Only those who care about u can hear u when ur quiet (OS on DevAkshi) Part 1


Hi there people,
I’m Bharti hope u all remember me I’m the writer of love is limitless. I’m back with an OS. Hope u all enjoy it and like it and silent readers comment.
Let’s start….

The story starts with a girl(Sonakshi) taking blessings from her mom(Asha)
Asha : Beta hope u get a job in ur favourite company
Elena : Haan tu kabse is interview ke liye tadap rahi hai(Yes from when u’re dying to do this interview)
Sona : Yeh baat toh sahi hai(Yes ur right)
Sona leaves for the company
Sona : My dream Ishwari textiles
She enters the company and enters Dev’s cabin
Tina : Ma’am where r u going
Sona : Today is my interview with Mr. Dev Dixit
Tina : Ok u may enter
In Dev’s cabin
Dev : Hmmm………U have very good qualifications Ms. Bose
Sona : Thank u sir
Dev : So u’ll get the job of junior designer
Sona : Thanks u sir
Dev : U can leave now and for work tomorrow
She runs to home in happiness
Sona : Ma ma ma
Asha : Kya hua(What happened)
Sona : Ma I got the job
Asha : Wah beta tujhe toh job milna tha akhir beti kiski hai(Wow dear u had to get a job after all whose daughter u are)
Elena : Ma yeh puchiye behn kiski hai(mom ask her whose sister is she)
They all laugh. Next day Dev calls Sona
Dev : Ms. Bose I need u to get a driver for me and it’s an order
Sona : But sir
Dev cuts the phone
Sona : Obhodro from where do I get a driver……..Idea
Sona reaches Dev’s house
Dev : Where is the driver
Sona : First sit
Sona sit’s in the drivers seat
Dev : Y r u sitting here
Sona : Because I will drive a car and I won’t get any driver in such a short notice
Dev : Ok but drive slowly

Sona starts after driving for sometime she stops
Dev : Y did u stop
Sona : I’m getting sleep and want tea, or I will make an accident
Dev : Fine
She gets down but forgets to apply hand break while drinking tea she sees the car moving backwards and gets shocked and Dev sees her puzzled then a noise comes and everybody turns towards the noise and Dev and Sona see the car fallen in the jungle down the mountains
Dev : U didn’t apply hand breaks
Sona : I know how to park a car but maybe forgot to apply hand breaks
Dev : Shayad shayad abhi bhi shauck hai ki shayad hand breaks lagana bhul gayi(Maybe maybe now also u have a doubt that u forgot to apply the hand breaks)
Sona : Sorry
Dev : By saying sorry the car will come back. Now call somebody from office for help
Sona : I can’t because the mobile is in the car
Dev gets angry
Dev : Now come we’ll go in the jungle and find the car
After 2-3 hours they find the car and it fixed

So this was the first part
Comment please good or bad but I want the silent readers to comment this time

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  1. Rithu2089

    Awesomely awesome Bharti ???

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks Rithu

  2. Welcome back…..???……it was awesome and amazing????❤?????❤?…..but os is of how many parts……???????

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks maleeha
      the os is of 2 parts?

  3. Good one but too short

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks princess

  4. AGn, WICM BCK! Agn, AWsmmmmm???……………

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks a lot nikki

  5. It was so good n interesting…….

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks a lot anu

  6. Manya

    Post soon
    Love love❣❤️

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks alot ayushi

  7. Niki645

    It was amazing!!!!!

  8. Aaru

    Nice start, but it’s of how many parts..

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks aaru
      it is of 2 parts?

  9. Ria

    Heya Bharti,
    This part was amazing. Waiting for the next one.

    Loads of love.❤

    1. Bharti123456

      Thank you so much ria ?

  10. Rockzzzzzz

    Ur back..great and the is was short but good…waiting for the next part…truly saying it was funny,I mean sona didnt apply handbreaks,car went to the jungle….i enjoyed reading it??

    1. Bharti123456

      Thanks pari
      I agree with the funny part because when I read even I was laughing?

  11. Hey Bharti di!
    Firt of all, I’m extremely sorry for my terribly late comment! Had been down with fever..
    Coming to the first part of the OS, it was soooo damn majestic!
    Loved each and every scene of it!
    Please post the next one really soon!
    Love ya!<3

    1. Bharti123456

      thanks anshita posting soon

  12. Erina

    Awesomeeeee epi bharti but dear y kisi show se milta julta hai kya……
    Anyways i’m happy to see u back again ??????????????

    1. Bharti123456

      Thanks erina
      About the show its sort of same

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