THE CHOICE- CHAPTER 7

Hello ppl..i m a bit bfr my scheduled date..but i know its fine wid u ppl..so y m i here…i hve to tell u soke things…this part of my story would be ending in 2-3 chps…after which i m going to take… A short break…u know..exams..then fun after exams…so its gonna take a while..but after that..i will be back wid part 2 of my story…so now enough of my blabbering…thank you all d ppl for ur lovely comments..i m touched…hope to c ur comment on this part too..so here comes…CHAPTER-7

suman and shravan r at their favourite place… shravan has started liking it.. when it became a place to be wid suman…. after that incident wid adi… they have started talking more…
” you know shravan… i trusted adi so much.. even now.. i do..” suman says softly…d soft evening breeze hits her face… she trusts adi…but she has started trusting shravan more… wid everything… her pain…her secrets..her dreams..its like he knows her better than anyone else …but she always feels that she doesn’t know him.. they barely talk abt him…of course they do..but not so deeply…he doesn’t share much abt him…its like..he has built an invisible wall btwn her nd his inner self… they r very different..that is d excuse shravan gives when suman tells him that he doesn’t share anything wid her….he says he trusts her.. but he doesn’t show that… if a man cannot trust a woman wid his secrets…his pain.. then wat can he trust her wid… how hard she tries.. but he doesn’t really open up….
” is he worth it?” shravan says… interrupting suman in her thoughts… shravan really wanted to hear d answer from her.. after wat adi said about her that day.. any girl would have had that self respect to go and slap on his face..nd say ” even i don’t give a damn about u” …if not this then at least….talked badly about him behind his back…. but suman.. she didn’t do any of this… she talks highly of adi even now… now she gave me d answer…its not about self respect every single time…at times u just have to trust someone from ur heart….nd she told me just now that she trusts him…..but does he deserve that trust….?

” you cannot judge someone on d basis of one or two incidences…i have known adi for a long time….nd i know he is not a bad person….” suman says looking at shravan..directly into his eyes… she is also trying to find some answers.. which she is unable to find…everytime
shravan doesn’t reply…. he just lies back..head on his hand… nd looks at d sky…
” did u try talking to him? ” shravan says looking at d sky..
” yes i did…but he didn’t want to talk…so…” suman shrugs….
” this is d problem wid her…she can forgive anyone for anything… just for that one relation she wants to save…. any one comes nd hurts her so easily…nd still she goes behind that person… without any hesitation…or so what people so call it self respect…just becoz she trusts that person….but that’s another striking feature of her’s.. she cares about relations….she knows their importance…nd she knows that at times…they matter..more than anything else…” shravan thinks….
he likes suman…he does..she is his crush from a long back… she had something striking in her..something unknown…in fact..he has started loving her… he cares for her..nd there’s nothing to hide about it…even suman knows that he is hurt to see her pained…that he enjoys her company…
” hey shravan… we r talking abt too much sadness.. u tell…found any girlfriend for urself? suman says suddenly…trying to sound as if she is teasing him…but d fact is…she wants to know at least something important about him….something that really matters to him…
” no girlfriend.. but i have a crush…my only crush in this whole college” shravan says still looking up..for now..liking is fine… he is telling her…” oh god.. how will she react…will she break their friendship?…but someday or d other..she will know about it..after all..feelings cannot be hidden for too long….so y not tell her….” he thinks..
suman looks excited…she is smiling…nd looking at d lake….but from inside..she has different feeling..an unknown fear fills her….
” who is d girl..shravan? ” she asks still looking at d still water….
” its u…” shravan says…trying to sound casual…

meanwhile…suman freezes…d world stops for her….. she doesn’t know…if he is telling d truth..if he is…what should she feel….but right now…she sits blank…staring at d lake….
“i like u…i really like u…nd i m not afraid to confess it..” shravan says..now sitting up…he so much wanted to replace that like wid love…but right now..d truth is ..he is dying from inside…what will be her answer..he is ready..even for a slap…
meanwhile suman finally…takes in what’s happening…nd is kinda shocked at this revelation….now she feels like laughing..she really thinks that this is a joke…shravan is just playing around wid her…she knows that shravan cares for her…nd even she does..but she didn’t expect that he will confess that he had any kind of feelings for her..but he told like….not love….she cannot loose a friend like him…anyway its just a liking.. an attraction…it will vanish wid time…but she still feels like laughing….so she does…who expected that…’shravan malhotra…d tall hot guy..on whom d girls die’.will like her…’ suman kashyap…a girl wid not such a beautiful face…’

meanwhile..shravan looks at her while she laughs like a maniac..has he made her mad?….he thinks…but she didn’t slap him…that’s enough for today…he falls back …his arms stretched out….hoping that one day.. she will embrace them….

26 comments

  1. Angel_pari

    Hayeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
    Ok now let me take a deep breath first!!!!!!

    What what to say yar i,m not getting a single word for u ur just amazing…..

    Sharman bond…..is smthng out of the world…

    Loved it and lov u loads

  2. Deotima

    DI MEI KYA BATAU?? I AM ALL LOST IN D EPI …. IT WAS GREAT . UR WRITING SKILLS R SOO AWESOME U POTRAY EACH CHARACTER SOOO WELL ESPECIALLYD BOND BETWEEN THEM. THANKS 4 QUICK UPDATE . BEST OF LUCK 4 UR EXAMS … U GET FULL MARKS IN ESSAYS RIGHT…..

  3. pretty preeti

    Hey WS niyo
    U rocked ur ff epi yaar itni aachi tha aaj ka epi I m really wondered after reading it
    Mai pagal ho gyi
    Yaar it ws really guddd
    U r ama zing
    Sumo WS really sweet and shravo ko toh mai kya kaho
    Loved it

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    OOHH EEMM GEE..!!
    Di.. This episode, was out of the world..
    ‘Like’ damn.. ‘LOVE’ bhi toh bol sakta tha..
    And Suman, has mat ‘ILU’ bol de..
    Anyway, di episode was fantastic..
    ShraMan bond was so cute..
    Sometimes I feel like taking a gun and shooting myself..cause I know, if I don’t , my main reason to die would be reading all you people’s ff’s..
    They’re amazing
    Loved it..
    Post soon!
    Love you loads!
    -Nikita-

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Omg Nikki….
      I should be d one shooting myself..
      Coz I m anyway gonna die…if u keep writing such sweet comments…
      Thank you so so much dear
      I will post soon..
      Luv u loads nd loads…
      Take care..
      😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

  5. sona

    Its really…amazing…niyati…
    So u gonna..end this in 2 – 3 parts…it’s..OK..
    All the best for ur upcoming exams dear.prepare well..do well..😊😊😊

  6. Zainab

    Oh my goodness. What a superb episode. Loved it to the core. I really don’t have enough words to explain this beautifully written amazing episode. 💜
    Best of luck for your exams. 👍
    Take care 😘

  7. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Seriously? Crush!!! At least he confessed. Tht moment not only Suman but I also froze. The epi…..r u seriously planning to kill me. Uhh this ff. It actually kills me. Actually all ff nd shots does. U all ppl here r so brilliant. I can’t express it how these makes my day. I loved every bit of the epi. The way they started spending time together. I really can’t get over tht Shravan said it so clearly. Eagerly waiting for next epi. Post soon. I’m waiting

  8. Anamika

    Hey niyati
    How r uh
    I kno m late
    Actually a bit busy
    Yr what a writer u r man
    I mean u made me fall for Shravan all over again🙈🙈😘
    M eagerly waiting for the next part
    Post soon
    Lots of love n care

  9. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niyati aka WS
    we r not fine wid u posting the ff early…
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    Because we r happy… That u posted early… 😉 😉
    How r u dear? All well…??
    Sorry… M late today…
    Superb epi…
    wow man… Shravan confessed that he has crush on Sumo…
    and her reaction… Lucky Shravo thappad nhi padha !! Haha
    Loved it
    take care…
    Lots of Love
    Ruchi… 🙂

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh thank you ruchi…
      I m good…hope u r also doing well…
      Nd u r not late sweety..
      Nd even if u r..it doesn’t matter to me…
      Love you too…
      Take care…
      😊😊😊😊

  10. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Awwww…..
    That was sooo cute…
    I loved it soooooooo much…..
    And the confession…aww emm gee…
    He said so casually
    And Sumo laughed…
    But still I dmt understand what the ‘Choice’ is all abt…
    Let’s see…
    Love u😘

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