n Gini r friends..Anyways happy sankranti to u too…Stay happy n keep smiling always..

    1. Deesh

      Thank u shru. Ha, but I think shiv did right. You want to know why? Stay tuned dear friend 🙂 Yes bumpy and gini are friends now. Thank u so much shru. And u asked me whether could we chat in e-mail. Of course we can. Shall I give my id? Thanks again shru 🙂

      1. No dr I know ur id..Guess how???

  15. Sally_blr

    Awwww I just loved my gym boy ooops sorry mr. Bumpy ?. He and me in the same screen awww that’s enough for me jumping with joy. And my mommy is cursing me for again waking her up. And about riyu’s idea I loved it. I told my cousin to read this chappy n she is texting me saying I really don’t think you fit that character. And she is laughing from the time she saw Riyu’s comment imagining me jealous. You know I’m very calm in such cases jealousy is not my cup of tea so she told me to request you to picturize me jealous as she can never see my that shade in real

    1. Deesh

      Ahaan. Sally sisso’s emojis are all for rudra/ bumpy only. Very bad. Now, I am jealous of rudra. Poor auntyji. I am sorry aunty. Ha ha sisso, even I loved her idea. It is just wonderful. And get ready sally sisso. Bahut bada dhamaka is waiting for u. You are absolutely right about shiv sisso. Well. I think all my readers are really whacking their brains and coming with interesting guesses. Let’s see sisso about ur guess. ROFL. Your guesses are making me laugh like mad. I am imagining u to be jealous and I am constantly laughing like a mad. Uff! Thank u sisso!! Loads of love. 🙂

  16. Sally_blr

    Ohho again I was so lost in my gym boy I forgot most important thing. I’m loving this shiv character the way he gave importance for her career and thanks to him that gini is persuing her dreams. In male dominated society like ours I really appreciate his reply. I somewhere feel he loves her I don’t know why. I compare Rahul and lucky at this point I am so glad gini rejected Rahul. And I really appreciate her determination to prove that her feelings are not infactuation.

  17. Sally_blr

    And one more thing why do I feel those eyes are either sasha’s or mine.

  18. Awesome episode

    1. Deesh

      Thank u so much ammu 🙂

  19. Awesome dr and happy Pongal

    1. Deesh

      Thank u vk sisso. Unga pongal epdi pochu??

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