“Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff!” CHAPTER 8

” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff”…..

Before going ahead with the episode… I want to request u all one thing..

Guy’s I know now a days it’s a trend to comment on ff for not supporting the ff writers but to bash them….
Many of ff writers r constantly facing the bills hit from many egg headed nd dumb ppl….

They say that we don’t know how to write a story… We come here to eat their heads…. What a joke yrr πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Only these Basher’s have mind nd a very brainy.. Then what about the hundred of supporters who r praising nd supporting us…
Problem is not in our writing… Problem is in ur mindset.. When u ppl don’t have respect of anyone’s feelings ; then who the hell to told u to waste ur time on reading our ff’s…

Specially u BHAVIKA…. I had never in my life meet such a person who is so emotionless that for you no one’s feelings matter…
I don’t know dear what problem u have with me nd my religion… But let me tell u I’m educated one… My manners taught me to respect everyone even a heart less person like u…
I still regard u as my frnd as u made me aware that In today’s world their r many persons like u… That day also I told u that if u respect ur religion so from next time u won’t be commenting nd bad mouthing about my religion.. But still u did so… U proved that u don’t respect ur own religion.. Then how can I think that u will respect mine…

Whatever bad language’s u used for me.. Though I can use the same for u but If I do so then what will the difference between u nd me…. I will not say anything to u but I will keep patience nd my patience will be awarded in front of God…..whether it’s my Allah or ur God… Nd no one can challenge the justice done by God… Nd I don’t need to prove u how much beautiful is my religion as it is million times far better from ur thinking..
Thanks for making me believe all this…I know u will surely comment again…

Nd forever fan of Twinj…. U called me Di nd the very next moment u said so bad… U made fun of the relations…. I agree I’m the worst writer but still many ppl r their to love me….my strength is my Allah nd till the time he is with me no one can harm me.. Thanks to u too….

Now finally my readers… U guys know yesterday I made my mood not to continue with my ff further…. But then I realised that coz of some ppl who don’t have any other work in life rather to bash other’s ; I can’t break hearts nd hope of my readers who loves me nd always support me …..

But guys I just want to request u all from today we all get united nd don’t pay any heed to such comments…. Coz these ppl only want attention… If they really feel that we write bad then why the hell they don’t start writing nd prove themselves…
If from next time if we find their comment on any ff then let’s just not reply back… Plz guys do support me…….

Thanks to TU for helping me out….


Twinkle is in her room nd thinking about the yesterday’s incident nd Kunj’s behaviour…


” Since yesterday I’m feeling as if I did blunder by not trusting kunj… Why my heart is carrying the guilt that whatever I did with him at the time of Chinki’s case was wrong… Again nd again my instinct is telling me that he is innocent… That day when he was begging me to believe him was right.. Now I’m thinking he was right… The way he hugged me yesterday made me realise his pain …. Why I feel an unknown bond with him… Till now whatever he did with me didn’t happened with his permission but he did all that under some pressure… Why I’m not able to hate him today….my heart is screaming at the top of its voice to trust him….
What should I do…. Hope one or the other day I get my all questions… My confusions answered.. “……


Twinj is present at the altar for exchanging vows….
Twinkle is constantly gazing kunj but he is not making any sort of eye contact with her….

Twinkle thinks..” Till yesterday I was not ready to be called as ur wife but now I promise u that I will fulfill my duties being ur wife… I promise to kill the beast inside u…. “…. She smiles…
Seeing her smiling kunj is baffled…he thinks” What the hell is wrong with her…. Her face is having a bright smile on it…. How can she be happy knowing that she is getting married to a beast like me ; a person who always tortured her…. May be she is in shock nd don’t know how to react or she is trying to befool me.. Or she is planning some thing big to take revenge from me… ”

Finally priest declare them as husband nd wife…
Twinkle’s biddai takes place… But Leela nd Rt didn’t blessed her nd kunj… She was very hurt seeing the rude side of her parents..

Leela -” Now finally we got freedom from a inauspicious daughter like u… From now we r dead for u nd u r dead for us… Throughout ur whole life u will crave for true love Twinkle nd till ur last breathe u won’t be able to get it.. “..

Twinkle started to sob harder but kunj holds her hand nd entwined their fingers…

K-” U don’t worry aunty…. From today she is my responsibility…. She will surely get true love in the form of her husband’s love… My love for her will heal her sadness… She will never miss u both as I will always be beside her side to support her… To care for her… ”

Twinkle is touched by his sympathetic word’s..
Kunj makes her sit in the car nd they both leave for Kunj’s house…. While the whole way long kunj didn’t utter a word to Twinkle…

( Guy’s Kunj’s parents died in plane crash nd he only have his sister Mahi in his life… She don’t stays with him as she is working at Mumbai..)

Twinj enters the room…

K-” Twinkle u freshen up nd after that sleep peacefully in this room… Good night.. ”

He starts to move out of the room when Twinkle calls him…

T-” Kunj…. Where r u going?”…

K-” Twinkle I’m going to sleep in other room.. If u want anything then call me… “..

Twinkle thinks….” Today I will get a clue that r u really a beast or u r just pretending to be it “…

She moves closer to him nd ask him…” Today is our first night.. R we not going to celebrate it.. “..

He looks at her with a questioning look…

T-” Why r u so surprised…. Till now u were always tried to come close to me… In fact u called me as ur s*xy chick..
When I was not having any relation with u ; u kissed me… U touched me but now I’m ur wife.. U a full right on me so why r u hesitating to come close to me… “…

Kunj moves back nd speaks…” See I’m tired right now.. Nd I’m not in a mood to reply u…U better sleep… We will celebrate night afterwards…. “…

He is about to turn when Twinkle holds his hand… She throws her chunni away… Now she is only in her blouse nd skirt… Her belly is visible…

Kunj is shocked to see her doing so…while Twinkle cries nd shouts…
” Come kunj… Come… Get yourself satisfied today… Till now u were dying to seduce me to fulfill ur revenge… So come I allow u to touch me… Today u take our all ur anger nd frustration u have with me…. Why r u standing their… Come na… Do whatever u feel like.. Today I want to see how much cruelty u have inside u… How much a bigger Beast u r… “….

Kunj moves to her… He picks her chunni nd covers her body with it…. Nd clears her tears from her face… He speaks..
” I’m sorry for all the tortures I did with u… I know it’s hard for u to forgive me nd to forget all the deeds of mine … But I promise that from today I will never come close to u…. I will never force myself upon u… U will live a very calm life with me… I will try to keep u happy….
I know it will be hard for u to believe my words…. But very soon u will see a new kunj in front of u…. “…. He is having tears nd guilt in his eyes

He leaves from the room… While Twinkle smiles…

T-” I knew it kunj… I knew it that u won’t touch me.. I can see the pain in ur eyes… I don’t know what all made u to do this but now I’m confirm that u r a good person… “..


” It’s been three months I’m living with u kunj… U never tried to come close to me… The way u cared for me till now shows how much u love me… how much I mean to u… Ur care nd affection for me made me to realise that I love u…. Though earlier I was in love with Yuvi but the way u treat u… The way u adore me made me to love u…
I can’t believe that a person whom I hate the most will become so important to me…. Though every one thinks that u harassed me but I know u can never do so… Nd how much hard u try to prove u as a culprit but I will make u confess that u r innocent…. Very soon u will say those 3 magical words to me..

One last thing I want to say to all Ff writer’s nd my readers ;that I will not be active on TU page for some days.. As now a days I’m very disturbed so I need some time to recover back from it…
So plz pardon me if I don’t comment on the ff’s… I can’t stay far away from u all for long time… I promise I will be back soon but after some days only…nd till then I won’t be posting any of my ff also…

Nd sorry to all writer’s on whose ff I didn’t commented today

Bye guys…


  1. Chiku

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    Nd mujhe ek baat kehni hai jo bhi aap logon jaise ache ff writers ko bash karta hai woh pagal hai….. They r just insecure nd u know wat u r an amazing writer and a soul tooooo…. Never feel bad bcz of those bashers bcz we r der eid u Alwaysssss specially me to irritate u then say srry 😜….. I know I disturb u a lot abhi bhi kiya thain… Sooooo srry πŸ˜šπŸ€—

  2. sparkle

    sayeeda di don’t feel just bcoz of other..
    ur ff is best and your’e very well..
    and plz never stop writing as long as ALLAH is your strength..
    i love your ff sooo much…
    and today’s epi was amazing :* :*..
    try to post soon..luv ya :*

  3. Savi singh

    U r awesome writer… I know u r disturb… Bt plz just calm down u know der r many people who can’t see anyone happy… Thats y dey r Barmouthing about u nd Allah… Dey r silly people or I can say narrow minded idiots

  4. Angita

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    Diii I’m speechless
    Was tooooooooooooooooo goood di !!!!!!!
    Dont worry di we’ll support any desicion of yours as long as it’s not quitting tu
    But come back quick na

  5. sujina

    sayu u r so sweet really n i respect u from my heart n ur ff made my day…so lovely wow kunj is so caring n twi is getting 2 know true side of k…i’ll miss ur ffs n plz post nxt after u get time…i’ll b w8in 4 it…love u….

  6. Ria

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    I hope your last statement changed now. And, you know na if you continue to do so then what will me and Laddoo do? We’ve practical reasons okay?
    Back to the episode, it was marvellous. I really loved. Finally, love is in the air. Do post soon otherwise….
    Love you loads.😘

  7. Monica

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    Wow! It was just so amazing! How do you manage to write so well? I am so so damn impressed. And seriously .. Let the haters hate cuz they know nothing except hate okay? I am with you Infact all are with you. And never think you write bad cuz honestly ,i find your writing even better than mine 😊 so please let them do whatever they want and you don’t give a f**k to them. Anyway, continue soon and love you x

  8. Chandra

    Kya api . Pagalo ki batoon ka bura mante ho ? I ws planning to send them to mental hospital . Do u know there is a proverb in bangla . I m giving u the English translation . “What A Mad Speaks , And What A Goat Eats , It Cant Be Imagined . If U Listen To What A Psyco Says , Then U Will Be Confused “. Dont pay heed to their words . Coming back to the epi , It ws amazing . Love u .

  9. Franciee

    Why are you even listening to those psychos? They are people with low mind set. So don’t feel bad. Please. And trust me you are one of the best writers I have come across. πŸ˜€
    Update the next part soon. I will be eagerly waiting for it. :-*

  10. Mantasha

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    Nooooooooooooo…… 😒😒😒😒😒😒..
    nooo sayu noo…. plzzzz u cant do this to me… I know u r hurt.. even I know u want ur space.. I also want u to hve ur space.. bt widout ff how will I stay… ok u want time.. u take.. par zyada nhi dungi.. jaldi aana padega.. warna baar baar comment kr k pareshan kr dungi.. yaad rakhna…
    ok now abt d episode.. it was.. umm.. kya bolu.. u know how it was.. accha u wanna listen it frm me.. ok then.. it was awesome.. amazing.. fantabulous.. superrr dupeerrrr hittt… ab aur words dhoondne padenge.. par khatam nhi honge.. to mai time waste nhi krti.. tu samaj jaa ab.. ok.. love u sayu.. aur jaldi post krna else I will call u DI….😜😜😜

  11. dreamer..arundhati

    Sayu di I dont know what has happened but frm whatever I read I can derive that ur very hurt…plz di its a humble request frm ur choti sista ..don’t take such wordsnon heart….if there r is 1 to bash there r 100s to support…all religion r equal….di ur wonderful writer….osum epi…take u r time…b back soon
    Luv u di and ur writing frm bottom of my heart…one smile plz…

  12. Joonakanksha

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    It was awesome sayeeda
    And donot worry we all are with you
    I know u are a strng girl….
    In life also u will find ppl who will degrade you but you have to a strong and pass all the hurdles…
    This is like a test for you

  13. Sameera

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    Amazing just loved it
    Yeah one imposter commented on my golden jubilee also
    I didnt know what they will get by discouraging us but promise from today we will not pay any attention to them
    Love u sayu come back soon

  14. Sidhanshi

    Sayu appi don’t feel sad.. U r a amazing writer.. U r very talented nd u respect u’r religion very much… I’m also Muslim so i can understand how it feels… It’s our identity, our pride… I know u r hurt.. But don’t be sad by thinking about those people who doesn’t know to respect a religion, how to talk with people… Nd I’m with u, we all r with u always… Btw nice epi.. Love u.. Take care..

  15. Simmi Pillay

    I knw …….. di u dnt knw me but…….. iam one.. of… your …silent reader’s…….This is da first time iam commenting on smone’s ff… I knw tht u r really hurt bcuz of smpeople but do think abut yur silent readers as we dnt shw ourselves n our feelings …through da… comments.. but.. we still read yur ff …. n… I must say tht… u r really gud in writing .. n.. very less peole r gifted with such talent …. I knw u must b thinkin …from where did this person suddenly came from ….. SORRI for not commenting b4 as iam… not gud in expressing…myy.. feelings so..whn I felt tht smone really.. hurt u thn I felt … tht its better 2 tell u how important … u really r 4 da ones who r your silent readers … after this I may never comment again …but… still ..I must say this.. di… tht I lve yur ff … a lot.. Sorri for writing so much .. I hope tht I didn’t hurt u …n…sori if my any word hurts u ……….. Just want 2 say tht yur ff’s this fan is there 4 u n if u get sad thn ..wht will happen …to us… LOADS OF… LOVE ….FROM YUR LITTLE….. SIS ….. hope u didn’t mind my words…….

  16. Kruti

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    New shade pf kunj…….loving it
    Amazing epi…..and that pov of twinkle was so lovely
    Gonna miss u for few days…..hoping to see u back soon
    Love u ❀❀❀❀

  17. Jisha

    I was waiting 4 ur ff… n u thought to stop writing…πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–… how can you think of that…
    Don’t get hurt by such people…u correctly said that they just need our attention… better we don’t give what they want.. ignore them…nd if someone is using bad words against u give her a reply same to you dear… that’s it…
    Take it in this way.. this person who hates u and consider u as the worst writer, has taken this much time to read ur ff and comment on it…kuch to baat hai na…tum me… that means u r impossible to ignore…
    I wrote a long comment this time…
    By the way nice episode… awesome… we are always with you…

  18. SidVee

    Amazing epi.. loved it.. and plz dont feel bad abt that Imposter’s words.. you guys are very good writers and i love your piece of writing and that imposter is just jealous and is trying to demotivate you ppl.. BT don’t feel demotivated cuz there are many pple loving u n ur ffs.. hope u cm bck soon

  19. Bhumika12

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    Love u di….u r awesome writer …..amazing episode …..and plzz dont Feel sad ……for us plzzz be happy and be our awesome di πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜love u di

  20. Krystal_Krysiee

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    F*ck off sayu yaar srsly uh thought to end huh uh know why these ppl don’t have any other wrk that’s y every tym they bash writers lyk uh and me we know everyone is nt perfect in this world right ……. But if our passion is to write we try our bst to entertain every one maybe uh entire gud as Saby or Misha or shatakshi or anyone I m also nt gud as uh or anyone bt still I write even I got a cmmnted from hater …… Crazy also got a cmmnt from that hater but we didn’t stop we din even think to stop uh know wht if we continue further it gives a kick on their a** so jst don’t pay heed on their words n continue further will wait till uh post ur next episode love uh dear πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

  21. Aishwarya.twinjfan

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    U r an awesum writer di. Just dont care abt them. They r just jealous of u. Never mind them at all. We can understand u need space nd we will surely give tht. Nd i am not calling u di just for the sake of respect I REALLY MEAN IT. Not only for u all my di s i call them di cuz i feel bond of sisterhood wid them. Thank u di for being my di for all these days nd i hope u will be continuing to be my di. Nd i will always be continuing to be ur younger sis. Nd I will always respect ur decision. Take care nd come back soon

  22. Twinjfan.tamanna

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    sayeeda…don’t feel bad for thier talks…n as u said they just need attention n its better that we don’t give it to them…I know …we know hw much good u are.. I think they don’t have brain to say like that to u…let them say whatever they want we would just keep smiling bcz u know na that smile confuses our enimies…n ur episode tho I was just waiting fr it..it was so so good…n dont feel bad fr thier cmmnts bcz u think that there are 2 like that cmmnters there are several 200 readers who read ur ff who like u…n love u…take ur time…

  23. Romaisha

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    Inshallah Sayu di … ❀
    Allah (SWA) will take care of everything
    If he’s by his believers’ side then nothing can go wrong inshallah..
    Please don’t stay away from TU and us too long ok?
    I respect every decision of hours since you are elder to me … Love you dii … And im glad to have come across you in my life ..

    Episode was fab yaar!! I didn’t expect Kunj to change so quickly..but its good i like it .. Twinkle’s POV was worth reading… Hope I’ll get to continue reading soon post soon πŸ™‚ .. Bye love u to the moon and further πŸ‘ πŸ˜˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

  24. Laddoo

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    Okay. So, who are you?
    Do i know you?
    Hell yes! I do! Who doesn’t know such a great writer! Maine kaha tha PA bana lo…abhi tak nhi banaya…m telling u again…if I find another boss then dnt blame me! Ye kya tha Sayu di! This was epic! Stupendous piece of work! Kunj ko kaise jhat se badal diya! I loved it! And diii….active na hone ke baare mei to sochna bhi mat, if u remember what happened yesterday. My mail is still written, all I need to do is to cut copy paste. So, look before u leap, and tata bye bye.
    Love u❀

  25. Zuha Fatima

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    Sayoooooooo Api …… I am seriously in the mood to do dishum dishum with u …. How dare u thought to end such a lovely FF! I love ur FF soooooooooooooooooooo much that u can’t even imagine πŸ™‚ You are just amazing, blessed with a beautiful talent of writing and you deserve to be loved πŸ™‚ And for that Bhavika… I feel like slapping her! Okay fine she doesn’t like your beautiful and stupendous FF but the way she talks about our religion is totally not OKAY! But at the end of the day, Our religion tell us to be patient πŸ™‚ And we are proud to be MUSLIMS!! πŸ™‚ !! And have faith in Almighty πŸ™‚ He will help u!

    So just keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

    Love u loadsssssssss


  26. Lovely

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    Pehli baat di aap likh kar rakh lo..yaaa for main Jo likh rahi hoon use copy paste karlo😜😜..but Superstars me hi bashers note hai naa..and aap mujhe batao..ek bhavika kya itni influential ..itni important hai ki uska ek commentcomment can disturb you??..
    Tell me..Kya uska ..you are a stupid writer him sab me u are an amazing writer se zyaada effective hai??

    Chalk je shab cholo..Glad to know the feelings of twinkle for Kunj..loved the epi di..
    And if u need time..then take as much as you wish..and be back soon..

  27. Dolly

    Ur ff is so good
    So pls don’t stop it fr sake of others
    I’m so sry as I have nt commented on ur previous ff but I really like ur ff n don’t think abt them
    N tc

  28. shikha

    wonderful part
    this is truly so amazing
    Kunj didn’t even touched her aweeeeee really he is a very good person but that’s what the suspense of this story
    and you are saying you will not be active ohhhhhhoooo
    just please come back fast and update it please I wanna read it more n more

  29. Srija

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    the episode is just mindblowingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ’—πŸ’—
    and please don’t pay heed to those people
    who bad mouth about u or religion they are just useless they don’t have any work so they do these cheap things
    and ur a brilliant writer the way u write u express each & everything is marvellous and it’s very difficult to write so nicely
    and i’m damn sure those BASHERS can’t even think of writing so well
    so please don’t feel upset as if u r upset then we all are upset
    so please ignor them and continue soon when u feel better
    please continue soon as ur ff make us smile and we feel better
    do remember we are always with u
    lots & lots of loveπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

  30. Shatakshi

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    Dekha sayu
    I m really speechless
    Sabne to bol he diya that the imposter is mentally retarded n u r the best writer
    Really sayu hats off to ur words….
    Love u loads…
    N the episode was like a positive sign n the revelation of kunjs feelings…
    Loved it to the core❀❀❀

  31. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Sayeeda di Loved the episode and take your own time to cool down so that we can get our old Sayeeda di back Love you come back soon from your mini vacations πŸ™‚

  32. Baby

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    sayeeda di yeh kya hogya aapko aap uss bahvika ki vajah se uggghhhhhhhhhhhhh i srsly feel lyk killing dat bhavika y di y uski vajah se hme itni saja milegi di pls dont go i ll bash dat girl we ll find her bt dont go di cnt stay away frm u n ur ffs di ll miss u alot if aap chale gye toh usse lgega voh jeetgyi di app uski vajah se disturb mt ho hm sb hai na ek team di throw her wrds out as a bad dream bt dont go anywhere luv u di

  33. RiaA MendeZz

    Sayeeda before I praise your ff I wanna say something.im no where close to the Indian religion, meaning I’m half white and half Latino but u kno what? If god give me options to choose my religion I’d surely choose yours..I find it beautiful and extremely unique in its own way. So I do not see the need for others to badmouth it..every body is different whether its through religion, skin colour, hair texture or native language. Who gives man the right to judge another man and make him feel inferior? I’ve never seen you but through your writing and the way u speak to others I can tell how much of a beautiful person you are and I appreciate you that way. Don’t let hypocrites steal your happiness. Your writing is perfect, maybe you’re not a professional but you’re pretty damn close.. Today’s chapter was amazing and WELL WRITTEN. I enjoyed it and I understand you wanting to take time for your self.you have my full support.

  34. zayb_zikra

    Sayuuuuuuuu diduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu……
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! !!!!!!😨😨😨
    No no nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo……
    U can’t do this!!!hw cn uh do this!!!?????
    No na uh can’t I kno ….!!!!I understand…. Bt still u kno!!!!!
    I mean to say that ki??…..ki…..
    Ik uh can’t b able to live far away from us n TU…….
    I knew it….bt I will miss uh very badly…!!.😭😭😭😭😭
    Uh will b missed alot…….😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Ok nw that so called bashers I swear I juss feeling like slapping thm really hard.. .like srsly hw cn sumone b so emotionless…….
    Idk hw bt anyways I will always love uh n ur ff so so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!damnn……
    U don’t my sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Sum ppl don’t like ur superbbbbbbb se b amazing wala ff….
    It’s their problem nt us….so for God sake bcz of such bl**** a****e
    Don’t stop ur amazing ff….n dont even think of ending I swear….
    Ok nw commin to d epi…..
    It ws fab as always bt I didn’t expected kunj to get so much change???
    Like srsly??? He’s changing????
    Ok loving his nw side ….. B back soon. …..
    I ll b waiting for uh…..lub uhhh so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…..😘😘😘😘❀❀❀❀
    Do cont …..😘😘😘😘😘

    ______urs zikroo…❀❀❀❀

  35. Aamu

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    are ab maaf b kardo na sayu maanti hu ho gayi galti………….
    dont think much sayu……i m telling dis as i m late as always pataa nahi yeh hota kaise hai..jab b tum epi post kartiho tab yaa to mera wifi off hota hai yaa fir busy schedule……………..aaj dat internet waale donkeys ne wifi band kardiya……..i want to beatdem red n black
    but now i was going to beat u …………….u just tell me
    HOW:::::HOW::::::HOWWWWWW::::::::::::::::i said HOW CAN U THINK OF ENDING UR SHWEET SHAA FF dont u dare warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga……………. i want to kill dat person how can she think to cry u….n most of alll how CAN SHE TRY TO RAISE FINGURE ON MY RELIGION;OUR RELIGION:::::::::SHE EVEN DONT RESPECT HER RELIGION DEN HOW CAN SHE KNOW D PIOUS N D MOST BEAUTIFUL RELIGION ISLAM:::::::………..if she was infront of me dan i would hav killed her…….pataa nahi muje hi uski cmnt nahi dikhti warna cmnt par hi use daboch leti…….CHEPO GIRL……………hate her….but love u as u r not stopping d ff

    dis epi was mindblowing amazing……………u know u r d best writer my sayu……………..i will tell ur ff story to my kids also n tell dem dat i hav another family der surname is tei tu family….a happy family….villains comes in der life tooo but dey with der families support…win n will win…i know u r thinking i will tell to kids so dat thing i know dat i m not 15 also i will b 15 on dis 3rd november…n thinking of kids so….my occupation is to b teacher so d students will b my kids only naa!!…..my tchr had only taught me dat tchr n student relation is like mother n daughter!!….so i will tell mu students dat i had 2 family…..d TEI FAMILY n my own family………my own family is not dat big in my house only 8 ppl reside dat is me n my 2 sis n 1 bro n my parents…n my grandma n chachu……….
    now u must b thinking y i m telling so….
    i feel like to tell u dats y…….
    n yaa take ur time n jaldi se apne aap ko recover…………can i giv u a idea…..i m dam sure u must hav frnds….so b with dem a whole day u will feel goood n think dat ur tei family is with u
    aaj bohot bol liya now by

  36. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi…..loved it…..loved kunj’s behaviour……& don’t feel bad for such people’s talks…..& do continue soon…..

  37. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Sayoo diii ur are one of my best writer and an inspiration to me is this not enough to tell u how much u mean to us we all love u and are always by ur side don’t feel so much for other who don’t respect or care for u diiii we r always wid u and
    Luv u diiiiii

  38. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey sayu just don’t pay attention to those people who bad mouth about our religion you and your writing skills just ignore such people and think of others who love you to the moon and back and continue your ffs for their sake…just believe in yourself and don’t bother about what others think of you as they are no one to give you character certificate…wish for your speedy recovery…come back soon with a bang Sayu…love you sooooo much dear😍😍😘😘

  39. kinjal

    Its just wow.. waiting fr more..dont think abt bashers instead u think abt ur well wishers and keep on writing

  40. Simiyy

    Asalamualiukum Sayeeda Apa
    You rocked again
    I love your ff and always look foward to reading them.
    I was waiting for you to update on your ff.
    Take Care and i will be waiting for your next chapter xxx

  41. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    Sayeeda first of all so sorry for too late comments…but yesterday I’m too bussy with d preparation of test….
    And today’s epi was awesome….mind blowing…super hit … d best epi….& many more but won’t aable to express…as every word is less infront of ur both ff…
    But really sayeeda when I’m visit on this tu page …as always my first work to find ur ff … & when i’m suceed to find ur nxt part a smile automatically appears on my face… a smile of happiness… & pls believe me its really happen … I swear… but this time when I started to read it… A tears came in my eyes… A tears to loose such a friend( I’m so lucky to have such a friend)… I read d first two paras & I can able to feel in each & every line that this time u r really hurt.

    And im truly saying sayeeda that yesterday night i started to read it but when i read first to paras … I’m really feel that u r too hurt & in nxt para u r gonna say that u r quiting tu..im so much scared so i decided to not to read further… As I’m not having any strength to read that word quiting from my lovely friend… So I immediately off my mobile & sleep… But today I really feel to read it once & gathering d strength I read it completely… & I’m feel good sayeeda that u r just going away from us for only few days… But pls return back soon …I’m waiting for u & pls keep ur promise… Otherwise…I..ya..I will cry a lot d until u came back… And u don’t know that if I cry na then god listen my wish & fulfil it,….so they will bring u back…
    And I’m with u sayeeda… & always be… Love u a lot. & pls don’t take any stress … & u know what this haters only commented on d ff which is too popular or having a talented writer like u or toooo good which can not be expressed,..ya I observe this… & they r only doing this becoz they r somewhere jealous of u… So if they repeat this next time then pls take d apposite word of it ..ex. Bad- good…as brecauze of jealousy these peoples mind is got disturb…ya I think they really need treatment….just don’t pay d heed to them…

  42. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    This is for d hater…Hey Bhavika or whatever u r…I don’t care…
    I just want to warn u …
    please if u really had a little shame then pls stop using bad words for her or her religion …please…its my request…& if u want then ….I’m begging to u pls stop this nonsense..
    & pls do tell me what u get by doing this other than hurting others… & I have a dout…r u really belonging to any religion… I don’t think so…coz every religion is equal…
    & if u r from our Hindu religion then we d people of Hindu religion is shame on u…on ur thoughts…as u know very well that our religion teach us to respect other religions….
    Because each and every “RELIGION IS EQUAL” pls fit this line in ur mind…
    Our Religion is different but our respect for our religion is same..
    Language is different but d meaning is same…
    Name of god r different but d god is same…
    Process for worship is different but d prayer we did by whole heartedly is same… So how can u say badmouthing about d same god,… & one more thing …people is not knowing by there religion or their cast they r known by their good deed…by their good behaviour….
    & who r u to judge anyone…. Did U think urself god…
    & this is LST warning

  43. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Sayooo I’m standing for you to give standing ovation for you you deserves it and big salute…. I’m speechless…. Beloved words sayooo always how you’re doing this…. In each episode you gives you best…. Really sayooo if you were in front of me I would have lifted u…. I love you soooooooo for amazing ff… Really sayooo you rocked it…. I need to study something for you…
    New kunj I loved it… I’m happy for twinkle…. Kashhh I may able watch this in TV… Outstanding episode…

    Sayooo you know nah why I’m late… I hope my sayooo will understand me… Sayooo what ever happened please don’t stop talking to me… I can’t bear that… I need you always as shadow with me…. I miss you….
    And now our relation got new name twin soul…
    Love you lots…. Mmmmmmhhhh

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