THE CHOICE – CHAPTER 1

Hello my amigos….!! Angel wanted me to post on sunday…so just for her…I m posting this epi a little bfr my scheduled date…one more thing i forgot to add in d intro was that…this story is more from suman’s point of view….so i want lots nd lots of comment…otherwise i wont continue….tell me if u want so….so here i begin…..

CHAPTER-1
Its evening…d sun is setting down…nd d night is wrapping its arms around d sky…there’s a lot of rush….boys nd girls..hanging in groups…chatting…laughing…. Nd doing all sorts of stuff…
In this noise…a girl wearing white crop top and black pants is moving quickly wid some books in her hands…her wavy brown hair is tied in a loose pony…she looks in a hurry… she has minimal makeup on her face…she is what people would define as- Beauty in simplicity….there’s nothing great about her looks…but she is different….she stands out….maybe bcoz she is tall…taller than d girls of her age….but no…its not d height…its d personality….. Those eyes refuse to look down…she loves to look into people’s eyes when she talks…its a sign of confidence….according to her..

Suddenly someone calls out from behind…” Hey Suman! ”
Suman closes her eyes nd sighs wearily…she always loves this time…its her time.. When her lectures r over nd she is free from studies for some time….in her whole college day routine….this is d time when she loves to be alone…night time….she always manages to give some excuse to her friends nd slip away…to her hostel room…or somewhere more peaceful….but now she feels irritated…she doesn’t like to talk wid anyone at this time…but now she has to….she turns around to see who has called her….

A guy…pretty tall is standing there…waving his hand at her….he is wearing….dark blue T-shirt nd jeans…His hair is black…nd as wind blows in his face…they move slightly…sweat is shining on his forehead…it looks..as though he has run a long distance…although he is panting….he is beaming at her…between his tired breaths…
” Oh its u Aditya…” She smiles at him…he is one of those few people…whom Suman loves to be wid…he has same interests like her…nd that’s what Suman likes about him…he is artistic…loves to read books…plays various sports nd knows how to make people comfortable in his presence….there r times..when Suman nd he paint nd play together….they discuss books…nd love to tease each other wid someone…he is Suman’s best guy friend…they can talk for hours nd never get tired..
“Yeah…I m so sorry..I know u like to be alone now..its just that I didn’t want to hang out wid d grp …so I thought to meet u….” says Aditya panting…
“Y r u breathing so heavily….?…hve u been running..or working out lately?”
” Naah..I wanted to find u before I lost u…so I ran all d way till here…I m sorry if I disturbed u…”Aditya says….
” Hey..no need to be sorry…its fine…u can come wid me” she replies smiling at him. Aditya looks hesitant….nd he gives her a ‘ r u sure’ look.. wid raised eyebrows…
” Oh com’on adi…don’t be stupid…u hve joined me bfr also…come…its gonna be no prblm…” saying this.. She holds his hand nd drags him wid her…

Aditya is smiling….as if he knew this was going to happen….he lets her pull him..coz he is tired…very very tired…nd her touch is relaxing…it has always been…
They both start walking towards some place….finally they reach..its there favourite place….they come here often….its a small lake…away from d noise of d college…its surrounded by trees….nd its looking beautiful as d sky is being reflected in d water in d lake…giving it shades of orange….Suman had discovered it in d initial days…when she first came here…she loves finding her own small corners…away from d noise….
Suman nd Aditya move near a big mango tree…nd sit under it…like they always do when they come here…..
“Adi…I can’t believe we hve grown up…I mean we r in college…same college!.. I can’t believe it” Suman says looking at d lake…she closes her eyes…nd d cool evening breeze hits her face….she is revisiting her old days….its been only a month since she came here…this place is still new to her….but still she has managed to merge in…Aditya nd she had been friends from school…nd she was elated when he told her that he also got admission in d same college…she is so happy…that finally she is nearing to her dream…..she always wanted to be an artist..in fact she was born to be one….her paintings reflected something more than colors…they reflected emotions….those bold strokes of brush had some story to say….she has already decided that she is going to work as a free lancer….where she will not be under any stress…any conditions….where she would be free to express….she feels that art is an expression..which cannot be taught….
“Oh hello madam…wake up…” Aditya says nd shakes Suman.
“Oh…what happened…..can’t u let me be at peace” Suman snaps back.
” How much peace do u wish for..!” Aditya asks irritated…
” I need it..as much as d sky…..endless” Suman says dreamily..
” Then what m I supposed to do…stare at u?…while u dream” Aditya retorts.
” That’s y I tell u…find ur true love…then u can be busy wid her….instead of irritating me…nd…” Suman stops mid sentence….she knows…she shouldn’t hve said that….Aditya’s face has lost its smile….nd it turns hard….
Suman says ” Um..I..I m so sorry…I didn’t mean that”
But Aditya doesn’t reply…. Suman curses herself from within…..” Oh Suman… Y did u say that…! You know d truth… Then y did u do this.”

30 comments

  1. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    hey ws a big thnks for this u know what u hv fullfill my two wishes unknowingly first that u hd posted before and second i always wanted to read ur story which should be focused on clg life and here i got it…… I,m sooooooooo happy u hv describe love of two mature pplz in ur pre ff know i,m looking forward for thiss that how will u go with clg lovestory sooooo plzzzzz pst soon…….

    And this epi….. I cant appreciate it with words it was amazing just love it..

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Hello my dear niyati…..!!!
    Yrrrr so happy to have u back with a blockbuster ff….!!!
    Yes blokbuster that is d only word I can say……cause ri8 now m out of words…..cause write so amzinglyyyy as usual….!!
    Perfect….!!! Amazing….!!!
    I really missed ur prev ff….n I knw dat I m gonna love this one lyk dat…. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Love u yr….!!
    Take care πŸ˜‰

  3. Neeti

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    finally you are back iwill never let you go di
    Aditya iss hero..???!!!
    I’m really confused pst soon pls di
    love you had par kar- Neeti

  4. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Hiiiiiii.
    K where should I start from? The epi i guess. It was fantastic. Suman nd Adi!!! Uk the tree part reminded me of Snape nd Lily from Harry Potter. Uhh! U made my memories flash back. Thanks. Shravan is missing. Suman-Adi wayyy to close. Taking abt love. Nd u stop the epi!!! Too much of suspense!!! Can’t wait. Post next part soon.
    Blessings and Love
    Ariana

  5. Kaya

    Wow…….what a wonderful update…… I wanted to read on and on………… please post the next update .. soon………….. I will be eagerly waiting for your next post…………

  6. sona

    It was ssoooo….gud..my sis…
    U know…I’m not comparing…but the combinations of words of this..ff remembers me..pink paradise..really..😍😍😍😍😍
    I mean..its…as perfect as that ff..i read till now..
    Its so different…I felt..so..POV of sumo
    Pls continue😊😊

  7. Anamika

    Woow yr
    It was a dhinchak start
    I was totally lost in it
    So happy to read ur ff once again
    😁😁
    Superb it is
    Eagerly waiting to kno k kya hua adi k saath n shravan ki entry….
    Love uh
    Post asap☺️

  8. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hi niyati di! Though, it’s the first episode but still it us so heartwarming and just beautuful. The gesture of appreciation is seriously unexplainable . So take lots of love from my side. I would simply say’ I’m loving it! ‘ keep writing. Post soon dear.

  9. pretty preeti

    WS my weird sister
    Ur new story had already made me weird
    So nice
    So gud
    I am left with no words
    Just loved it
    It was marvellous
    Loved it
    Byeeee

  10. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    wen it comes to u, I really run short of words..
    wat to say ur evry creation describes perfection.. I loved it, very much…
    love ya niyati.. ❀

  11. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Hey niya di !! (Can I call you that)
    The episode.. Ab kya kehna..
    Aap jo jaante hi ho,
    As usual, it made me so happy..
    As usual, I loved the way you portrayed the emotions..
    As usual, I fell in love with it !!
    I got attached to it in the very first episode…
    You’re damn amazing..
    I loved the AdiMan bond you showed..
    Waiting for our hero’s entry..
    Or Adi’s the hero??
    I loved it di..
    Post soon..
    And can you try to make the next one longerr?
    Excited to know what happened to Aditya..
    Post soon
    Loads of love,
    Nikki

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh my God.. Thank you so so much Nikki….u will get to know.. Who’s d hero..as we progress…talking abt d length..I can’t guarantee that dear..
      Luv u lots Nd lots!!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey WS !!! it was amazing dear .. I hv no words to praise u .. u left me speechless .. very very nice dear ..
    Post soon ..
    Take care..
    Lotzzzz of love ..

  13. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Hey di! U wr fantabulous as always! Sorry for the late comment, was busy in some function since morning, plz upload the next one asap….or else I will not spare uπŸ˜‚
    Plzz di…jldi jldi…I want to read the next part…such a lot of suspense and mystery…and di…u uploaded today? I mean u said Wednesday’s, rgt? But, but, surprises are always wlcm, and I loved urs…post soon di, love ya😘

  14. Naina

    Wonderful niyati its fab amazing epi and i know last time ki tarah ap ka ye ff b super duper hit hoga mark my words

  15. Deotima

    niyati sorry 4 commenting late i was busy wid an inter school competition . wow a great epi. though i dont like adi in d serial but in ur ff i could sketch a new adi and also sumo. well sumo is an artist and i can understand all her emotions as even i am involved in dance. i do learn dancing but do not give any kind of exams. it is my passion as sumo. thnx for bringing up this wonderful emotion of passion

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