A Case ( 3 shots) (mmz) part-2


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“why I am thinking that the culprit is someone near to them” shirijit spoke to Neil. He saw him playing with dices.

Neil laughed on hearing his statement. “ culprit is always near ..and it’s a fact ..don’t know who made you head of crime branch” he spoke and rolled his eyes.

Shirijit glared him and he too started laughing. “ so ,..any progress” shrijit asked him. “ yes ..Mrs Mehra …is practicing black magic ..in that house” Neil replied curtly. “ to save his only son ..” he completed further.

“ now ..where are you going” shirijit asked him.

“ Mehra mansion.” Neil said in a huff . He took his jacket and moved out.

Neil took out a note from his pocket. “ bewARe of WOLVEs” . Neil twisted and turned the note upside down. He was confused . “ if it is the warning note …then why seven letters are highlighted more…looks like they are cut- out from some newspaper or magazine.” . He tried to get some clue . He blinked when something striked in his mind.

He reached the mehra mansion. He was walking in the corridor when he saw Sam fighting with someone. Neil hided so that he can listen their conversation.

“Yash …I know you don’t love me …but we are engaged ….atleast for the sake of that relation ..can you pls help me to make Mom stable” . Sam asked yash . Yash was her fiancé.

He nodded. “ once Arjun come back ..then I will called off this engagement” he spoke and started moving towards the door. Neil hided more when he heard his footsteps near the door. He left without looking back.

Neil looked inside the room. He saw Sam crying sitting on her knees. He coughed to gain her attention .

“ I think ..your life is in danger..so you need to be more cautious..” he adviced her . Sam looked him with her eyes filled with tears. She nodded. His gaze got fixed on her swollen eyelids. Neil clenched his fist. He moved towards her and hugged her tightly rubbing her back.

Sam rubbed her nose on his shoulder. “ let me die.. My life is already messed up” she murmured. He inhaled her lilac scent and wrapped his arm around her waist tightly. He closed his eyes.
“ so Sam if he don’t love you .. Then why are you getting married to him” he asked her.

Sam tucked her hair strands behind her ears. “ yash’s mother liked me very much ..so she is forcing him to get married to me” . She replied.
Neil chuckled .

Sam gave him an impossible look. “ what’s so funny in this????”. She shouted.

“ if he can’t break this marriage .;.then you can break it” . He spoke and then got surprised seeing her nodding in negative. “ I love him ..and I will not break this marriage”. She spoke softly.

He laughed hearing her answer. “ if I want ..i can end your infatuation in two minutes.” he spoke and winked towards her. “ how” she asked him folding her arms upto her chest. “ kiss me once ..and you will forget the touch of the men present in your life” said Neil and a seducing smile appeared on his lips.

Sam was shocked.

“ behave yourself” said Sam fiercely. She picked up the vase to hit him. “ how dare you” she shouted. Neil hold her and pulled her closer. “ think about your brother” he whispered in her ears . She moved back.

“ stay in your limits” she warned him and stomped out of her room. Neil watched her leaving the room.

He was about to move from there when he saw something which attracted him . A beautiful silver bracelet was kept in her room. “ Sam is allergic to silver ..then this bracelet” he mumbled.

Neil put the bracelet inside his pocket. “ one thing cannot be hidden by any culprit.. His redemption.” said Neil.

He put the bracelet back on the table. Neil rubbed his thumb on his nose. “ the murder spot”. He thought.
Neil is going through some facts of the case.

“ If Arjun stabbed Radhika ..then there should be some blood as according to police reports ..he himself was found unconscious…then he cannot throw the body from the cliff..or may be after throwing the body he acted to be unconscious ..but doctors confirmed it that he was unconscious at the time…or what if arjun after throwing her body had got slipped and after collision of his head with some stone he had gotten unconscious. ..f**k man so many possibilities” he hold his head.

Neil opened his tab . He searched something on his tab. “ Scandals related to Arjun Mehra”.

The results displayed on his screen .

He opened one website . “ Arjun Mehra ..the ruthless business tycoon is the person ..who is always surrounded by womens, scandals , and much more. One can easily spot him getting cozy to business womans of his rival company , or his hot secretaries.

Recently he got married to a beautiful employee of his company. Radhika Mishra who is ten years younger to Arjun. Arjun mehra who was dating Mahira Siddiqui two months back had officially called off his relation with her a month ago.

Here are some pics which he shared where he and his wife are found smooching on his sister’s birthday.” . Neil who was reading the article chuckled seeing the pics of Arjun and Radhika.

“ I need to go through some recent updates on him ..this was updated an year back” said Neil.

He was going through the Award winning speech given by Arjun two months back. “ Raina dutta ..secretary of Arjun..why is he giving her so much credit for his business profits instead of appreciating the whole team heartily. ..i need to talk this Raina dutta” he mumbled.

“ AM ..group of industries ..i am coming” said Neil .

He get inside his car and his gaze fall on a pink color note. He was confused there was a puzzle in it. “ the innocent cliff is a game, the walls had got paint, she is sleeping peacefully, you have two eyes to safe” . Neil was pulling his hair now.

He didn’t look here and there. He know that the one who kept the note must not be around him.

His trance got broken when his phone buzzed. “ yeah Ray blurt it out” he spoke.

“ I am in jail’s mess now” Ray spoke lowering his tone at the end of his reply.

“ Wtf Ray ..what are you doing there???” Neil asked all irritated.

“ I have to tell you something” said Ray.

“ hmm ..i am listening” Neil replied.

“ Arjun Mehra ….is all different.. I saw him touching an 18 old boy in a little different way” Ray spoke.

Neil lil stiffened . “ Fine” said Neil. “ not only this .. I heard that he do masturbation at mid- night” said Ray . Neil took a sigh. Now he was thinking why scandals are tagged always with Arjun Mehra “ Anything else” asked Neil.

“ yeah ..i am just thinking how he passed all test where he was hallucinated badly..i know department head inspector A. shinde had taken all his tests personally , but how he cleared all without blurting out anything except one” asked Ray.

“ I killed my wife” said both of them together.

“ keep your eyes on Shinde ..you know the way he was behaving when I met him, was different , weird, his eyes were lacking confidence , seems like he is hiding something ,..i want you to keep a track on his moves, and also inform me if you find something unusual ..in his family too.” asked Neil .

He started his car and drove off pacing its speed. “ trini … mehra office mam” said Neil and smiled fully.
“ turn left ..sir” a robotic voice came from the navigation app in his car.
Neil changed his identity . He bribed a canteen worker and entered in the office. Neil changed his clothes again in men’s washroom and wore white shirt and black pants. Now he was looking like an office employee.

His gaze was fixed on the group who was all chatting and laughing. “Teji,Zubin,Kritika,Aashna,bonnie..get ready to be questioned by Adam Roger Collins” . He got up and went near the table where all were busy.

He coughed to gain their attention. “ hi iam Adam ..financial department ..newly joined” he extended his hand towards them. All looked towards him confused. “ hi ..Adam ..iam Kritika” said kritika and rested her palm on his .

Zubin broke their eye lock. “ So Mr Adam .. What’s the reason to join Mehra industries” said Zubin who was sipping his coffee. “ ahh.. Who does leave the opportunity to work here.. Mehra industries” said Neil and winked towards Aashna. She blushed and lowered her eyes. They all introduced themselves to him.

“ so how you like our office???” asked Teji .

“ I didn’t saw it completely ..a guy told me that I can ask to Raina Dutta for any help” Neil replied and sat on the chair.

All looked each other. Their expressions clearly depict that they all were perplexed by his answer. “ you are kidding right??” said bonnie .

“ no” said Neil while eating his burger.

“ then someone fooled you ..actually Raina is no more an employee of our company….she eloped last month from her house with her boyfriend” said kritika .

“ with whom she eloped??” asked Neil quickly . He then composed himself .

“ we don’t know ..” said Zubin. “ and neither her parents” said Teji .

“ She was really sweet .. I can’t believe that she can ditch her parents” said Aashna . She got up and rushed outside the canteen .

“ what’s wrong” asked Neil .

“ Raina and Aashna were close friends ..so Aashna can’t control herself whenever she heard the name ‘ Raina Dutta’ said kritika and rolled her eyes. Neil excused himself from them . He moved towards the ladies washroom .

“ Aashna open the door ..its me Adam” said Neil and bang the door with his fist. The door opened after a minute and Neil was pulled inside. Aashna hugged him and started crying more.

Neil started observing the place . He was not interested in wiping her tears.

Aashna looked towards him with teary eyes. “ she was my best friend ..and she didn’t even bothered to tell me about her plans” said Aashna . She was sobbing badly.
Neil cupped her face. “ trust me everything will get fine” .

Aashna looked in his green eyes. She bring her face close to him and closed her eyes. Neil looked towards her lips . He kissed her softly. She turned her face. Her eyes opened little .

Neil pinned her to the wall and lifted her up . She quickly started opening his shirt. He opened her shirt . He smirked seeing her chest moving up and down.

“ when did you last meet your friend” asked Neil . Her fingers were moving in his hair.

“ in the office .. When she was about to leave for any meeting in cliff View hotel” she murmured all lost in the proximity . Neil closed the buttons of her shirt . He kissed her again pulling her hair.
Aashna opened her eyes after a minute and didn’t found him in the washroom . She hurriedly moved out of the washroom reminiscing the wild kiss happened few minutes ago.
“ Ray .. Meet me soon …our place” said Neil on his cell phone. He disconnected the call.

Neil get inside his car. He saw another note near his leg . He pulled his hair when he got another puzzle in it . “ Time is winning, her soul is yearning…break it with his pride…and get the light” .

“ the F**k someone is so desperate to play this game” muttered Neil .

The meet at Malibu:-

He lit his cigarette. “ any news regarding shinde” asked Neil.

“ yeah….i think his daughter is abducted by someone” said Ray.

“ the hell …it is not a small thing” retorted Neil. He took all the three notes and kept on the table.

“ bewARe of WOLVEs.. The first and the threat note” said Neil . He started joining words and join to form an answer.

“ its literal Neil, beware of the everyone around …” said Ray.

“ no” said Neil Curtly.

“ what do you mean” asked Ray.

“ its simple ..AR ..means Arjun…so someone just wanted to say that Arjun is a culprit..that’s why AR and WOLVE is highlighted.” said Neil.

“ Are you sure” asked Shrirjit Ray.

“ yeah ..i am 99.95678% sure” replied Neil. Ray glared him . “ Can’t you be serious for a minute” said Ray .

“ I didn’t fall in love ..that I should remain serious all the time” retorted Neil.

“ and what about the puzzle” asked Ray.

“ I am still clueless” replied Neil.

Neil picked his cap . “ lets go” said Neil.

“ where??” asked Ray.

“ well Arjun can pass all hallucinatic test …not shinde .. And I am going hotel” said Neil .

“ which hotel??” asked Ray.

“ Cliff View” said Neil and Smirked.
At Cliff View Hotel ( the nightmare)

Neil was sitting in the restaurant of the hotel . His eyes were glued on the Rolex watch he was wearing .

He stole it from someone in the parking area .

“ I am sorry honey , but its time for you to get disappear” mumbled Neil .

After few minutes there was chaos in the hotel .

“ somebody stole my baby , my watch , my darling , my cutie pie.. I don’t want to live on this planet now ..mummy I am coming” said Neil and took the knife in his hand .

He was surrounded by all waiters, and other staff.

“ Sir come with me, we will check the footage of here” said Manager.

“ who are you ..go and find my watch” said Neil.

“ sir Iam Riddhima Joshi..manager of this hotel ..pls come with me”

Neil was checking the footage with Riddhima . “ seems like Sir .. The watch is not taken by ..” while speaking she looked towards Neil but didn’t found him .

she turned her face left side and saw Neil smirking . Neil covered her mouth with his handkerchief and She got fainted .

“ Time to do some research” said Neil . He checked the footage of 6 th July . A month ago . “ Raina Dutta was last seen here only” . He murmured.
he listened the conversation between Raina and Riddhima .

“ I have to check the personal Suite of Arjun ..which is on 10 th floor” said Neil and looked towards Riddhima

“ Ahh now what to do with her” he thought. Neil make riddhima sit on the chair . “ take care of yourself girl” he mumbled and moved out .

Neil entered in the lift . A guard was there inside the lift. “ Sir which floor “ his gaze was fixed on the Rolex wore by Neil .

“ you are not allowed to take anyone on 10 th floor ..” said Neil . The guard nodded in positive . Neil took out his watch and make that guard wear it . “ now” asked Neil all smiling . The guard smirked.

Neil rolled his eyes . “ son of a stupid ass’” he muttered few curses.

Neil moved out of the lift . He moved towards Arjun’s suite.

He reached his suite . The floor was all empty . The cameras were not working . “ Strange this floor is isolated” .

He was surprised seeing the door of the suite controlled by code machine. “ what can be the code” he thought .

He clicked the red button first. “ Pls enter the code” he read the words flashed on the screen .

“ Arjun” he thought and typed.

“ error detected” shouted Neil. He then wiped his sweat .

“ Raina” he mumbled and typed.

“ error detected” murmured Neil little scared.

He unknowingly slid his hand in his pockets. He trance got broken when his fingers touched something in his pocket. He took out the dices.

“ RASAM” he mumbled . Neil clenched and unclenched his fist . After gathering his strength he typed RASAM. “ Password Accepted” . The door got opened . He entered in the suite. It was cleaned . Marbles were shining.
After an hour:-

Neil was scratching his head. He didn’t found anything in his suite .

Not even a single clue . “ f**k man there is nothing” he thought and decided to move out of the room .

Just then he stumbled and fall on the ground. The dices were on the floor, Neil got up and composed himself. He bend to pick up the dice when he halted seeing something . The Dices were arranged in a pattern .

They were depicting a word . His eyes widened seeing the word. ‘Body’ . He was now sweating .

“ its just a coincidence Neil “ . He picked up those but then he remembered the puzzle .

“ the innocent cliff is a game ..the walls had got paint” he murmured and touched the walls . It was looking like it got painted a month ago.

“ she is sleeping peacefully” said Neil and started checking walls . He pulled his hair and cursed himself .

Then he looked upwards . “ Freak man .. I have got two eyes to safe” . He spoke and looked on the chandelier on which there is a small sticker . ‘ be safe’ was written on it .
He looked around for the stick .

Good luck was on his side . He found a rod and started piercing the ceiling . In a minute the ceiling got a huge crack and was on the floor . It was fake created to hide something .

The something was on the floor. Neil rushed towards washroom to puke .

He come back and saw a dead body. He observed the clothes wrapped on it . Blood stained and torned .

“ Raina Dutta .. I got you” he mumbled all startled.

Precap:- Last shot
i know this was really boring ..but i will update my ffs soon .

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  1. Sammy this update was awesome. I like neil’s character very much. The suspense is eating my brain…. Plz plz plzzzz….. Update next part soon.

    1. Sammy

      Thanks jewel ….and will try to update it soon 🙂 🙂

  2. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Sammy

      Thanks kavina dear …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  3. oh god its amazing plz update last part soon

    1. Sammy

      Thanks ariya …will try to update it soon 🙂 🙂

  4. Interesting 🙂 pls update next part soon

    1. Sammy

      Thanks E mz fasa dear …will try to update it soon …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  5. Brin

    No it’s not boring, it’s very interesting, waiting for the next shot. 🙂

    1. Sammy

      Thanks di and will try to upstate last shot soon …keep smiling di 🙂 🙂

  6. Really amazing dear

    1. Sammy

      Thanks suvi dear ..keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  7. If this is boring then I don’t know what is interesting. Felt like watching a those crime detective series, felt the adrenaline rush that I don’t want it to end. ???? bravo bravo accept my congratulations. U r a genius Sammy, loved it n love u

    1. Sammy

      Getting appreciation from a writer like you is a big thing for me …thanks for such a lovely comment … love u a lot dear …and I am happy that u liked it …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  8. Killing suspense..its thrilling…l m a silent reader n I luv all ur ffs…plz dear update sooon

    1. Sammy

      Thanks shafeen ..for your lovely comments …and I am glad that you are enjoying it. .will try to update it soon .:-)

  9. N about u ur just awesum..who said it was boring it was thrilling..don’t underestimate urself dear

  10. Rossy

    Dare to say it boring laadoooo…u will see another side of me…like romance u proved best in mystery also…now m going to kill u if u will not update itsoon…suspense killed me…i think that raina must do something…so to keep rads safe Arjun took the blame on him..and 18 year boy;!! Is it radz???dice n riddles are nice..Yash also in picture…solve the mystery soon….btw m feeling like a detective now…just scratching my head….hehehe…update soooooooooooooooooon

    1. Sammy

      Rosie di whenever u scold me …I will always like god finally I got one sissy …who show so much right on me ..really di I don’t have any sister …but I always want a sister in my life ..that place is completed by you ..thank u so much ..and you are feeling like detective .. me too when I was writing it …love u a lot di and pls update reincranations .. waiting for neelkant ..keep smiling always 🙂 🙂

  11. Swathi

    Brilliant sammy.it’s very intresting. I’ll be waiting for next part.

    1. Sammy

      Thanks swathi …will try to update next soon 🙂 🙂

  12. Its very interesting…..please update soon…..waiting eagerly ….also for your other updates…..

    1. Sammy

      Thanks kalyani ….will try to update next soon 🙂 .

  13. Mind blowing Sammy ..m clueless what will happen next..I luved these types of mysterious stories.. Luv it very much ..Now m eagerly waiting for next update plzzz update soon..And Neil’s charctr to uffffff luv u neil

    1. Sammy

      Thanks amber for such a lovely comment ..and i will try to updatr next soon 🙂 🙂

  14. Sweetie

    Sammmyyyyyy my girllllll,I’m coming to you running for a hug for this absolutely wonderful shot..Raina is dead..Where is Radhika?I’ve so many questions running in my mind,if I start typing them,it will become a long comment,so waiting for the last shot.. 🙂

    About my next shot,you’ll see it posted by Friday if TU doesn’t irritate me on Thursday night.. 🙂 It is the next segment of my SS.. 😀

    Love you loads girl,keep writing such awesome stuff.. 🙂


    1. Sammy

      Thanks sweetie ..for such a lovely comment …you yourself is such a wonderful writer …and one more thing pls update the TWHS series here too … I am not on whattpad .. and I will try to uodats this one soon .. and happy very lated friendship. Day . .lol . Love u dear ..keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  15. awesome.sammy dear…………its not boring at all……. n when will u update lost patience yr ab intzar ni hota tussi kinna wait krwaoge yr……plz jldi update krdo…….luv u tc

    1. Sammy

      Thanks Amita dear ….and don’t worry I will try to update all soon 🙂 🙂

  16. Jessie

    Sammmmyyyyy… its fantastic.. awesome… what u found1 bore in it.. love ur dp Ardhika always.. this also so cute.. lovely…
    Many suspenses der.. woohoo.. so raina is killed.. who killed her…arjun is trying 2 hide something.. rasam is d code.. and someone frm outside watches Neil’s moves.n he openly1 gives d hints aginst Arjun.. why o why.. and Tat dr’s daughter 2 kidnapped.. seems my bp will shoot1 up 2 cliff’s height.. Arjun blames himself but the one who gives chits us aware of reality.. is it Radz.. n 18 yr boy n jail mess n ray.. god.. head spinning.. all interesting girl.. dare 2 call ur work a bore.. all curious n impatient 4 next shot.. pls post it ASAP .. hahahah pls dont take a long gap for last shot..
    Eager 4 ur updates n TC n loads of love.. Tata

    1. Sammy

      Thanks Jessie for such a lovely comment t .. and yeah the dp always ardhika …don’t worry dear in the end you will surely shower me with eggs …lol …and i will try to update next soon ..my lovely reader . Keep smiling and stay blessed 🙂 .

  17. mindblowing episode……….. interesting story .. as usual u r rocking ….thirlling …..is like a C.ID episode..where is radhu ? ..eagerly waiting next one…please update soon.tc love uuuuu.eagerly waiting u r lost patience.. please update ….madly miss u r ff ..

    1. Sammy

      Thanks subha …cid series …well they always have more twists and turns …buy still thanks for your lovely comment love I a lot dear .. keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  18. Lakshmi05

    Sammy…You think this is boring…great joke dear… Don’t say ur work is boring..??..okay.. I felt like reading about some Sherlock Holmes adventures… While reading ur story.deary… All those riddles,Neil’s investigation n lastly finding Raina’s dead body ..uff..super thrilling dear. Hope rads is fine… Nesam’s convo is nice?…n neil is great detective.. Will be waiting for next one… Update soon…luv u…tc..??

    1. Sammy

      Thanks lakshmi ..for such a lovely comment ..now I. On cloud nine … and don’t sorry everyone will be fine ..love I a lot dear …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  19. Gauri

    Sammy tum kya ho ….romance dhamal likthi ho suspense kamal likthi ho…. you are a urself one adventure …kamal kar ditha kudiye 🙂 love u

    1. Sammy

      Thanks gauri di for always motivating me …I am just learning only ..love u a lot di …keep smiling …and the last line kamal kar diya kudiye ..he he..thank u so much for the lovely comment 🙂 🙂

  20. Myra

    Sammy….this was out of the world……god! I am so jealous of your brains right now ? trust me, if you keep writing like this…i’ll fall in love with you soon ? this was marvellous….the mysteries…the puzzles…..raina ki body? I mean, radhika would be alive right? Arjun will meet radhika in the end…right?…..i dont know whats wrong with him…..why does he keep saying he killed her….

    And, neil toh boss player hai….sammy will break off with yash and will marry neil right? Aashna and neil…shittt ?

    Please please update quick…..the mystery is making me restless…
    Love you…take care ?

    1. Sammy

      Thanks Myra 🙂 . I am all laughing seeing your comment ..but if you fall for me ..I will not be able to run with you anywhere ..I am already married to SV dear .:-) 🙂 and she is a possessive hubby …lol and yeah all puzzles and mysteries will be solved …I can tell you one thing it will not be a love story …that is why lil different from other ffs 🙂 🙂

  21. Dipika

    Sammyyyyy this is so breathtaking… Marvelous yar..how could u say tht its boring ..omg neil ia reall flirt..haha..n wht raina too got killed…now i guess manager’s turn to be get intergote by neil..who is the killer..m really pulling my hair in excitement… Pls next shot soon..pls pretty pls…love u..

    1. Sammy

      Thanks deepu ….for such a lovely comment .. yeah Neil will always flirt and soon the killer will be out .after that everyone will shower me with rotten eggs and tomatoes …lol …love u dear …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  22. _Ritu

    Sammy dear it was stupendous 🙂 U r an all-rounder dear….whether it is romance, mystery comedy u r fabulous in all..now Raina is d one who is dead..then whr is Rads?? So many questions nd m scratching my head…plz plz plz post soon and dare u call it boring instead of Raina u will be there..lol ?? and I guess u kept d name Raina coz of Brahmarakshas right?? Love u..tc 🙂

    1. Sammy

      Thanks ritu dear …haha ..I wish I become raina of brahamakshas …hehe who will leave the chance to romance with aham ..lol …and thanks for calling me all -rounder …love u a lot dear …and pls update your revenge saga …waiting for it 🙂 🙂

  23. Jnana

    This is really boring that I read it for five times…. One thing if your update is boring then I must be mad… If not your update is interesting…. Option left to you to think what you want…. But I loved your update. But neil kissing someone…. No no please…. It should always be ardhika and nesam only……

    1. Sammy

      Thanks jnana .. lol you are normal but you forget that its me. .who is a crazy writer …and don’t worry dear ..after completing the shot ..you will surely shower me with rotten eggs . Lol . Well it will be different just one thing I can tell you ….you will not feel the pain of love ..because it is not a love story …its a murder mystery ..that is why little hatke from all my ffs and concept 🙂 🙂

  24. S.v

    Wifie im proud of u my lady. Dont u dare say that it was boring . It was extraordinary baby. Sorry for the late commentyaar ibstarted to read this update but finally finished now and dear i was reading again and againand now came back to normal . Wifie pls update the next part soon and condition reverse letter full of manmarziyan and doctor arjun of dead patient dear pls waiting for a long time . Love u lods and bear my hugs and tight kisses. Muhhaaaaaa

    1. Sammy

      No need to apologize 🙂 .husband is allowed to get late ….and thanks for the lovely comment and so much praising ..I am all blushing …love u a lot dear …keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  25. hashmi rayana

    It is awsom waiting for next one.pls do it fast eacjh time killing my brain thinking what happen next. Sammy really u r a brilliant writer .best of luck

    1. Sammy

      Thanks hashmi …for your lovely comment and I will try to update it soon 🙂 🙂

  26. Dev

    Sammy its an fab thriller n d ways an officrs mind goes…just fab
    Lovd d last part…n d rolex part..waiting 4 d last shot

    1. Sammy

      Thanks dev..and I am glad you like it ..will try to update last part soon 🙂 🙂

  27. Sreee

    OMG di where r u getting all these ideas..god all this puzzles ,my hair would go white overnight thinking of solving them…poor neil?…arjun disguisting..and with raina, i fainted…gish didi…u r giving me fraquent highly charged heartattacks…hope i wil survive the remaing ones in the last shot..and neil ,he acts so naughty in this situation too?…am so waiting for it di..sorry for my late coment…muahh…love u

    1. Sammy

      Don’t apologise lil one …and pls take care of yourself lol. . And where do I get these ideas only go knows about them .. thanks for yiuf lovely comment and waiting for my pineapple ..love u too dear and keep smiling 🙂 🙂

  28. Roma

    Sammyyyyy my dearrr …it’s very interesting n unique. …very very good story…I’m loving it sooo muchhhhhh. …neil is very brilliant. ..n someone giving him clues…I’m also curious to solve this mystery. …is rads really dead, n arjun killed her…his weird behavior…..n his scandals r very strange. …keep it up honeyyy …..love you loads ….muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

    1. Sammy

      thanks roma di for your lovely comment… love u a lot di ..muaahhh ..thanks for always motivating me ..keep smiling

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