A Case ( 3 shots) (mmz) part-3

Silent readers pls drop your reviews….All rotten tomatoes accepted..and if some fault occur ..spare me because it was my first ss regarding any murder mystery
He opened his handkerchief to cover his face. Then he found the handkerchief was not of his.

“ Ladies Perfume” said Neil when he inhaled the scent on it.

”how many will hide the truth, you will break the troop, hometown is kilometers away, his pride will gulp the proof away, run run run , the game is now begun”

Neil was disturbed now, he had two puzzles to solve now. He called Ray.

“ Ray ..is there any chaos in hotel” asked Neil.

“ No..you can easily come down ..when you left riddhima in the room ..i took her to some hotel room and put her there” said Ray.

“ what are you doing there??” asked Ray.

“ I am with Raina dutta ..in Arjun’s suite” said Neil and looked towards the rotten corpse of Raina.

“ Neil ..i know when you see any pretty girl, you won’t able to control your hormones..but now we are working on a nasty Case…pls for the sake of A Case.. Leave her” said Ray
all irritated.

Neil rolled his eyes . “ Ray ..stop it ..do you think this for me..that i am always in mood of ‘that’..stop objectifying me” said Neil. Ray chuckled.

“ Raina is dead” said Neil.

“ What the F**k” shouted Ray.

“ Easy Ray..” replied Neil

“ oh sorry ..what the f**k” mumbled Ray.

“ I want to cremate this dead body” said Neil.

“ not possible” answered Ray.

“ the f**k ..make it possible…I am not leaving her here anymore…she was raped before her death” said Neil and looked towards the corpse again.

“ Great!! .. A girl was raped in Arjun’s suite..what do you think” asked Ray.

“ bl**dy Mehra….what about shinde !!” asked Neil.

“ Died an hour agp” replied Ray coyly.

“ what the f**k” shouted Neil.

“ Easy Neil..” shouted Ray. “ like father like Son” ray muttered further.

“ I heard that..but I am not like you” replied Neil coldly.

“ I know you are like Megha” argued Ray further. Neil laughed on hearing his words.

“ Prerna …my mom’s name is prerna ..” replied Neil.

“ by the way ..who is megha??” asked Neil in a teasing tone.

“ Neil ..it’s my order ..leave that body there….and come back” said Ray.

“ hey Ray ..easy man …stop behaving like a father” said Neil

“ shinde is dead ..now what??” asked Ray.

“ nothing ….let’s find his daughter ..i got something here” replied Neil.

“ put Naina …in any cupboard..and come back now…otherwise I will throw you from this case” ordered Ray coldly.

“ and don’t forget to take that watch back …your mother
gifted me that when I solved the murder case of her brother” asked Ray softly.

“ Do you ever loved my mom??” asked Neil. Ray was surprised on hearing his question.

“ No” replied Ray in a hesitant voice.

“ Great!!!…..” replied Neil sarcastically.

“ And by the way ..she is Raina ..not Naina” said Neil and smirked.

“ will you stop smirking ..and come back” asked Ray . While speaking his gaze fell on the girl standing near him .

He smiled towards that girl and she tucked her hair strands behind her ears. The girl blushed when Ray complimented her “ Beautiful”.

“ God Ray…she is of my age” said Neil and disconnected the call. He bend down and looked the corpse. “ Don’t worry we will come back again to give you back ..your freedom” mumbled Neil.

He put on his gloves and keep the body in the cupboard.


( Evening silence)

“ two puzzles ..two missing people” said Ray while inhaling the scent of the note.

“ Pride ..what does exactly pride can depict to??” asked Neil from Ray.

“ well when I was at your age ..my dad used to say me that I am his pride” said Ray with a proud.

“ Really ..grandfather used to say like this” asked Neil all excited. Ray glared him. Neil chuckled and teased further…” I mean ..Ray’s father” .

“ How is your Mom??” asked Ray.

“ I told you many times …my dad is a loving person and mom is extremely happy with him” replied Neil calmly.

“ you mean your step father…Abhishek Malhotra” said Ray.

“ yeah I mean that only” replied Neil and show his fake smile.

“ So ..Case….the second puzzle was started like time is running….this is simple ..after two days ..this case will have its last hearing in the court ..and as usual without any proofs Arjun Mehra will be termed as mentally unstable..that means he will be free after two days” said Ray.

He saw Neil looking the handkerchief. Ray patted on his shoulder. Neil was still lost .

“ look Neil ..i know what happened between me and your mom was” . Ray was stopped when interrupted by Neil.

“ Treasure is Radhika Mehra” .

Ray raised his eyebrows. “ what treasure ..there is nothing mentioned like treasure in any puzzle” asked ray .

Neil looked towards him . He smirked now. “ you only know how to become a dad, iam still confused ..on what basis …our government officials made you head of crime branch..you are not even worth to become a bookseller.” said Neil .

“ As expected ..you are like me” argued Ray further.

Neil put the handkerchief on candle. Another message was visible. “Treasure is in the hometown”.

“ okay if you are really smart ..then solve the puzzle” said Ray in his defense.

Neil chuckled. “ if I had made you confess that you had spent a goody time with my mom, when you were working on some case..then I can bring out culprit too even if he is hiding behind someone’s bruised a*s . ..all I want to say that don’t mess up with the F**king Neil Malhotra” said Neil looking straight in Ray’s eyes.

Ray nodded and moved back.

“ I need to go” said Neil Further.

“ Where??” asked Ray .

“ only a sister can tell about her Brother’s pride” retorted Neil .

“ what do you mean??’ asked Ray all confused.

“ why should I tell you ..it’s me who solved the cases …but in the end some fools give credits to you” argued Neil .

“ just take care of yourself” asked Ray .

“ stop being melodramatic ..Ray” teased Neil further.

( wild night)

Neil entered in Mehra Mansion . He was perplexed when he saw Sam breaking things of her house.

“ Mom ..stop it ..this black Magic will not help Arjun …so please stop all this nonsense” shouted Sam .

Anusha was fuming in anger. “ don’t show me your face ..don’t forget that iam not your real mother ..who will bear your nonsense” shouted Anusha back too.

Sam climbed the stairs and rushed towards her room . “ I hate….i hate myself” she muttered and throw the things of her room . Anusha also left towards her room.

Neil was not shocked …everyone knows the truth that Samaira was adopted. He climbed the stairs and started moving towards Sam’s room. He reached her room .

“ the portrait and the paintings of ancestors of Mehra’s had one common thing ..the sword …sword from the old times always represent the honor or pride…may be in the puzzle his pride means the ancestral sword that belonged to Mehra’s.” mumbled Neil .

He reminisces how he saw the portraits when he first time visited the house.

“ yeah you are right ..you should kill yourself ..you know ..i have a great plan ..the sword in the portraits ..bring that and kill yourself with that” said Neil while entering her room.

“ still no use ..those swords are in Mehra palace…in rishikesh” replied Sam all crying. Neil smiled.

He quickly typed a message in his phone. ‘book the tickets for me for rishikesh’ and he send it to Ray.

Ray was confused after getting the message . He was at that time checking the postmortem reports of shinde’s body. “ don’t know what he is up to” mumbled Ray.

Shinde was given some poisonous mushroom in his food .

Ray was taken aback . ‘” why someone used such an old method of killing”. He thought.

Sam was hugging Neil and was sobbing . Neil smiled and closed his eyes. He too hugged Sam.

“ please take me away somewhere” said Sam .

Neil hold her face and bend down . He kissed her hard. Sam quickly opened his shirt. They both undressed each other and fall on the bed.


At 3:00 A.M.:-

Sam was sleeping with her head on Neil’s chest. They both were covered by a single blanket.

After 5 minutes:-

Sam was not in the bed now. She was moving towards Neil with a knife in her hand.

Sam gulped . She was crying . She closed her eyes and attack with knife. But then she opened her eyes. She saw Neil on the other side of bed. She throw the knife .

“ what the hell was that??” asked Neil and pulled Sam towards him.

“ I am sorry ..peter…someone called at my cell at this hour and told me to kill you otherwise they will kill my brother” said Sam and started crying.

Neil took her phone and saw the number. “ no use of tracing this number..the caller must have used some local PCO.” he thought . He hugged Sam .

“ Nothing will happen to your brother ..and now sleep” said Neil. Sam looked towards him all confused but then she closed her eyes.

Neil wiped her sweat . “ thank god my phone buzzed and I woke up” he mumbled. He saw the message he got . “ Sweet dreams” . Ray had sent him that message

In the morning:-

“ why did you sent me that message” shouted Neil.

“ which message” asked Ray.

“ Sweet dreams” said Neil and showed it to Ray.Ray took out his phone. There was no messages in the outbox. “ I didn’t” said Ray. Neil was frozen. He was shocked . “ but it is showing that the message is sent from your phone” argued Neil.

“ Someone hacked your phone and saved my life” mumbled Neil.

“ we will find this helping guy later ..first I need to go rishikesh” said Neil . He looked towards Ray . “ now what??” Neil asked Ray.

“ I think the guy who is helping us …know that who did the murder… but why he is not telling us directly…why these puzzles??” asked Ray .

Neil burst out in laughing and he nodded in negative. “ seriously whoever made you head of crime branch was really a mad guy” said Neil while clapping.

He took his ticket and drove off in his car. Ray watched him leaving.


( Game over)

Neil reached rishikesh by evening. He was standing outside the Mehra palace.

“ tight security..i need to break it” said Neil . He saw a delivery boy heading towards palace.

“ F**k man ..except security there is no one in the palace then who ordered pizza” muttered Neil. But then he thought may be any staff member ordered it. Neil looked towards
the delivery guy. He made a sad face after then.

After 7 minutes:-

“ your pizza sir” said Neil to a random staff member. He looked here and there. He smirked.

“ oh god so much heat” said Neil and acted to collapsed on the ground.

All security members were shocked . They quickly picked him up and bring him the garden. After few minutes doctor come. He was about to give him injection when Neil
opened his eyes.

“ no no ..pls don’t inject me” screamed Neil. He went silent when he found the security staff was staring him .

He shouted again holding his tummy this time. “ I think I need to go washroom” he said . He smirked when one security guard took him inside.

Neil entered in washroom . He put some chloroform in his handkerchief and make a weird face.

He shouted again and that guard entered in washroom . Neil covered his mouth from behind and within few seconds the guard was on the floor.

After wearing the suit of that guard He placed him inside one toilet and on the water tap.

“ now I have to add this chloroform in ac ducts ..then only I can further go ahead.” murmured Neil.

He looked here and there and then looked the pipeline. He understood what he have to do.

After few minutes the staff started falling unconscious on the floor. Neil smirked . He stretched his arms. “know search the pride”

He started checking rooms . “May be Arjun’s room can help me”. He thought. He entered in Arjun’s room and saw the swords fixed on the wall inside the glass case. The glass case can be opened by a code.

“As usual Rasam will help me again”. he mumbled. He took out the sword after opening the glass case. Break with his pride. Neil observed the room.

He then thought more about puzzle. “ her soul is yearning..may be treasure ..radhika is buried inside any wall” said Neil.

He turned towards the wall in which glass case was fixed. Neil break the case with the sword.

The glass case got broken and a key was visible. He took the key. “ what the F**k ..this key” .

He looked here and there and then down on the floor . he heard some noise. Neil removed the carpet . He saw a big square hole. “ god pls no more dead bodies” he murmured.

He opened the lock and opened it’s cover. “ Wooden Stairs ..great!!” . He covered his face and went down.

“ water..pls someone help me” . Neil was shocked seeing the site in front of him.

A 18 year old girl was writing something on wall. She was muttering something. He rushed towards her . ” hey kiddo …shriya …miss shinde ..pls wake up” shouted Neil. He lifted the girl in his arms.

Neil was about to turn when someone emptied a syringe on his neck. He started feeling dizzy .

“ oh my my ..you are so handsome” said someone while holding him. Neil’s eyes drooped down and he fell on the floor.

( Murder Mystery)

Neil slowly opened his eyes. He winced in pain. Slowly he tried to get up but fall back. Somehow he tried to sit on the bed.

He saw three people in his room.

“ Hello Neil” a guy turned who was staring outside the window.

“ Arjun Mehra ..finally you got release” said Neil while looking the date in his watch . He realized that he was unconscious for two days.

“ but I like the name peter” said Sam making an innocent face.

“ doesn’t matter he ..is se*y like hell” said the one who attacked him. “ thanks for the compliment…Mrs Radhika Mehra..but that attack on my neck will not let us become friends” replied Neil sternly.

Radhika moved towards Neil. She squeezed his face and planted a kiss on his lips.

After biting on his lips . She mumbled “ wanted to taste them” . Sam chuckled. “ ouch ….radhu ..the hell is whole body is very mouth watering” said Sam and winked towards Radhika.

“ Stop it girls ..don’t tease poor fellow” said Arjun.

Radhika moved towards him.

“ And nothing for me” asked Arjun when she took his wine glass.

“ first kill him..then we have our time” said Radhika and smirked.

“ your command ..my order mam” replied Arjun.

“ no ..pls don’t kill him” said Sam and then she burst out in laughing.

“ I love him” she continued. She giggled.

“ no Sam is right ..he worked so much on this case ….so it’s his right to know the truth” said Arjun. He started make another drink for him.

“ So ..from where to start …okay so me and radhika never loved each other ..and we both never believed in the concept of marriage…but we got married because we both don’t want to get tied up for life..it’s exactly I want to say that I both don’t have any problem if radhika is having extra – martial affairs, and same with her too when it comes to me . “ said Arjun coyly.

“ in short ..you both are jackass” added Neil further.

“ why raina??” asked Neil sternly.

“ yeah why Raina..actually she was a b***c ..i tried many times to make her fall for me ..but she was like those sati savitri..considering a married man as like some brother” said

Arjun little irritated.

Neil clenched his fist.

“ so where were we ..yup ..actually one fine day ..when we all were discussing a plan to kill yash ..raina landed in our house and she heard our conversation…don’t get shocked ..we wanted yash to get married to Sam ..so that after killing him we can get his property” said Arjun and smirked.

“ so you guys killed Raina??’ asked Neil controlling his anger.

“ Not only ..Killed ..i raped her too” replied Arjun with a sad face.

Neil laughed heartily. “ but Yash will not marry Sam..you guys had already lost this battle” said Neil with a gleam in his eyes.

Radhika chuckled too. Neil looked towards her all confused.

“ you know ..why he is denying ..because he is in love with Arjun and he is a gay” said Radhika while holding her tummy.

“ then why he get engaged to Sam??” asked Neil.

“ because Arjun asked him to get married to me ..you know.. when the love of his life is asking him something how can he deny that” replied Sam.

“ why were you molesting 18 year old boy..in the jail??” asked Neil.

“ ahh that guy was seriously not a boy ..his behavior was like woman’s so .. Actually i was just passing my time” replied Arjun coyly.

“ okay so when Raina came to know the truth I saw her in the mirror..after that when she rushed outside ..i called her..and guess what she picked up too ..and then I asked her to give me one file in my hotel after an hour..she thought I didn’t saw her in my house ..so she came after an hour to give me the file…her plans was to resign from the job on next day ..but so sad she never saw the next day” completed Arjun and make a sad face.

“ so you killed her” said Neil and glared Arjun.

“ not alone” replied Radhika.

“ yeah we two helped Arjun in killing her when she was raped by Arjun” said Sam coyly.

“ Sam you had an allergy with silver..then that bracelet” asked Neil further.

“ yeah you guessed right ..that was of Raina” retorted Sam quickly.

“ then why ..this ..f**king I killed my wife game” asked Neil frustrated.

“ yeah ..that is the only problem ..after I killed Raina..someone called me and asked me to kill Radhika …if I don’t want him not to blurt out the truth in front of police..but as usual radhika heard that convo too ..on landline ….and then it was impossible for me to kill her…so I made this plan …that I will accept that I killed my wife to fool that person in front of police ..so I acted to be unconscious on the cliff near my hotel and when there will be no proof then they will let me go terming me mentally unstable..and a know no one is interested in blackmailing a mentally unstable person…but who was that f**kard..we don’t know” . Arjun told the whole story in one go. Radhika glared him for thinking to kill her too.

“ why you guys kidnapped Shinde’s daughter??” asked Neil to Radhika.

“ well this stupid Arjun have blurted out the truth while hallucinating in front of shinde..so we kidnapped his daughter and she and Radhika were staying in rishikesh away from Mumbai ..so that they can be remain hidden from everyone…..but three days before he tried to send the recording of Arjun’s confession to you ..so Sam killed him…” said

Radhika proudly.

“ but why giving poisonous mushroom ..why not stabbing or anything else” asked Neil.

“ well ..the whole department knew how ,much shinde used to like mushroom s..so I killed him by giving his favorite thing but in poisonous form” said Sam . Radhika and Sam both giggled

“ I think they were not sending me any puzzle ..then who was that??” thought Neil.

“ I think it’s time to finish him” said Sam to Arjun. Radhika took out the gun.

“ not so soon” . Someone said after breaking the door.

“ Riddhima” shouted Arjun.

“ yeah Riddhima..Riddhima Joshi…the only eye witness of this murder.. I know what happened on that day ..Raina was pleading you to leave her but you didn’t pay any heed
to her..and then you call radhika and Sam which shot her dead when she was successful in kicking your butt ..to save herself from you when you tried to kill her after raping her. …accidently my phone got slipped under your bed on that day when I was arranging things in your suite..and at that my camera was on..and when you guys done all this cleaning ..i come back to take my phone…as I thought I will take only my phone back ….though you asked us not to go there..and my phone only recorded sounds ..no video was captured as it was under the bed..i heard her screams…and her helplessness ..her death on my phone. It was me who was threatening you Arjun Mehra …and it was me who sent you puzzles Officer Neil Malhotra” shouted Riddhima. She pointed gun at Arjun and Ray who was behind her at Radhika. Neil hold Sam from behind. “ Don’t you dare” he whispered in her ears.

Arjun, Sam and Radhika were handed to police . The case was started again. Neil thanked Riddhima.

“so Riddhima..why didn’t you tell me before..when you know the truth..” asked Neil. Riddhima replied “ I am just a common girl..they would have crushed me too ..if I would have informed police or you too..that’s why I sent you puzzles so that you can find out the truth yourself” .replied Riddhima curtly.

“ shinde’s daughter is now in her home all safe and secure” said Ray from behind.

“ it was you who message by hacking Ray’s phone at that night” asked Neil.

“ yeah I know that Sam will kill you ..so when she called someone to call her from some local PCO…I understood that she had some plans in her brain..i was tapping all the calls in that house” replied Riddhima proudly.

“ you did a great job riddhima…” said Neil. “ thanks ..well I didn’t know that you had plans to make me unconscious ..well I didn’t mind at all ..that’s why I didn’t create any chaos after I woke up” said Riddhima and smiled.


( Analysis)

“ I mean Riddhima did the great job” said Ray to Neil.

“ yeah she was helping us ..without any motive” said Neil.

“ so the case is solved now” said Ray further.

“ don’t you find some loop holes in Riddhima’s story” asked Neil further.

“ No” said Ray.

“ I mean ..as you said she only guessed that where they would had taken me…and she did the everything..puzzle game…herioc entry …” asked Neil.

“ yeah she told me Raina was her best friend” replied Ray.

“ really first of all…no android phone will work more than an hour with it’s camera on…and second thing ..the phone didn’t have a single scratch..don’t you find things fishy” said Neil and took out the family photograph of Mehra’s and Riddhima. After a minute he started laughing holding his stomach. Ray was now more bewildered seeing his antics.

“ Riddhima joshi ..is non another the daughter of Anusha Mehra….” said Neil and show the photograph of Anusha and Riddhima together.

“ F**k ..how it is possible” asked Ray all confused.

“ well seems like the whole family is interested in extra – martial affair ….why I didn’t think before ….the man ..the driver of Anusha Mehra …Gaurav Joshi…father of
Riddhima…he is still with her” said Ray.

“ Man mind-blowing game..that was …all are money leeching people..i think Arjun and Sam didn’t know about this” said Ray further.

“ yeah not even Radhika too” completed Neil.

“ so don’t you think we should find more about this Riddhima..” asked Ray further.

“ No ..her way is clear now ..she will get the property from Anusha easily…and one more thing we cannot deny she helped us to find the murderer …now let her live her life …and I am so not interested in knowing her story..and how she recorded that audio clip…I just knew that she when murder was going on in Arjun’s suite ..she was not there..in short she is not a culprit” said Neil .

“ okay can I ask you one thing …what about these dice things” asked Neil to Ray.

“ well this was not planned by anyone…but I can tell you one thing when I was working on some case around 15 years back….then someone told me that black magic and these kind of stuffs helped us to connect with one in other world…

Anusha was actually calling some spirit ..some soul ..to help her son…may be accidently she called the one who was ruined by her son…may be in dices ..it was Raina who helped you …RASAM…BODY can be coincidence too ..or can be supernatural too..but still remember one thing my boy ..few things are meant to be left unanswered. “ replied Ray. Neil nodded and took out the dice.

“ I need ask you few things” said Ray.

“ go ahead” answered Neil .

“ if Sam was a culprit …then why she helped you in solving RASAM..” asked Ray.

Neil looked towards Ray. “ give me the address” asked Neil while extending his hand towards Ray.

“ of whom??” asked Ray perplexed.

“ the person who made you the head of crime branch ..i want to shoot him” replied Neil and started laughing.

Ray give a fake smile. “ this was so not funny” said Ray sternly.

“ RASAM ..never means only Radhika and Sam…it was simple R for Radhika, A for Arjun , SAM …for Samaira ..three culprits and she told me only radhika and Sam because she knew that I would thought that after radhika someone will target her ,..and she was succeeded too because I thought the same..i was worried for her life and was continuously warning her about the danger on her ..like a fool” tell Neil to Ray.

“ the meaning of two puzzles…can you explain that” asked Ray further.

“ off course…..time is winning ..means I had less time left to solve the case …her soul is yearning ,means …for shinde’s daughter who was put in the room behind the wall of
Arjun’s room..break with his pride ..means break it with sword..and get the light was simple ..get the girl” answered Neil.

“ what about this third one??” asked Ray further.

“ how many will hide the truth here means ..that Arjun, Radhika , Sam , shinde and riddhima herself..break the troop was depicting these three culprits…hometown ..means rishikesh and pride ..gulp ..truth means the girl would have died inside if she was held captive for more days” said Neil and he took a sigh.

“ I never imagined that Sam can be involved too in this.” Neil spoke and looked down.

“ Don’t tell me that you fell in love with her” said Ray and smirked.

“ First sight” replied Neil.

“ what ..love at first sight …and that too in our profession..and that too with murderer ..not bad player” teased Ray.

“ Stop teasing me Ray…” said Neil and started playing with his dice.

“ How you and Megha are doing??” asked Neil and pressed his lips to control his laugh.

“ Great” replied Ray without thinking.

After a second Ray was staring Neil .” You dog …how dare you tease me” shouted Ray and run after Neil .
thought of the day :- Variation is the spice of our life…..Variation is the source of formation of new life


  1. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Omg… I didn’t expect this twist…. It was awesome….. I didn’t expect arrasam character as like this…. Now also I am in a shock…. And ridhima…. That was the next shock….

  2. Dev

    |Registered Member

    Sammy i guessed dat radz is definetly alive bt sam 1 of d culprits were unexpected….
    Well good end…..n witty abt extra marital affairs…..
    Lov u lots….tc💕💕💕

  3. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode, never expected Arjun Radhika and Sam in a negative role that was shocking. But a great story. 🙂

  4. shreya

    I need many more of these kinds ……..Sammy day by day I m being your jabra fan buddy ……….this was awesome ………your writings are so natural beautiful thrilling emotions intimacy ………ho god I m unable to get any other words ………I like the way u use intimacy s*xual content in write way ……..love u buddy one thing I wanna say that you are a mature writer or person ………love the way u present things yaar ………but I hate only one thing is that you keep us waiting …….love u …….keep on writing ……..I have wish plz make radz as negative character ………I wanna love to see her plz plz …….waiting for desperate silence ……..stay blessed

    • Sammy


      thanks shreya ..well i don’t know if i write any story making radz negative ..people will like it or not ..but surely i will think of that ..me a mature person?? ..well iam now 18 so you can tell me i am mature ..thanks for your lovely comment ..keep smiling tc

  5. Emz fasa

    Awesome mindblowing 🙂 i never imagined this twist oh my god rasam in this avatars and riddima hero :-O Zor ka jatka bohot zoron se lagaa 😉 now i donno what to do i aw still in shock :-O

  6. Swathi

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding,awesome plot dear…I knew rad was alive but didn’t expected this twist..enjoyed the update thoroughly.
    I hv checked out ur other ff’s too.My lost story s my fav one …

  7. lucky

    Awesome unexpected n wht can I say dude urrr extremely fabulous i really didn’t expected that RASAM will be the murderers woah that puzzles were awesome I tried to solve them bt seriously u made them real mysterious pretty plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz I want my lost patience on nesam that too soon u say that u will update soon but that soon comes out to be very long for me I request u to update conditions reversed too keep smiling dear

    • Sammy


      sorry lucky ..but now adays my uni got open you know 10-5 out of the house ..but surely i will give my best to update it by saturday ..thanks for your lovely comment ..keep smiling tc

  8. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Sammy u know the most shocking intrigued thing for me was Arjun raped raina before murder…and the base of marriage relationship of ardhika…i mean for a moment I thought what’s happening around me…if earth was spinning extra fast or its my head is spinning fast…i told u before I become a detective n threatened about rasam aslo..coz somehow I guessed killers from ur rotten tomatoes n eggs talks…lol…but u never cease to amaze me…wow…girl…u have a bunch of talents…and i have a extra soft corner for mystery writers..lol..now though m much elder than u I want to salute you…hats off girl…rock baby rock…dude u r toooooo gud…
    Seems I have gone crazy 😉😉😝😝

    • Sammy


      di pls ..this is so embrassing right now ..you are saluting me .when you yourself is amazing in writing ..when you completed dark …i was like jahapna tussi great ho tufaha qubool karo …thanks for the lovely comment ..thanks for always being there on my side ..motivating me and scolding me cutely …love u di ..lots of kisses and hugs for you ..and waiting for mars romance ..a hot one ..lol me shameless ..tc

  9. dipika

    Sammy darling what is this…my head is spinning.. You made my arjun rapist n murderer..no no…rads n sam r shown such cruel b***c..omg..ye kya kiya..haha.enough of my drama now..hehe..this superb yarrrr..neil as cop rocked it..never ever thought this twist in the story… Sach me m spellbound by this suspense… As its ur first suspense thriller thn u can go far in this writing feild yar..thid is marvelous. .so now waiting ur nxt ss…loads of love..tc

    • Sammy


      thanks deepu dear ..lol ..nahhi yeh kya kiya …haha ..thanks for your lovely comment dear ..love u a lot ..keep smiling ..stay blessed tc

  10. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Honey is this my wifie ?? Excuse me some one in the name of my wife ?? Lol was just kidding i am spell bound baby . i never knew this side of you really i can clearly see the level of all problems dealt wit. Any one who was good ?? Neil no…Arjun no no no …… Sam no no no no no and rads no no no no no what are they really ?? for money will they go so low ?? u know what i was reading this update for more han 3 times and for every time my eyes are popping out and finally they fell out of the socket and the best part which i loved was when ray shouted neil said relax and then he mumbled and the same happened when neil did and neil continuously asking who appointed you as the chief and he was hell frustrated and asked the person’s address soo realistic their convo. SO ridhima was also behind money but she did not go as low as arsam. but poor neil was in love with sam, but he will be alright. Woo a power pack update wifie i thoroughly enjoyed and now as a responsible hubby dear how is your leg ?? and how are you dear all fine hope so and always smile and no gymnastics in the wash room . Love you lods dear.

    • Sammy


      lol ..hehe no gymnastics in washroom ..hehe the best place where i used to dance haha thanks hubby ..now i am fine thank you …and you red three times …so sweet thanks for your lovely comment ..for motivating me always ..and my 2 states ..ahhh i am crying ..pls update that soon ..love u dear ..keep smiling ..tc

  11. Myra

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    Ouch!!!! These twist hurt…..itne twist sammy yaar…my head’s spining….
    Power play it was! Marvellous…..i am seriously wondering what agatha christie would have thought had she read it……i mean, it is as good as any bestseller…
    Well, i felt that radz would be alive….but being an accomplice to arjun and sam in a murder….whoopsss! Didnt see that coming…
    Kya family hai bhyi inki 😂😂
    And can understand why you added the thought of the day…..smarty 😂
    Love you loads…..lots of hugs and kisses for you 😘
    You have mastered the skill to write…..come back with another story soon sweetheart….meanwhile, do update lost story and my lost patience please……take care!

    • Sammy


      oh my god myra ..agatha christie .myra ,,i will die of happiness then ..only you get why i wrote thought of the day ..lol ..you know i was like when in end all were fuming in anger seeing arjun and rasam in negative roles ,…this thought will calm them ..lol ..haha ajeeb and tharki family and dear will try to update all soon ..love u take care ..keep smiling

      • Myra

        |Registered Member

        Sammy babe, i understood the second i read it……alag hi level ki family thi inki 😂 …..and u know, my best friend’s name is samridhi and i call her sammy…..so whenever i see your name….i think her…lol 😜

  12. Jessie

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    Yaar sammy.. u almost gave a attack! Lol..Since u were so sure of rotten tomatoes n eggs I was sure u framed Arjun as villan.. and I read ur reply 2 Rosie in Lost patience saying u booked for a planet.. I thought some thing bad on Rads too.. lol!! U occupied my mind… I thought something like ex lover for Rads n Arjun hired someone 2 kill..but.. wait ..what.. Arjun Ra*ed raina…💔God.. u made a him Absolutely perfect 4 tat character.. when he explains tat 18 yr boy scene..he said time pass…!!??!!! Have u seen zandu balm Ad.. tat 10 heads one.. like wise I felt when I read abt sam n Rads.. Rads n Sam describing Neil !! I was like.. is it Rads.. Sammyyy.. This is excellent.. Marriage contract..! Arjun wud hv killed Rads if she don’t listen in land line.. lol! Perfect villan..
    And Ray n Neil.. Fab..! Explanation for dices n Rasam👌. I know u wont spare Riddhi.. so I was waiting .. Absolutely Fantastic plot!! Every time Neil asking who appointed u as chief.. lol..very funny .. some one else get credit..!! Oh.my.. tats good..and tat pizza order n neil faints n then 2 washroom .. super.. He rocked..chalo.. Will send u good tomatoes n eggs make nice masala omelette.. rotten won’t taste well..lol… wat happens when characterless ppl get money power.. this is what happens…!!. Eager 4 ur updates…especially desperate silence n dead patient..!
    Loads of love.. TC

    • Sammy


      haha perfect villain he is …i thought in your dp is armaan mallik but write now i am seeing it clearly it’s arjun ..lol funny me …oh god my whole story is almost summarize by you ..thanks jeesie deryar you are such a sweetheart ..love dear and will try to update all ffs soon ..keep smiling tc

  13. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    OMG😯😮😧😨😐😱😲😵😳😟😰…this is really shocking twist…i read it so many times to confirm that arjun,rads n Sam r negative … I know u r alrounder but u made all of them too alrounders…lol..but it’s really superb …so many twists n finally ridhima helped them..so nice.. Rasam means rads,arjun n Sam …woww.. Rads n sam..they r really so cruel in this story ..the way they explained the entire plan n helping arjun in killing raina…. Lol…that was really shocking…ray n Neil convoy’s r really funny. Waiting for updates of all our ff’s. What happened to dead patient after arjun was out of coma…luv u…tc…

    • Sammy


      all kinds of reactions ..haha lakshmi dear thanks for such a lovely comment and love u dear tc ..and will try to update dead patient soon ..it will going to be last ..keep smiling

  14. neetz

    Oh my god ..i was not even blinking while reading… omg omg it was amazing dear..awsome mindblowing ..lol m not getting words dear…if u r gonna write ss lyk this then i want u to write ss only 😀

    • Sammy


      thanks neetz for such a lovely comment ..haha ..only ss writing ..hehe ..well i think i am not able to write ss further ..bcoz of less time i am getting these days ..but thanks dear ..love u tc

  15. hashmi rayana

    I love uuu sammy .what a story. U r a brilliant writer. What to say i think some things are better untold. I dont hav any words to say my feelings. Just keep writing. I wil follow u where ever get ur stories

  16. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dude….. I really was shocked to see radhika in negative shade…. I loved that part….. Neil and s love at first sight was really unexpected….. I loved the episode…..

  17. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Sammy kya hit mara …siddhe boundary paar….now I really don’t have words…kuddos girl I am your fan 😀 love u

    • Sammy


      gauri di you are really awesome ..what a comment ..typical UP style wala …i don’t know whether you are from UP or not . thanks for the lovely comment .love di and pls update DPO soon ..tc keep smiling

  18. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Sammy, had a doubt on Radhika and Arjun but didn’t think that Sam would be in it too. You should right more stories like this. This was an amazing story n I loved it very much.

    • Sammy


      thanks gianna dear ..making all villians in the story ..people will kill me ..but thanks for your lovely comment …love u tc

  19. pranathi

    i loved the plot from the bottom of of my heart.but some what disappointed to know that our lovely arjun,radhika nd sam have negative characters.but it was a good twist.
    loved neil.keep writing nd keep rocking

    • Sammy


      pranathi ..when i was writing this ..i considered them only as characters ..didn’t got attached ..hehe ..thank you ..that you like the plot ..love u and keep smiling

  20. Adu.nupur

    |Registered Member

    Sammy Baapre!!!!

    Itna zor ka jhatka! I ll seriously get a heart attack and u ll get the news in big headlines that a crazy girl died because of the amazing twist in the story in Sammy’s story xD

    Seriously never ever expected Ar-Sam-Rad to be the culprits. To believe that this is actually true I read all the parts again. Woah dear! You are seriously achieving one milestone after the other. First intense, now mystery:) Do consider writing a book someday, I would love to read it:)
    Lots of love and big hugs for u:)

    • Sammy


      lol ..now i am on floor ..news flash ..sammy died becoz of adu’s comment ..haha so funny ,..thanks adu for lovely comment ..well writing a book …i am still learning ..but thanks dear ..love u too tc

  21. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Sammy what r u yaar… 🙂 I mean this is rocking dear…Rads Arjun and Sam OMG never expected Dem in this shade…Though had a doubt on ArDhika bt was not expecting this way… Neil he was a strong character here…loved the story very very much dear..U r an amazing writer…waiting to read many more stories from u…plz update dead patient and condition reversed soon else will surely shower u wid rotten eggs and tomatoes.. 😉 😜 loads of love 🙂

    • Sammy


      haha ritu ..dear ..i am laughing now reading your comment ..thanks for the lovely comment dear ..and i will try to update all ffs soon ..love u keep smiling ..tc

  22. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Sammy my sweety!!Firstly so sorry for the late comment,caught up with other works.. 🙁 Woah!!What an ending man!!Seriously all are negative,I just loved it..Sammy,I just love you yaar..Write more on this genre naa.. 😀 Loads of love and keep smiling.. 🙂

    • Sammy


      thanks sweetie dear ..no need to apologise honey …haha all negative ..i also enjoyed while writing this ..more on this theme well all will kill me then for making them negative again ..thanks for a lovely comment ..love u too dear …and keep smiling tc

  23. Roma

    Omg sammyyyyy. ..wowwww. ..I’m clean bold…what was this..twist like a superbbbb….arjun rads n sam all culprits. ..neil solved the mystery n ridhima helped….wow…it was totally really outstanding narration n out of the world ss. ..Kudos my sweeetheart…I salute your writing skills…I couldn’t even imagine that ardhika n sam will get this type of twisted roles. ..marriage n extra affairs, rape n murder, gay n show down for public for the property. ..wowwww awesome plot n very unique story. ..I’m just speechless n overwhelmed…you’re such a precious gem…wonderful n awesoooooome writer….I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh sammyyyyy. ..a big applause for you my dearrrrr. ..this was totally brilliant. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug and lots of kisses. .. 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

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