The Captives – Five Shots ~ Ria (Chapter 4)

The Captives – Five Shots
Chapter 4

A/N: Thank you for your comments previously.

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Chapter 3
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Twinkle and Kunj had been peacefully sleeping in each other’s embrace and had been cherishing their moments of togetherness all this time. They both parted after sometime which seemed only like a minute. They both looked at each other with the tears rolling down their cheeks and smiled at each other. After a while Twinkle stood up and helped Kunj to get up as well. He stood with much difficulty and Twinkle instantly gave him support.

Yuvraj came to them with Mahi in his arms who was in a semi-concious state. He looked at Twinkle and smiled at her thinking that finally they had achieved what they’d been trying to do since the past one year. Kunj moved his hand away from Twinkle’s shoulder and walked towards Yuvraj struggling. Twinkle requested Kunj to listen to her for once, but he wasn’t ready to listen to any of her explanations. He ignored all her requests and pleadings and walked towards Yuvraj who looked at him nervously. He asked Kunj to listen to him once, but Kunj ignored everyone and asked him to make Mahi stand. Twinkle ran over to Mahi to give her the support and requested Kunj to not do anything without knowing. Kunj ignored her and tightly hugged Yuvraj. All of them remained shocked by the sudden action of his. Yuvraj hugged him back after a while and they pulled back after a minute or so.

Twinkle and Mahi smiled looking at them and Kunj asked Yuvraj to forgive him for not believing him two years ago when he tried to save him. He told them about how Anita Luthra had confessed everything in front of him and he had secretly recorded her confessions when he wasn’t given any doses in particular. Yuvraj and Twinkle quickly asked him to hand them the confessions so that they could get her arrested. He handed them the recording, but sighed thinking that he had no clues of her being involved in Mahi’s attempted murder.

Everyone seemed disappointed and stood there thinking how to make Anita Luthra confess her crimes when they heard someone shooting in the air. Mahi clenched her firsts tightly while everyone looked shocked towards the entrance. Anita Luthra walked inside laughing and said that now she had three captives instead of two. The four of them looked at each other when Yuvraj started laughing along with her. Twinkle, Kunj and Mahi looked at him shocked as he walked past them and stood beside his mother, Anita Luthra.

He asked them whether they had thought if he had actually turned a good person. Everyone continued looking at him rather shocked and clueless. Twinkle couldn’t believe her eyes. She couldn’t believe that the person with whom she had been working and planning for the past one year was actually with her enemy, Anita Luthra. Twinkle told him that how much she trusted him and respected him for improving so much, but she was wrong. She told him that a person like him can never improve.

He walked towards her and caressing Twinkle’s face with the gun told that she was right. He could never improve and he could never forget loving her. Twinkle jerked away his hand in disgust and asked him to stay away. He walked behind and fakely apologised to her. He told his mom that it’d be better if he shot Twinkle because Mahi and Kunj were already unfit and it won’t be a big task to tie them up and inject them again.

Kunj shouted telling him not to do anything and stood in front of Twinkle to protect her. Yuvraj told Anita Luthra to control Kunj and Mahi so that he could do his work properly. She walked past Yuvraj to move Kunj away so that Yuvraj could complete his work when Yuvraj shot her on her right leg. Anita Luthra turned around shocked to look at Yuvraj and fell down on the floor. Everyone stood there confused and clueless when Yuvraj shot his left hand.

Mahi called out Yuvraj’s name and ran to his help. Anita Luthra shouted that he had betrayed her. He had promised to help her in executing her plans, but he betrayed her. She told him that she was doing everything for him so that he could get Twinkle in his life. Yuvraj in a choked voice told her mom that Twinkle had always been his obsession and not love. He understood what love was when he spent time with Mahi and now he wanted Mahi in her life. Anita Luthra shouted at him telling that he had become mad staying with the Sarnas and Tanejas.

Yuvraj looked away as the police entered and arrested Anita Luthra. He looked at her teary eyed, but she had to bear the punishment for whatever she had done. Meanwhile, Mahi hit his chest and asked him what was the need for him to shoot himself. He smiled and holding on to her hands replied that it was just an act of self defence or else the police would’ve arrested him too. Mahi freed her hands and taking out his handkerchief tied it around his wound. She complained that why doesn’t he understand that she loves him and when he’s hurt, it hurts her too.

Yuvraj smiled and pulling her close told that he loved her too. Mahi looked at him shocked as Twinkle and Kunj smiled at each other. Mahi had finally confessed to Yuvraj that she loved him even if it was an indirect confession. He pulled her into a tight hug making her blush instantly. She too hugged him back after a while rather hesitantly. Kunj slid his hands into Twinkle’s and entwining them, the two of them confessed their love for each other yet again.

45 comments

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Kanchi,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the next chapter is updated. Try checking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Supriya,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. The next one has been updated; try checking it out.

      By the way, I’ve no FFs pending from my side. I discontinued “I Love You” (Comeback) a few days ago and now, I might not be writing any FFs anymore.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Kaira,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this. Well, the next chapter has been updated; try checking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

  1. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Hey
    Ots just amazing 😍😍😍😍lovey. Finally anita is artested and twinj will be together. I am soo happy. Love dit.
    U r amazing
    Sweetheart what is the age of twinj daughter????will u show some twinj and their daughters moments. Plzzzzz show them too.
    Plz post soon
    Love u😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      This was short? Seriously? This is the longest update I’ve written for this story😂😂

      Anyway, the next chapter has been updated; try checking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

  2. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Dis was superb amazing pehle I’m also shocked by kunj behaviour
    N today I liked n loved two couples
    It was superb amazing loved it dear n love u

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ramya,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Haha.. I thought you all will bash me up for such a boring update.
      Anyway, the next chapter is updated; try checking it out.

      Love you too dear!!💕

  3. Komal123

    |Registered Member

    First of all the chapter was so shocking!
    I really really really thought yuvraj betrayed them again!
    But it was all his plan!
    Wow what a mastermind he is!
    Offcourse because he was villain first and villians always are masterminds!
    Overall I love the chapter!
    Post soon!
    Xoxoxo

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Komal,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Haha..I am the mastermind and not him😎 Just kidding😂

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. No, this wasn’t the end. The next chapter has been updated; try checking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

  4. SarahKhan

    |Registered Member

    Oh my God Ria. How can you be so perfect at writing. Like I swear, you’ve never ever failed to impress the readers. I’m so glad that I finally registered myself on TU as I won’t have to resist myself from commenting on your ffs anymore. What a great writer you are!

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sarah,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad that you liked this chapter. Also, I’m happy that you’ve registered yourself now and you’ll be commenting on all the FFs from now on.😁

      Regards,
      Ria

  5. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Hey idiot,
    This was incredible. So many twist and turns just in one chapter? Woah! However, it surely was a short update so write a longer one next time! Anyway, everything is okay now so what’s next? I’m excited to know what you’ve kept in store for us. Post real soon!

    Will be waiting,
    Love you! x 💕

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Stupid,
      Thank you so much baby!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, this one surely did have a few twists and turns, but what to do! You need to have a criminal mind as well to tackle the villains.

      Loads of love💕

  6. Manvi

    😍😍😍😍 finally…. everything is sorted….☺☺☺….
    And yet again an awesome episode 😊😊
    Brilliant it was☺☺
    Post next soon!!!!!

  7. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Haye! UV ki itne cute cute harkatein mujhe maar hi daalenge!
    It was so well sculpted! Bravo!!!
    At one point i really thought that UV had turned negative😛
    But seriously loved it!!!
    But i guess…i love u more sweetie pie!
    😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ayu,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Ab kya karein! Yuvi hai hi kaatilaana😉 Just kidding😂

      Well, you know what! When I was writing, I too thought Yuvi had turned negative😂😂

      Love you too sweetheart!!❤

  8. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Heya ria…this episode is amazing and shocking…first I thought Kunj would scold uv n not forgive him then I thought uv cheated everyone…but glad that nothing like this happened…hoping for some TwiNj scenes with their daughter and family…post next soon…

    #love you 😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the next chapter has been updated; try checking it out.

      Love you too!!❤

  9. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Hey debo-debos-debosmita di…well that’s boring…Ria is better !!!! 😂😂
    Hey Ria di…
    So may twists…that was lovely…I fell for it..
    I felt that uv was negative but that was beautifully described…I loved it…
    Well 3 episodes remaining in total..try Posting soon…
    Love u… Adya

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Adya,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the next one has been updated.

      Well, 3 episodes of what? I don’t get you. Please do tell me what are you talking about.

      Love you too!!❤

      • Adya

        |Registered Member

        U told me ri8 that ILY will go more 2 episode and this captive 1 epi..in total 3..
        Now please don’t tell me ILY is finished I’ll kill u..
        OK hope u understand

  10. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    You are full of twists and turns…Like hoe do you manage to do so … I don’t have any words to praise you … The twist you added was amazingly amazing or maybe perfectly perfect !!

    Amazing!!

    You made me fall for Yuvraaj, once again 😉 My all time favorite villain 😛

    And when are you posting your KRPKAB FF?

    Also I hope that the last part will cross all boundaries of creativity 🙂

    Keep writing…Loads of love and support ♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter and the twist too. Haha.. Glad you fell for Yuvraj through my writing.😉

      The KRPKAB FF is probably going to be discontinued because of lack of time. Sorry about that.

      Love you too!!❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey SidMin,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the next one has been updated; try chrcking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Aanya,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. The next one has been updated; try checking it out.

      Regards,
      Ria

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