THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE – RAGLAK FEW SHOTS BY DEESH (SHOT 4 and 5) Part 1

THE CHRISTMAS THAT CHANGED MY LIFE FEW SHOTS BY DEESH – RAGLAK ( SHOT 4 and 5 Part 1 )
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“JESSIE” My breath stopped for a second. For a second, I couldn’t understand anything. “GINI!” Sasha shook my shoulders. I realised my surroundings. “Huh” “What happened?” she asked me. I shook my head indicating nothing. “Then what happened??” Anu asked eagerly. “Gini, look! Someone said that why we were gossiping” Sasha told me. I couldn’t laugh at anu like before. Something pricked my heart. I could not digest the fact that Jessie was Mr. Mystery’s love. Ok, she was his first love. And Jessie is getting married to someone. But still, I could not bear that fact. Moreover, I felt pity on him. Bechara! How he would have felt when Jessie left him. I wanted to be a solace for him. How I wished to befriend Mr. Mystery on christmas, which is day after tomorrow. But now, nothing is gonna happen like that. Because, he hates girls and he would not befriend me or even talk to me. The ironical part is that how can I develop some attachment to a stranger, who I had met a week ago. Uff!! This is confusing me. Is this love?? Or attraction?? Or infatuation?? Jesus!! Do help me!!

“And do u know the reason behind Jammy and Shiv’s enemity??”Sasha’s voice made me realise my surroundings. I gave her a questioning look. She continued. “Shiv and Jammy were the best of friends during their college times. When Jammy came to know about Jessie and Shiv’s relationship, he broke all ties with Shiv. And it’s because…” ” Because, Jessie is Jammy’s TWIN” I interrupted her. Anu choked hearing that. “What?? Are they both twins??” she asked me. I and Sasha nodded in yes. Hmm, So this is the reason for Jammy’s bitter behaviour hearing Shiv’s name. This mystery man, Shiv, seems really interesting. But, I, Gini Mathews, will befriend him and make him change his cold behaviour towards girls for sure!!
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“Do u know Shiv’s house??” I asked a passer-by. “Go straight and turn left. You’ll see a steep road. Proceed and ho, you’ll see a house painted white.” He told me. I mumbled a thanks and left from there. It was Christmas. I wanted to meet him and hence I made my way to his house. It was an eighth wonder that I wore a white salwar that day. I don’t know why I wore that, but I wanted to. Mom was on the verge of fainting in shock when she saw me in this attire today. It has been 2 days since I came to know about him. And I have been stalking him. I came to know that he visits Lord Shiva temple, which is on a steep hill every Sunday. He does farming too. He is a hot blooded youngster and is so patriotic. He is his mom’s laadla too. He lost his dad when he was 5. All the above information, I gathered in 2 days. These details impressed me more and more. And it made me determined to win his friendship at any cost. I walked as directed by the passer by. Finally, I found the steep road leading to his house. I looked at his house. It wasn’t too big nor too small. It was simple, yet attractive like Mr. Mystery. As I was about to move further, I felt a drop of water on my face. I looked above. The drops increased in number and I know it was rain. It was so astonishing that it rained in December. And it started raining heavily. I don’t know whether should I move towards his home or run back to my home, which is miles away. As I stood confused, Suddenly, I felt a shade covering me. I looked and found out that someone was holding an umbrella, which prevented my already drenched body to drench further. I looked at the owner of that umbrella. To my extreme shock and bewilderment, it was Mr. Mystery. I looked at his drenched, masculine body. The drops of water were making their way from his forehead to his face. “What are u doing here?” He asked me bluntly. His voice. Man! It is so deep. Though his tone was blunt, his voice created sudden rush of blood over my cheeks. I smiled like an idiot, hearing his voice. “I asked what are u doing here??” He asked me aggressively. “Woh, actually…” I fumbled. For the first time in my life, I fumbled like this. I hit my palm on my head, being embarrassed of my fumbling. Then I noticed that he smiled. Yes, he smiled. It was a small one. But that was enough to make my heart thump in joy. “Go to your home now. Right now!” He ordered me strictly hiding his smile. The smile on my face faded away, hearing his strict voice. I turned and was about to move from there. “Stop!” he yelled. “Here, take this and go home safely.” He told me as he handed me the umbrella. Umbrella? I expected that he would give his phone number and ask me to call him as I reached home. Well, I expected too much. “Thanks. And..” I fumbled again. “And?” he asked me. “And… Merry christmas!!” I yelled and ran from there. I failed to notice that a pair of chocolaty orbs were following me as I ran from there.
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Guys, deesh here. Wishing u all a happy new year guys. This is the part 1 guys. Will post the part 2 of this chappy soon. Sorry sally sisso, I wanted to surprise u on new year and due to my health, I couldn’t. But I will reveal it soon. Hope u liked this chappy. Thanks for reading.

47 comments

  1. Raglakholic

    Raglakholic

    |Registered Member

    Omg….
    It’s outstanding
    Just awesome
    Loved d way ragini fumbled infront of shiv
    Nd d way she reacted to shiv’s smile is simply superb
    Eagerly waiting to read more
    Please do continue soon
    Nd yeah take care of your health
    Nd happy new year

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Hi harshu. Sorry yaar. I didn’t introduce myself in the last epi when u introduced urself. This is deeshna. Thank u so much harshu. I am fine now. Glad that u liked it buddy. 😊

      • Raglakholic

        Raglakholic

        |Registered Member

        Hai deeshna
        U r fine
        Then it’s a great news for us
        Take care of urself yaar
        Eagerly waiting for the next part
        Please do continue soon

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Sorry yaar for short update. But I will post a long one. Glad that u found it interesting. Thank u buddy. Happy new year. 😊

  2. nikky

    it’s so awesome amazing excellent superb excellent mind blowing brilliant no words to describe and love and respect all raglak ff writer that they keep their favorite couple alive and plzzz guys write more and regular bcoz we missing raglak badly and see Swasan ff are very much in comparison to raglak And bit jeleousy in me bcoz I am crazy raglak or temish fan

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Thank u so so much nikky for your love and support. Am very glad that u liked it. I can understand ur feelings yaar. I will try to be regular. Happy new year. 😊

  3. Ragz_teju

    Ragz_teju

    |Registered Member

    wow superb chappy…. shiv and gini loved their characters…. you always make me feel awww my reading your chappy yaar… it’s so amazing loved it so much.. . 😘😘😘
    Happy new year dear

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Happpiiee new year dear ragz!! You always make me float in happiness by ur comments. Am glad that u liked it. Thanks a lot. 😘😘

  4. Naimi

    YAY…..!!!!!! too good …….jammy n shiv are friends wow….excited to know how their reunion would be …….awwww….shiv smiled that’s cute n gini’s craziness is so adorable….hope u are fine n love u dear…tc…:-)

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Naimi !! Happy new year!! I wanted to wish u on that day but I couldn’t. Sorry buddy. Yes they are friends. Glad u liked it yaar. I am fine now. Love u too. Take care. 😘😘

  5. Sally_blr

    Sally_blr

    |Registered Member

    Deeshu. How are you now? And the chappy was superb yar. And I’m waiting for the next chappy. And about my surprise don’t you worry about it because whenever you give me the surprise that day only will be new year for me. I really don’t give importance to dates. I’m even bad in remembering dates. I’m really pathetic like I always forget my best friends birthday though we are together from 1st standard. So I don’t mind when you give me the surprise more than that your surprise matters so take a chill pill. Get well soon and love you

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Sally sisso!! I am fine now. I am just overwhelmed reading your comment. Your care and love just makes me go aww. Love u so so much sisso. And about dates even I am sailing in the same boat 😝. Thanks a lot sisso. 😘😘

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Happy new year vk dear. Enaku neenga chlo nu koopta pudichruku sissy 😝 thank u so much. I am fine now. Thanks again. 😘

  6. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    hey my deeshu sweety…Hw r u? Ipa fever yeapadi iruku…Udamba pathuko dear….
    thz chapter amazing dear….shiv smile superbbb Andha smile’a gini kida irunthu marachathu than semma….gini love you dear….omg shiv vum jammy yum friends a? ..interesting dear…loved it…waiting for nxt one deeshu sweety….takecare of ur health dear….

  7. Pinky

    Happy new year deeshu.epi was awesome. Deeshu again u got I’ll.wat happened ? R u alright now ? Take care of ur health buddy.ragini fumbled before shiv .wat will be jammy reaction wen he comes to know that gini wanted to befriend shiv waiting for that. Wen will be my gym boy’s entry.eagerly waiting for me

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Wishing u the same shwethu. Sorry for my late reply. I am alright now. For jammy’s reaction u have to wait dear. Gym boy’s entry will be in shot 6. Pakka. Thanks a lot. 😊

  8. Riya Mitra

    Hi Deeshu!!! Your choti sorry queen is back to talk and eat your brainπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…Well the episode is quite interesting and amazing…The way Gini smiled at Shiv’s word was just superb…You know the way you describes everything in your ff is just outstanding…And I really appreciates your work my sorry queen😝😝…You know while reading your ff I always goes to another world and imagines everything…You are just amazing dear…Hats off to you my sisoπŸ‘…What I will tell it will be really very less for you…And you know nowadays I hardly reads ff for my exams…Your and Irfan’s ff are just amazing and I really reads your ff and his…Just see if you have time then I regularly comment in your and Irfan’s ff…Because I really appreciates your and his work yaar…And see while talking I forget to tell you that a very HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR…Although I already told you this but then also I am telling this again…Now I think I should stop my bak bak because you will think that I wrote an essayπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…Stay blessed and keep smiling my dear…

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Choti sorry queen. Am sorry for my late reply yaar. Am so glad that u read my ff inspite of your exams. And am happy that u liked this epi dear. Hope u like the next too. Love u riyu. Don’t worry. I always love ur essays 😝😘

  9. Shruti

    Deeshhhhhh!!!! U gave me a new name in ur previous ep!!! SHRU!!! OH MY GOD..Really thnx 4 it yaar..It means a lot 2 me dr..Ok so from now I vll call u as Deeshu if u don’t hv ny problem..

    Now coming 2 d it was jst awsm awsm awsm yr..Nothing 2 say..Gini z in salwar!! Oh my god n tht 222 4 impressing Shiv!!! Really I m totally spell bound..Stay happy dr n keep smiling always..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜€πŸ˜Šβ˜Ί

    • Deesh

      Deesh

      |Author

      Sorry shru for my late reply. Am glad that u liked the name”shru” u can call me deeshu too. Don’t say thanks yaar. Thank u so much dear shru. Am so happy that u liked this epi. 😊

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