Chalte Chalte: A Journey Of Love (Shivika FF): Episode 10

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Continuation from Episode 9:

Anika has left Trivedi Villa ignoring all the urges of family members.Shivaay is also out of Trivedi Villa in search of Anika,in his car.He has no idea in which way or in what direction to go so that he will find her still he moves on.On the other hand Anika is walking on a busy road of Delhi.She has stopped crying but eyes are heavily moist.Her face is completely expressionless.While walking only one sentence is playing in her mind in auto mode style-“I hate that word from your mouth,do you understand?”….Anika’s breath gets hitched thinking of that!

Sitting on the car Shivaay is getting restless more and more with each passing second.He takes his phone to call Anika but realizes that she is not carrying any phone with her.In anger he drops the phone.Suddenly weather turns bad and rain drops start falling.People are seen running to and fro for shelter.Anika is unmoved and continues her walking.It’s almost evening and road becomes empty in no time due to rain.Walking further Anika stops.Remaining in that state for few minutes,she collapses on the road on her knees.Rain gets heavy with thunder.Lightnings are flashing every now and then.No one is near Anika except those road side lights.Drenching in the rain she closes her eyes then screams-“Why?”.She burst into tears,very badly.Rain drops get mixed with her tear drops but unable to wash those!

Shivaay is in his car and still searching for Anika.Thousand questions are peeping in his heart one after another.He tries to avoid those making Anika his priority.Going ahead a little more fortunately he spots Anika,sitting on the road.He gets relaxed.There Anika stands up from her sitting position.Shivaay is just few inches away from her.He gets down the car.But before he manages to reach Anika,a car comes like it has no break and hits Anika who is standing in front of him and vanishes in the rain!All these happen very quickly,before the very eyes of Shivaay!Shivaay is unable to believe what he just saw!Anika is lying on the road,and one portion of her side is redden with blood.After realizing what is the reality,Shivaay shouts on top of his voice-“Annnikaaa!!!!”That echoes five times in the surrounding with the sound of continuous thunder.World seems comes to a standstill for Shivaay!

In Trivedi Villa
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Mr.Trivedi is seen sitting in his bed room which is almost dark.Lightnings are flashing inside the room,windows are closing and opening in the force of gusty wind.He is all alone there.Something is in his hand and he is watching it without blinking.Mrs.Trivedi comes and switches on the lights.Going near him she puts her hands on his shoulder.Without turning Mr.Trivedi says-

Mr.Trivedi:Vasundhara,do you remember when you conceived for the first time,what doctor told us?Mrs.Trivedi tries to remember-
Mr.Trivedi:Doctor told us baby was not growing as per its normal growth.If that would go this way then abortion was a must!I refused to accept and believe what doctor said though I knew what was written in the report.We were going to be parents for the first time.How happy we were,our family!After coming home that day I….Mrs.Trivedi starts without letting Mr.Trivedi complete-

Mrs.Trivedi:You cried whole night lying beside me,secretly!
Mr.Trivedi:You knew that?He is surprised!
Mrs.Trivedi:I was sleepless too.Watching you like that I could not control my tears.I did not want to believe the reports but doctor told us very clearly to get ready for anything.You left eating!I prayed to God day and night not to snatch our happiness from us,before the second test.I somehow managed myself but your broken condition kept giving me immense pain.How vulnerable you were at that time!No one will believe it now!Mrs.Trivedi stops and takes it from Mr.Trivedi’s hand which he is holding.She continues-

Mrs.Trivedi:My prayers got answered.Doctors declared our case a complete miracle of God!Then,six months later,I held the piece of my heart,my world,in my hands,in my arms-My Anika!Mrs.Trivedi kisses the photo frame which she has taken from Mr.Trivedi’s hand.In it,Mr.Trivedi is seen holding a little new born baby,who is kissing the forehead.Mrs.Trivedi’s tear falls on the photo.

Mrs.Trivedi:Do you remember what happened during the time of vaccination?It made me laugh even now when I remember.Everyone made fun of you especially Mother-in-law!
Mr.Trivedi:I did not want to hurt my little princess with painful injections.I was so against it!He laughs.
Mrs.Trivedi:Laughing-More than your daughter,you were the one who cried like a grown up baby!Doctor was smiling looking at you and half of the stuffs of hospital were watching and enjoying your situation even me too!Even before doctor could go with the process,you argued with him for two hours!Mr.Trivedi is all smiling hearing his wife’s words.
Mrs.Trivedi:Mother-in-law was above everyone in teasing you.Do you remember what she said after hearing everything?
Mr.Trivedi:Ma laughed her heart out taking my little princess in her hand and said in fun-“My grand-daughter has born to make you cry Harsh.Be careful from now on!”
Mrs.Trivedi:Yes,she teased me too a lot after you.
Mr.Trivedi:Ma was telling the truth Vasundhara!Mrs.Trivedi gets shocked and looks at him-
Mrs.Trivedi:Plz,don’t say like that.I know you two are angry with each other but trust me,everything will be fine.My heart is saying everything will turn out like before.Mr.Trivedi gets up and says-
Mr.Trivedi:How I wish that could happen Vasundhara!But now,it’s not possible.Saying this he leaves the room…….

Precap:What is going to happen next?Any idea????

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26 Comments
  1. Superb episode πŸ€—πŸ€—
    Little tensed for anika but no fikar when sso is here.
    Talks between mr and mrs trivedi was awesome memories of small baby anika.
    Anddd you left us in suspense again ki ab agae kya hone wala hai
    Seriously your track is much more interesting than ib track
    Hope that track comes out from obros hatred. Even i cannot see your analysis in that pg missing everything there.
    Waiting for next update eagerly darling.
    Bye keep smiling and stay blessed

    1. Luthfa

      Hello Medh,good morning.Hope you are doing great😊
      Thank you soooooooo……sooooooo….much for your continuous love and honest feedback.Yes,when I wrote their dialogues,it made me emotional.Mr. and Mrs.Trivedi love their daughter Anika more than anything else.Now differences have come in between them.

      1. Luthfa

        And what was the reason for those differences,will reveal soon.And personally I am very busy,will be busy till 20th October.So it’s becoming difficult to give time in PKJ.Don’t worry,I will be back soon.Once again,thank you yaar.Keep supporting like this.Lots of love😊😊😊

  2. NSK

    Hello apu ! U know what i blame your writing foe making me addicted to this story 😊😭 i mean its soooooooooo freaking gooooooood ! Om my gooood 😍😍😍😍
    I really want Ishqbaaaz to be like this ! It’s like initial days of IB and i am imagining the episodes too 😌 in the initial episodes , the camera quality was something different from current one which used to mesmerise me everyday ! Imagining your episodes in that camera quality 😍😍 and its amazing ……
    I am loving all the charactersπŸ‘Œ and i am really glad that Anima is not helpless, orphan in your show πŸ˜†
    Oh my gawd Mr and Mrs trivedi love Anika to the core.but the one you love most u can’t express your true feelings to that person😞 same is happening with Mr trivedi and Anika 😫
    Oh my mata SSO in your story is just ❀ (u already know my weakness towards SSO’s character, how much i love that 😳 *shying*) how he is in your story😍😍😍 it matches RU SSO of IB , but your one is not seeming to be arrogant (though i like that too) and SSO’s phondethodu attitude here too πŸ˜‚ SSO is calm and sensible and also always trying to hide his emotions despite having them alot …. Very much familiar to RU SSO❀ oh my mata thank you for creating this 😍
    Anika is bold and fearless wow !❀ She’s khidkitod and familiarity listens to Shivaay when she is confused😍confused😍she doesn’t keep mum when she thinks its unwise to do so ❀❀ she is doing PINKY PROMISES 😍 oh my gawddd … Am loving this Version of Anni which resembles RU anima but they aren’t the same since RU anika used to quarrel a lot πŸ˜› but that was what made her more khidkitod !!
    PS. I am not hinting you to make shivika quarrelπŸ˜‚let them be sweet and sensible persons !!
    Omkara and Rudy are same as RU omRu 😍 dadi , shakti, pinky πŸ˜‚ are also same …. Uff ur just making me go crazy πŸ˜’ its what i desire to see next , if ib makes a comeback, i wish this type of story to be shown πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜β€πŸ‘ŒπŸ’
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    Aannndddd why aren’t you giving precapsss ??????
    I am dying for the suspense…. U also know very well where to keep suspense 😏 Anima met an accident and screen shifts to Trivedi villa … 😞 oh oh love that but hate the suspense 😫 break the silence sooooooooooon please and do post precaps if you wish πŸ’
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    I am very glad that it has at least 50 episodesπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ yeesssss !!! πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒβœŒ and keep writing πŸ˜€ these episodes are just πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
    Iam loving the episode to the core and eagerly waiting to read the next…see what your writings did , i read all the epis at a stretchπŸ˜‚ its MAGICAL !!!
    Please don’t think i overrated because i truly loved the episodes 😍😍😍😍😍😍
    .
    Keep yourself weelll and taakkkeeee caarrreeee πŸ’ loads if love and good wishes apuuuuuu 😌😌

    1. NSK

      Omg such a big commentπŸ˜‚ jsksksjsksjsksksk love you apu πŸ’

    2. NSK

      All that “anima” would be annika πŸ˜’ autocorrection sucks 😈
      πŸ˜¬πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ 

      1. Luthfa

        Now it’s my turn to say-
        OMG!!OML!!OML!!OMA!!πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
        Such a long reply?Wow,I have got you all excited through my FF I think,right?I am so very glad that you are liking it😊😊😊

    3. Luthfa

      You have summarised everything so beautifully and understood as well.I am trying to follow the essence of IB which is the main manifestation of IB for which you and me fell still I am different in handling everything be it the dynamics of relationships or any character presentation.

      1. Luthfa

        When Redux started,I was missing RU a lot.Then I was preparing for writing FF and my first FF was ready with KMM,in my style.Then I changed my mind and thought something else.This plot was in my brain for long.Just now it’s getting posted through episodes.Even me too want to see how far I can go with it.One thing I can guarantee and that is,you will be entertained reading my FF.It won’t bore you in the least.

      2. Luthfa

        I have changed Shivika’s characters according to my story as real Shivika won’t suit my story.But they are same as I mentioned in the first episode-With more or less variation,that’s it.And I know you love Shivaay and you will fall for him more reading my storyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

      3. Luthfa

        The bottom line is,I have made them more human,full of human emotions.And it’s true for every character.My story is life like not like HS’s 90% imaginary world where Tadibaaz SSO and Khidkitode Anika live.My version of SSO and Anika are Tadibaaz and Khidkitode but in my own style.You will find all the flavour of IB,original IB as well as you will find my own personal touch and creativity,in everything.

      4. Luthfa

        Sorry my reply got scattered.All I want to say that,I am soooooooo….very happy to have you as my reader.Keep supporting me like that.Will try to post as soon as possible.Till then,take care.Lots and lots of love😊😊😊

  3. JeevithaTK

    Hi dear,
    How is ur work going on. The episode was tension wt’s going to happen. The conversation btw Mr nd Mrs Trivedi much emotional. The episode was super dear. Nd plz don’t say thanks dear. Super happy to support u and all FF writers. Ya dear waiting for next episode wt happened to anika…..
    Take ur time dear will b waiting….. Lots of love. Tc

    1. Luthfa

      Hello Jeevi dear,
      Works are going good but tiring at the same time.Thank you soooooooo….very much for your precious love and continuous support dear.Will try to post soon.Thank you once again.Lots of love😊😊😊

  4. Nikita_jai29

    So emotional fb of a father for her newly born baby.. No idea what happened next

    1. Luthfa

      Yeah dear😒😒😒😒😐😐😐😐

  5. Luthfa

    As you are eager to know the upcoming,I am giving you a hint.Like Shivaay had NKK in the original story,this Shivaay will also have NKK,which will suit his character progression.And he has to overcome those to accept Anika in his life.And most interesting part will be that,original Shivaay’s NKK hurt Anika like anything and was the main hurdle in their love story but here,this new NKK of Shivaay is going to disturb only Shivaay,not Anika!

    1. NSK

      Damn ! Excitement level is now on πŸ’―
      Omg i am hell a excited, please update asap πŸ”œ
      Thank youuuu apu this FF is awwsoommeeeee πŸ”₯

      1. Luthfa

        Thank you soooooooo….veryyyyyy much Noushin.Have submitted the next part.Will be posted soon😊😊😊

    2. NSK

      Glad to know that ! Yeeeesss πŸ˜„

  6. ItsmePrabha

    Hola Darling, kaise ho??well coming to the epi.. anudi’s condition is making me sad..but i know eventually it will be all good..don’t know what’s more in the store..but excited to know it..and Mr & Mrs. Trivedi ka woh joh convo hai..it is beautifully written..agla epi ko jaldi prasthuth karle meri priye(darl) Luthfa..yaar meri hindi se kahi guna behtar hai teri hindi..Will be waiting for the next..till then take care..Love you..

    1. Luthfa

      Tareefo ki phool o keliye sukriya Sweetheart.Have submitted the next part.Love you too😊😊😊

  7. NSK

    Wow so many replies πŸ˜€” happy happy happy happy happy Jo bhi khai kush ho jaye happy happy happy happy happy ”
    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ sorry couldn’t resist myself from being childish πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
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    Haaawwwww why r u being sorry apu ? TU always does ‘garbar/jholmaal’ so comments and replies get scattered.✌don’t bother yourself for that.😌
    .
    Yes yes i am already in love with your characters and waiting to love them more soon πŸ”œπŸ”₯ and yes your characters are sensible enough to win my heart πŸ’―
    Yes ur story is quite different from HS’s IB but still it gives me Initial IB Vibes and that is why i want RU IB to come up like this 😍
    And ur creativity reflects in the words you use πŸ˜†
    .
    All i want to stay that ; your own creative writings+initial IB vibes = πŸ’―πŸ”₯ which is driving me crazy to know what’s coming next 😍😍😍
    I am simply loving what you are writing and not getting bored even 0.0000001% and i am quite sure i won’t get bored in future either because i am really fond of this story as well as your writing now πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
    Thank you so very muchhh , take care apuuu.😊😊😊

    *waits eagerly for next episodes and requests to add precaps too*
    Yuhoooo πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    1. Luthfa

      Thank you to the power of infinity.I am entertaining you the way you like and that’s my biggest achievement.I will look forward to your feedbacks and criticism at the same time.Don’t hesitate while commenting on the episodes.Thank you soooooooo….very much for your love and trust on on.I will try living up to your expectations.Lots of love.God bless you😊😊😊

      1. Luthfa

        *on me😊😊😊

      2. NSK

        Ok apu . πŸ’― best if luck and Allah bless you too πŸ˜‡

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