The Captives – Five Shots ~ Ria (Chapter 3)

The Captives – Five Shots
Chapter 3

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Chapter 2

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Twinkle quickly kneeled down at the place she had tripped over a while ago with Yuvraj beside her. Both of them had been equally shocked to find Kunj lying over there unconscious. Twinkle lifted up Kunj slightly and made his face rest on her lap while the tears slowly rolled down her cheeks. She was clueless whether she should have been at the moment for finding Kunj finally after the wait of two years or, be sad seeing his miserable condition.

Twinkle patted his cheeks trying to bring him back to his senses, but it was to no avail. She asked Yuvraj to get some water for Kunj who had been lying unconscious with blood stains all over his shirt. Yuvraj frantically searched the godown for some water, but there wasn’t the slightest chance of getting a drop of water. While he had been frantically searching for some water he stopped at a point and called out for Twinkle who had been crying vigorously sitting next to the love of her life. She feared to lose him again and may be this time her hopes could really be let down. She laid down Kunj carefully back to the floor and ran over to the direction from where Yuvraj had called for her.

She stood beside Yuvraj and meekly asked him what had happened. Yuvraj pointed out to something on the floor which made Twinkle being shocked completely yet again. She widened her eyes and both of them kept staring at the thing lying in front of them. Twinkle immediately sat down on the floor and lifted another person. ` Mahi open your eyes ` was all she muttered patting her cheeks. Yuvraj rushed out of the godown to get some water from the car forgetting about all their plans and secrets.

Yuvraj returned after a few minutes with two bottles full of water and handing one to Twinkle asked her to check out on Kunj who had been lying there unconscious because he didn’t want to face him. She enquired him about the same to which he replied that Kunj might still be mad at him as he had been two years ago and he didn’t want him to fall ill because of him right at the moment when they had a hope of setting everything right. Twinkle smiled over his practicality and rushed to Kunj who had still been lying on the floor unconscious in a feeble condition.

She made his head rest on her lap again and splashed a good amount of water on his face. He slowly opened his eyes and begged not to inject him any more drugs. Twinkle was elated to see her Kunj, but she was clueless about what he had been talking. He requested again not to inject him with another dose of drug and told that he had already been tired of this and had no wishes to live his life further ahead. Twinkle let the tears roll down her cheeks and immediately hugged Kunj to never let him go away. ` Twinkle? ` was the only thing that he was able to utter in this feeble condition of his. Twinkle ignored everything that had been going around her and just enjoyed the moment, the warmth, the touch that she had been missing since the past two years. Kunj slowly lifted his hands to hug her back, but everything seemed to be impossible in his feeble condition. He just smiled relishing the moment, the gentle touch and everything that he too had been missing these two years that had seemed like ages.

Twinkle pulled back after a while and both of them smiled looking at each other while they let the tears roll down their cheeks. ` I missed you ‘ was everything that Twinkle’s eyes had been conveying. Kunj fell down on the floor and tried to pull her over him while struggling and was able to do so after sometime. Twinkle just rested her head on his chest and he tiredly wrapped his arms around. They smiled to themselves and reminisced all their moments of togetherness closing their eyes. How they had wished time could just stop at this moment letting go all the worries of their life!

• • • • •

Hello, everyone! Thank you for all your comments and support. I’m trying to reply to all your comments individually and hope I don’t miss out on anyone. I’m extremely sorry if I do so and also, extremely sorry for replying late. I’d been going through a really busy week so, hope you all will understand.

Okay, I know I’m late this time, but believe me time isn’t permitting me at all. Anyway, there’s a bad news, I guess, for you all. I’ve discontinued the second season of my “I Love You” – A Twinj journey (Comeback) fan fiction. As I told before, I already am short of ideas and moreover, with no time to think I can’t write it.

Now, another news is that I’ll be staying back on this site as an author. I can’t promise for writing a fan fiction, but I’ll surely let you all read some of my short stories or one shots.

Anyway, how was this chapter? Was it an emotional mess? Please do drop down your thoughts below. I’d be eagerly waiting to know about your thoughts. Suggestions and criticisms are always welcome, but no abusive language.

Loads of love,
Ria

58 comments

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Simiyy,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad you liked it. The next update might be coming up in the next two days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  1. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    Tht ws so emotional…I guessed it ryt the captives are kunj n mahi….waiting fr the complete relevation of past….well u asked abt my ff bt it has been too long I had written n nw it has becm a history the title ws “if destiny wants we will meet” tht ws a few shots too..if u want u cn search fr it bt I dnt knw if it will b still der or nt…leave it tht ws nt as awesm as urs one….
    Btw wat class r u studying in ??
    Waiting to see u soon…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Loveleen di,
      Thank you for this beautiful comment! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, I guess most of you guessed the captives this time.

      Oh.. I remember seeing it on the page, but I don’t really remember what it was about. Di, it’s nothing like that. Every story and every author have their own charm. We can’t compare the stories or the authors with anyone/any other story.

      Anyway, I’m in 11th grade. You’re in college, right? Well, you can surely PM me anytime you want to talk. I would be more than pleased to talk to you.

      Regards,
      Ria

  2. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow wow yaar I just loved it kaash ap tashan e ishq ki real writer banjati aur jisha di dialogue writer banjati tho kitna Acha hota hai na well love you keep writing

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sohi,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad you’re liking this story. Jisha di ka toh samjhi lekin main? Writer? Seriously? So sweet of you.

      Regards,
      Ria

  3. tahu

    omg….ria it’s fabulous. ….wow..yrr …mujhe assa laga raha i am reading tu of tei….kunj…vapas aa gaya….loved it….so oooooo. ..muuccchhh❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤☺☺☺☺☺☺😊😊😊

  4. Komal123

    |Registered Member

    Ria this was amazing! I loved it to the core! The feeling of meeting your love after 2 years was so well potrayed! The chapter was a bit emotional for me and was so well depicted! As you aksed me to upload my ff I did! Enjoy☺! But this is so unfair after such long and such a short update! Also you are discontinuing yr ff😔

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Komal,
      Firstly, thank you so much for your precious comment. I’m glad you liked the chapter and also, the portrayal of the emotions.

      Okay, thank you so so much for updating your ff for me. Also, I’m sorry for not commenting on your last update. I was a bit busy and gradually forgot about it. I’ll comment on the next one.😀

      Yes, I discontinued it. Sorry for disappointing you, but had no other option.😔

      Regards,
      Ria

  5. Priya23

    Hi i m silent reader ur all ff and os… U r a brilliant and fabulous writer…..and what to say about u….love u a lots…. And the epi is vary emotional and heart touching… Luv it very much….plss post next epi soon…..by….tc……..

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Priya,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad that you’ve started commenting. One comment from a silent reader really motivates the writers to write better.

      Thank you so much for this precious comment. I’m glad you’ve read all my works and liked them all. Yes, this chapter was kind of emotional, but it was necessary to show it practical enough.

      Well, the next update might be coming up in the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  6. SidVee

    Wow this was amazing.. glad to know that mahi is alive too.. n twinj scene ws so lovely n emotional😢😢.. they finally net after 2 years.. what the hell did Anita do with these both 😒😒😒.. ughh.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sidvee,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Yes, this update was kind of emotional, but I couldn’t help. Well, about Anita. She’s really ugghh.. it’s already mentioned what she’s done up there. 😂

      The next update might be coming up in the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  7. Anam_sidhant

    |Registered Member

    Heya ria,u told me that u ll continue”I love you” ff and end it soon but u rdirectly discontinuing it😫!! Anyways its your wish can’t force you,as you know I am very acchi and shareef bacchi!😂
    Coming to this episode it was amazing man❤
    so emotional😪
    Just love the way you write ur ff so professionally😂😍
    can’t wait to see the revelation😫❤
    Post soon!xoxo

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Anam,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Yes, this update was kind of emotional, but couldn’t really help.

      Well, about “I Love You”, I’m really sorry for discontinuing it, but being left with little time to write and no ideas, I couldn’t continue it further ahead.😔

      Professionaly? Shareef and acchi? Tu? Chal na. Don’t joke around.😝😂

      The next update will be up within the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  8. Sara28

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria!

    So I guess my prediction about the captives were correct. I’m still really sad about ur ff as you may know, but I’m just glad that I will still be able to read ur writing. The episode was amazing and very emotional. Can’t wait to see what happens next. How will they save Kunj and Mahi? And of course can’t wait for Twinj’s reunion (when Kunj is healthy). Post soon. Love you! ❤️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Heya Sara,
      Firstly, where are you? I’m missing you.😢

      Okay, thank you so much for this comment!! I’m glad you liked the chapter. Yes, this update was kind of emotional, but couldn’t really help.

      The next update is coming up within two or three days. Stay tuned to know what happens next.

      Loads of love💕

  9. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Ria awesome episode loved it mera guess sahi nikla I’m so happy to see kunj n mahi alive n more happy dat twinj have United bt aaj ka emotional tha when I was imagining kunj in dat condition I am having tears pldsss asad

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ramya,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, looks like everyone guessed the captives correct. Yippee!!

      Ya, today’s chapter was kind of emotional, but couldn’t really help. Sorry for making you cry.

      Regards,
      Ria

  10. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Hmmm….
    What should I say ?? 3 chapters of this ss are over nd now only 2 are left. U have posted 2 episode of ur ff ILY …nd now only 2 are left…only 4 episodes in total nd then 😥😥😥😥OVER !!!!!!
    U ‘ll not write more coz u r lacking ideas ????? That’s really mean of u….
    Firstly…always ni… seldom but I expected this never from u….but now what to say…
    Well today the twinj scenes were amazing…it’s going on very nice…hope u post soon…
    Love u…

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Adya,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Aww..sorry na baby. Actually, in the little time I’ve to write stories, if I don’t have ideas in my mind, I can’t be writing. Sorry for it.😔

      The next one would be updated within the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Love you too!!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sushmitha,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, the chapter was quite emotional, but couldn’t really help.

      Regards,
      Ria

  11. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    😍😍finally!!! Lovebirds mil gye…but tune mujhe rulaya! Kyu rulaya?? It was such an emotional reunion…i could feel the despair they had…n somewhere i knew that the second captive was Mahi only! Glad to know that both the couples are going to be together again!!! Loads of love😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Ayu,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter.

      Maine rulaya tujhe? Itna emotional likh daala kya maine? Acha sorry. Actually, story ke liye zaruri tha😂

      Love you too!!

      Regards,
      Ria

  12. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it each and everything was so well described Love the way you right 🙂
    And I some what had thought that Kunj would have been kept captive with Mahi 🙂 Just Loved it 🙂 And if you have any new ideas please come back soon 🙂 Love you 🙂

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey SidMin,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Well, looks like everyone guessed the captives. Yippee!!

      Yeah. If I’ve any ideas, I’ll surely come back.😀

      Love you too!!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Aanya,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. The next one is coming up in the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  13. Maria

    |Registered Member

    This was so emotional. Loved it very much seriously! Splendid job! Kudos! I loved the way you described each and every thing. So keep it up!

    Love you

  14. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    😍😍woaaah finally milgaye. Mujhe rulaya tune. Kyun rulayaaaaa🙈🙈🙈🙈
    Tujhe pata hai kya its just out of the world. Mujhe pehle se pata thain kunj and mahi hie faase honege
    Loved it yaar
    I am sorry mien aur sab ki tarah long comments nahi likh paati 🙏🏻🙏🏻
    Love u💜

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Chiku,
      Sabse pehle toh no sorry. You don’t need to apologise for a short comment. Your comment matters.

      Well, thank you so much for commenting!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. I’m sorry for making you cry. I didn’t expect people to cry.😔

      Love you too!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

  15. Manvi

    Finally!! …. glad to see both kunj n mahi alive☺☺☺☺ awww the episode was sooo emotional…..😯….. it was written very brilliantly!!!! It was awesomeeeeeee☺☺☺

    N ya also…… m very happy yo know that u r not leaving this site☺☺ …….. post whenever u have tym but dont leave writing…… coz u r very brilliant😊😊😊😊 💕💕

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Manvi,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Yes, this update was emotional, but just to set things right it had to be.

      Well, surely. I’ll do write whenever I get time.

      Regards,
      Ria

  16. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    This was amazingly amazing! You rocked the emotions magnificently. The words were enough to make the readers land in the imaginary world of Sidmin/Twinj.

    And look my both guesses were correct about the captives, Kunj and Mahi, so treat toh banti hai 😉

    Just kidding 😛 Just post the next episode soon which will be the best treat for me 🙂

    Loads of love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
    ~Jaan

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much baccha!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Aww..Thank you for the appreciation.😀

      Well, about your treat, I guess the Raglak OS was enough or no?😉

      The next chapter is coming up in the next two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Regards,
      Ria

  17. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Heya idiot,
    This was amazing! So happy to see twinj back together! Well, as always (cause I’m so smart 😂) I had a clue that the other captive would be Mahi. I loved the emotional scene but how they gonna manage to take Mahi and Kunj out? I am damn curious.

    Honestly speaking, I had guessed it somewhere that you would discontinue writing I Love You ff cause I really know how busy you’ve recently been! But I am really glad to actually tried writing it up for us once but it’s fine as your studies surely should be your first priority! Though, I’ll really miss you as an author of ff (s) but glad you won’t quit writing. Moreover, if I’ll ever forget to check tu, please let me know whenever you’ll post one even when if it is of krpkab!

    Anyway, quickly update us with the next chapter of this. Plus, I remember your surprise plan so I still have hopes *fingerscrossed*

    iloveyou ❣️

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hi stupid,
      See, I am replying because I haven’t learnt to be so mean😔😂

      Well, thank you for this lovely comment and your longest comment😘!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Smart? And you? Are you dreaming or, what the hell are you doing?😂😂

      Aww..about the surprise, you know it all. Still let’s see if time permits or no.

      Love you too, baby!!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

  18. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey Riya! what to say yaar…now I’m speachless… u made me emotional in this epi yaar… I was imagining as I’m reading TEI’s written epi… hayeee twinjs scene was superb n awesome….. loved it dear….

    Come with next epi if u r free….. bcz studies r first priority…. well I’m happy that u r not leaving writing…..so thank u for this….

    Love u dear….keep smiling

    “Shalini/Neha”

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Neha di,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. TEI written update? Seriously? That really means a lot. Thank you so much!!

      The next chapter is coming up in two or three days. Stay tuned.

      Love you too!!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

  19. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Heya ria…firstly I’m really sorry for commenting late…I read it on the day u posted but couldn’t comment coz of net issues…as usual the episode is amazing…its so emotional…u very well portrayed the emotions…

    I’m really very sad that you discontinued ur ff…but I’m happy that u r not quitting TU and would write SS n OS n entertain us…ria if u get any idea in future for I love you TwiNj journey comeback then do continue it…but I’m not forcing you…

    Take care…
    Love you 😘😘

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey di,
      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Yeah, this chapter was quite emotional, but it was necessary to set things right.

      Sorry was disappointing you di, but the little time I’ve for writing, if I don’t get ideas in that duration, then I can’t write. So sorry. Well, di “I Love You” – A Twinj journey ends with the original story, without any new seasons. If I get time, I’ll write another ff may be.

      Love you too!!💕

      Regards,
      Ria

  20. SarahKhan

    |Registered Member

    Hey. I’ve been a silent reader since a really long time. I’ve been reading all your ffs in twinj. And I must say, Is everything really as perfect as it seems to be was some amazing piece of writing. This one too is really interesting. Please post the next part as as soon as possible. :’)

    • Ria

      |Author

      Hey Sarah,
      Thank you so much dear!! I’m glad you liked this chapter. Also, thank you for commenting. One comment from a silent seriously means a lot.

      Thank you for praising my FF – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? and this FS as well.

      I’m submitting the next chapter now. Hope you get to read it soon.

      Regards,
      Ria

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