THE CHOICE- CHAPTER 5

Hello ppl..here i m wid chp 5.. Before i begin i must say..sumo nandini..naina..i m missing u ppl like hell..plz be back soon…

CHAPTER-5

“How can u make him understand…when u don’t know d whole story…?” Suman says sadly…..she doesn’t know what she is doing….she is telling Shravan her deepest secrets…her deepest regrets…..her pain…her past…..y?…he isn’t that close to her….Yaah she nd he talk…but she never thought that he could be someone…whom she would be sharing everything wid…..

“I know that u both hve a past together….nd u tried ur level best to not let it affect ur present…this much is enough for me to give a try..to make everything good for ur future….” Shravan replies without looking at Suman….he is staring at d lake…trying her method….seeing whether it really helps to soothe d mind or no…..it is not that simple for him…as he said…..when Aditya told him abt d past…not everything..but enough…one night on d college terrace….he did not know that this past of their’s was going to bother him…..he does not know d reason..he is trying…trying very hard…to get an answer….

” D story is not d same for everyone…its just d plot….we make our own story nd views using the plot nd characters….but at d end…its our imagination which rules….I m sure u also must have formed some thoughts…positive.. negative..but some thoughts..which r ur own….” Suman says…hoping that Shravan will understand that there is her side of story too…but Shravan is still thinking about what she said….” What r my thoughts..? Positive? Negative?..or neutral?…. What story do I want to make?…”
Suman decides not tell him…nd let him get it on his own…now she really has just one question in mind…..” Do u really know me?”

Suman and Shravan spend d evening like that only…staring at d lake…feeling each other’s presence….listening to each other’s breaths….trying to read each other’s thoughts….hoping that they would be able yo help each other….

Next day… Shravan decides to talk to Aditya….in d evening….
The boys r playing football….when Suman nd Shravan come there… They stand at distance from them…
” Suman…u shouldn’t have come here to listen….u should go… I promise that I will manage…..if adi sees u then….” Shravan says trying to convince Suman….he didn’t want to c d pain in her eyes…if adi told something…..but he knows that she will never go…so he just stares at her helplessly..for d expected answer….nd she says it..” No I will not go…I will stand here only…I will not come in front of him”

Shravan looks into her deep brown eyes which showed fear… anxiety… longing…. stubbornness ..all at d same time….
It all felt good to him…as long as those eyes were looking him into his eyes….as long as they didn’t look down.…
” Ok…” He says…nd goes from there…
Suman stands there behind a wall…her heart pounding fast…her breaths.. Full of tension….” What will happen now….I shouldn’t have done this…I shouldn’t hve let Shravan get involved in this…” Her mind is filled wid all d questions….when she sees Shravan coming wid Aditya…. They sit on a bench near d wall…from where..Suman is hidden but she can see nd hear them very clearly….

” Hey Shravan… what’s up?…wanna join us for a match…?” Aditya says, patting his face wid a towel….nd picking up his bottle….nd sipping water from it…
Suman can hear everything….” He is acting so normal….. But is he really so from inside?… whom is he trying to fool… d world or himself?” Suman thinks…
” No, Adi… not today… now I m here for something else…” Shravan says….bringing seriousness to his voice….making Adi look at him wid attention….Shravan doesn’t know how he is going to put it….his mind is occupied wid just one question….’ Suman is listening… don’t hurt her’…
Suman so much wanted to go nd hold Shravan’s hand…nd bring him back…nd suddenly a fear fills her….”Am I doing another mistake?”

” Say ” Adi says…just one word…’say’ it keeps ringing is Shravan’s head….until d sound becomes too loud and he has to shake his head….to get over it…
Aditya gives him a look…which a person gives when he is afraid nd confused at d same time….when he thinks that d person sitting in front if him is dangerously mad….
” I m not mad…” Shravan says getting irritated…
Does he really need to do this… He is not really good at this…. He can fight.. But never even dream of resolving a fight…that too when both sides r so important to him…but he chose his side when he told Suman that he is going to try his level best….he takes a deep breath….
Suman is still occupied wid d fear…when another voice speaks inside her…” This was d best chance….u could hve let him move on…” really could she have let him…did she do another mistake….by not rectifying d very first ?

20 comments

  1. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Hi niyati first of all i m really very soorrryyy bcz at the start of this ff i promised u that i will always comment on each epi but now i broke my promises so sooooorrrrryyyyyyy for that actually my school is going to reopen in a week and i have to do lots of stuff like shopping, physical checkup and alot more i m really busy so i couldn’t comment i read previous epis as well and they were really amazing and this one was really superb loved the fearful side of suman and once again sorry and i will try my best to comment on upcoming epis but i can’t promise whether I’ll be consistent or not……. So sooorryyyy plz forgive me for breaking my promise

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh its Ok rukhsar…I unserstand…comment whenever u r comfortable…thank you for everything…from reading to commenting…
      Luv u lots..😊😊

  2. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awww what should I say? The epi was brilliant. The way u explained their inner feelings. Mindblowing. Awesome. Girl, u have an extraordinary skill to elaborate feelings and make people imagine the scene. Wonderful. I’m in love with it. Oh now I have to wait for next wednesday. Not again!!! Pls can u post soon? I really can’t wait. It’s the worst test of patience. Anyways love u dear
    Take care
    Byeeee

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh god….thank you so so much Ariana.. Don’t worry…I promised to post twice a week..so next chp on Saturday….love u lots nd lots…!!😊😊

  3. Ananya98

    |Registered Member

    M in love with ur ff niyati
    U r so good in writing
    I mean the way u explain each n everything
    One could actually imagine them
    N story is going superb
    Interest incrasing with high rate
    Waiting for the next part
    Post it asap😊
    Luv uh
    –Anamika

  4. sona

    I love ur magic of words..a lot…😘😘
    Wana travel more with it..😍😍
    Keep it gng on.
    Loved it😊😊😊

  5. Kaya.........

    |Registered Member

    Wow…. such a lovely update…it was…..
    Awesome
    Amazing
    Fabulous
    Fantastic
    Superb
    Mind blowing
    Interesting
    Wonderful
    Marvellous
    Perfect
    Loved it
    Please
    Please
    Please
    Please
    Post soon
    Love you
    Take care

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Omgggg…thank you so much kaya.. For complimenting my writing so much…
      Luv u loads nd loads..
      Next chp on Saturday…
      😊😊😊😊😊😊

  6. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    it was lovely.. loved it so so much..
    Di, you write beautifully.. love you loads.. and loads..
    sorry for the chota comment, but mujhe kahin jana hai..
    but you know that i luved it, and will always!
    okay bye
    post soon
    loads n loads of luv,
    nikita

  7. pretty preeti

    WS hi sweety
    The epi was jakkas
    Yeh wala toh brilliant she bhi aage that
    I loved it
    My sis u r great
    I wanna tell u plz read next part of my ff it is special for me
    I am mad for u ff name u know it right
    Tell me after reading were u happy
    Ur epi was lovely
    I can’t express

  8. Zainab

    What a mind blowing episode it was 👏
    Loved it to the core 💜
    Post soon. Can’t wait to read more. 🙂
    Take care 😘

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