THE CHOICE- CHAPTER 8

Hello my sweethearts…i m back…i will posting quickly..coz i hve to finish my first part of d story bfr 14… Now coming to d chp..WARNING: IT CAN BE EXTREMELY BORING…but i know u ppl r very sweet..so plz read it for my sake..nd let me know how did u find it..through ur comments…so here comes…

CHAPTER-8

Its morning… suman gets ready….she is wearing navy blue plain skirt..nd white top..she has left her hair open nd a blue scarf is put around her neck…..she puts on her favourite shoes …black color..wid bright pink laces…..she takes her racquet…nd proceeds to go towards d badminton court…its sunday…she promised shravan… that she will play wid him today….nothing has changed…they still r best friends..though shravan flirts wid her at times….she has made up her mind..that its just a liking he has for her… nd it will go away wid time…so she decided to not let it affect their friendship…which grew more day by day…she told him that he can tell adi about his feelings for her..if he wishes to…nd shravan understood y she was asking him to do all this..she wanted to c if adi is jealous..not in that sense…but about her getting close wid someone else..shravan thought that..is she using me?… but swept away all such thoughts… all he wanted was to see her happy..even if he himself felt insecure…so he told adi…but he didn’t tell that he has confessed it to suman… nd d reply which adi gave after listening to this shocked suman…adi told..” then u should confess them before its too late…”

she comes out of d flashbacks of all that has happened over these days…as she reaches d court..shravan is not there as usual…he is always late…she has to call him every single time…
she calls him..nd he picks up d phone..sounding bit sleepy….” Hello…Ms. Suman …How r u…what good deeds have I done…to get d honour of listening to ur beautiful voice..so early in d morning….?” Shravan says..although he is sleepy..he still has that charm in his voice….
” Started again…” Suman thinks…
” Early morning?.. Its 8.. Nd u promised to be here by 7:45 sharp… u called me to play badminton….” Suman snaps at him….
” Oh yeah.. I will come in five minutes…” Shravan replies…sounding like a child being scolded by his mum…
” Why do u make me call u every time.. Learn to be on time..!” Suman says sounding angry….one thing that she doesn’t like is to be kept waiting by someone…bcoz of whom she is there.…
” If I will come on time..then how will get up..by d sound of ur voice….” Shravan says dreamily….
” Enough of it..come soon…” Suman cuts d call..saying so…..
Meanwhile… Shravan thinks that ..Suman didn’t tell that she likes him too…but she doesn’t seem to have a problem when he flirts wid her…when he says those cheesy lines..he is so good at delivering…what does she want….? Why doesn’t she gives a clear answer?
” Now I should hurry up…otherwise I will surely get an answer on my cheek….” He says holding his cheek…
He goes to get ready….

Suman gets inside d court….switches on d light…she is so thankful..that no one is here…it is Sunday…people should be here…but semester exams r closing up….so everyone is busy wid their studies….even she would be studying…had it not been this idiot Shravan…she thinks…
She removes her scarf…nd ties her hair in a tight bun…she doesn’t like her hair coming over her face while playing..it irritates her a lot.. She takes out her racquet…which is one of her most prized possession…she allows very few ppl to use it…she cares for it..like a baby….in fact…her friends tease her…calling her racquet ‘baby’ every time…like…” Hey can I have ur baby for this match?” they say…
She goes near a wall…nd starts practising alone wid d cork.…she hits.. hits back…hits..hits back…this has been another method for her to take out her frustration….nd anger…
Shravan comes there..nd sees Suman practising all alone…she is sweating…but her face is reflecting some strong feeling…something very striking….not beauty..not grace…not any type of girly feeling….but something..stronger…something harder..something tougher….

” U will play wid d wall only.. Or do u have any plans to play wid me also..?” Shravan quips..moving to d other side of d court wid his racquet….he is wearing a bright sky blue T-shirt… which Suman likes a lot…it suits him..it compliments his complexion….with it he is wearing a total contrast… dark olive pants….his hair is perfect as usual…nd he is having his usual charm…
” U don’t fulfil ur promises..then I will have to play wid d wall only…” Suman retorts… Taking her position…
” Ok ….Ok…now let’s play….” Shravan says…understanding ..that he shouldn’t let her bring d topic up…
They practice for a while…nd then they start wid d match…
Shravan is ahead by some points…he is making Suman run across d whole court…she hates it…when people themselves don’t like something..nd they make other do… she thinks that by doing this..d person is showing that he cannot play being wholly dependent on his power..aggression nd skill..a person should use this technique also..but it shouldn’t be like ..using only this to overpower ur opponent…

” Shravan …I have told u that I don’t like this..can’t u play straight…!” Suman fumes..but Shravan is enjoying himself….
” Y..? U have a problem in running?” Shravan teasingly says so…
” No I don’t.. But surely..u will” Suman replies in anger…
After some time…its Shravan who is shouting..” Hey Suman.. Will u stop it….!”
” Y..? Do u have a problem in running…?” She says..mimicking him…
” Ok..Ok…I m sorry…” He says…finally accepting his defeat…
” Now can we play properly?” He continues….
And a smash lands near his feet…nd he looks up.. Nd gives his cutest smile….hoping that it will help melt d fuming girl…standing across d court…
Nd it does…Suman stops making him move frantically around d court…but now smashes r landing more nd more..on both sides… at d end.. Suman wins…
They both play nd talk for a while…this is one more thing Shravan loves about Suman… She is not totally girly…she is sensitive where she should be…nd aggressive where she needs to be…she has passion on one side…nd gentleness on d other…nd one thing he just loves about her totally..is that …she is so sweet! He loves her…very very much… nd he is so lucky to have her…

33 comments

  1. sona

    And …
    We r so lucky to have you..😉😉✋✋😍😍😍
    It was so perfect..niyati…😉😉😄😄😊😊😊
    U r writing…skills can’t bore anyone…u may thought…so..like that…just because..the story is very less..right?!😉😉😄😄
    But..its good..really good..as always😊😊😊

  2. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Diii
    This was not at all boring
    That was beautiful
    Ladki pe line maar rha hai!
    Hawwye re!
    Aur that badminton thing!
    I loved it!
    Plsshhh post soon
    Love u😘

  3. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    It was so perfect !
    To the point..
    And plus everything was delightful..
    Loved it so so much..
    And Shravan’s confession..OMFG
    Beautiful..
    Loved it loads di !
    Do post soon
    Love,
    Nikita

  4. Anjali

    hey ńiyati…m anjali…upar jisne comment kia not that one 😉
    I know some of friends here sona, preetypreety, khushi,n some other…they call me anjo …u can also dear if u want 🙂
    loved ur all chapters 🙂 n no it was not boring at all yar .. 🙂 why shravu isn’t saying that its not like its love .. oh…
    all the best for ur exams dear… will wait for part 2…
    🙂 please update next chapter soon 🙂

      • Anjali

        Haha…😂😂😂😂😂😂don’t be confused . Even I am surprise to see another anjali. But our logo are different . And yes best of luck for your exams . Your ff is awesome and superb. Hey anjali Nd weird sister i really want you two to be my friends. And update next chapter. Your ff is not at all boring.

  5. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Yes my dear sona di is ri8 we r so so so lucky to have such a wonderful sister and a great writer like u my love……!!!!! U r just awesome!!and u call this a boring ep?????? No yrrrrrrrrrrr how can u is it the great great great ep ever….! And I m totally in love with this flirty shr…!!! Hbhahah and sumo also don’t care gud gud…..hope to c some romance bw these two….!!!!
    I know u will bring them closer……!!!! U r fab my darling….!!!!
    Hahha tareef Mai poochna Bhool gai how r u..?? 😀
    I m back!!! Missed me……??? 😉 hahahaha
    Ok ok take care love
    By

  6. pretty preeti

    Hey WS it was fab dear
    I.loved it very much
    U write really nice
    U will bring them close.
    Teri sumo interesting not care very gud
    Loved it weirdy
    Ur new name weirdy no niyo
    Nhi weirdy theek hai
    U choose niyo or weirdy
    Love uuu
    Keep writing these kinds of gud ff epis and make me happy
    Loved it a lot
    Love u tooo

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh god preeti…😂😂😂
      Thankyou so much..nd u can calk me whatever u wish to..
      Luv ya..
      All d best for ur exams…
      Take care..
      Will post soon.
      😊😊😊😊

  7. Deotima

    di ur epis can never be boring dear… i loved it alot… shravu has already fallen its sumos time…
    i love shravus cheesy lines… and sumos retorts … thnx 4 posting it fast…
    ur a born writer … bye

  8. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Boring?????not at all…. It was perfect as alwayssss

    loved it…….

    I love sharman bond which is getting stronger day by day lovely epi post soon 🙂 🙂

  9. Anjali

    hey niyati …love u 🙂 I knew it my name would confuse u guys 😉 that’s y I told u to call me anjo 🙂
    @anjali…hey girl with my name 😉 haha…just kidding… well yeah our logo is different…I knew it you all will get confused 😀
    sure I have no problem in being ur best friend 🙂 …
    m always ready to make friends especially when they’re related with edkv 😉

  10. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Boring? Like really? U think it was boring? I really wanna kill u for saying one of the best ff boring but then I’ll take it positively. If this is boring to u then the best of ur ability will be…….I’ll die that day for sure. The epi!! It was so cute. The way Shr flirted with her. Awwww. xoxoxoxo. Nd she didn’t have any problems. This is just so perfect. Can’t wait for the next part. Pls post soon. And yah enjoy studying for ur exams.
    Love u
    Take care
    Keep rocking

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh Ariana…
      Thank god u dropped d idea of killing me….😂😂😂
      Anyway thank you so much sweety…
      Luv u too…
      Will post really soon..
      😊😊😊😊

  11. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Love love love love love ….lots of love Meri jaan
    Yr pehle toh sorry yr main not commenting regularly yr ab toh Tu bhi sorry sunke tang Aa chuki hogi but Kya karun m really sorry hope u forgive me
    Now coming to the episode boring????
    If this is what u call boring then boring is the best word in this world
    And the last that he is lucky to have her I will say I m lucky to have u in fact we all r i know this is already written by Sona di but Kya karun I love u so much yr stay blessed and yes keep forgiving me if I need 😋😋😋😝😝😜😜

    Love u so so much dear

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thank yo so much sweety…
      No need to say sorry at all..I know u r very busy…I understand…
      U read that’s enough for me…
      Luv u lots nd lots…!
      Take care…
      😊😊😊😊

  12. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Sorry sorry sorry niyati for being late i hope u understand why am i late so now coming to today’s epi it was fab just amazing loved the flirty and naughty side of shravan

  13. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hi Niyati aka WS
    how r u? All gud?
    This epi was not at all boring…
    it was Amaaaaazzzziiinggggg…
    Shraman’ s fight during match was so cute…
    flirty Shravo… :-*
    post soon…
    take care…
    Lots of love…
    Ruchi… 🙂

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..