” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff !!”…..(shot 14 – LAST SHOT) (~ BY – Sayeeda)…

” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj Ff!!”……

Hello everyone!!…..
Wishing Happy birthday to my cute sis Aksa
πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’— ..many many happy returns of the day….May Allah fulfill ur each day with happiness nd joy…..
I still remember the day u msgd me …though I acted wired to u at that time but u made me believe on yourself nd now see I really love u sooo much….Allah gifted me as amazing younger sis in form of urs …
Thanks for being wonderful person nd making me smile by ur cute talks…. U r my naughty nd lovely sis ….InshaAllah we will surely meet someday nd will hug each other…..
Love uπŸ˜πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’ŸπŸ’ž

Guys u all must be shocked to see my ff ….I know I’m very late in posting the last episode…sorry for it….Today also I was not going to Post it but I need to gift something to my Aksa that’s why I’m posting it as a gift from my side to her……

Pic Credit- SidminTwinj ( My Vasu aapi …)….

For now let’s begin with the last shot of this ff …this episode will be long one but plz do bear with it
Let’s begin with the final journey of Caught in love embrace of a wild beast…….
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AFTER 1 MONTH……

Twinkle nd kunj is extremely contented to be colored deeply in each other love nd passion…..
No matter what the world tries to do in order to separate them but at the the end it’s proved that destiny of two persons is decided by God…. The pairs decided in heaven can never face any evil eye as God’s Angel r always their to protect them….How two strangers met eo nd fall for each other nd become two body one soul is beyond our imagination… Their hearts r connected with each other till the last breath while their passion carries on till eternity…
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CHINKI’S HOUSE…..

Twinkle’s POV…..
“It’s been since 5 days that I’m far away from my love… Here I’m busy in marriage preparation of Chinki nd over their kunj is struggling to find a renowned job as he want to make all my dreams come true…. Uurrrrgghhh!!!!!! I’m so desperate to embrace him… My heart is pondering to listen his heart beat against mine.. … Ummm… I should call him… “…

Twinkle calls kunj….
T-” Hello… Kunj… “..

K-” Hello my jaan…… Thanks Babaji that finally u called me… I was anxious to hear ur voice… I thought to call u but the very next moment I thought that u must be busy with preparations….. “….

Twinkle remains quite as she is weeping silently … While kunj goes on blabbering…….

K-” Twinkle r u their…. Hello… Hello “…
Twinkle answers in one word….” Hmm..”..

Now Kunj is able to reckoned the pain of Twinkle she is trying to hide from him..

K- ” Twinkle u r crying….. Speak something.. For God sake tell me what happened…”…

Twinkle is surprised to know that kunj is able to make out her agony…

K-” I’m saying something to u Twinkle… Plz speak up.. Ur silence is killing me…. I know that u r crying… No matter how much you try to hide ur tears from u but u will always fail in ur attempt as when a single drop falls from your eye’s it aches my heart… Though the heart pumping in my body is mine but it beats from ur smile…Either tell me or else I won’t talk with u ever”….

Hearing this Twinkle starts to sob..
T-” Kunj…. Kunj I’m missing u…. I missing u so much… Though we r in one city only but still it’s been too many days I met with u…. Here I’m busy with Chinki’s marriage nd over their u r struggling to get a good job …. Now it’s enough either u come here or else I’m will leave everything here to come to u “..

Kunj smiles nd speaks” Twinkle u really scared me… I thought something serious happened…. U stop crying… I promise I will come over their very soon. “..

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NEXT SCENE…..

C-” Twinkle u here….. Leela aunty is calling u in her room…. Go nd meet her… She wants to talk to u about something crucial….. “..

T-” What is so serious that ma wants to talk to me right now….Ok… I’m going to her room….Chinki u go nd get ready for ur sangeet ceremony… I will catch up with u later on… “…

Chinki leaves from their…….

Twinkle is walking around the corridor when Kunj covers her mouth nd pulls her inside the room….

Twinkle gets frightened…..

K-” Twinkle calm down…. Its me Kunj…. U were missing me nd see I came here to meet my jaan.. “….

He removes his hands from her mouth…

T-” What u said….I was missing u… Were u not missing me… Aren’t u?… Its been only few days that I went away from u nd I realised that u never missed me… Not only this but u were not concerned about my absence in ur life… U don’t love me the way I do u…. U only pretend to love me… Go away I don’t want to see ur face…. U r busy with ur job searching process u better continue with it… I don’t want to act a obstacle in ur way.. “….

K-” Ufffff……U look more killing nd hot when u r angry…. U really think that I don’t love u or ur presence don’t matter to me…. Though my mind is occupied with searching a good job for myself but my heart is always connected with urs…. Not a single second pass when I don’t crave for u…. But u need to understand what I’m doing is for u only…. I want to fill ur life with all the luxuries u enjoyed while u were Twinkle Taneja….though I’m not worthy to be called as ur husband coz I’m not able to comfort u with the things u were habitual of…. I want Mrs Sarna to live like a empress nd for making this happen her Prince have to work hard…..but if u want me to go away right now so I leave u alone as ur wishes r my priority first… “……

Kunj turns nd is about to move but Twinkle holds his hand…

T-” No Kunj…. I don’t need any comfort coz when u r beside me all the riches of world r less in front of ur love….. I know how much u love me…. My eyes can read the love u carry for me in ur heart… “….

Twinkle hugs him very tightly… Nd cries….. Kunj is baffled to see her action…. He is not able to make out why she is behaving so…. The way she is hugging him depicts the fear she is carrying…. As if she gonna lose her love forever….
In order to console her Kunj hugs her back more tightly…..

After some time Kunj is about to break the hug… but Twinkle isn’t ready to do so….

T-” Kunj…. Please let me stay in ur embrace for some more time…. “….
K-” Twinkle… Why r u so scared? “…
T-” Ssshhhh Kunj…. Just two minutes more.. “….

Finally after some time they both the hug….. Kunj cups her face…..
K-” Twinkle something is wrong today…. U r behaving so weird…. That time also u were crying nd now the way u hugged me shows u r tensed regarding some matter ….today again I’m seeing the same fear which I saw when I at the time u were leaving my hand nd going in ICU ….”…

T-” Kunj I don’t know why but since morning I’m feeling that u will leave me alone ….u will walk out from my life…. Again the fear of losing u is striking my mind… My instinct is signing me that something worst is going to happen…… “…

K-” Why r u thinking so …nothing will happen… Just brush away these negative thoughts…I won’t leave ur hand so easily…. “…

Kunj kisses her forehead…..nd hugs her …Twinkle speaks while hugging him..
” Kunj I need to tell u something “….

Before she could speaks …their is a knock at the door….

Kunj opens the door nd finds Leela standing at the entrance…
L-” Ohhh…Kunj u r also here …..its good that u r also here… I came here to discuss about an issue with Twinkle nd being the matter is related with u both so its better that u also stay here ….”..

T-” Yes maa tell what u want to say… “.

L-” See Twinkle nd Kunj what I will say right now is my wish …though u both will find my thoughts inappropriate but still I have to do this for my daughter’s future…
I’m well aware that u both love eo very deeply but at the end u can’t change the truth that Twinkle never wanted to get marriage with u ….u compelled her or to say u forced her …U were also under pressure to do all misdeeds with her coz of Yuvi nd I feel bad for u but just for the sake of ur feelings I can’t overlook my Twinkie’s life….”…

T-” Maa what r u trying to say….why again u r talking about the past… Its already gone nd I don’t care about it …so plzz stop repeating it…”

L-” Twinkle u be quiet…. U r not mature enough to understand what is good nd what is bad for u ….U deserve someone better than Kunj…U always lived like a princess nd u r not comfortable living a life of middle class ppl …..Though Kunj loves u but love alone can’t fulfill ur desire of luxurious life…. I want u both to end ur relation …after that I will make Twinkle married with someone who is rich…. Who can give her comforts in her life…. Here r the divorce papers… U both think nd tell me about ur decision “…

Twinj are shocked……tears form in their eyes….both stare at eo blankly….

T-” Noo ….maa what u want will never happen…. Never ever….”….

L-” I told u na that it’s for ur secured future… Being ur parents its our responsibility to think good for u …”..

K-” Yes aunty u r right…. It’s true that I love her nd no one else can love her intensively like I do to her but only love isn’t enough for staying happy…. Don’t worry what u will want I will make it happen….I will sign these papers nd will make sure that Twinkle also sign it…. “…tears rolled down from his Cheek’s

Kunj takes the divorce papers nd moves out from room …While Twinkle stood as a lifeless body…

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NEXT SCENE…

Kunj reaches the hall while all guest along with Chinki r present in the hall ….everyone is shocked seeing Twinkle climbing down the stairs nd pleading to Kunj nd Leela stopping her nd Kunj ignoring her plead…

Kunj is about to step out of the house but Twinkle Shout’s…..

T-” Kunj if u ever loved it u won’t take a step further…. I know u love me more than anyone else but before taking such step without giving a thought to it will destroy our lives…I trust ur love for God sake don’t break it…..”….

Kunj stops…. His back is facing to Twinkle…
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(GUYS U CAN SKIP SONG LYRICS BUT DON’T SKIP TWINKLE’S DIALOGUES IN BETWEEN)…

T-” Maa …..I think u forgot that Kunj is the one coz of whom I forgave u nd papa ….That day he requested me to forgive u both….U said that being my parents u r concerned about my future ; tell me where were u both when I needed u the most…. U didn’t supported me …when today everything is fine nd we both r happy in our life u came to destroy it….I can leave u both but will never leave my Kunj’s hand…. I don’t give a damm to any luxuries…. “.

She clears her tears nd starts to sing a song…

Tu aata hai seene mein
jab jab saansein bharti hoon
tere dil ki galiyon se
main har roz guzarti hoon

(you come into the heart,
whenever I inhale,
from the streets of your heart,
I pass everyday.)

hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
main ret jaisi uDti hoon
kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
jaise main karti hoon

(you move like the wind,
I fly like sand.
Who would love you
like I do..)
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Twinkle speaks…..” kunj don’t leave me ….u know what u mean to me …everytime it’s not necessary that we need to prove our love to others ….last time u saved me nd won me back from death but this time u will fail… This time I will surely die leaving u behind…”..

Kunj smiles hearing her words…… He turns around nd faces her…
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Meri nazar ka safar
tujhpe hi aake ruke
kehne ko baaqi hai kya
kehna tha jo keh chuke

(The journey of my sight
stops at you only.
Is there anything more to say,
Everything that had to be said is said.)

Meri nigahein hain teri nigahon ki
tujhe khabar kya be-khabar

(My eyes belong to your eyes,
what do you know, O unaware one.)do

Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar
teri aankhen paDhti hoon
kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
jaise main karti hoon
(I hide from you only,
and read your eyes,
who’d love you so much
as I do..)
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Twinkle speaks…. ” Neither Maa nd anyone can separate me from my Kunj coz now his life is not only his only…. My life is not also mine only now…… We both owe right on eo….. We both r complete now….. Our relation is more strengthen……God has given us a reason to call our relation as a pious one….nd to stay together till the end.”….

Kunj nd other r not able to perceive Twinkle’s words…Twinkle moves towards Kunj…
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Tu jo mujhe aa mila
sapne hue sirphire
haathon mein aate nahi
udte hain lamhe mere

(when you came and met me,
my dreams went crazy.
I’m not able to hold them in my hands,
my moments now fly..)

Meri hansi tujhse
meri khushi tujhse
tujhe khabar kya beqadar

(My smiles are from you,
my happiness is from you,
but you don’t have an idea, careless one.)

Jis din tujhko na dekhun
pagal pagal phirti hoon
kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
jaise main karti hoon

(The day I don’t see you,
I go around like crazy people.
who’d ever love you,
like I do)

Twinkle takes Kunj hand nd places it on her stomach……..she smiles nd blushes…

T-” U nd I r forever bound with the new guest coming in our life very soon….
Kunj….our ….”….she is about to speak when Kunj cuts her talk nd speaks..

K-” Our child Twinkle….. Our child….. Yes na u want to say this only…. “….he asked her suspiciously….

His heart is pondering fast …he is expecting a yes from Twinkle…
T-” Yes Kunj….our child…. Our blood ….ur love symbol is flourishing inside my womb”….

Kunj is shocked cum happy…. He did moves back ….while tears r gushing continually from his eyes…..

Twinkle is confused seeing him ….she asked him ” R u not happy with this news? “….

Kunj smiles brightly nd gives her a bone crushing hug……Twinkle too responded back….

He breaks the hug …nd moves to everyone present over their….saying to them that he is going to become a father soon……

Twinkle happiness knew no boundaries seeing Kunj being so ecstatic….

Kunj comes to Twinkle nd kneeled down …he kisses her tummy …..nd hugs her from her stomach part….

He cries nd speaks….” My baby u r listening me …it’s me ur Father… I know now u r very small to understand all this but the day u will come in my world I will hold your small fingers to make u aware about this world…. Thanks to ur maama for presenting me a best gift in form of urs…I promise Twinkle no matter what happen I won’t leave ur hand ….u needs me …our fragment of life ; our child needs me … ….” ……

Twinkle caresses his hairs nd makes him stand …she is feeling shy that kunj is not able to control his love…..while the ppl around r going to nuts to see the craziness of love that Twinj carry for eo..All r clapping to wish them good luck for the new start of their life… This made Leela to feel guilty on her decision….

Leela looks towards Twinj nd passes a smile to show her final approval on their relation…. Twinj smiles nd holds her eo hand’s nd entwined their fingers….

Chinki comes nd hugs Twinkle …she congratulate Twinj …

C-” Twinkle nd Kunj u both go nd enjoy this moments…. No one will disturb u …don’t worry about the function ….u both enjoy… “….

Twinj smiles…….nd leave the venue… They Left for their House….

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Twinj reaches their house nd gets out of the car….kunj lifts Twinkle nd carry her to their room in his arms ……Twinkle gazed is locked at his face…..

Kunj makes Twinkle lie on bed ….he is about to turn but Twinkle stops him….

T-” Kunj u were ready to leave me coz of maa’s wish but u changed ur decision as soon u came to know that I’m pregnant… Does this child only matters to u ….what about me …no matter what happened I always stood by your side but u r always on a verge of leaving my hand….Do U really loves me? …In past also u came with those papers to end our relation but I insisted u nd we became one that day ….nd today also u were going to do same thing… “…..

Kunj kneels down nd holds his ears…..
K-” I’m sorry Twinkle….. If u want to smack me right now ; go ahead with it ….I won’t stop u coz what I did is unforgiving ….but I promise that now I won’t make u sad ….u r right that our child means a lot to me as he / she is your part …our part ….d the one who belongs to u is special for me……I don’t know how to express my happiness to u ….

It is really amazing! I’m literally amazed with this gift… A tiny bundle of loose skin, bony knees and peach fuzz will soon be in my embrace as my child… I will become a father at last! I will be going to do everything in my power to not take this gift for granted.
It’s terrifying! I’m not scared of the baby ; but never in my life had I had so much to lose before. I’m the wealthiest man in the world and all my fortune fit in the palm of my hand.
It’s exhilarating! Everything is new again. Every day will be a new adventure. Every coo, every yawn, every imaginable bodily function …”….tears r not stopping from Kunj’s eyes nd Twinkle’s eye’s…..

T-” Well Kunj u should really thanks me for this ….coz that day u were not ready to come close to me ….it was me who compelled u to take our relation ahead…. Before marriage u behaved so romantically with me but after that u became so dull in romance section….”…..

K-” Twinkle u think that I’m no more a romantic person now …if yes then u r wrong my s*xy chick ….U r waking up the wild Sarna in me …don’t do it or Else u have to face a beast again…. “….he smirks cutely….

T-” Why not Mr Sarna ; I want to see ur beast side again ….but this time the beast in u will make me contend…. I want to know how much wild u can go for me ….”….

Kunj moves towards Twinkle nd makes her stand near the wardrobe nd bolts the door ….

He comes near Twinkle….

Her back is leaning against wardrobe ….Kunj leans into her. His places his one hand around her waist, the other behind her head. Then, slowly he pressed his lips against hers…she also gives in ….
Kunj then bit her upper lip…she is moaning his name….her lips start to bleed with the intensity of torture… ….in order to lessen the pain he again kissed her on her lips

Initially it was a gentle kiss, but captivating…..Mesmerized lips press together time after time, transporting them to another world. Ragged breathing and dancing tongues bring a fiery heat to the cold ocean air of their body …. They r lost in the sea of lust and love. It is a spicy, powerful combination that sends waves of passion crashing over them . The rest of the world is engulfed in their lustful burning flames as their kisses grow more urgent; rushes.

Their tongues r stroking cum restling …..Kunj’s hands are clutching her waist while Twinkle’s hand are busy pulling him more by fisting his hairs..
Both are running out of breath but kunj is ready not leave Twinkle….

She forced him nd separated herself apart from him …..both r breathing heavily…..

Twinkle’s POV ….
” What I did ….my goodness I waked up wild Sarna …..he is out of control now…. Though we were running out of breath but still he was not ready to leave me…I shouldn’t have challenged him ….what will happen now ….”…

Kunj growled…. “Do I really need to remind u that u belong to Kunj Sarna – A beast for Twinkle Sarna ….”….saying this he again smashed his lips against hers ….

She is also accepted the kiss warily…. She tries to kiss back but his mouth dominates hers in a passionate fury…….
He broke the kiss…he the proceeds to leave his mark on her neck…

Twinkle is about to stop him but he cutt her off sinking his teeth in her neck leaving a red mark….
He whispered in her ears….” Stop denying me as u r completely mine now…. Now u even me can’t control my desires…. So u better give up trying.. Now I will show to what kind of beast u belong to “….

He pressed his body against her ; capturing her in another kiss….her body hummed in a pleasure at closeness of his ….all the pieces of clothing started to fall down from their body….
He picked her up nd laid her on bed ….both r smiling… Kunj looked towards her while Twinkle nodded in assurance ….
He bent down nd fisted her hair’s …he started tracing her neck through his nose…. His torture’s are giving tough time to Twinkle but she surrender herself to him …for her he is the person on whom she trust more then herself…. Nd giving herself to him is matter of proud …

He then kissed on her shoulder nd bit that area….. Twinkle moaned in pain……before he could do anything they flipped over their positions nd Twinkle came over him …he is taken a back for once….

It’s now Twinkle’s turn to torture him….. She started kissing nd biting him …kunj is groaning …now it is enough for Kunj…. He again flipped their position nd started kissing her on her belly to navel….he then traced her legs…..

Finally they both again consummated their relation…..

They both hug each other….nd sleep in eo embrace….

K-” Thanks for everything Twinkle….I love u nd my child also …. “…

T-” I love u too my extra wild beast …Kunj….u never know when u r falling for a beast …though I can say to my forechilds that I was caught in the love embrace of a wild beast “….

K-” Twinkle jaan first let our child come in this world then we will plan for next child… Then again for next one….then one more….then… “….

Twinkle cuts him nd speaks ” Enough Kunj how much children’s u want…. “…she shys ..

Kunj loves her shyness nd makes her sleep comfortably in his love embrace…..

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THE END…….

Finally here the last episode ends….. Ohh…it was really a long one………if any mistake is their I’m sorry for it as I haven’t rechecked it…

Thanks to each nd everyone who commented nd supported me nd my ff …..love u all …..Though I want to thank everyone individually but I’m running short of time….
Please I request all my readers nd Even my silent readers (if any) to comment on the last episode…..I promise I will reply back to each nd every comment…..

LOVE U ALL…..KEEP SUPPORTING…..

121 comments

  1. rojalin pradhan

    hiii sayeeda.. i was a silent reader but today i cant stop myself.. u r a brilliant writer.. how do u write so amazing episodes.. m in luv wid your writting and todays episode was mindblowing but m sad its last epi.. and when will you post next epi of “i cant stop loving you-twinj” m so eagerly waiting for that plz post it plzzzzzzzzzz

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Oh….wooooowwwwwww………my silent reader spoked up today…..😘😘😘😘….
      Yrrrr how much I thank u is less…. ur comment made me believe that I do have silent readers….. ur each nd every word is so special for me ……

      Thank you so much Rojalin for giving ur precious time to this ff ….
      Will surely try to post my first ff ….

      keep smiling alwaysπŸ˜„πŸ˜šπŸ˜πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  2. Dipte

    Hi,i miss u api…. I know i am ur silent reader AND U DON’T KNOW ME….But i am ur very big fan and i luv ur ff very much…and ya come back soon as posible with ur new and old ff….good bye api and take care….

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey ! Dipte yrrrr thank you sooooooo much for ur sweet words….. u again made me so happy to make me realise that I do have a silent readers who love my ff…..πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ’……

      Yah dear will surely Post my first ff soon ….nd will try to come back with some new ff….

      Keep smiling….πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜

  3. Simiyy

    Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    OMG Sayeeda Api I loved it!!! Sorry for commenting late but …. When I saw your ff was finally on the page I literally rushed to read . I enjoyed reading all 15episodes. I am really gonna miss it and you.😰😰😰 . I hope you come back quickly with your first ff inshallah .
    Take care and remember your little sis in your duas 😘😘😘
    Love you πŸ˜˜πŸ’•

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Simiyy yrrr don’t say sorry it’s OK ….u read it that only means a lot to me….

      I’m so happy that u liked it…..πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡…..
      U r right yrr this episode is my 15th one I don’t know why TU quoted it as 14th one….

      Don’t worry my sis u r always in my dua…..seeking to meet u some day……
      Love you toooooooo…….love you sooooo muchπŸ’πŸ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’•πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜š

  4. Krystal_Krysiee

    Krystal_Krysiee

    |Registered Member

    Loved it sayuu
    Achha where were uh these days??
    I loved all the episodes of This ff
    Really
    Love uh dear
    And finally This one for uh
    πŸ‘‡πŸ’žπŸ‘†
    Understood??
    No??
    Haww…..
    I said I love uh
    Hehehe nyc na
    Now I want uh to reply me πŸ’žπŸ‘†βœŒ
    Hehehe
    Byee dear
    And do continue ur ff
    ASAP
    Love uh
    Stay blessed

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Krystal yrrrrr main tujhe bata nai skti tera comment dekh kar Mujhe kitni zayada khushi hui hai …..
      Sacchi yrrrr u made my day …..

      Kahn thi main itne dino se ….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….kya bataun yrrr bahut chaha tumlogon se dor chali jaon par nai ho paya…..I can’t leave u all so easily coz I love u all so much… nd u all love me so muchπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

      Sorry for replying u so late…..
      I’m so happy that u liked each nd every episode of this ff ….
      Will surely try to post the previous ff …..

      Love you too ….nd yah plzz take care of your family nd u too ….U r a brave girl so stay strong…. we all r their to support you…..πŸ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’—πŸ˜—πŸ’ž

  5. Maggi

    Maggi

    |Registered Member

    It wassss awsmmm…..luvd it core ❀❀❀
    The way u explained abt luv was phenomenal….. Fantastic writingπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Maggi for ur compliment…..
      Getting so good comment from an amazing writer like u means a lot to me……

      Love youπŸ’πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ’ž

  6. Kiya

    Nice episode I loveit ❀️❀️❀️& please also post the 26 episode of I can’t stop loving you please it’s my humble request sayeeda plz plz😍😍😍😍

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey ! Kiya ….yrrr I’m sooooo sorry for making u wait for so long for my first ff …I wanted to post it but I’m helpless coz of my schedule nd exams…. but once I get free I will post it….
      U will surely get to read it very soon….
      I know u always wait for that ff ….

      Thanks for liking the episode….

      Love youπŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ’—πŸ’•πŸ˜™

  7. Jiya_Ani

    Jiya_Ani

    |Registered Member

    Diiiiiiiii…aap na main bohot gande ho…kya yaar apko bhi na mere Mathematics ke exam ke pehle hi post Karna tha…main time par padh bhi nahi paayi aur itna late comment kar rahi hoon….

    Such a amazingly emotional epi…aah!!! I loved it..

    Di I’ll really miss your ff…hope aap 1st ff jaldi cont Karo…

    Your ff made me blissful di…

    I salute to your writing…

    ❀❀❀
    😘

  8. Sujina

    Sujina

    |Registered Member

    sayu….
    really missed…i tried 2 msg u bt cudn’t
    finally u posted last epi bt u know i loved dis 2 d core
    πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜š
    plz post ur….i can’t stop loving u twinj…
    n write another ff also plz….
    if u have tym….n i can w8 2 read ur writing coz u r d best….
    n i don’t have any words 2 express that how beautiful u write….
    love u 2 d infinity n beyond…β€β€β€β€πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      OMG …..Sujina u were waiting for my ff’s so eagerly….. u made me soooooooo happy that u like my writings…..
      Ur comment always make me extra delighted …..πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ’—….

      Thank you sooooo much yr for always being their to support me……

      Will surely try to post my first ff soon… nd will surely look forward for writing a new ff….

      Love you too….love u to moon nd backπŸ’•πŸ˜™πŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜πŸ’

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Shikha …..
      I’m so happy that u liked it…..
      Thanks for always supporting me….

      Love you yrrπŸ’•πŸ˜™πŸ’Ÿ

  9. Ranabulbul

    Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Diiiii pehle to kan pakad ke sorry ki kitne sadiyon bad cmnt kr rhi…hun …so sorry …
    Aj ka epi oh my god it was just. .fab yr di I cant stop loving you…hehhe
    But I love u so so much ………muahhhh muahhh muahhhh …..
    Love u loads
    And happy bday to ajsa may god bless her and I don’t have her contact so can’t contact or message Her meri taraph se kr dena bday wish…
    Abna u have to come up with a new ff or ss
    Mujhe ni pata aana hi hoga aapko
    Public demand hai hai or meri bhi plz plz
    Or na …..

    I lovvvvvvvvveeeeeeee yoooouuuuu kabhi aapko na hug zaroor karna chahungi AGR bhagwan or chaha to
    Love u loads

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Awwwwwww my Bulbul rani ….wrote soooo cute comment for me…..
      Ur comment always make my day ….my night… my everything….πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–…..

      Why r u saying sorry dear…. don’t be sorry yrr it’s OK ….aapne comment kara that’s is enough for me
      Thanks for it…..

      Yes dear I wished Aksa from ur side …..

      U want me to come up with the new ss…ye meri Bulbul ki demand hai ….demand ko fulfill krna thoda mushkil hai mere liya but impossible nai…. will surely look forward to it……

      Aaja yrrrr plzz ek baar mile …..even I’m so desperate to hug u ….getting a sis like u means a lot to me….. will surely meet one day… InshaAllah….

      Love u tooooo….. love to beyond ur imaginationπŸ˜‡πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ˜™πŸ’ŸπŸ˜„πŸ’“πŸ˜—

  10. |Registered Member

    Sayu Aapi…
    I missed u soooo much❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀
    U posted after sucha long tym…
    And this was so beautiful❀❀❀❀
    My fav song…the best travk…
    Everything so perfect!!!
    Reading it t’day..,so a gr8 b’day gift tooo!!!!
    Love u soooo much❀❀❀

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey ! Laddoo…….
      I also missed u all so much….. I’m really missing my group but I will be back soon ….πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡…
      Tujhe pasand aya episode….. woooowwwwww I’m so happy that meri Ishu ko accha laga …..thanks yrrr……..

      Love you tooπŸ’–πŸ˜™πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’Ÿ

  11. Shreya098

    Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    Sayoo…
    First of all soo sorry for this super late comment

    Finally itne dino baad aapke darshan hue….
    Missed u sooooo much…😘😘..

    And about the epi…. All I can say is such a beautiful end to a beautiful story…. It was superb😍😍😘😘..
    Loooved it❀❀❀❀❀…
    And love u…😘❀…

    And ya I am waiting for ur other ff….

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Shreya yrrr don’t be sorry for the late comment…. its OK …

      U commented which means a lot to me….
      Thank you sooooooo much yrr for always supporting me since beginning…..πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

      U missed me….awwwww…soo sweet of u …I also missed u all very badly…πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™…..

      I’m so happy that u liked the episode…..will try to post my first ff soon….

      Love you toooooπŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’Ÿ

  12. Ramya

    Hi sayeeda
    Amazing super lovely episode
    Kamal ki hai
    Urs ff was awesome
    Loved it sweetheart
    It’s simply superb heart touching
    Bt y u ended it so early
    I’ll miss it n plssssssssssss come wid another wonderful ff

    Yr srsly loved it n love u
    N tqq fr such a amazing n fabulous episode
    Muahhh
    Going to miss dis badly

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey! Ramya ….
      Thank you so much yrrr for ur so lovely words ….each nd every word matterz a lot to me…..

      Sorry yrrr but this ff was only for few episodes nd has to be ended soon ….but I promise that I will surely try to come up with new ff but before that I needed to end my first ff running on……..

      Thanks for everything…..

      Love youπŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’“πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‡

  13. Sayeeda

    Sayeeda

    |Author

    Ohhhhhhoooooo so many cute hearts for me from my Zuhoooo …..ab Zuho nain diya hai toh Lena hi padega…. these r the best gift I got till date….

    Zuhooo u know I still remember ur comment on my first episode of this ff …u told me that currently u started to read TEI Ff’s nd u read mine nd found it pretty interesting …..that comment is the most special one for meπŸ’–πŸ’–….coz that day I got my sis ….my Zuha ….jisko Maine zabardasti Zuhooo bana diyaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚………

    Ur comment… MashaAllah itna pyara hai ke lafz nai hai mere pass apko shukriya kehne ka …..but still yrr thank you sooo much for always supporting me since episode 1…….

    Novel writer nd I ….no yrrr I can’t be a good writer to be called as novelists…..its u ppl who loves me so much…. nd I’m super satisfied with it ……

    Love you toooo…..πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜—πŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’πŸ’—

  14. sarmistha saha

    2 good really like it very very very very muchβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

  15. sarmistha saha

    Amazing, marbalus n many moreπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜™β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Hey ! Sarmishta ……thank you sooooo much yrrrr for ur appreciation…. it means a lot to meπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜…..
      So many cute hearts nd smiles for me …thanks for them ……
      It’s really my pleasure to have a reader’s like u ….

      Keep SmilingπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  16. Tara

    Tara

    |Registered Member

    ok.. i knw i m hell late… bt i didnt cmmnt from last 2 days… i read it yesterday..bt i had my exam so didnt cmmnt…
    sayeeda.. dear.. u stole my heart away…
    this was a lovely ff..and a beautiful journey… i enjoyed every bit of it…
    well we didnt interact much.. but i knw u since my ff the apartment…where ur cmnts made me fly high in air…
    and in return i cud give u nothing… bt i would like to thank u.. from the bottom of my heart for this lovely ff..
    take care..
    load of love
    tara

    • Sayeeda

      Sayeeda

      |Author

      Yrrrr Tara …thank you so much…. though u were busy with ur exams despite of that u spared time to comment…. it really means a lot to me…..
      Getting so lovely words from a amazing writer like u is a matter of proud for me …πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜šπŸ˜š….

      Yah u r right we don’t interact much.. that day also u msgd me nd I read it after sometime…. sorry yrr for not reverting back to it…..Actually from last few days I’m struggling between my office work nd my studies but once I get free from it I will surely contact with u ….as I wanted to know u more …..

      U don’t need to give me anything in return…. just keep posting ur amazing ff’s that’s enough for me….

      Thanks for everything Tara….our TU shining star….πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ….

      Love you too yrr…πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’Ÿ

  17. Sayeeda

    Sayeeda

    |Author

    Areeee baap reeeee …meri Shreyoooo ka paper tha nd I disturbed her …..
    Koi nai sis hoon tumhari disturb krne ka toh right banta hai mera …
    Kyu sahi kaha na?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰….

    How was ur maths paper?…

    Thank you soooooo much for liking the episode….. u really made me felt so happy yrrr…..

    Will surely post my first ff soon….

    Love u toooooπŸ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’—πŸ˜—πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ’žπŸ˜šπŸ˜‡πŸ’πŸ’–

  18. rojalin pradhan

    ofcourse i have to give time to it becoz its your OS which i luved the most.. bdw sayeeda can i ask u something??
    are u on twitter?? or insta??

  19. Baby

    Baby

    |Registered Member

    Sayeeda di I m nt able 2 say anything 2 u no I m late bt I culd nt do anything was busy n den wen I was free mera ghatiya sa computer kharab ho gya
    N i m soooo happy 2 c dis ff ur episoee di cming 2 it
    I mean wow
    Amazing
    Fabulous
    Marvellous
    Romantic
    Cute
    Lovely
    Care
    Baby
    Emotional
    Beautiful
    Chocolaty
    Luvd it sooooo very mch
    I m speechless
    I have sum lines for u
    The best thing of having u is di
    Dat I always have a friend

    A sister can be seen
    As someone who is
    Both ourselves and
    And very mch not
    Ourselves a special
    Kind of double

    Di net se hain dhunde yeh poem bt sche dil se tha jo bhu tha

    Luv u di n miss u very mch
    All d best for ur future hope 2 c u soon….

  20. Affaa

    Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Hai sayeeda do you know me… Affaa ff writer 7 chumzzzzzzz…. I’m big fun of u… Ur personality, ur heart, ur character, ur kindness, mostly ur ff ur writing style.. The way u explain each and everything… The way you talk to everyone…. I request friends… I hope you’ll accept my friendship request….

    Sayoo don’t think that I losted my memorie…. OK epi nice OK πŸ˜‰…. I’m joking episode was really very boring… I slept while reading ur ff… Hahaha… I know u will not believe bcoz u know ur best…
    Hats off to ur like dramebazzz say scarf off to u…. Sayooo I should study something from you… If I tried means also I can’t be like u… U always frist thinks about others example Hitler… And ur bad habit u never take of ur self… Do u know if I’m suffering from I’ll take leave for one week… But u opposite… Keep what ur amazing…. Epi mind blowing… I read epi 2 times… I loved it…. OK OK I want to other ffs

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